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mari vyatha - 26th August 2006, 09:51 AM

Mere Aaine,

mera dard tumhari aankh mai jhalakna hi tha ... aakhir mere Aaine jo ho. tumhe aaj yaha pa kar yah ahesaas bataye bina nahi rah paayi.

Mari vyathane tari aangdi adi
Ne aanshu jevu aa kaik
Chamki gayu tari aankh ma
Maro hath jyaa lidho te
hath ma ne .. paswaaryo..
Hadvek thi taru maun
Aangdi ma sadvadyu
Tane chinta hati mari vedna ni..
Ke Hamna j dhruske chadshe..
K pachhi chis bani afdaashe..
Pan na aevu kai j n thhayu
Kadach…
Mari vendna ne thhayo che lakvo
Hashe kadach …
Mane nathi khabar..
Aa to tari aankh ma aanshu joyu to..
Maani lau chhu k ha..
Maari vyatha na ghav leela chhe haji.
   
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26th August 2006, 07:48 PM

Di..

aapne kya likha mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaya.. par itna jaanti hun aapne likha to khoobsoorat hi hoga..

par agar aap iska hindi translation de den to bahut khushi hogi..

aapki..

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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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hi i m new user - 26th August 2006, 08:16 PM

Pyaar to sabhi karte hain lekin, nibhana mushkil hota hain,
dil mein to mehboob ko sabhi basaa lete hain, lekin use bhulana mushkil hota hain.


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27th August 2006, 03:34 PM

Meena bahen!

Vyatha toh darek naa jivan sathey thodey vattey anshey guthayeli hoy chey pan tey vyatha ney vyakt kervani aa reet aneri chey aney teney tamoye khuba j sarad shabdo maa khubaj rasprad (bhavook) reetey rajoo karel chey jey kharekhar prasnsha ney patra chey!

Ghana samay pachi tamara tarafthi kaink vanchva madel, jo key tema vyatha chey pan raday sparshi gayel!

Sneh sahit,
Rajan!!


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hi - 31st August 2006, 10:36 PM

hi

meena didi tamari aa vyathaa eye to vaanchavaa vaala nu dil chiru naakhyu,kam se kam maaru to chiru j naakhyu,

bahuj dard bharyu ane hridaysparshi geet lakhyu chhe didi tame
aavi rite j lakhata raho

bas tamaari tabiyat nu dhyaan raakhjo

jayshree krishna

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