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"Result of the Gazal of the month July 2009" -
16th August 2009, 03:13 PM
Namaskaar Dosto
sabse phele main muaffi chahti hoon ki last month hum GTM ka result na kar sake, us waqt yahan ka mahool hi kuch aisa ho gaya tha ki dil hi nahi kiya result annouce karuN, khair ab hum hazir haiN aur aap sabse muaffi chahtey haiN.
to last month ki baat chorr kar hum es month ki baat kareN ki kisne ab ki baar baazi marri hai, to dosto jo es baar winner hai wahi last month bhi tha.......to jayada intzaar na karwate hue, ek sher ke saath result annouce karna chahuNgi:
chaa.Nd se phuul se yaa merii zubaa.N se suniye
har taraf aap kaa qisaa jahaa.N se suniye
Dosto hamari es month ki winner haiN DIYA JALE
enke bare meiN ya enki poetry ke bare mein maiN jayada kuch nahi kehna chahuNgi, kyuNki enka shayri ka safar SDC se hi shuru hua hai aur es mukaam tak aaya hai ki yeh mohtarma 3 baar GTM ki winner hue haiN, behad khushi ho rahi hai aaj muje DIYA ko winner annouce karte hue, chand mahino mein es ladki ne bahut kuch seekha hai aur abhi bhi bahut mehnat se seekh rahi hai, bhagwaan eski kalam ki dhaar ko aur tej kareN, yehi hamari dua hai.....GTM ki jeet mubarak ho DIYA
baaki dosto.n ne bhi bahut hi umda likha tha, hume to es baar vote karna bahut mushkil laga, kyuNki sabki gazal bahut hi acchi thi aur kisi ek gazal ko select karna sach mein mushkil kaam tha, dosto apni taraf se har koi mehnat karta hai vijeta koi bhi bane, hamari nazar mein sab vijeta haiN jinhone ne mehnat karke apni gazal GTM mein di hai.
Amit Widhani, Fezan, Shyam Singh, Nalin Mehra, Zidd, Parneeta aur Noor_Noor (Aslam)
sabhi ko hamari taraf se mubarakbaad, aap sabne bhi bahut accha likha tha.
yeh lijiye DIYA JALE ki gazal :
ishQ tujh se kiyaa to kya paaya
zillato'n ka raha mujh pe saaya
muntazir maiN raha terii raah meN
too ne patthar smajh ke thukraaya
mujh se tera milan nahieN mumkin
baat yeh khud ko maine samjhaaya
kitni dilkash khudaa ki qudrat hai
"tum ko daikha to ye khyaal aaya"
maiN ghanii hoN bhalaa kiyaa chahoN
teri yaadieN bani ho sarmaaya
teri ranjish ko bhi khuda ki Qasam
apni qismat samajh ke apnaaya
jaane kyoN jeene ki tamannaa kii
ashQ meraa kabhee na tham paayaa
--diya_jale
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th August 2009, 03:27 PM
Many Many Congrats Diya Doll
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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16th August 2009, 03:28 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender
Namaskaar Dosto
sabse phele main muaffi chahti hoon ki last month hum GTM ka result na kar sake, us waqt yahan ka mahool hi kuch aisa ho gaya tha ki dil hi nahi kiya result annouce karuN, khair ab hum hazir haiN aur aap sabse muaffi chahtey haiN.
