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28th February 2010, 08:08 PM
Samjha tha mein mujhe kissi kaabil banaa diyaa
Ye kya kiya ki ek dard ko phir dil banaa diyaa
Siraj Luchnawi Ji
Nikla jaa raha hai umeedon ka juluus dheere dheere
Deed-e-yaar ke armaan houe maayus dheere dheere
Bhuule se bhi bhoola na jaata wo milnaa-julnaa unse
Meri kami hoti hogi unko bhi mehsus dheere dheere
Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Sataaya,rulaaya, kaun kaun sa zulm na dhayaa unpar
Samajhne lagi hogi wo mujhe manhuus dheere dheere
Bharnaa tha wo khaa’i jo unki furqat ne chhod rakhaa
Houe dard-e-nagme hi apne makhsuus dheere dheere
Wo mujhse zaraa khafaa hai magar bewafaa to nahin
Roshni main aa jayegaa unka khaluus dheere dheere
Dil ki dawlat baanT diyaa tha baDii murawat ke saath
Kuch sabaq ke baad bana hun kanjuus dheere dheere
Banaa do ’Amanush’ ko khudaa dam bhar,Mere Rab!
Mumkin tab hi banega ek aam manuus dheere dheere
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Akhtar : A star
Lafz-e-khuluus : Sweet words
Khaluus : Sincerity
Murawat : Generosity
Makhsuus : Exclusive
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th February 2010, 08:15 PM
priceless creation...........
dannyji this is your best.....
is ghazal par wapas aaunga.....
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Tanhaa Raahi
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28th February 2010, 08:24 PM
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priceless creation...........
dannyji this is your best.....
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Pehli baar aap padhaare humare thread par so aap ka swaagat hai, Zidd Ji...!
Aap ne iss kalaam ko paDhaa aur saraaha so hum samjhe ki yaha koshish acchi bani...!
Saath dene ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!
Apna khayaal thik se rakhein,ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Regards
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th February 2010, 08:32 PM
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Originally Posted by Mushkil
Samjha tha mein mujhe kissi kaabil banaa diyaa
Ye kya kiya ki ek dard ko phir dil banaa diyaa
Siraj Luchnawi Ji
Nikla jaa raha hai umeedon ka juluus dheere dheere
Deed-e-yaar ke armaan houe maayus dheere dheere
Bhuule se bhi bhoola na jaata wo milnaa-julnaa unse
Meri kami hoti hogi unko bhi mehsus dheere dheere
Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Sataaya,rulaaya, kaun kaun sa zulm na dhayaa unpar
Samajhne lagi hogi wo mujhe manhuus dheere dheere
Wo mujhse zaraa khafaa hai magar bewafaa to nahin
Roshni main aa jayegaa unka khaluus dheere dheere
Dil ki dawlat baanT diyaa tha baDii murawat ke saath
Kuch sabaq ke baad bana hun kanjuus dheere dheere
Banaa do ’Amanush’ ko khudaa dam bhar,Mere Rab!
Mumkin tab hi banega ek aam manuus dheere dheere
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Akhtar : A star
Lafz-e-khuluus : Sweet words
Khaluus : Sincerity
Murawat : Generosity
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danny jee
radhe radhe
aapki ghazal ko padhkar meri aankhon me aansu aa gaye itna dard bhara hai isme...dil se daad nikli hai kubul kijiye...kaash mai bhi itna gahra likh paata fir bhi koshish to hai ye do sher mere dil ko andar tak hila gaye
Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Dil ki dawlat baanT diyaa tha baDii murawat ke saath
Kuch sabaq ke baad bana hun kanjuus dheere dheere
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
email: rkm179@gmail.com
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28th February 2010, 09:15 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mushkil
Samjha tha mein mujhe kissi kaabil banaa diyaa
Ye kya kiya ki ek dard ko phir dil banaa diyaa
Siraj Luchnawi Ji
Nikla jaa raha hai umeedon ka juluus dheere dheere
Deed-e-yaar ke armaan houe maayus dheere dheere
Bhuule se bhi bhoola na jaata wo milnaa-julnaa unse
Meri kami hoti hogi unko bhi mehsus dheere dheere
Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Sataaya,rulaaya, kaun kaun sa zulm na dhayaa unpar
Samajhne lagi hogi wo mujhe manhuus dheere dheere
Wo mujhse zaraa khafaa hai magar bewafaa to nahin
Roshni main aa jayegaa unka khaluus dheere dheere
Dil ki dawlat baanT diyaa tha baDii murawat ke saath
Kuch sabaq ke baad bana hun kanjuus dheere dheere
Banaa do ’Amanush’ ko khudaa dam bhar,Mere Rab!
