Sakhi bol ne..(guj)

komal5 · **Sakhi bol ne..(guj) -** 2nd February 2005, 01:00 PM

i remember this sumthing i wrote 1st time in gujrati!

..sumthing very indirect..it may seem!

Vaat khaangi chhe ek
na kahe koi ne toh tane kari daun..

Shwas man chhe ehsaas ek
Naam na puchhe toh vehto muki daun.

eh chhe viteli qshano ni suwaas ek
na felawe to akhha bag ma toh mehekti kari daun.

samjhavi na shakay evi munjhwan chhe ek
tu samjhi jay ..toh je mange eh dhari daun.

Sakhi bol ne shu karu??
Ene han kahi daun?

irfan_sh_27 · **27 -** 2nd February 2005, 01:16 PM

kevi che komal

Bahu saru ane sundar lakhelu che tane to gujarati bahu saru awde che ho, parantu gujarati khali gujarat ma g chale che ho.

Ane tu have lage che mar post vanchti nathi ne, saru me niche lakheli che a post vanchje.

Shayri-E-isq - Dosti me kya ha?

chalu chu, kadji rakhjo,

chalu bhaibandh.

komal5 · **irfaan ji -** 2nd February 2005, 01:21 PM

hey u know gujrati 22?..amazing!..ya i'd surely post sumthing in hindi...

n i do read ur post!!tc

komal

acharya_mj · 2nd February 2005, 11:48 PM

Vaat khaangi chhe ek
na kahe koi ne toh tane kari daun..

Shwas man chhe ehsaas ek
Naam na puchhe toh vehto muki daun.

eh chhe viteli qshano ni suwaas ek
na felawe to akhha bag ma toh mehekti kari daun.

samjhavi na shakay evi munjhwan chhe ek
tu samjhi jay ..toh je mange eh dhari daun.

Sakhi bol ne shu karu??
Ene han kahi daun?

Vatavaran ma khushbu bani vaheta thaya,
Hawaa na avaagaman thaki swaso ma bhari lau

Ful chuntavaa chhe maare raatrani na ,
Vicharo na vrindavan ma emna fari lau

Aa kavitao to badhi bahanu chhe,
Em thay chhe k emna dil ma thodu vahi lau

Pulkit_gupta · 3rd February 2005, 12:20 PM

Komal... Samjhao plz

komal5 · **hi! translatn! -** 4th February 2005, 01:49 PM

hey...pulkit!
just tried 2 translate it in english...for a change!!
check out!

there is a secret word..
if u dont let anyone know i'd let u know

there is a silent whisper in my heart
if u dont ask the name i'd let it flow

there is a fragrance breezing... of those moments i spent
if u dont spread it to the world i'd let that wind blow

there is an unexplainable confusion..
if u can understand...i'd gift u watever u ask for!

hey..buddy..justt temme wat should i do?
wat should i answer him....?Yes..or No?

Pulkit_gupta · 4th February 2005, 02:11 PM

there is a secret word..
if u dont let anyone know i'd let u know

there is a silent whisper in my heart
if u dont ask the name i'd let it flow

there is a fragrance breezing of the moments i spent
if u dont spread it to the world i'd let that wind blow

there is an unexplainable confusion..
if u can understand...i'd gift u watever u ask for!

hey..buddy..justt temme wat should i do?
wat should i answer him....?Yes..or No?

Hey Komal!!

Beautiful Composition yaar... Sakhi bol ne...Waaah... Very nice thought yaar.... Ur translation is a very nice too...

Pata hai.. what is the best i like here... the simplicity of expression.. and the feelings...Aisi post padhna mujhe bahut pasand hai....

Meri dil se daad hai itna khoobsurat likhne ke liye.... Saru lakhyu chhe... Simplicity in expressions is ur essence.. Dont Lose it..

Likhti rehna aur translate karti rehna.. Till the time Meena Didi teaches me Gujarati or I dont bring a book on that myself

maara maate translate karane thhi Shukriya...

(Hansna mat, atleast I am trying)

Dooo Keep up the Good Work....TC

Thanks

komal5 · 02:52 PM

hey!..pulkit..its nice yar..
tht u try 2 understand gujrati..
and that u evry time ask 4 translatn..it makes me have all 2gethr a difrnt experience 2..write the same thing in a new form..n i njoy it buddy..so need 2 say thx!.....ya its true i always try 2 hold the simplicity..whenver i write...Its gr8 tht u liked the translatn 2!!...keep reading..m there 2 translate for u...

..thx 4 apreaciating!..tc!

komal

khaksaar · 4th February 2005, 03:09 PM

Good One Komal....I don't know gujrati but from English translation it sounds quite...Keep up the good work

komal5 · **hi -** 4th February 2005, 03:19 PM

hi! Abhay..gud 2 c u aftr long time..how r u....m glad u liked it..thx for ur reply yar! tc
komal

Hp_4ever · 03:41 PM

le komal .....

te to bahu saru lakhyu...

gujarati ma to sari j chhe,mane to english ma pan gami gai....
sachhu kahu shayri to sari j chhe tari,mane to tu pan gami gai....

really beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

-Priya

komal5 · **hi! -** 4th February 2005, 03:42 PM

hey priya..thx for reading both the ..forms of this expression..hu khush chhu tane banne vastu gami gayi!!..

tc buddy ..keep in touch.
komal

acharya_mj · 4th February 2005, 11:56 PM

hi komal mai tari kavita vaanchi ane mane gami atle mai tema 3 line add kari chhe ,

just check it out ,
do reply

komal5 · **acharya ji! -** 7th February 2005, 11:57 AM

achharya ji..sauthi pehela m sorry 2 be late 2 reply u...!

i read the lines u added 2 my poem ...n they r like answer 2 my poem sumthing which defines why i wanna say "yes"...
sumthing like extented conversation..wid the same friend!...