to last month ki baat chorr kar hum es month ki baat kareN ki kisne ab ki baar baazi marri hai, to dosto jo es baar winner hai wahi last month bhi tha.......to jayada intzaar na karwate hue, ek sher ke saath result annouce karna chahuNgi:
chaa.Nd se phuul se yaa merii zubaa.N se suniye
har taraf aap kaa qisaa jahaa.N se suniye
Dosto hamari es month ki winner haiN DIYA JALE
enke bare meiN ya enki poetry ke bare mein maiN jayada kuch nahi kehna chahuNgi, kyuNki enka shayri ka safar SDC se hi shuru hua hai aur es mukaam tak aaya hai ki yeh mohtarma 3 baar GTM ki winner hue haiN, behad khushi ho rahi hai aaj muje DIYA ko winner annouce karte hue, chand mahino mein es ladki ne bahut kuch seekha hai aur abhi bhi bahut mehnat se seekh rahi hai, bhagwaan eski kalam ki dhaar ko aur tej kareN, yehi hamari dua hai.....GTM ki jeet mubarak ho DIYA
baaki dosto.n ne bhi bahut hi umda likha tha, hume to es baar vote karna bahut mushkil laga, kyuNki sabki gazal bahut hi acchi thi aur kisi ek gazal ko select karna sach mein mushkil kaam tha, dosto apni taraf se har koi mehnat karta hai vijeta koi bhi bane, hamari nazar mein sab vijeta haiN jinhone ne mehnat karke apni gazal GTM mein di hai.
Amit Widhani, Fezan, Shyam Singh, Nalin Mehra, Zidd, Parneeta aur Noor_Noor (Aslam)
sabhi ko hamari taraf se mubarakbaad, aap sabne bhi bahut accha likha tha.
yeh lijiye DIYA JALE ki gazal :
ishQ tujh se kiyaa to kya paaya
zillato'n ka raha mujh pe saaya
muntazir maiN raha terii raah meN
too ne patthar smajh ke thukraaya
mujh se tera milan nahieN mumkin
baat yeh khud ko maine samjhaaya
kitni dilkash khudaa ki qudrat hai
"tum ko daikha to ye khyaal aaya"
maiN ghanii hoN bhalaa kiyaa chahoN
teri yaadieN bani ho sarmaaya
teri ranjish ko bhi khuda ki Qasam
apni qismat samajh ke apnaaya
jaane kyoN jeene ki tamannaa kii
ashQ meraa kabhee na tham paayaa
--diya_jale
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diyaji ...APKI TO HATTRICK HO GAI...............
CONGRATULATIONS
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16th August 2009, 03:35 PM
Many Many congrates Sweetie !!
Keep writing and Keep rocking!!
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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16th August 2009, 04:25 PM
congrats diya ji...
aapki ghazal bahut achi thi...
keep it up....
god bless u...
humesha khush raho...
take care
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Hat-Trick -
16th August 2009, 05:20 PM
Congratulations Diya Ji,
Bahot umda rahii aapki pesh kash. Mubaarak ho aapka hat-trick. Aaindaa bhi ummid karuuNga ki aapke behteriin kalaam se hum ru-ba-ru hote raheNge. Aur abki baar jaane diya Diya, magar agli baar jam ke takkar hogii
"Porer baar judhho hobe maa taara!"
Congrats once again and God bless
Shyam
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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17th August 2009, 02:47 PM
congrtas diya
par di..baki ki ghazal ke writers ke naam bhi to bataye yaa woh abhi bhi gupt rakhne hain
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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17th August 2009, 09:48 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender
Namaskaar Dosto
sabse phele main muaffi chahti hoon ki last month hum GTM ka result na kar sake, us waqt yahan ka mahool hi kuch aisa ho gaya tha ki dil hi nahi kiya result annouce karuN, khair ab hum hazir haiN aur aap sabse muaffi chahtey haiN.
