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23rd August 2014, 05:30 PM
Ye kya nadaniyaan hain ki
ummeed bhi nahi tere aane ki
Phir bhi nazarein bichaye baithe hain.
Baar baar jhankte hain khidkiyon se
Kab se ghar ko
sajaye baithe hain
kisi baat pe kanhi rooth na jaye vo
Zara haule se kahna haal
is dil ko samajhaye baithe hain.
Tu mera hai hi nahi zamane se
Aaj bhi teri chahat me
daaman failaye baithe hain...
Tujhe bhi nibhane kai farz hain
Mere paas bhi hai zimmedari kai
Aaj phir dekho deewane huye ham
Aaj phir kaam sare bhulaye baithe hain...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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23rd August 2014, 10:28 PM
Thank u very much naaz ji......aapki tareef ki kayal hoon main...jis mohabbat se aap nazm par comments karti hain simply awesome. ..pasand karne k liye shukriya .... yoon hi aati rahe. .
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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24th August 2014, 08:51 AM
madhu g kya baat hai ....har baar kee tarah simple se shabdo me khoobsurat ehsaas.......aapne itni jaldi sabhi sdc ka man moh liya hai.....its feeling nice to read u .D
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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25th August 2014, 11:54 AM
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madhu g kya baat hai ....har baar kee tarah simple se shabdo me khoobsurat ehsaas.......aapne itni jaldi sabhi sdc ka man moh liya hai.....its feeling nice to read u .D
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Dhanyawaad aru ji...main to bas dil ki baat likhte hoon...aapko pasand aayi ye hamari khushkismati....apna sath yoon hi banayi rakhiyega.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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25th August 2014, 01:04 PM
Wah madhuji.....bohut hi pyare andaaz men eh baat kahi hai aap ne
Tujhe bhi nibhane kai farz hain
Mere paas bhi hai zimmedari kai
Aaj phir dekho deewane huye ham
Aaj phir kaam sare bhulaye baithe hain
main bada luftandoz hua.....dheron daad qubool kijiye. agar koi kisi wajah se ghamzada hoga...to use chahiye ke aap ke is stanza ko padh le.....phir woh kehne lagega ki
tere paas aake mera waqt guzar jata hai
do ghadi ke liye gham jane kidhar jata hai
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25th August 2014, 01:05 PM
kisi baat pe kanhi rooth na jaye vo
Zara haule se kahna haal
is dil ko samajhaye baithe hain.
wahhh.... wahh.. Madhu jii..
Bohat khoob.!
Quoted lines dil ke aar paar ho gayiN..
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th August 2014, 01:47 PM
Tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe. ..samajh me nahi aa raha kya kahun...
Simply superb. ....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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30th August 2014, 03:44 PM
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Tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe. ..samajh me nahi aa raha kya kahun...
Simply superb. ....
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Thank u very much zainy ji....aap ne meri nazm ko pada yahi meri Khushnaseebi hai.......
Aate rahiye. ......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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28th October 2014, 10:33 PM
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kisi baat pe kanhi rooth na jaye vo
Zara haule se kahna haal
is dil ko samajhaye baithe hain.
wahhh.... wahh.. Madhu jii..
Bohat khoob.!
Quoted lines dil ke aar paar ho gayiN..
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
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Bahut bahut shukriya hassan ji...yoon hi sath dete rahiyega..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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29th October 2014, 12:05 AM
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Ye kya nadaniyaan hain ki
ummeed bhi nahi tere aane ki
Phir bhi nazarein bichaye baithe hain.
Baar baar jhankte hain khidkiyon se
Kab se ghar ko
sajaye baithe hain
kisi baat pe kanhi rooth na jaye vo
Zara haule se kahna haal
is dil ko samajhaye baithe hain.
Tu mera hai hi nahi zamane se
Aaj bhi teri chahat me
daaman failaye baithe hain...
Tujhe bhi nibhane kai farz hain
Mere paas bhi hai zimmedari kai
Aaj phir dekho deewane huye ham
Aaj phir kaam sare bhulaye baithe hain...
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Dear Madhu........Simply superb.
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29th October 2014, 08:03 PM
Madhu ji ..
Bahut pyare ehsaas ...
Kaafi rumari aur sanjeeda lage ..wah ji wah
aap dil se likhti haiN .
