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To every shayar out here ~~ question>> Yaaro! koyi kaise sahe is bojh ko ?? -
12th November 2002, 01:22 AM
dosto aaj baithey baithey apni mayusi , tanhayi , udasi ke aalum me ye lines likhi aur aap sab se. jo bhi shayaran andaaz rakhtey hai, jasbaat rakhtey hai .aap sab se ye question puch rahi hu, ummed me ki shayad kisi ka jawaab hame ........raah dikha sake,
pesh hai..
Dil jab bahut hi mayus ho jaane lage,
Hai!! jab ye apne aapse hi katrane lage,
Koyi kya kare jab khushi ki koyi kiran na ho,
YAARO! tum hi batayo koyi kaise sahe is bojh ko?
Sapno ki jaggah jab aankhain num rehne lage,
Dukh!! hi insaan ko jab bhane lage,
Koyi kya kare jab kisi bhi taraf koyi sukun na ho,
YAAro! tum hi batayo koyi kaise sahe is bojh ko??
Hontho pe ho hasi ki lehar aur maan me udas bhuja ik diya,
jab saza hi har lamha miley, aur gunah!! na koyi ho kiya?
Koyi kya kare jab tanhayi hi bas aakhri sabab ho,
Yaaro!! Tum hi batayo koyi kaise sahe is bojh ko????
DUniya ki mehfil me aane se jab koyi katrane lage,
Tanhyai, ruswayi hi jab 'sanam' ki maan bhane lage,
Koyi kya kare jab kisi bhi aas ki koyi tarkeeb na ho,
YAaro! tum hi batayo koyi kaise sahe is bojh ko????
Beetey palon me hi jab beet rahi ho zindagi jab,
vo baatain, vo milan, vo judayi hi aaspaas ho tab,
Koyi kya kare jab vo aaj ka pata paa na sake,
Yaaro!! tum hi batayo koyi kaise sahe is bojh ko??
Luv Priya>>
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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12th November 2002, 04:02 AM
Jaanu,
Pata nahin, par chahta huun zaroor ki ise paD kar, aapki manzil aur kareeb aa jaaye.
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Are jaaneman, zaada kuch nahin hai mere paas kehne ke liye,
Ise paD kar shyad koi wajja na rahe, udhas rehne ke liye..
Jinhen tum apna kehte ho, woh shyad apne hi nahin,
Dard dikhaa ke gayab ho jaate hain, sapne hi sahin..
Tum koi bojh nahin uttahti, sirf guzra hua kal uttahti ho,
Bojh ka naam le kar, apne dard bhari baatein sunaati ho..
Dil ka diya to bhujna hi tha, aansuon mein doob jo gaya,
Tanha rehte ho har pal, zindagi se mehboob jo gaya..
Zaada kuch to nahin kaha maine priya, par yeh zaroor kahuunga,
Ki khush raho; tumhaare liye bhagwaan se minte karta rahuunga..
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Chalta huun main,
Aapka well-wisher,
Aman,
ek sharaabi..
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my dear aman -
12th November 2002, 06:17 AM
dear aman
thank u so much!! u know something jab jab insaan kisi manzil se dur chala jata hai there is someone or the other somewhere jo hame raasta jarur dhikhta hai, aapnekya gajab likha hai, pata hai i knew that u would surely reply to this one for sure, kabhi kabhi aisa soch kar darr bhi lagta haikyu ki yaha we all are making some kind of rishta by replyin to each other pain, and ab to har rishta kahi tut na jaaye aisa hi darr mere naam me baith gaya hai, hope now there will be no more breakness of hrt and rishta's,
i luved what u said chalo u r one reason that i can smile in my life, god bless u,
Are jaaneman, zaada kuch nahin hai mere paas kehne ke liye,
Ise paD kar shyad koi wajja na rahe, udhas rehne ke liye..
Jinhen tum apna kehte ho, woh shyad apne hi nahin,
Dard dikhaa ke gayab ho jaate hain, sapne hi sahin..