to last month ki baat chorr kar hum es month ki baat kareN ki kisne ab ki baar baazi marri hai, to dosto jo es baar winner hai wahi last month bhi tha.......to jayada intzaar na karwate hue, ek sher ke saath result annouce karna chahuNgi:
chaa.Nd se phuul se yaa merii zubaa.N se suniye
har taraf aap kaa qisaa jahaa.N se suniye
Dosto hamari es month ki winner haiN DIYA JALE
enke bare meiN ya enki poetry ke bare mein maiN jayada kuch nahi kehna chahuNgi, kyuNki enka shayri ka safar SDC se hi shuru hua hai aur es mukaam tak aaya hai ki yeh mohtarma 3 baar GTM ki winner hue haiN, behad khushi ho rahi hai aaj muje DIYA ko winner annouce karte hue, chand mahino mein es ladki ne bahut kuch seekha hai aur abhi bhi bahut mehnat se seekh rahi hai, bhagwaan eski kalam ki dhaar ko aur tej kareN, yehi hamari dua hai.....GTM ki jeet mubarak ho DIYA
baaki dosto.n ne bhi bahut hi umda likha tha, hume to es baar vote karna bahut mushkil laga, kyuNki sabki gazal bahut hi acchi thi aur kisi ek gazal ko select karna sach mein mushkil kaam tha, dosto apni taraf se har koi mehnat karta hai vijeta koi bhi bane, hamari nazar mein sab vijeta haiN jinhone ne mehnat karke apni gazal GTM mein di hai.
Amit Widhani, Fezan, Shyam Singh, Nalin Mehra, Zidd, Parneeta aur Noor_Noor (Aslam)
sabhi ko hamari taraf se mubarakbaad, aap sabne bhi bahut accha likha tha.
yeh lijiye DIYA JALE ki gazal :
ishQ tujh se kiyaa to kya paaya
zillato'n ka raha mujh pe saaya
muntazir maiN raha terii raah meN
too ne patthar smajh ke thukraaya
mujh se tera milan nahieN mumkin
baat yeh khud ko maine samjhaaya
kitni dilkash khudaa ki qudrat hai
"tum ko daikha to ye khyaal aaya"
maiN ghanii hoN bhalaa kiyaa chahoN
teri yaadieN bani ho sarmaaya
teri ranjish ko bhi khuda ki Qasam
apni qismat samajh ke apnaaya
jaane kyoN jeene ki tamannaa kii
ashQ meraa kabhee na tham paayaa
--diya_jale
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Pyaare.N Doston ......
Aap sab se fir ek baar is thread par rubaroo hone ka mauka mila hai. Is thread par aake aaj kuch mix feelings ho rahi hai…aur yeh feelings ki wajah aap sab bakhubi jante hai.
Dosto.N mera SDC par aane ka maqsad sirf aur sirf shayri sikhana tha. Yahan shayri sikhne ke alawa bhi bahot kuch mila hai jo ta-umr mai.N bhool nahi sakti.
Sab se pahele to main apne saare dosto.N ka shukriya adaa karna chahti hoon jinho.N ne meri ghazal na sirf pasand kiya par apne vote de kar mujhe is makam par khada kiya hai..AAdi jee , dilip jee , dinu , dr.raj, Ghazal dii ,Omi , kshitiz jee, sameer, Mandeep jee , Nazneen, Nalin, nisha jee , Vicky , Sunita Di, ziddI jee main aap sab ki tah-e-dil se shukra guzaar hoon.
Saath saath Pari , shyam ( nadaan ) aur Mausam di ka bhi shukriya
pichali baar GTM mein jo kuch bhi huwa, uski wajah se mere chand dostoN ne soch liya ke main dubara GTM mein hissa nahi lungi. AAj bhi un dosto.N ko meri is kamiyabi par khushi nahi mil rahi hai.
Un sabhi dosto.N ko na ummid karne ki meri koshish meiN jin dosto ne mere saath diya un dostoN ko bahot bahot shukriya.
Sunita di, meri wajah se aap is thread par sab se maufi mang rahi hai yeh padh kar sach mein mujhe behad afsos ho raha hai. Aap ne har kadam par mera housla badhaya, mera saath diya hai… aur natija
Aap ke saamne hai.Humesha apni Roshni ka saath dete rahna
With lots of love
aapki Roshni
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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18th August 2009, 02:39 PM
Congratulations.................... Diya jii
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Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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18th August 2009, 05:34 PM
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Congratulations.................... Diya jii
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bahot bahot sukriya.................. Fezan jee
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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18th August 2009, 06:14 PM
Congratulations! diyaa jee..!
liKhate raheN yuuNhi... bazm ki Shaan baRhaate raheN!
