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Maut aur jindagi meri tumse rahe -
21st March 2006, 01:29 PM
Maut aur jindagi meri tumse rahe
Main rahoon nan rahoon, tujhse juda khushian na rahe Paas aa - ke bata doon, kyun hai tu itna khaas Har gham mein, Khushi mein tu hi rehta hai meri aas Duriyaan tujhse, Sikhati rahi mujhe jeena kareeb aaye ho to marne ka nahi hai intezaar kareeb aaye ho to marne ka nahi hai intezaar Yun kathi thi raatein jyun (badalon ka)parda kiye bedhi hon Tum aaye to barson baad hua chand ka didar Tujhse milne ka hoga yeh asar, Socha na tha Dil toh dil, rooh par bhi na hoga ikhtiyaar |
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Re: Maut aur jindagi meri tumse rahe -
21st March 2006, 02:56 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by masti
[B] Duriyaan tujhse, Sikhati rahi mujhe jeena kareeb aaye ho to marne ka nahi hai intezaar QUOTE] Hmm .. To ye baat hai .. na jane kab se wakai ek inzaar tha tum kuch likho .,.. ab jaake poora hua ... aur likha bhiu bas kamaal hi hai ... ye sher bohat accha laga.. aati raha karo na ... wo bhi khush raheNge ,,, jinke liye hai ye ... wo baat aur hai wo khud aate nahi aaj kal  aur mujhse baat kiye bhi kitne din ho gaye tumhe ...  gussa mat dilana mujhe  ...chalo baki baat baad maiN ... apna khayal rakhna bohat acche se ... Tumhara apNa Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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22nd March 2006, 12:26 AM
Hi dear.....
bahut achha likha hain tumne... khaas ke yeh do sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye. Maut aur jindagi meri tumse rahe Main rahoon nan rahoon, tujhse juda khushian na rahe Duriyaan tujhse, Sikhati rahi mujhe jeena kareeb aaye ho to marne ka nahi hai intezaar Aaise hi likhte rehna aur aate rehna... take care! |
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22nd March 2006, 09:41 AM
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masti ji..aapka har lafz dil mein ek phuul ki tarah bas gaya..bas hamesha isi tarah se likhti rahiYee...ek sher.. behad khush kismat hai woh jisne tujhko paa liya nazar-e-karam kariye huzoor hum bhi kabse beqaraar dil ne hosh sambhalte hi kuch likha aapki nazar kya kahun mera bhi hai, kuch is tarah dil beqaraar band aankhen, teri baahen, aur kahun kya mere yaar raat bhar ki chandni aur pyar ki woh raagini laakhon taare hote the pheeke, chaaye jab tera khumaar Is tarah mere labon ko has ke chuu jaana tera aur in baahon mein, aane jaane ka woh intezaar maaut to aayi nahi lo aa gayi hai zindagi zindagi tham jaa ki kuch pal, mein bhi loon dil ko sambhaal jhuke, na nazren uff zara is sharm ko mein thaam loon kaam aayenge yahi pal, yun na kar is dil pe vaar band aankhen, teri baahen, aur kahun kya mere yaar zindagi tham jaa ki kuch pal, mein bhi loon dil ko sambhaal intezaar tera intezaar.. beqaraar mein... lijiye aur aab to hamare chote bhaiYaa ki shikayat bhi dur ho gayi... -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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22nd March 2006, 10:10 AM
bahut khoob masti bahut accha likha hai aapne sur plz aap apna naam bataoge yuhi likhte raho............
aap ka chottu wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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22nd March 2006, 02:06 PM
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NICE.................................... .  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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29th March 2006, 04:37 PM
dear Chandsi, Mehul, Kunal, Parul & Mast ji
Shukriya meri hausla afjai ke liye, koshish karoongi ki aage bhi apki ummeedon par khari utroon. apna khayal rakhiyega apki Sarika |
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29th March 2006, 05:42 PM
sarika ji
bahut khoob likha hai aapne ...... bahut pasand aayi aapki ye post yun hi likhte rahiyega Cuta sa Ashu Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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