Tum koi bojh nahin uttahti, sirf guzra hua kal uttahti ho,
Bojh ka naam le kar, apne dard bhari baatein sunaati ho..
Dil ka diya to bhujna hi tha, aansuon mein doob jo gaya,
Tanha rehte ho har pal, zindagi se mehboob jo gaya..
Zaada kuch to nahin kaha maine priya, par yeh zaroor kahuunga,
Ki khush raho; tumhaare liye bhagwaan se minte karta rahuunga..
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aahj aapke is reply ko dekh kar khushi huyi bahut jayada, touchwood,
Me dua dil se karti hu aman tumahre liye,
vo raab tumhe zindagi me har khushi dey,
tumahre gam bas mit jaaye hamesha ke liye,
aur vo tumhe aur housla de jeenee ke liye,
tum bhul jaayo vo udas battain,
tum bhul jaayo vo tanhayi me kaati raataain,
khuda tumhe khushi se nisar kare
aur tumahre har zakhm ko bhare
yahi dua maangti hai ye priya tumhare liye,
aaye khushiyo aur ummedon se bhare din tumahre liye!!
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Tum aasmaan ko dekho to sitare tumhe pyar kare,
tum nazaro ko dekho to nazaro tumhe pyar kare,
khuda tumahri zindagi me kabhi gamo ka na vaar kare,
yahi hai mere dua yaar aman tumahre liye
lots of love
Priya>>
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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12th November 2002, 08:28 AM
Mehmsaab,
Itni duaayeN bhi mat do
Mujhe acha laga ki aapko yeh paD kar khushi hui! Waise kya baat kar rahe ho, main aapse judaa kaise ho sakta huun? Aur haan, main tanha nahin huun; meri sharaab ki botal hai, mera saath dene ke liye. Ek aakhri baat priya, aap please - mere jaise logoN ke liye, duaayeN maangne ki bhool mat kar baithna. Zindagi ke din bhi kam reh-gaye, magar gham din bhar din bhaDta jaa raha hai. I have no idea, to what I want to say to you about my past. It's better if I keep the book closed, and not attract any readers. Agar kuch galat keh diya, to maaf karna jaaneman. =)
Aman,
.. ek sharaabi
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12th November 2002, 09:08 AM
amanji ab me kya kahu aapse, mujhe kya haak hai ki me aapko kuch keh saku, magar haan itna hi kahungi ki dukh hua aapki ye baat sunke ki zindagi ke din kam hai, areey aisi kya baat hai yaar, hamari umar tumhe lag jaaye, tum jeeyo hazaro saal yahi hai meri aarzu, ek dost ka dil aisi baaton se mat dukhayo,, mujhe pata hai tumahre dil me bahut dukh hai aman areey hum se shayad ...jada nahi magar,,,,jaha tak baat hai past ki, past haan paast kis ke haath metha, aur aaj kiske haath me hai, aaj hamare haath me hai aman, magar paast ne haath baandth diye hai,, ki hum aaj bhi nahi jee paa rahe, past hum jee na sake, aaj hum jee paa nahi rahe aur hamara koyi future nahi hai, if u understand punjabi thenthis iswhat i say for u , speciaaly for u ,
teri aaye me maar java, teri aankh cho hanju na chowe, dukh tera mainu lag jaave, teri baal vi kade baka na howey,
kuch galat keh diya ho to mujhe bhi maaf kar dena. I am here if u ever need a friend's shoudeler to rely on ....chalo sahi hai u got ur botal i dont even have that,
Raab rakha!
Luv Priya>>
Feelings4rmhrt@aol.com
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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Kudrat maayus kahaaN -
12th November 2002, 11:07 AM
hello Luvpriya, mai baat kehne me itna maahir to nahi par phir bhi jo meri samajh me aaya likh raha hooN agar koi truti (galti ya kami) ho to maaf kijiyega, aakhir insaan hi to hooN.
