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Nadi ka paani - 12th September 2015, 12:10 AM

Here is another koshish of mine:

Nadi ka paani neela hota phir yeh kyo.N hai laal
Mera bus itna hi hai sawal

Pandit beThke mandir mei.N looTe hai sub ka maal
Mulla masjid ko ghar samjhe aur kerta hai dhamaal
Father confection ko sun ker sub ki khee.Nche khaal
Mera bus itna hi hai sawal

Piyaar ke badle nafrat ka kyo.N log hai beej ko bote
Yeh dunya kaisy hoti jo piyaar ke log hi hote
Per aesa to hota hi nahi.N jo ho jaaye to kamaal
Mera bus itna hi hai sawal

Neta leader rakhte hei.N qaanoon ko pau.N ke neeche
Dhan doulat ki daur me aage sub ko chod ke peeche
Bach jaye her Khoon se ker ke woh kursi ko dhaal
Mera bus itna hi hai sawal

Mujrim ko namujrim kehna aur zaalim ko mazloom
Khel hai baye.N haath ka yeh sub neta ko maloom
MakDi jesa khel woh khele kaise bichaye jaal
Mera bus itna hi hai sawal

Kyo.N mard sada aurat ko samajhta apna aek ghulaam
Kyo.N shaan se ithlaata unse kerwa ke gande kaam
Bichaari aurat aur kare kya phirti woh behaal
Mera bus itna hi hai sawal

Nadi ka paani neela hota phir yeh kyo.N hai laal
Shayed ismei.N Khoon mila hai huwa hai koii halaal
Yeh kaisa kal-yug hai aaya kya aaya dush-kaal
Mera bus itna hi hai sawal


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12th September 2015, 11:46 AM

Fakhri sahab...apke sawaalon ko khoob utara hai aapne kalaam me...aage bhi aate rahiye...

Likhte rahiye ...

Is koshish ko apki shayri me move kar rahi hoon....



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12th September 2015, 11:22 PM

Shukria behad Madhuji aapka as usual. Aesey hi himmat afzaii kerti rahiye.
   
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Mei.N nahi.N samjha. 'Aapki Shayri' mei.N move kerne ka kya matlab?Please explain. Shukria.
   
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16th September 2015, 11:18 AM

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Mei.N nahi.N samjha. 'Aapki Shayri' mei.N move kerne ka kya matlab?Please explain. Shukria.
Aapke kalaam ke ehsaason ko dekhte huye ishq forum iski sahi jagah nahi hai fakhri sahab.....isiliye iae aapki shayri forum me moov kiya gaya.....

Ummeed hai meri baat se sahmat honge aap....
Aate rahiye...



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17th September 2015, 02:43 AM

Shukria Madhuji explain kerne ke liye. Mujhe nahi.N maloom tha ke "Aapki Shayri" kya hai.
   
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