wwwwwaaaahhhh !!!!! ek behtareen ghazal se nawaaza hai bazm ko aap ne Abhi ji. kya kehne !!! aadam-zaat, zindagi, samaaj, duniya ... in par chun chun ke khayaalaat zaahir kiye. andaaz-e-bayaan aur rawaanee bhi khoob hai. dheron daad aur bahaut si mubaarakbad aap ko.
aapne "kamiyaan" bataane ko kaha, to mere liye bada mushkil kaam hai kyuNki mujhe behad pasand aayee ye umdah ghazal
. phir bhi ek chhoti si baat. 6th sher ke misra-e-sani ka pehla lafz ek baar phir dekh leiN. jahaan tak mujhe samajh aa raha hai lafz "kyuN" ka wazan 2 hai, jab ki aap ki ghazal ke behr mein har misra 1 ke wazan se shuru hota hai. (as far as I know "kyuN" does not have a flexible wazan between 1 &2 and it is fixed as 2, but in case I am wrong then would be happy to learn
). kyun ki aap ki ghazal ka har misra badi khoobsurti se behr nibhaata hua laga, bas is liye ye baat aa gayee. but this is my opinion only ... finally, as a shayar, it's your call
aapne "sujhaav" maanga, to itna hi hai ki aisi hi aur bhi khoobsurat ghazlon ko padhne ka lutf hum ko dete rahiye
ek baar phir, zabardast qalaam par dili daad !!!!