AApke naam se...

[Rimjhim]

aapke naam se juda wo unka naam
wafaa ka mila humein aisa inaam
paththar si ho gayin hain dil ki raahien
ek pal mein kar diya kaam tamaam

aapse to koi humein gila nahi
humnein jo rakhi thi shartein yahi
bas hum hi ye pehchaan na sake
kya galat hai aur kya sahi

khush ho lenge gar aap khush ho to
kar gujrenge jo aap chaaho wo
jee bhi lete aapki dhadkane sun
us khuda ki itni inaayat ho to

koi kahega humein pagal aur koi deewana
khud hi koowan khoda aur khud hi ko maar daala
doosron ki mayyat par to sabhi rotein hain
humnein ko apna hi uthaya hai janaaza

aapke naam se juda wo unka naam
wafaa ka mila humein aisa inaam....

Rimjhim

[Ursfoeva]

hi rimjhim ji,
very nice...
i liked these lines a lot..

aapke naam se juda wo unka naam
wafaa ka mila humein aisa inaam

keep writin,
luv riddhi

[romana]

bhut hi achi kavita hein rhimjhim ji

likhte raheiga

keep it up
bye