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1st May 2015, 02:04 PM
Pyare Doston
Bohut dinon se ye ashaar mere ander kulbula rahe the magar likhne ka waqt nahi mil rahaa tha. aaj kuch waqt nikal kar bohut dino baad apne doston ke beech aayi hun. bataiyega kaisi lagi ye choti si koshish.... Subah Savere 5 baje main tumko roz uthati hun shayad isi liye ab main gandi mumma kehlati hun School ko late na ho jao iss liye jaldi machaati hun shayad isi liye ab main gandi mumma kehlati hun Pad kar peeche roz tumhare doodh main tumhe pilati hun shayad isi liye ab main gandi mumma kehlati hun Homework karlo homework karlo, din raat yahi chillati hun shayad isi liye ab main gandi mumma kehlati hun chahe naak sikodo jitne tori tinde khilati hun shayad isi liye ab main gandi mumma kehlati hun Gar keemat hai yahi pyar ki toh main isey chukati hun Gandi mumma kehlaane mein ajeeb sa sukh main paati hun. Sarika |
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1st May 2015, 02:49 PM
Nice lines.. But u don't seem to be gandi mumma ... Gandi mumma ki jagah caring mumma hona chahiye ..
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1st May 2015, 04:40 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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1st May 2015, 04:53 PM
Sarika jee
Namaste Bahot hi achchhi koshish...ek maaN ke dil kee baat aur usske ehsaas ko bahot achchhe se pesh kiyaa hai Aapka Dhaval |
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1st May 2015, 07:02 PM
kia baat hy.... Waah waah waaah...
So true and touchy lines..... Stay blessed. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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1st May 2015, 07:11 PM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne bhabhi
 Saada aur seedha mann se... Aise aashar mujhe bahut hi pasand aate hain...Bacchon ke liye maa bhale hi gandi mummy ho jaaye pal do pal ke liye par woh zyada der unse door nahin reh sakte... Kai baar maa ko bura banna padhta hai bacchon ko accha banane ke liye... Aap aage bhi aise hi likhti rahiye... Apna khayal rakhiye aur natkhat dono bacchon ko dher saara pyaar Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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1st May 2015, 08:37 PM
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at their age anyone who is trying to discipline them is ganda! they are to small to understand it is 'care' .......... Sarika |
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1st May 2015, 10:22 PM
Sarika ji ,
Bahut hi pyare / nyare ehsaas , jo ki badi sehajta se piroye aapne kavita rupi mal amein .. Bahut anand aya aap ki kavita ko per ke .. Aap ke saath saath aap ke bachchon ke ehsaas bhi chipe thhe is rachna meiN. Maa ki dant meiN bhi chupa ek pyar hota hai , Apne bache ko sanwarne ka ek dular hota hai. Nadani mein bachcha rooth jaata hai jab bhi , Use manane ke maa ka nirala pyar hota hai. hamdam khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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2nd May 2015, 10:36 AM
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2nd May 2015, 03:06 PM
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Dear sarika hasi aa rhi hai aapke yeh ehsaas padkar, bade pyare ehsaas hote hai yeh, muje apne bacchoN ki aisi kai baate yaad aa rhi hai yeh waqt bhi aata hai har maa par, jab pyari mumma gandi mumma ban jaati hai, yehi bacche thoda aur bade hone do tum dekhna kaise har pal chipke rehte hai saath, kyuki jo baat papa se na keh payenge us baat ke liye mumma ko maska lagayeNge...bacchoN ki har baat bahut pyari hoti hai aur bahut pyar hota hai enki har baat meiN kyuki har baache ke liye uski dunia uske maa-baap hi hote hai.love .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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3rd May 2015, 08:44 PM
Bahut khoob kalaam Likha hai aapne... is masoom s3 kalaam pe daad kubul karein.....khush rahein ....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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4th May 2015, 12:16 PM
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4th May 2015, 12:18 PM
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4th May 2015, 01:18 PM
Sarika ji !!!!!bahut khubsoorat creation hai ......aur ek alag subject bhi......aapne bahot achcha likha hai.......dhero daad .....mubarakbaad
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !! (Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab') |
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4th May 2015, 02:14 PM
waaah Sarikaji,
bahot khubsurt andaaz se apne bachcho ke liye muhabbat jataayii hai... ek alag andaaz magar bahot hi khubsurat andaaz.. dheroN daad ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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5th May 2015, 01:57 PM
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Sab janti Hu par kabhi kabhi emotional Ho jaati hun. Kya Karun dil hai Ki manta nahi. Jinke liye sab choda wahi gandi mumma kahen to zindagi waste lagne lagti hai. Sarika |
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5th May 2015, 11:55 PM
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Shukriya bohut bohut. Sarika |
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6th May 2015, 10:55 AM
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sarika ji namaste.... halaki aapka ye kalaam padh ato bahot pahle tha maine FB per aur yahan bhii magar kuch zahnii masruufiyat ki wajah se reply kar na sakaa... maazrat chahata hoon.... lekin aaj jo ispar merii nazar gayee to khud ko rok na sakaa iskii tareef karne se.... aap ne behad gahraai se ek maa ka dil pesh kiyaaa hai..... ke ek maa apne bacchon ke liye kya kya sochtiii hai aurr bacche kya kaya sochte hain ,... bahot hi zyaada jazbaaton ko bayaan kartii huiii kavitaa hai ... meri taraf se aapko bahooot sariii daad aur duaaen..... likhtee rahen aur khush rahen.... shaad....... |
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6th May 2015, 11:06 AM
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Aisa lagta hai jaise mere dil ke ehsason ko zubaan de di hai aapne....shayad maa aur bachchon ka rishta hee aisa hota hai....bahut jitna dikhta hai usse bahut gahra..aur ye bhi sach hai ki emotional ho hee jate hain ham sab jante huye bhi.... Dher sari daad aapki is pyari si kavita par..... khush rahiye ...likhti rahiye..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th May 2015, 11:39 PM
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Apki baatein sunkar housla mila hai warna kabhi kabhi to lagta hai ye never ending situation hai aur aage aage soch kar to hi dar lagta hai. Kabhi kabhi sochti hu ki sab chod kar kisi chote shehr mein bas jaun. Sarika |
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6th May 2015, 11:40 PM
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Aate rahiye.khush rahiye Sarika |
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6th May 2015, 11:43 PM
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Khush hun ki apko mera likha acha laga. Aate rahiye. Khush rahiye Sarika |
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6th May 2015, 11:46 PM
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Apko bohut miss kiya maine. Ab aate rahiyega. Sarika |
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6th May 2015, 11:51 PM
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Mujhe laga shayad apko ye pasand nahi aaye issliye apka comment nahi aaya. Lekin mujhe lagta hai itne arse mein aap itna to jaan hi chuke honge ki agar apko pasand na bhi aaye to aap apne sujhaav dene aa sakte hain lekin apka aana zaroori hai warna kuch adhura sa lagta hai. Waise shukriya pasandagi ke liye. Khush rahen. Sarika |
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11th May 2015, 07:04 PM
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