Duniya me aisa koi dard or maayusi nahi jo hamaare pure vujud par chha jaaye ye to hum hi haiN jo bekaar hi dard or maausi ko seene se lagaaye phirte haiN, Udaasi bhi ek his.sa hai hamaari jindgi ka par ise hamne kuchh jiyaada hi tavajjo de di hai, warna sochiye is prithvi me hamse khubsurat kya koi creation hai kya or ham haiN ke isko bhi theek se jee nahi paate.
Kisi ne theek hi kaha tha ye duniya ek aaine ki tarah hai, hum jaisa chehra banaeNge Aksh (refelection) vaisa hi nazar aaega,
Isi liye ey dost dard or maayusi ko utni hi tavajoo dijiye, ke wo aapki khushiyoN par bhaari na pade.
Sabhi to khush haiN !
Kudrat to khush hai
Phool bhi maayus nahi hote,
Jharne takra takra kar pat.tharoN se
Nikal jaate haiN aage par hataash nahi hote,
Mai jab bhi udaas hota hooN
Khand.haroN me nikal jaata hooN,
PehroN nihaarta hooN baadloN ko
Mai hawaaoN ki khushbuoN me kho jaata hooN,
Mera mehoob bhi itna khoobsoorat nahi
Uska chehra bhi itna sukun nahi pahuNchata,
Is kudrat ko maine udaas na dekha kabhi
Kaash mai bhi ye jindgi isi tarah jee paata
'Osho' ke vichaaroN me Dukh or maayusi ko hamne bina kaaran hi pakad rakhha hai, or Khushi or sukh ke liye hum kaaran dhuNdte haiN, isi liye hamaari jindgi me khushiyaaN kam haiN or dukh bhara pada hai.
"YOU WON'T FIND MANY REASON TO SMILE, SO MAKE IT A HABIT"
Regards
Chaand
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
- Chaand
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hello -
12th November 2002, 10:20 PM
hi priyaaaa ji
aapne likha to bahut hi acha hai.. Dil jab bahut hi mayus ho jaane lage,
Hai!! jab ye apne aapse hi katrane lage,
Koyi kya kare jab khushi ki koyi kiran na ho,
YAARO! tum hi batayo koyi kaise sahe is bojh ko?
lekin kya aap ko nahi lagta hum humesha khushioN ke piche hi bahgte rahte hai, sabse pahle hume dukh or sukh kya hai ye janana chahiye both r part of our life or hume puri life ko imandari ke sath jeena or enjoy karna chahiye dukh or sukh dono aate jaate rahte hai, sukh mian kahi dukh na aajaye ye soch kar hume darana nahi chahiye or dukh main humesha dukh ka samana puri imandari se kana chahiye agar hum dukh se bhagenge to dukh humara picha kabhi nahi chodega in short hume kabhi apne past aur present se shikayat nahi honi chahiye kyoki jo kal hum the vo khud ki hi vajah se the or aaj bhi jo hai vo bhi khud ki hi vajah se hai
bhagvaan humesha humara bhala hi chahta hai phir kaise hum kahsakte hai ki aaj hum dukh main hai hum jaha bhi hai unki marzi se hai unhe humara pura khayal hai bus kabhi haar nahi manani chahiye.