..its a nice form it self..and has got an individual feeling i think..may be we can have it extented wat say?...tamari poem ne agal lakho ne..m sure it wd turn out more beautiful..wid few more lines...!

...m waiting 4 it!

take care!

Pyarali Rajan · 7th February 2005, 07:31 PM

Komal Ji,

Vaat khaangi chhe ek
na kahe koi ne toh tane kari daun..

Shwas man chhe ehsaas ek
Naam na puchhe toh vehto muki daun.

Wah!

Rajan

meena chheda · **Re: Sakhi bol ne..(guj) -** 7th February 2005, 09:08 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by komal5
i remember this sumthing i wrote 1st time in gujrati!..sumthing very indirect..it may seem!

Vaat khaangi chhe ek
na kahe koi ne toh tane kari daun..

Shwas man chhe ehsaas ek
Naam na puchhe toh vehto muki daun.

eh chhe viteli qshano ni suwaas ek
na felawe to akhha bag ma toh mehekti kari daun.

samjhavi na shakay evi munjhwan chhe ek
tu samjhi jay ..toh je mange eh dhari daun.

Sakhi bol ne shu karu??
Ene han kahi daun?

komal,

sakhi bol ne............ naam pramaane kavita pan tari mrudul chhae.

meena

meena chheda · 7th February 2005, 09:10 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by acharya_mj

Vatavaran ma khushbu bani vaheta thaya,
Hawaa na avaagaman thaki swaso ma bhari lau

Ful chuntavaa chhe maare raatrani na ,
Vicharo na vrindavan ma emna fari lau

Aa kavitao to badhi bahanu chhe,
Em thay chhe k emna dil ma thodu vahi lau [/B]

acharya_mj,

saras ahesaas......

meena

meena chheda · 7th February 2005, 09:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Hey Komal!!

maara maate translate karane thhi Shukriya...

(Hansna mat, atleast I am trying)

Dooo Keep up the Good Work....TC

Thanks

[/B]

pulkit,

maara maate translate karane thhi Shukriya... =

mara maate kavita no anuwaad karya badal aabhaar. ok?

di

meetaparekh · **wah -** 8th February 2005, 11:42 AM

Komal
wah bhai wah, babuj saras che.keep it up.

Pulkit_gupta · 8th February 2005, 01:13 PM

Yes Didi!! Got it

Komal.. I wanted to say what didi just wrote? hoipe u got it earlier too

komal5 · **hi -** 8th February 2005, 02:07 PM

yes pulkit i got it earlier only!

komal

komal5 · **hi -** 8th February 2005, 02:08 PM

Rajan ji...thx for replying 2 my post..apka reply dekh ke achha lag..ate rahiyega!..tc

komal

komal5 · **hi! meena di! kem chho? -** 8th February 2005, 02:11 PM

meena didi..kem chho? as ususal tamara awaa thi maru man bag bag thayi gayu!...u know if u js drop a blank replly thts also more thn enuf...idonno how but this is a constant feeling tht i feel gr8 when i read ur name!....dilse achha laga..plz ammaj awta rehjo!

tc
komal

komal5 · **meeta ji! -** 8th February 2005, 02:13 PM

meeta ji...tamne pehli war malu chhu pan bahuj gamyu..tamaro reply joi ne..plz do keep coming ..ane ha apne malvanu kain karishu pakku!...tc
komal

Raj4someone · **bye for forever -** 8th February 2005, 04:21 PM

This is my last reply on this shayri.com.. Komal aapne bahut vadiyan likha hai, Carry on like this n in this simple manner.

Han ek baat please kisi ko kabhi jayada nahi tadpana chahiye, u might loose him/her. U will never get prefect thing in life n what u want in life always. Sometime u will loose good thing n will never get prefect things also.

Take care

keep writing. I will always read ur poems but will never reply, this is my last reply.
Bye for forever.............

komal5 · **hi! -** 8th February 2005, 04:27 PM

raj ji..gud 2 cu aftr long time!..but last reply kyu?????? wat hapnd??!
komal

Raj4someone · 8th February 2005, 05:53 PM

aapke kyu ka jawab toh mein de paunga per bas samjhlo ki koi mit gaya hai ya fir mit jayega. Meine aapko ek baat boli ki rooklo usse before that someone leaves u for forever.
dehko aapne mujhe majboor kar diya reply ko

take care
with reagrds

komal5 · 8th February 2005, 06:09 PM

mein kuch samjhi nahi..m sorry. wel hope u get wat u desire althe best! tc.
komal

meena chheda · 13th October 2005, 08:59 AM

priy komal,

tari kavita fari vaanchta aanand thhayo........

di

komal5 · **hi -** 13th October 2005, 10:38 AM

komal

13th October 2005, 11:29 PM

Komal,

aje j register karine tari shayri 'sakhi, knai kahu?' ke je hati, te vanchi, short n sweet, hope to read more from all of you, and enjoy, and i will also try to post, but busy as a bee right now.

Dipti

Parul · 14th October 2005, 08:12 PM

Komal ji,

khoob J sundar lakhyu chhe aapne.... vaanchi ne aanand thayo, Excited... Interesting......... Loved it.!

komal5 · **hi! -** 18th October 2005, 10:52 AM

Dipu ji
jaani aanand thayo k tamaro pahelo diwas aa site par mari kavita ne malyo...thx so much 4 liking it...u'r welcome here..keep coming!

tc
komal

komal5 · 18th October 2005, 10:54 AM

Parul ji shu waat che...tame toh laal laal shabdo maa tarif kari didhi...ane mari post gulabi thayi gayi...

thx so much ...parul ji!...m so glad u liked it!!
tc
komal