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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19th August 2009, 03:31 AM
congratulations diya jii aapne bhut achi ghazal likhai daad haazir hai
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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19th August 2009, 05:08 PM
Congratulations diya ji.......
Dosto main bakhi ke participants ke naam bhi bataa deti huun...
Tumko dekha toh ye khayal aaya
Aashiqui ka aks tum, Tum n.ilaahi* maaya
n.ilaahi»Divine
Mere khwaabon se Noor liya ho jaise
Tumko dekha to yeh khayaal aaya
Dhundhla sa zehen mein basa tha jo kabhi
Begana humsafar woh ik anjaan saaya
Muflisi rahi chahat ki ab talak zindagi mein
Is dil ne pehli baar aaj kisi ko apnaya
Kaafir raha ta-umr aur ab ye chamatkaar jaise
Aaj sajde mein maine bhi apna sir jhukaya
Ye raat khushgawar hai, mudatton ke baad
Aaj se pehle bahut tha ashq-e-lahoo bahaya
Meri aashiqui ka anjaam dardnaak ho shayad
Roop-e-Mashooq fir bhi mohabbat ka Sarmaya*
Sarmaya » Worth / Qaabil
Fir veeran hai Anjuman tere paroksh* mein aaj
Teri yaadon ne tanhaiyon ko fir mehkaaya
Paroksh » Gair Maujudgi / Absence
Bechaini-e-deedar judai ke baad bhi dekho
Khud apne haathon se apni maiyyat ko sajaya
Nazron se door na ho jaaye mehboob kaheen
Unke aashiyane ke saamne khud ko dafnaya
Sadaksh* husn, tu Muqaddas* Mohabbat
Jab Tumko dekha to yeh khayaal aaya
Sadaksh » Same As
Muqaddas » Holy
Mere khwaabon se Noor liya ho jaise
Aashiqui ka aks tum, Tum n.ilaahi maaya
BY Widhani(amit)
haath maine kabhi na phailaaya
apni mehnat se jo mila,khaaya
tune zalim ye kya sitam Dhaaya
na to chaha na mujhko Thukraaya
jab se dekha tera hasiiN chehra
dil ko duja koi nahiiN bhaaya
jheel si teri sharbati aankheN
woh teri zulf ka ghana saaya
husn hota hai dilnashiN kitna
tujhko dekha to ye Khayaal aaya
phir qadam uTh gaye teri jaanib
phir mujhe shehwatoN ne behkaaya
roshni banT-ta raha suraj
dhoop se har zamiiN ko chamkaaya
thi akeli woh raat ki rani
phir bhi saare chaman ko mehkaaya
jisne sach bolne ki himmat ki
sabne suli pe usko laTkaaya
sab ko daawat to di gayee thi magar
koi aaya koi nahiiN aaya
BY FEZAN......
Aaina dekha to yeh sawaal aaya,
Hum mein kya tha jo tumney na paaya.
Ek chota sa ghar sukun ka jahan,
Bas itni si chaahat ko tumney thukraya.
Mila sab woh jo thi arzoo teri,
Fir hai kyun chehrey pe maatam chaaya.
Daulat aur Ohda hai.n ab rafeeq terey,
Kyun hain bechain tu, kyun hai ghabraya.
Dar gaya kya us khalish anjani sey,
Seekh sang jeena ab hai yehi tera humsaaya.