pahli baar kisi ko kuch kaha hai ho sakta hai aap agree na ho par muze jo sahi laga vo likhdiya hai. thanx
"koshish to kar ke dekh sapne bhi sache hote hai
ye duniya itni buri nahi yaha log bhi ache hot hai"
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nazaste priya bahan and aman bahi sahab -
13th November 2002, 02:04 AM
priya ji and aman ji i hope u both r fine guzaar raha tha tu ap logon ka reply samne agaya jisne likhne paar majboor kar dia plz kuch ghalat likhon tu maaf kar djiyega aman sahab waise takhulaas acha hai ek sharabi bahut khoob janab zindagi se haar gaye afsoos agar marna hi hai apne apko tu jaan sir utha ke maro is duniya se taakrao kia hai zindagi yaar kuch nahi asli zindagi tu marne ke baad hai dhok kisko nahi hai yeh batao ab humain ab ap humain lelo priya ji mujhe bahut months se janti hai paar mere bare main nahi main batata hoon sharab meri kamzori thi aur charas meri addad ek daam chalna mushkil hota tha withoud sharab ke trust me mujhe jhoot bolne ki zaroorat nahi doctors ne taak jawab de dia tha ke ab apne ek ghont bhi lia tu kidney fail ho jayeinge magar main us waqt bhi nahi hara tha lar raha tha zindagi se bus bharosa apne kudha paar tha confidence apni himmat main tha kasam se din ba din tootta ja raha tha ke achanaak ek roshni agayi zindagi main priya janti hain unko zaindagi ke amine badal diye mere bahut dhok aur dhoka mila hai mujhe apni life se bahut zada but meri baton ka bura maat manna janab himmat kabhi nahi harna larte rehna jaab taak daam hai is se phale ghum apko marein ap ghum ko mardo waise ekhen tu nahi chahiye but agar ap dono ek dosre ka ghum bantlo ya sahara baan jao tu 2 life sudhaar jayein ek sath kabhi akele main bhet kaar sochna is bare main main 5 saal se apne ghar se bahar hoon bahut experince lia maine ap dono ke dilon main kia hai sab janta hoon main priya bahan tu phale itni udhaas na thin but ap lagne lagi hain but inki udhaasi main bhi ek kashish nazar ati hai mujo ek tarap hai kissi ke liye janey woh kon hai naam tu nahi longa but zahan tu jata hai us paar amaan sahab ap mere bahi ho plz bahi ka kaha manlo sharab chordo mujhe pata hai kia hai yeh ilaaj karwa kaar thaag gaya paar jaab pain uthta hai tu main janta hoo jaan nikal deta hai meri plz i beg of u agar bahi ki baat man sakte hain ap to sharab ko chorein aur duniya se muqabla karein sharab tu chand ghante ghum bhulati hai janab pyar zindagi bhaar nashe main rakhta hai ap mere kuch nahi lagte paar priya ko bahan kehta hoon unhi ke khatir plz try karga chorne ki inshallah chot jayegi meri baton ka bura maat maniyega plz but apni halat janta hoon main is liye dosre ko samjhata hoon plz ok apna khayal rakhega ap dono kudha hafiz.............na cheez salman shaikh........
Chal parin hain kashtiyaan samandar dur hai kinaara.....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara....
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Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai....
ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........
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13th November 2002, 03:48 AM
Dost,
Aapne mujhe bhai maan liya, bhai ka kehna to maan na paDega. Aapne apna waqt barbaad kar ke itna kuch likha, is liye maaf karna. Bhai, sharaab ko chhodne se bhi kuch nahiN hoga. Mere pephaDe jal chuke hai.
In english, I have liver cancer; although, it doesn't really bother me. Unlike some of the other patients, I come from a wealthy family, and I'm here at America, to get my surgery only. The doctor said, the bill would be around $80,000 - which didn't really bother me either. What he said next, although did. He said to me, "If you get this surgery, you will not be able to move your arms to some areas, and you will need a wheelchair to transport."
Yaar, agar main ab surgery karaa bhi leta hoon, to log bahot tang hoge, aur main nahin chahta ki mere priwar ko mere karan taqleefe utthaani paDe. Jab tak America mein huun, main shayri likhta rahuunga, usko yaad karta rahuunga. Waise, meri kamzohriaN chhodo.. yeh thread to sirf priya ji ko khush karne ke liye banaaya gaya tha! Haha, maaf karna jaaneman, I'm sorry if I've said anything wrong.
Aapko duniya chhodni hai; sabko duniya chhodni hai,
Kya farak, agar main aapse pehle is duniya ko chhodta huun?
Take care,
Aman.