Mumkin tab hi banega ek aam manuus dheere dheere
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Akhtar : A star
Lafz-e-khuluus : Sweet words
Khaluus : Sincerity
Murawat : Generosity
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danny bhaiya koi alfaaz nahi haiN mere paas, aapke i's kalaam ki tareef karne ke liye....jitni bhi ki jaye kam rahegi.....bakaul zidd saheb, aapka yeh kalaam priceless hai...waqai unhone theek likha hai....
daad hi daad hai....qubuul karte jaaiye....
apna khayal achhi tarha rakhiye aur aise kalaamoN se ru-ba-ru hone ka mauqa muhaiya karwaate raheN....
aapka dost,
vikram...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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28th February 2010, 11:51 PM
Dearest Bhaiya,
Kaise hain aap? Bhaiya Kalam ke liye koi shabad nahi hain ..jo bhi kahugii woh bhi kum hoga .... bas yehi kahugii ... itnii grehra pyaar ... aur dard ... bayaan karna bahut hi mushkil hain ....
dil ki gehraiyoon se likha hua kalam ke liye dilse Daad kabool kijiye ...
aur esii khoobsuraat kalam nazar karte rahye
Aapna khayal rakhtey rehna ...
aapki duaoon ke intezaar mein
aapki
Mandeep
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1st March 2010, 12:15 AM
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Originally Posted by Mushkil
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Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Sataaya,rulaaya, kaun kaun sa zulm na dhayaa unpar
Samajhne lagi hogi wo mujhe manhuus dheere dheere
Wo mujhse zaraa khafaa hai magar bewafaa to nahin
Roshni main aa jayegaa unka khaluus dheere dheere
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Waha Danny Ji......kamaal ki rahi aapki yeh peshkash......matle se maqte tak aisa sama baandh diya aapne.....sachmuch shabd kam padh gaye.....taarif karne ke liye....aapne isme pyaar shararat dard aur bebashi ka aisa shahaakar pesh kiya......jo dil ki gehraai me utarta chala gaya....Amazing Creation.....
dil se daad hazir hai....kabul ki jiye....
yunhi apne behtar kalaam hume humesha sunaate aur padhwaate rahiye....
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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1st March 2010, 07:03 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
danny jee
radhe radhe
aapki ghazal ko padhkar meri aankhon me aansu aa gaye itna dard bhara hai isme...dil se daad nikli hai kubul kijiye...kaash mai bhi itna gahra likh paata fir bhi koshish to hai ye do sher mere dil ko andar tak hila gaye
Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Dil ki dawlat baanT diyaa tha baDii murawat ke saath
Kuch sabaq ke baad bana hun kanjuus dheere dheere
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Radhe Radhe, Ishk Ji...! Kalaam ki itni tareef karne ka bahut shukriyaa...! Waise aap bhi to bahut acche likhte hein...!
Tah-e-dil se daad kabul hai
Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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1st March 2010, 10:57 PM
SUPERB!!!!!.........AS ALWAYS...........................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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2nd March 2010, 11:48 AM
Sabhi ko shukriyaa jo aapne iss kavita ko pasand kiya...!
Itne door tak saath dene ke liye bhi dhanyavaad...!
Apna apna khayaal rakhiyegaa
Duaaon ke saath
Khudaa Hafiz
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd March 2010, 09:20 PM
i am speechless...
just outstanding...... as always!
