Death

[Rohin]

Originally posted by Mukhra
hi big b,

this is really really really really really-10000000 nice...i loved reading this one...death...a topic one wants to write abt...one wants to reveal...a topic whic hu have used to create a masterpiece

take care
keep writing

Bye
ek nanny si jaan...chotta sa bacha!

Hey Sweetu,

Masterpiece not sure ....
Death is something which facinates people who romanticise pain...

Take Care
Rohin

[Rohin]

Positive till the end. End is far away

[Zindagi5]

Originally Posted by Rohin

DEATH

I ask you my friend a question.
What is it in this world?
That makes you yearn to live more.
That lets you not come with me.

Is it the scorching heat of the desert sun?
Or the numbing effect of the snowfields.
Is it the tempestuous wind of the caves?
Or it’s the darkness in the woods.

What are you waiting for my friend?
Come with me, I shall show you.
Come the new world awaits you.
Come and live your dreams.

I bring to you a world of pleasure.
Full of things that one can only dream.
But only it is very true;
Beautiful, wonderful, exotic and magical.

Death my friend, I can’t come.
Lot is left for me to overcome.
Many a things for me to explore.
Miles to go, before my last slumber.

The sun has just risen past the horizon.
And the night is far away.
I walk to reach my destination.
Death my friend, life has just begun.

Contradictory Predictable in General, however nicely formed..!!

'Jab Yeh hai to Woh kyon, Jab Woh hai to yeh Kyon'

"Subah Naa Aaayi, Kayi baar Neend se Jaage,
Thhi Ek Raat ki Yeh Zindagi Guzaar Chale.."

[Rohin]

Originally Posted by Zindagi5

Contradictory Predictable in General, however nicely formed..!!

'Jab Yeh hai to Woh kyon, Jab Woh hai to yeh Kyon'

"Subah Naa Aaayi, Kayi baar Neend se Jaage,
Thhi Ek Raat ki Yeh Zindagi Guzaar Chale.."

Thank u for reading. Criticism accepted