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Aman and SALamnji -
13th November 2002, 06:04 AM
SAlmanji,
thanks a lor for ytourz encouraging effort and hey bro i didint know this part of urs, and trust me i never ever imagined anything like that, o gosh!! scared me till death, u r my loving brother and i carea bt u though we havent seen each other but still, meri duayai apke saath hai, bhagwaan aapko har dukh dard se pareh rakhe, har khushi aapko naseeb ho, har sapna pura ho, aapko muukammil jaha miley yahi hai aapki sis ki duayain
lots of luve and best wishes yours sis
Priya>>
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Dear aman,
i dont know what to say to you, what u ahev said mujhe ab tak yakeen nahi hai that the things at urs end can be like this, the words are shrinking enough so i can say wha ti want to, my hrt is pampering so hard that i think everyone near me can hear the pain in it, why this is happening to you, why any friend i make have probs like crazy, why i cant help them in anyway, why they have so much dukh and dard, i can feel what u might be feeling in urz hrt, all i wanna say is frmmy and soul to you is, and i mean it, agar duniya me bhagwaan hai to, aapko meri umar lag jaaye, bhagwaan itna nirdaye nahi ho sakta ki mujhsey aap jaise dost ka saath cheen le, if tehre is god, u will have a long life, or else iw ould think there is no god, haan ye theek kaha aapne sabne jana hai ik din, who knows whos first, kya pata me hi aapse pehley nikal padu, agar meri bemaani zindagi aapke kaam aa sake, i amhere as urs friend, to share and with my shoulder for u as a friend,
yours forever,
Priya.
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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10th February 2005, 12:14 AM
hI,
Vo saaz nahi jisme sargam nahi,
vo phool nahi jisme sargam nahi,
O sapno mein khushi ko dhoonde wale,
vo zindagi nahi jisme gam nahi.
Big wirds from small mouth...... Words r words..... no harm in sharing thm ......
Waise-
gul gulzaar me hua karte hai
gam aitbaar me hua karte hein
kabhi yeh samaj kar pyar mat karna
ki sabhi wafadar hua karte hai
easy to preach thn do - Many of us including me face such feelings---- >
Tear Khayaal dil se mitaya nahi abhi
bedard main ne tujh ko bhulaya nahi abhi
kal toone muskura ke jalaya tha khud jise
seene aa vo chiraag bujhaya nahi abhi
Gardan ko aaj bhi tere baahon ki yaad hai
chaukhat se teri sar ko uthaya nahi abhi
behosh hoke jald tujhe hosh aa gaya
"sush" badnaseb hosh mein aaya nahi abhi
JEENA TO HEI AKHIR.... KYA KARE KOI
WARM REGARDS
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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hi -
10th February 2005, 01:47 AM
dear dard e sush ji aapne kaha se dhund liya aapne is thread ko? this is a old one thanks for replying back...its ahonor to hear frm u
Vo saaz nahi jisme sargam nahi,
vo phool nahi jisme sargam nahi,
O sapno mein khushi ko dhoonde wale,
vo zindagi nahi jisme gam nahi.
----> shayad sahi kaha aapne, yahi hai zindahi par cant we make it happy? somehow?
gul gulzaar me hua karte hai
gam aitbaar me hua karte hein
kabhi yeh samaj kar pyar mat karna
ki sabhi wafadar hua karte hai
------> wow i luved this one really....ki sabhi wafadar hua kartey hai??
-------------> in lines ka jawaab nahi par mehsus karti hu to...dil kuch khaamp sa uth ta hai
kal toone muskura ke jalaya tha khud jise
seene aa vo chiraag bujhaya nahi abhi
Gardan ko aaj bhi tere baahon ki yaad hai
chaukhat se teri sar ko uthaya nahi abhi
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thanks for sharing all this with me....i cherish ur reply
Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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10th February 2005, 01:57 AM
Hi again,
I appreciate ur warm words for me ... i m not at all a writer... just write what i feel only when its unbearable and i wan someone hear me ... Its ur all shayri friend's greatness tht u giv me some space in ur family.
Tkanks n regards
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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hi -
10th February 2005, 01:59 AM
dear dard e sush ji
aapne ek reply me kaha tha convert for a sikh and then be kicked how it feels i am thinking abt that one abhi tak? canu share?
i think jo dil ki baat likhta hai asli shayar wahi hai.....i luv ur writing as alwys i cherish them
Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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