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Meri Maa mere ghar aati hai........... -
22nd April 2016, 06:34 PM
Kuch ajeeb sa he chalan hai iss duniya ka.............jahan bete ki maa bade garv aur bade chaav se apne bete ke ghar jaati hain wahin beti ki maa ek jhijhak ke saath bohut aupchaarikta ke sath beti ke ghar rukti hai agar kabhi ruk bhi jaaien to.............. usi ko apni iss kavita mein dhalne ki koshish ki hai ummeed hai pasand aayegi.
Sukh dukh mein sath nibhane ko wo mere paas aa jati hai thoda sa ghabraati hai aur thoda hichkichaati hai Meri Maa mere ghar aati hai................... subah ki chaai banaane mein bhi kitna wo sakuchaati hai Kahaan padi hai cheeni patti poochne mein sakuchaati hai Meri Maa mere ghar aati hai............... Khana main hi pakaungii...zidd par atak si jaati hai kaam bata kya karna hai..kar ke hi chain wo paati hai Meri Maa mere Ghar aati hai.......... bas-2 kitna khaungi main? keh kar ke aankh churaati hai 'Beti ka ghar' bol bol kar...mujhko kitna tadpaati hai Shaam ko jab main thak jaati hu...sar par tel lagaati hain god mein jab main sar rakh doon to dheere se sehlaati hai. saari chinta saari fikrein hawaa mein ud si jaati hain jab houle se paas aaker wo apne gale lagaati hai Baccho ko wo paas bithakar....kisse roz sunaati hain kabhi kabhi to unhe dekh kar naani ki yaad aati hai kabhi jo laa du tohfa koi lene se katraati hain duniya ki ye reet nahi hai ..roz mujhe samjhaati hain Chaar paanch hi dino mein itni vyakul si ho jaati hai kehti nahi par mujhe pata hai...bhai ki yaad sataati hai Jaane ka din aa jata hai..jane kyu itni jaldi abhi to aayi thi maa meri..abhi abhi dekho chal di.. Har baar wo waapas jaati hain to mujhko bohut rulati hain Beti hoti hai kyu paraayi? sawaal chod kar jaati hai... Meri maa mere ghar aati hai .............meri maa mere ghar aati hai.. Sarika |
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22nd April 2016, 07:30 PM
Sukh dukh mein sath nibhane ko wo mere paas aa jati hai
thoda sa ghabraati hai aur thoda hichkichaati hai Meri Maa mere ghar aati hai................... subah ki chaai banaane mein bhi kitna wo sakuchaati hai Kahaan padi hai cheeni patti poochne mein sakuchaati hai Meri Maa mere ghar aati hai............... Khana main hi pakaungii...zidd par atak si jaati hai kaam bata kya karna hai..kar ke hi chain wo paati hai Meri Maa mere Ghar aati hai.......... bas-2 kitna khaungi main? keh kar ke aankh churaati hai 'Beti ka ghar' bol bol kar...mujhko kitna tadpaati hai Shaam ko jab main thak jaati hu...sar par tel lagaati hain god mein jab main sar rakh doon to dheere se sehlaati hai. saari chinta saari fikrein hawaa mein ud si jaati hain jab houle se paas aaker wo apne gale lagaati hai Baccho ko wo paas bithakar....kisse roz sunaati hain kabhi kabhi to unhe dekh kar naani ki yaad aati hai kabhi jo laa du tohfa koi lene se katraati hain duniya ki ye reet nahi hai ..roz mujhe samjhaati hain Chaar paanch hi dino mein itni vyakul si ho jaati hai kehti nahi par mujhe pata hai...bhai ki yaad sataati hai Jaane ka din aa jata hai..jane kyu itni jaldi abhi to aayi thi maa meri..abhi abhi dekho chal di.. Har baar wo waapas jaati hain to mujhko bohut rulati hain Beti hoti hai kyu paraayi? sawaal chod kar jaati hai... Meri maa mere ghar aati hai .............meri maa mere ghar aati hai.. ..sarika...kitni sahajta se tumne un sare bhavon ko laybaddh kar diya hai jinhe ham ladkiyaan kabhi maa ke samne vyaqt nahi kar pate....akhir tak aate aate aankhein bhar aayiin meri...maa ki hichak to shayad unki jagah pahunch kar hee samjh paungi main...par unke vyavhaar se dil me jo bhaav aate hain vo saaf nazar aaye tumhari kavita padhkar...... Kab se intzaar tha ki tum kuch likho..Der se hee sahi par Bahut bahut sundar rachna huyi hai...bahut sari shubhkamnayein...aise hee likhti raho..  Luv Madhu.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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23rd April 2016, 08:04 AM
Alfaaz nahi hai bataane ke liye ki in jazbaaton se aankhen nam ho gayi, yunhi likhti raho aur aati raho
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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28th April 2016, 07:17 AM
Sarika ji namaste,
Bohot hi sundar kavita likhi aapne..padh kar man bhar aaya......bhai hum to is baar apni sasu maa ko mahina bhar pakad kar rakhenge....jane hi nahi denge...taki unki bhi zhizhak nikal jaye.....bohot bohot badhiya kiya aapne is vishay par likh kar.... Dher sari shubhkamnaye Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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29th April 2016, 07:28 AM
Sarika jee....bahut hee khoobsoorat aur pyaar se bara hua nagma hai aapka....pada.to padta hee reh gaya
Heartblowing...amazing ..simply superb...very nice creation.... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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18th May 2016, 08:42 PM
sarika jii aadaab.......... aaj achaanak se aapki is ghazal par merii nazar padee.... aur jo padhaa to bas usii me samaa gaya ... usi dard ke bhaav me doob sa gayaa...
bahut hi bareeki se aapne ise mahsoos kiyaa hai aur behad maarmik taur par likhaa hai.... sacche aur gahre jazbaaton se sajaa huaa kalaam hai ye..... likhte rahiye.... Shaad.... |
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27th June 2016, 07:30 PM
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27th June 2016, 07:31 PM
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27th June 2016, 07:33 PM
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chalo acha hai saasu maa ke banaye lazeez pakwaan khane ka apko bhi mouka milega.........khate hue mujhe yaad karna mat bhoolna... Sarika |
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27th June 2016, 07:36 PM
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and sorry for replying late actually bohut dino se aayi hi nahi. yunhi aate rahiye aur housla badaate rahiye. Sarika |
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29th June 2016, 11:28 PM
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wah wah sarika jee kamaal kar diya kya chitr khecha hai aapne sahi chot hai yeh un sanskaron pe jo ab badlne hi chahiye.........radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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