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2nd March 2010, 09:59 PM
Danny bhaiya:
Pranaam!
aapki ees Ghazal ke baare meN maiN jitnaa bhee kahuuN kam hogaa.. itnaa umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaaN hai ki har paRhne waala bas paRhte hi reh jaayeN! waah! bahot hi Khoob! dil se niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl keejiYe!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
Jai Shree kriShnaa..!
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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2nd March 2010, 10:17 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mushkil
Samjha tha mein mujhe kissi kaabil banaa diyaa
Ye kya kiya ki ek dard ko phir dil banaa diyaa
Siraj Luchnawi Ji
Nikla jaa raha hai umeedon ka juluus dheere dheere
Deed-e-yaar ke armaan houe maayus dheere dheere
Bhuule se bhi bhoola na jaata wo milnaa-julnaa unse
Meri kami hoti hogi unko bhi mehsus dheere dheere
Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Sataaya,rulaaya, kaun kaun sa zulm na dhayaa unpar
Samajhne lagi hogi wo mujhe manhuus dheere dheere
Bharnaa tha wo khaa’i jo unki furqat ne chhod rakhaa
Houe dard-e-nagme hi apne makhsuus dheere dheere
Wo mujhse zaraa khafaa hai magar bewafaa to nahin
Roshni main aa jayegaa unka khaluus dheere dheere
Dil ki dawlat baanT diyaa tha baDii murawat ke saath
Kuch sabaq ke baad bana hun kanjuus dheere dheere
Banaa do ’Amanush’ ko khudaa dam bhar,Mere Rab!
Mumkin tab hi banega ek aam manuus dheere dheere
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Akhtar : A star
Lafz-e-khuluus : Sweet words
Khaluus : Sincerity
Murawat : Generosity
Makhsuus : Exclusive
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Bhaiya.......aapki poetry ki tareef mein lafz feeke se lagte haiN. aap jab bhi likhte haiN.....kamaal ka lihtey haiN.
hamesha ki tarah...................superb
reps +++
regards
aapki chotti behan
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd March 2010, 08:48 AM
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Boss,,
Wah Jii,, An out-standing / mind-blowing creation......
Mujhe is se ziayada lafz nahi mil rahe,
because it's just superb.....
Aisay hi likhtay rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Aik sub-ordinate,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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3rd March 2010, 07:16 PM
Danny ji, just too good! Thanks for posting
Mann
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4th March 2010, 03:43 PM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
danny bhaiya koi alfaaz nahi haiN mere paas, aapke i's kalaam ki tareef karne ke liye....jitni bhi ki jaye kam rahegi.....bakaul zidd saheb, aapka yeh kalaam priceless hai...waqai unhone theek likha hai....
daad hi daad hai....qubuul karte jaaiye....
apna khayal achhi tarha rakhiye aur aise kalaamoN se ru-ba-ru hone ka mauqa muhaiya karwaate raheN....
aapka dost,
vikram...
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Kalaam ki tareef ke liye bahut shukriyaa, Vikram Bhaiya...!
Ab ki baar bhi tah-e-dil se daad kabul karte hein hum...!
Apna khayaal thik se rakhiyegaa,ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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4th March 2010, 03:51 PM
Daany Jee AadaaB!
Wah Janab bahut hi khoob, aapki is gazal ke sabhi sher umda lage..... mohobbat ka patta patta bayan kar diya aapne ek kafiye mein behad khoob.......
Youn hi likhate rhaiye,
Khush rhiaye......
Apna khayal rakhiye.....
khuda Hafez........
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7th March 2010, 05:34 PM
Dear Mandy, Hum kushal se hein aur aap kaisi hein...?
Tah-e-dil se daad kabool karte hein hum...!
YuNhi saath deti raheinge to hum likhte rehne ki koshish karte raheinge...!
Thik se apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?