Udhaar me bhi na mila , sukun amiron ko
“tumko dekha to yeh khayaal aaya”.
by shyamsingh
Aaj na jane kyun mere zehen me ek khayaal aaya,
Apni shaqsiyaat se juda ek sawal aaya,
Kya khoya hai maine aur is zindagi se kya paaya,
Main hun koi shaqs mukaammal ya hun kisi ka sarmaya,
Chandni raat me kabhi jugnu sa hun jagmagaya,
Kabhi din ki roshni me jaise koi andhera saaya,
Kisi ki mohobbat ke saaye me zindagi ka ilm paaya,
Kisi ke ishq ne mujhe mukammal insaan banaya
Safar-e-ishq me phir ek mod aisa aaya,
Zindagi ke halataon ne kisi ko bewafa banaya,
Fanah huyi muskurahat aur aaunsuon ka sailaab aaya,
Sailaab ne mohobbat ke aashiyane ka wajood mitaya
Toofan ke baad zindagi ne phir apni raftaar ko paaya,
Waqt ke marham se mohobbat ka zakhm bhar aaya
Kisi ki bewafai ka ehsaas aaj phir mujhe yaad aaya,
Tumko dekha toh yeh khayaal aaya..
BY NALINMEHRA
laakh duniya se dil ko bahlaaya
ik siwa tere,kuch nahin bhaaya
khud se pehchaan baDaa lo apni
dosti ka, yehi hai sarmaaya
surkh zakmon ko dekhkar, mere,
kyun tumhe, rang-e-hina yaad aaya
tum ne phir zikr kiya hai mera
varna kyun besabab, mai sharmaaya
ik faqat teri khushi ki khatir
dil raQeeboN ka hum ne bahlaaya
khatm ho jaye na suhaanaa safar
paas mai, manzilon ke, ghabraaya
dobaara ban gayaa hai,taj mahal,
tumko dekha to ye khayal aaya
by zidd
tum ko dekha toh yeh khayal aaya
tanha si raat mein chaand jagmagaya
jab bhi tum aaye saamne nazron ke
gum mein bhi dil yeh mera muskuraya
teri chahat par naazish hai hum ko
ishq ke rup mein hum ne rab paaya
teri nazron ki taasir ne dilbar
kya haseen khwaab hum ko dikhlaya
tumne jeene ki chaah di hum ko
khush naseebi jo tum ne apnaaya
naazish – pride
taasir - effect
by praneeta
Kaash tum hote mere humsayaa
Tumko daikha to ye khyaal aaya
Shab e firaaq mai meine aksar
Apne sabr ko aazmayaa
Tujhko bhoola jo mein kisi lamhe
Dafatan jee mera ghabraayaa
Uljhi uljhi si zulf e jaana mai
jeene ka meine bi hunar paaya
Kabhi kaha nahi hai lai aaj sun
Meri hayaat ka, tu sarmaaya
Aapki ba-rehmi mai rehna hai
Uski aankho ne phir ye farnayaa
dil mai kuch aise bnwar se uuthe
Jab wo nazren jhuka ke muskaya
Meri adna nishaani ungli mai
wo zamaane ko dikha, itraya
mere zakhmo ka kuch hisaab hai kya
har kisi ne hi karam farmayaa
mere chehre pe tha jo karb e judaii
uski palko.n pe wo utar aayaa
aur phir wahi meri tabahi bane
jin khaabo ko meine apnayaa
by noor_noor(aslam)
Ps:...Gtm me hissa lene waale sabhi members se meri guzarish hai ke aagey se Gtm se judi sabhi bateiN sunita jii se hi discuss kareiN....Gtm se judi saari zimmedaari aagey se sunita ji ki hogi.......wohi sab kuch dekhengi......
shukriyaH
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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19th August 2009, 09:11 PM
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Congratulations! diyaa jee..!
liKhate raheN yuuNhi... bazm ki Shaan baRhaate raheN!
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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Sukriya Dhaval jee........................
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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19th August 2009, 09:13 PM
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sukriya zainy jee
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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19th August 2009, 09:28 PM
Congrats Diya ji!
Sunita di .... yeh sab abhi bhi yahan chal raha hai dekh kar bahut acha laga!!!!
Keep up the gr8 work all!!!!
