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Love ki tu mujhpe koi kalaam likhe.. - 4th November 2014, 11:38 AM
Mujhe yakeen hai tu hai fankar bada..
Kabhi ye ho ki tu mujhpe koi kalaam likhe.

Din beete mere khyaal me aur...
Kabhi Raat bhi apni tu mere naam likhe.

Sunti rahoon main ki bas kahe tu hi..
Kabhi to khat koi pyaar me mere naam likhe.

ki ye batein mahaz khwaab na ho..
Kabhi badaun hath,uspe tu apna naam likhe.

sataye kabhi chede pyaar se mujhko..
Kabhi to nazron se nazro ko salaam likhe.

Yoon to aansoo hain ye koi keemat nhi inki..
Kabhi chukar inhe mohabbat ka paigaam likhe


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4th November 2014, 01:49 PM
kya baat hai khoob acchaa kalaam likha hai aapne Madhu ji......

aapko padhnaa hameshaa se mujhe pasand hai kyunki aap dil se likhtii hain.. aurr dil se likhe kalaam me alag hi khushboo hotii hai....

meri duaa hai ke aap aur bhi acchaa likhti rahen

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4th November 2014, 08:56 PM
मोहब्बत करके चाहने में कुछ हर्ज़ नहीं

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4th November 2014, 10:58 PM
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Mujhe yakeen hai tu hai fankar bada..
Kabhi ye ho ki tu mujhpe koi kalaam likhe.

Din beete mere khyaal me aur...
Kabhi Raat bhi apni tu mere naam likhe.

Sunti rahoon main ki bas kahe tu hi..
Kabhi to khat koi pyaar me mere naam likhe.

ki ye batein mahaz khwaab na ho..
Kabhi badaun hath,uspe tu apna naam likhe.

sataye kabhi chede pyaar se mujhko..
Kabhi to nazron se nazro ko salaam likhe.

Yoon to aansoo hain ye koi keemat nhi inki..
Kabhi chukar inhe mohabbat ka paigaam likhe
Behad umdaa Madhu ji har sher aapka ek se badhkar ek lagaa..reps ++

Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..

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6th November 2014, 12:28 AM
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kya baat hai khoob acchaa kalaam likha hai aapne Madhu ji......

aapko padhnaa hameshaa se mujhe pasand hai kyunki aap dil se likhtii hain.. aurr dil se likhe kalaam me alag hi khushboo hotii hai....

meri duaa hai ke aap aur bhi acchaa likhti rahen

aati rahen

Shaad...
Bahut achcha laga ki mere kalaam ki khushboo aap tak pahunchi shaad ji...apka sath aur apki duayein yoon hi bani rahein..
bahut shukriya..aate rahein.


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6th November 2014, 09:55 AM
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Mujhe yakeen hai tu hai fankar bada..
Kabhi ye ho ki tu mujhpe koi kalaam likhe.

Din beete mere khyaal me aur...
Kabhi Raat bhi apni tu mere naam likhe.

Sunti rahoon main ki bas kahe tu hi..
Kabhi to khat koi pyaar me mere naam likhe.

ki ye batein mahaz khwaab na ho..
Kabhi badaun hath,uspe tu apna naam likhe.

sataye kabhi chede pyaar se mujhko..
Kabhi to nazron se nazro ko salaam likhe.

Yoon to aansoo hain ye koi keemat nhi inki..
Kabhi chukar inhe mohabbat ka paigaam likhe

Dear Madhu...........khoobsurat ehsaas hame behad pasand aaye, yu hi bazm ko pyar bhare geetoN se rangeen banaye rakhiye.

duaon ke saath


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7th November 2014, 08:21 AM
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8th November 2014, 09:42 AM
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Mujhe yakeen hai tu hai fankar bada..
Kabhi ye ho ki tu mujhpe koi kalaam likhe.

Din beete mere khyaal me aur...
Kabhi Raat bhi apni tu mere naam likhe.

Sunti rahoon main ki bas kahe tu hi..
Kabhi to khat koi pyaar me mere
ki ye batein mahaz khwaab na ho..
Kabhi badaun hath,uspe tu apna naam likhe.

sataye kabhi chede pyaar se mujhko..
Kabhi to nazron se nazro ko salaam likhe.

Yoon to aansoo hain ye koi keemat nhi inki..
Kabhi chukar inhe mohabbat ka paigaam likhe
Madhu ji pehli dafa aapki mehfil mei.n shirkat farmaah hoo.n...sabse pehle lasleem pesh karta hoo.n....bhut kamaal ka zor hai aapki kalam mei.n bhut gehre or dil frabe share kahe hai.n aapne daad hazir-e-khidmat hai kabool farmaiye....Raj...

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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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8th November 2014, 10:17 AM
Madhu jee...aisa dilfareb kalaam maine pehle nahin pada.,aapka kalaam bulandiya chue ye meri dua hai.....


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आपके जज्बात का अंदाज़ ए बयाँ बेहद खूबसूरत है

यूँ ही क़लम रौशन रखिए

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Aapne mere kalaam ko pada aur padand kiya..Bahut bahut shukriya kshitiz ji...yoon hi sath dete rahiye..


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Behad umdaa Madhu ji har sher aapka ek se badhkar ek lagaa..reps ++

Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..

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Mujhe yakeen hai tu hai fankar bada..
Kabhi ye ho ki tu mujhpe koi kalaam likhe.

Din beete mere khyaal me aur...
Kabhi Raat bhi apni tu mere naam likhe.

Sunti rahoon main ki bas kahe tu hi..
Kabhi to khat koi pyaar me mere naam likhe.

ki ye batein mahaz khwaab na ho..
Kabhi badaun hath,uspe tu apna naam likhe.

sataye kabhi chede pyaar se mujhko..
Kabhi to nazron se nazro ko salaam likhe.

Yoon to aansoo hain ye koi keemat nhi inki..
Kabhi chukar inhe mohabbat ka paigaam likhe


Bohot...................bohot.............khoooob
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Bohot ache Madhu ji........yoon hi likhti rahiyega..
Dheero daad is khoobsurat kalam ki nazar.
Aapka apna
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bahut bahut shukriya...aap dono ka..

rajveer ji aapse darkhwast hai.. aate raha kariye...

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Dheero daad is khoobsurat kalam ki nazar.
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inayat banaye rakhiyega,.....

aate rahein....

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mujhe yakeen hai tu hai fankar bada..
Kabhi ye ho ki tu mujhpe koi kalaam likhe.

Din beete mere khyaal me aur...
Kabhi raat bhi apni tu mere naam likhe.

Sunti rahoon main ki bas kahe tu hi..
Kabhi to khat koi pyaar me mere naam likhe.

Ki ye batein mahaz khwaab na ho..
Kabhi badaun hath,uspe tu apna naam likhe.

Sataye kabhi chede pyaar se mujhko..
Kabhi to nazron se nazro ko salaam likhe.

Yoon to aansoo hain ye koi keemat nhi inki..
Kabhi chukar inhe mohabbat ka paigaam likhe
kyaa baat hai madhu jee, bahut khubsurat ehsaas hai aap ke, bahut khoob likha hai aap ne.
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Kafi purani rachna hai.....khushi hai aapko pasand aayi...

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