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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28th November 2014, 10:09 PM
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Wah madhuji.....bohut hi pyare andaaz men eh baat kahi hai aap ne
Tujhe bhi nibhane kai farz hain
Mere paas bhi hai zimmedari kai
Aaj phir dekho deewane huye ham
Aaj phir kaam sare bhulaye baithe hain
main bada luftandoz hua.....dheron daad qubool kijiye. agar koi kisi wajah se ghamzada hoga...to use chahiye ke aap ke is stanza ko padh le.....phir woh kehne lagega ki
tere paas aake mera waqt guzar jata hai
do ghadi ke liye gham jane kidhar jata hai
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Bahut bahut shukriya mujeeb ji...bahut khushi huyi ki aapko meri koshish lasand aayi...
yoon hi sath dete rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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28th November 2014, 10:50 PM
bahot hi ummdah peshkash hai madhu saahiba........... yaqeenan dil ko choo lene waali..
aage bhi intzaar rahega aapke kalam ka...... likhti rahieyga
Shaad.....
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29th November 2014, 11:47 AM
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Ye kya nadaniyaan hain ki
ummeed bhi nahi tere aane ki
Phir bhi nazarein bichaye baithe hain.
Baar baar jhankte hain khidkiyon se
Kab se ghar ko
sajaye baithe hain
kisi baat pe kanhi rooth na jaye vo
Zara haule se kahna haal
is dil ko samajhaye baithe hain.
Tu mera hai hi nahi zamane se
Aaj bhi teri chahat me
daaman failaye baithe hain...
Tujhe bhi nibhane kai farz hain
Mere paas bhi hai zimmedari kai
Aaj phir dekho deewane huye ham
Aaj phir kaam sare bhulaye baithe hain...
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Behad umdaa madhu ji
aapke ehsaas dil mein ghar kar gaye....ek aur sher aapki nazar pesh kar raha hoon umeed hai tasleem hoga
aarzo-e-dil ko humne has kar yunhi bhulaa diya
tere chilman par tan man lutaaye baithe haiN
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8th December 2014, 06:41 PM
Madhu ji, kya kehne..
Lajawab hai...
Zara haule se kahna haal
iss dil ko samjhaye baithe hain.. Bahot khoob..
nacheez ki dheroN daad qubool farmaiyen.
Aapka khair khwah
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Dear Madhu........Simply superb.
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Thank u so much di............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Madhu ji ..
Bahut pyare ehsaas ...
Kaafi rumari aur sanjeeda lage ..wah ji wah
aap dil se likhti haiN .
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Sath dene ka shukriya sanjay ji.......khushi huyi ki aapko ehsaas pasand aaye...
aate rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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3rd June 2015, 10:35 PM
wah bahut khoob rahe yeh ehsaas madhu jee
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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bahot hi ummdah peshkash hai madhu saahiba........... yaqeenan dil ko choo lene waali..
aage bhi intzaar rahega aapke kalam ka...... likhti rahieyga
Shaad.....
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Shukriya shaad sahab....aage bhi aapka sath milta rahega yahi ummeed hai.......
aate rahiyega.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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14th July 2015, 03:26 PM
bohut badhiya..............................
bohut pasand aayi aapki sab rachanaaon ki tarah.
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15th September 2015, 10:47 AM
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Behad umdaa madhu ji
aapke ehsaas dil mein ghar kar gaye....ek aur sher aapki nazar pesh kar raha hoon umeed hai tasleem hoga
aarzo-e-dil ko humne has kar yunhi bhulaa diya
tere chilman par tan man lutaaye baithe haiN
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shukriya janaab...ehsaas pasand aaye apko jankar achha laga.....
waah!!! bahut khoob sher kaha hai aapne....
aate rahiye....
salamat rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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29th September 2015, 09:57 AM
Beautiful one..... Bahut hi pyare ehsaas....
Mudattein hui… Mulakat hue….
Suno… Aie… Zindagi…..
Is bar jate jate….
Jara milti jana……
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18th November 2015, 05:09 PM
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Madhu ji, kya kehne..
Lajawab hai...
Zara haule se kahna haal
iss dil ko samjhaye baithe hain.. Bahot khoob..
nacheez ki dheroN daad qubool farmaiyen.
Aapka khair khwah
SAGAR AASHNA
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bahut bahut shukriya sagar sahab........
aage bhi intzaar rahega aapka.......
aate rahein..
takecare..
madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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30th December 2015, 11:43 PM
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wah bahut khoob rahe yeh ehsaas madhu jee
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
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Shukriya ishk ji.........
Regards
Madhu....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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