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Jhuki Jo Palke To Chubhengi Aapko - 23rd July 2006, 09:25 PM

AAJ BAHUT DINO K BAAD SAMAY MILA TO KUCH LIKHNE KI KOSIS KI HAIN SHAYAD AAPKO PASAND AAYE OR AGAR NA PASAND AAYE TO AAPKA SAMAY BARBAAD KARNE K LIYE SHAMA CHAHTA HOUN...








YADOON K IS BHAWAR MAIN EK PAL MERA H0.
FULO K ISH CHAMAN MAIN EK GUL MERA HO.
KHUDA KARE JAB AAP YAAD KARO APNO KO.
TO UN APNO MAIN EK NAAM MERA HO.
/././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././.
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WO NADIYA NAHI AANSU THEY MERE.
JIS PAR WO KASTI CHALATE RAHE.
MANJIL MILE UNHE YEH DUAA THI HAMARI.
ISHLIYE HUM AANSU BAHATE RAHE.
././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././././.
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AAJ DOOR SE HE KOI SALAM KAR GAYA.
AAPNI YAADO KA GULAAM KAR GAYA.
APNI JINDAGI GIRVI RAKH KAR KHARIDA THA JISSEY.
AAJ HE WO HAMARI KHUSIYA NILAAM KAR GAYA.
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NAZAR ANDAAJ KAISE KARE UNKO.
NAJRO MAIN BHITHAYA HAIN UNKO.
YAAD AANE PAR ROYE BHI TO KAISE.
DARTE HAIN JHUKI JO PALKE TO CHUBHENGI UNKO.
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hi - 24th July 2006, 01:43 AM

monti ji aapki ye sabhi shayriya bahot hi jyada achhi aur dard bhari hai.

aapki dost
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frd - 24th July 2006, 05:33 PM

hi
aapki shayri bahot hi acchi hai sach bohat dard hai ismein
   
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24th July 2006, 06:56 PM

monti ji,
pehli baar padha aapko,acha likha hai aapne.yeh do rubaai pasand aayi bahut.

WO NADIYA NAHI AANSU THEY MERE.
JIS PAR WO KASTI CHALATE RAHE.
MANJIL MILE UNHE YEH DUAA THI HAMARI.
ISHLIYE HUM AANSU BAHATE RAHE.


NAZAR ANDAAJ KAISE KARE UNKO.
NAJRO MAIN BHITHAYA HAIN UNKO.
YAAD AANE PAR ROYE BHI TO KAISE.
DARTE HAIN JHUKI JO PALKE TO CHUBHENGI UNKO.

likhte rahiye yunhin


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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hi poja - 26th July 2006, 09:18 PM

mana ki mere msg bahut acche hain or dard bhare bhi hain laki aapko kyun acche lage
maine aapke purane msgs bhi pade hain wo khali romantice hote hain


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hi zubi khan - 26th July 2006, 09:20 PM

mana ki hamari shayri bhaut acchi hain or dard bhari hain
ham to dard ka ilaag bhi rakhte hain
dubara hamse cont. karna aapke dil ka dard dr kar denge


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2 akeli jaan - 26th July 2006, 09:23 PM

aab dur naahi hum aapse
hi
this is monti the
play boy


play boy
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the dj play boy


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26th July 2006, 09:26 PM

Hi monti,

Shers are really nice... but I think I've read them sonewhere... please mention not mine below the ones not written by you.... keep coming...


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hi monty ji - 26th July 2006, 11:18 PM

haa meine jitne bhi msg kiye hai sabhi jyada tar romentice thhe.lekin jo log romentice hote hai kya unhe dard nahi???? unhe jyada dard hota hai jab unka dil tutatha hai tab.

ek aur baat jo chiz achhi hoti hai usko achha kahne me kya burai hai.
mere dil me bhi jo dard hai aapki shayri ne bayan kar diya.
ab aapki shayri dard bhari hai sukoon milta hai padh kar.

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dear pulkit - 27th July 2006, 09:30 PM

maine thought likhe hain .com main
maine yeh to nahi likha ki yeh maine likhe hain
or pls dont mine ki jarurat nahi hain
hamey lagta hain ki yeh s.com main hona chahiye to ham le aate hain

ok clear
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2 dear poojaa - 27th July 2006, 09:34 PM

chahe insaan roma..... ho ya un roma.......
chahe comm...... ho yaa uncomm......
aisa kon hain jo dard se waakif nahi hain dil main sabke he dard hain lakin alag alag roop main ok

n
bye the way
aapko dubara apni post par dekh kar acccha laga
aate rahna

aapka dost
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"Not Mine" ki zaroorat to hai... aap naye hain isliye maine yaad dilaa diya... varna moderators yaad dilayenge...


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28th July 2006, 09:06 PM

WO NADIYA NAHI AANSU THEY MERE.
JIS PAR WO KASTI CHALATE RAHE.
MANJIL MILE UNHE YEH DUAA THI HAMARI.
ISHLIYE HUM AANSU BAHATE RAHE.


wah wah really very nice keep writing


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hi dear pulkit g - 29th July 2006, 09:48 PM

kya naam badal lene se bande ki pahchaan bni badal jaati hain kya.
yaar main aapki s.com ka 3 saal purana dost houn.
or main aapne purane naam se boor ho chuka hounb
ish liye naye naam se aapke saamne pesh hua houn

baaki aap guess kar lo ki kon hain jo 3 saal se aapke saath tha or aab gum ho chuka hain s.com se
ok u carry on
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2 koi to hai - 29th July 2006, 09:54 PM

mana ki koi to hain

magar kon hain wo

bikhar kar gir gaya dil mera

kam se kam pata to chale

kon hain wo.............





hi
bahut khushi hue aapko aapni post per dekh kar
ummed hain fir mulakaat hoge

bye

ur
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30th July 2006, 01:06 PM

Hmmm.... I think i know you now...

Puraane ho to tumhe yahaan ke rules pat hone chaahiye... Pehle bhi kaha tha... sirf NM likhne se izzat kam nahi hoti... Pehle to samajh liya thha tumne....

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2 pulkit gee - 31st July 2006, 09:39 PM

thanks

koi to hain jisne hamey guss kar k pahchaan liya

lakin thodi c kami rah gaye
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hi - 6th August 2006, 09:49 PM

hi
monti jee
this is 232653

aapko pada to aankho se aansu nikal aaye
nice
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2 232653 - 10th August 2006, 09:17 PM

yeh .com or ish .com main likhne wale logo ke aansu rokne k liye likhte hain m sorry jo meri wajha se aapki aankho main aansu aaye

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