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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19th August 2009, 10:33 PM
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Namaskaar Dosto
sabse phele main muaffi chahti hoon ki last month hum GTM ka result na kar sake, us waqt yahan ka mahool hi kuch aisa ho gaya tha ki dil hi nahi kiya result annouce karuN, khair ab hum hazir haiN aur aap sabse muaffi chahtey haiN.
to last month ki baat chorr kar hum es month ki baat kareN ki kisne ab ki baar baazi marri hai, to dosto jo es baar winner hai wahi last month bhi tha.......to jayada intzaar na karwate hue, ek sher ke saath result annouce karna chahuNgi:
chaa.Nd se phuul se yaa merii zubaa.N se suniye
har taraf aap kaa qisaa jahaa.N se suniye
Dosto hamari es month ki winner haiN DIYA JALE
enke bare meiN ya enki poetry ke bare mein maiN jayada kuch nahi kehna chahuNgi, kyuNki enka shayri ka safar SDC se hi shuru hua hai aur es mukaam tak aaya hai ki yeh mohtarma 3 baar GTM ki winner hue haiN, behad khushi ho rahi hai aaj muje DIYA ko winner annouce karte hue, chand mahino mein es ladki ne bahut kuch seekha hai aur abhi bhi bahut mehnat se seekh rahi hai, bhagwaan eski kalam ki dhaar ko aur tej kareN, yehi hamari dua hai.....GTM ki jeet mubarak ho DIYA
baaki dosto.n ne bhi bahut hi umda likha tha, hume to es baar vote karna bahut mushkil laga, kyuNki sabki gazal bahut hi acchi thi aur kisi ek gazal ko select karna sach mein mushkil kaam tha, dosto apni taraf se har koi mehnat karta hai vijeta koi bhi bane, hamari nazar mein sab vijeta haiN jinhone ne mehnat karke apni gazal GTM mein di hai.
Amit Widhani, Fezan, Shyam Singh, Nalin Mehra, Zidd, Parneeta aur Noor_Noor (Aslam)
sabhi ko hamari taraf se mubarakbaad, aap sabne bhi bahut accha likha tha.
yeh lijiye DIYA JALE ki gazal :
ishQ tujh se kiyaa to kya paaya
zillato'n ka raha mujh pe saaya
muntazir maiN raha terii raah meN
too ne patthar smajh ke thukraaya
mujh se tera milan nahieN mumkin
baat yeh khud ko maine samjhaaya
kitni dilkash khudaa ki qudrat hai
"tum ko daikha to ye khyaal aaya"
maiN ghanii hoN bhalaa kiyaa chahoN
teri yaadieN bani ho sarmaaya
teri ranjish ko bhi khuda ki Qasam
apni qismat samajh ke apnaaya
jaane kyoN jeene ki tamannaa kii
ashQ meraa kabhee na tham paayaa
--diya_jale
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very good DOST KHAN ..tum bade hoker zaroor kuchh banongi. .bahut achchha likha hai..meri duaa hai ki tum isse bhi zyada achchha likho
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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20th August 2009, 04:53 PM
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Ps:...Gtm me hissa lene waale sabhi members se meri guzarish hai ke aagey se Gtm se judi sabhi bateiN sunita jii se hi discuss kareiN....Gtm se judi saari zimmedaari aagey se sunita ji ki hogi.......wohi sab kuch dekhengi......
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Good Decision.......................................... ..............
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20th August 2009, 04:57 PM
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Congrats Diya ji!
Sunita di .... yeh sab abhi bhi yahan chal raha hai dekh kar bahut acha laga!!!!
Keep up the gr8 work all!!!!
~Priya
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thanx Priyaa jee
aap bhi ab GTM pe hissa lijiye
hume khusi hogi
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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12th March 2014, 03:39 PM
missing u alotttttttttt Diya_Jale (meri Roshni)............
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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7th April 2014, 12:53 AM
bahut bahut mubarak ho diya_jale!. baht baht achha likha hai.
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7th April 2014, 01:06 AM
ohh! muje laga recent post hai.diya jale we miss u.
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