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Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye -
3rd September 2011, 03:05 AM
Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye
Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
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4th September 2011, 02:39 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by prayerforall
Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye
Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
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I say a say an excellent piece of shayrana expression! A just read t multiple times its a book completed in two stanzas and a bit! Quality posting!
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
Ajnabi
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5th September 2011, 01:21 AM
Thank u very much Ajnabi
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5th September 2011, 08:05 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by prayerforall
Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye
Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
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beautiful write -------- poetic very poetic
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9th September 2011, 09:29 PM
Thank you very much Janumanu ji .. ...................
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21st October 2011, 04:44 PM
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Originally Posted by prayerforall
Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye
Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
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Wow !!! i think its amazing post...........Thanks for share with allll
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15th December 2011, 05:38 PM
Beautifuly written... expression of feelings at its best....
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..
Mudattein hui… Mulakat hue….
Suno… Aie… Zindagi…..
Is bar jate jate….
Jara milti jana……
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15th December 2011, 07:53 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by prayerforall
Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye
Sab kehte hain, chalte rehte hain..
Afsano bhara, yeh bhi ik daur hai..
Sab kuch keh kar bhi hum chup hain..
Ajnabee se ho gaye , chaahat ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
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Bahut Sundar !
Ehsaas AchChhe HaiN ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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21st December 2011, 11:58 PM
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Originally Posted by prayerforall
Zamane beet gaye, dil ki baat kiye
Na naseeb se shikve n unse giley hain
Zindagi ki daud mein fasle baRd gaye hai
Kabhi kisi kinare, fir milenge woh humein
nayan tarsenge , barasne ke liye..
Zamane beet gaye , dil ki baat kiye
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Good one..... loved the above ashaar
Reminds me of the below couplets by a renowed Poet "Sarwar Raz"
Dhoondaa hi nahin humne koi tumhara hum Sar,
Haan ! tum kaho, tumko koi hum sa nazar aaya.
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