Duaaein to hamesha aap ke saath hein...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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7th March 2010, 05:41 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha usne mujhe
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere
Sataaya,rulaaya, kaun kaun sa zulm na dhayaa unpar
Samajhne lagi hogi wo mujhe manhuus dheere dheere
Wo mujhse zaraa khafaa hai magar bewafaa to nahin
Roshni main aa jayegaa unka khaluus dheere dheere
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Waha Danny Ji......kamaal ki rahi aapki yeh peshkash......matle se maqte tak aisa sama baandh diya aapne.....sachmuch shabd kam padh gaye.....taarif karne ke liye....aapne isme pyaar shararat dard aur bebashi ka aisa shahaakar pesh kiya......jo dil ki gehraai me utarta chala gaya....Amazing Creation.....
dil se daad hazir hai....kabul ki jiye....
yunhi apne behtar kalaam hume humesha sunaate aur padhwaate rahiye....
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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Kalaam ki itni tareef ke liye bahut dhanyavaad, Naresh Ji...!
YuNhi saath dete rahein aur apna khayaal thik se rakhein,ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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8th March 2010, 02:06 PM
Danny jee ko shaad ka pyaar bhara aadaab... aaj jo DSC pe aya to aapke kalaam par nazar gai to bina padhe na rah saka.. Kya khoon kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai bas itna hi kahunga jo aapke dil ke ehsaas hain unhone rooh ke taaron pe saaz chhed di hai.. dil tadap utha itna dard paakar.. allah paak se duaa karoonga ye dard kam ho sake.. Aapko malik sukoon de.Apna khayal rakhiye.Likhte rahen
allah hafiz
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9th March 2010, 01:20 PM
kya baat h mushkil ji, poori gazal bahut khoobsurat hai,
it's really awesum..
keep writing...
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12th March 2010, 05:02 AM
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SUPERB!!!!!.........AS ALWAYS...........................
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Thanks for your precious support, Zainy Betiya...!
Keep yourself well, ok...?
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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12th March 2010, 05:07 AM
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i am speechless...
just outstanding...... as always!
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Nice to receive your applauds after so long, Parul Beti...!
Do keep coming and take very good care of yourself, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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14th March 2010, 04:15 PM
danny bhayee katl hai ... sab katl
bas ek misra puarana laga
kahafa hai par bebafa to nahi
ho rahe hain hum ghayal zaar zaar
chala rahe ho kartoos dheere dheere
lekin iska saani kamaal raha
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17th March 2010, 09:00 PM
I completely agree with what Zid saheb said..................bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash har sher apni jagah ek dastaa.N bayaa.N kar raha hai.
Dil se daad kabool kare Danny jee.......
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
Mob.: +971 501297654
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22nd March 2010, 12:15 PM
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Danny bhaiya:
Pranaam!
aapki ees Ghazal ke baare meN maiN jitnaa bhee kahuuN kam hogaa.. itnaa umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaaN hai ki har paRhne waala bas paRhte hi reh jaayeN! waah! bahot hi Khoob! dil se niklii hu'ii daad ko qabUl keejiYe!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
Jai Shree kriShnaa..!
aapka
~ Dhaval
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Pranaam, Dhaval Bhaiya...!
Iss kalaam ko bhi pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa aur tah-e-dil se daad kabul hai...!
YuNhi saath banaaye rakhiyegaa
Apna khayaal rakhein,ok...?
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jai Shree KriShna
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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22nd March 2010, 12:18 PM
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Bhaiya.......aapki poetry ki tareef mein lafz feeke se lagte haiN. aap jab bhi likhte haiN.....kamaal ka lihtey haiN.
hamesha ki tarah...................superb
reps +++
regards
aapki chotti behan
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Namaste, Chotti Behan...! Kaisi hein aap...?
Shayri ki tareef ke liye bahut dhanyavaad aur reps ke liye bhi...!
Apna khayaal thik se rakhein, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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30th March 2010, 05:49 PM
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Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
Boss,,
Wah Jii,, An out-standing / mind-blowing creation......
Mujhe is se ziayada lafz nahi mil rahe,
because it's just superb.....
Aisay hi likhtay rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Aik sub-ordinate,,
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Thanks for appreciating this poetry, Hassan Ji...!
Take very good care of yourself, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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30th March 2010, 05:51 PM
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Danny ji, just too good! Thanks for posting
Mann
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Thanks for reading and appreciating, Mann Ji...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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30th March 2010, 06:46 PM
Danny ji,
what an awesome poetry !..i m speechless.... dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko apne haseen ehsaason se sajate rahiye... khush rahiye....
rep+++++++++++++++++++
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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31st March 2010, 03:51 PM
mushkil ji, acchi hai apki peshkash.........
khas kar ke...........
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
ishwar kare chu jayen apke hath aasman ko takhallus dheere dheere
apka
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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10th April 2010, 09:25 PM
Aadaab, Sameer Ji...!
Shaayri ko pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!
Apna khayaal rakhein, ok...?
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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10th April 2010, 09:48 PM
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Danny jee ko shaad ka pyaar bhara aadaab... aaj jo DSC pe aya to aapke kalaam par nazar gai to bina padhe na rah saka.. Kya khoon kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai bas itna hi kahunga jo aapke dil ke ehsaas hain unhone rooh ke taaron pe saaz chhed di hai.. dil tadap utha itna dard paakar.. allah paak se duaa karoonga ye dard kam ho sake.. Aapko malik sukoon de.Apna khayal rakhiye.Likhte rahen
allah hafiz
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Aap ko hamara salaam, Sameer Ji...!
Kalaam ki itni tareef ke liye bahut shukriyaa...! Aap ki duaa sar ankhon par...!
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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25th April 2010, 12:54 PM
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kya baat h mushkil ji, poori gazal bahut khoobsurat hai,
it's really awesum..
keep writing...
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Thanks for finding this poetry awesome, Shipra Ji...!
Do keep coming
Take care of yourself, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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24th June 2010, 06:03 PM
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danny bhayee katl hai ... sab katl
bas ek misra puarana laga
kahafa hai par bebafa to nahi
ho rahe hain hum ghayal zaar zaar
chala rahe ho kartoos dheere dheere
lekin iska saani kamaal raha
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Isse pasand karne ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyaa, Vikas Bhayee...!
Aap ka sher hamein accha lagaa...!
Apna khayaal rakhein, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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24th June 2010, 06:06 PM
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I completely agree with what Zid saheb said..................bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash har sher apni jagah ek dastaa.N bayaa.N kar raha hai.
Dil se daad kabool kare Danny jee.......
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Dil ki gehraaiyon se daad kabuul hai, Sajid Ji...! Kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye bahut dhanyavaad...!
Apna khayaal rakhein, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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14th July 2010, 02:38 AM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
Danny ji,
what an awesome poetry !..i m speechless.... dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko apne haseen ehsaason se sajate rahiye... khush rahiye....
rep+++++++++++++++++++
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Tah-e-dil se daad kabool hai, Lamha Ji...!
Thanks for reps...!
Take care of yourself, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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14th July 2010, 02:42 AM
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Originally Posted by secret admirer
mushkil ji, acchi hai apki peshkash.........
khas kar ke...........
Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere
ishwar kare chu jayen apke hath aasman ko takhallus dheere dheere
apka
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Aap ko peshkash acchi lagi so hum bahut khush houe, Secret Ji...!
Duaa ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!
Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN,ok...?
Regards
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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16th November 2010, 07:01 PM
Waise hamari " Dheere dheere " bhi yaad aa gayi...!
Zaraa ek nazar idhar bhi, hum bhi to khaDe heiN raahoN maiN...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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16th November 2010, 09:02 PM
Bhuule se bhi bhoola na jaata wo milnaa-julnaa unse
Meri kami hoti hogi unko bhi mehsus dheere dheere
Wah Boss ... kia kehne!
Hamari taraf se bhii is dil-fareeb peshkash per
doobara daad qabool kijiye....
Aur dheere dheere apni shayri se humaiN madhoosh
karte rahiye....
Quoted shair, bas kamal hai...
Aap bhi apna boht ziyada khiyaal rakhiye ga,
DuaooN k saath ijaazat,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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