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Mulakaat....Udasi se. -
2nd January 2016, 08:39 PM
Main Udasi se bhaag raha hoon.....
Tabhi ton etna shor kar raha hoon..... Chalo aaj waqt nikal lete hain..... Aakhir beth kar baat kar lete hain..... Han ye ek veeran se jageh hai.... Yahan bas main aur tum hai...... Udasi::: Zoron se hans rahi hai..... Barson bad jo uske paas aayen hain..... Mene kaha itna bhi kya itrana hai..... Udasi::: boli aaj aaya tujhe yad mera tikana hai.... Haan main barbaad ho gya hun.... Tumse bhag-bhag kar thak gya hun.... Udasi:::Chalo tumhe ehsas hua hai... yehi kafi hai.... Mene sankdon eshtriyon se sambandh bnaye ....... tumse nata todne ke leye.... Udasi:::Han tumne har niyam toda khuda ka...... Apni kushi ke leye.... Main sundar se sundar ladki ke sath soya , nasha kiya.... tumse door jane ke leye.... Udasi:::Murkh the tum..... kya parindon ke pas bhi aaye par Aasman chod jane ke leye...... Mene Kitni dullat lagayi... jashnon main,mehfilon main..... Tumse bachne ke leye..... Udasi:::Han mujhe pata tha ... tum daur rahe ho..... Apne keye gunahon se chipne ke leye..... Mere pas khoob dullat , shohrat aayi.... Sab man cha paya mene,par sakoon ki wo ghadi na aayi... Udasi:::Angaron par chalne se bhi kya .... kabhi kisi ke tan-man main shanti aayi.... Mene naye - naye zismon ko chua.... sabh kuch badla.... par phir bhi thori der bad.... wahi gariyat he hath aayi.... Udasi:::Man har bar naya he chahta hai..... Chalo tumhe samajh aayi.... Ab main kya karun...... mujhe samajh main nahi aa raha... Udasi:::Hahahaha! bas ab dorte raho Ab waqt tumahre hath na raha...... Udasi:::Moorkh tumne mujhe begana samjha...... Jo tumhara apna sayan tha...... Tumne mere pas aana tha...... Mene tujhe har roz swarna tha..... Mana mere pas rehna bahut mushkil tha.... Par Sona banne ke leye es aag ki bhathi se guzrna tha,,,,,,, Tumne khuda ko pukarna tha...... Khuda ne tumhe kayi guno se nawzna tha....... Tune ragraliyan manakar ....sab kuch gwa diya.... Udasi se to tun bach gya....par kimti janam gwa diya. Moral: ""Udasi ko to apnana hoga..... Es peeda main he khuda ko pukarna hoga." Thank's Parshant  |
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3rd January 2016, 09:12 AM
Prashant ji aadaab.... aaj aapki rachnaa padhne ka saubhaagya haasil huaa....
ajeeb si kashmaksh me hai dil jab se isko padhaa .... na jaane kyaa likhun kuch kalam bayaan kar paane me asamarth hai... magar jo bhi guftagoo aapki udaasi se huii wo lagtaa hai ke sacchaai si hai jo dilon me umadtee hai..... ek ajeeb si udaasi andar tak utar gayee hai,, aur aisaa lag raha hai ke shayad anjaam udaasi hi hai.. magar fir bhi kuch matbhed haine mere dil ke khayaalon se.... aapko bahut si mubarakbaad ise likhne aur hamare saath bantne ke liye.... khush rahiye..... Shaad... |
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3rd January 2016, 02:25 PM
Prashant ji....bahut achchi tareeke se aapne apne man ki baat rakhi hai.....mere apne nazariye me main apki baat se poori tarah sahmat nahi hun....kyun ki antatah jo sath rah jata hai vo hota hai inner peace..udasi nahi.agar ise pa liya to fir bahri duniya ke shor sunayi bhi nahi dete... khud ko pahchaan nahi sake tabhi tak khushi aur udasi jaisi batein hame pareshan karti hain....aapki rachna padhkar ye khayaal aapse bantne ka man kiya.....
Yun hee likhte rahiyega...aur hamare sath share karte rahiyega.... Khush rahiye.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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3rd January 2016, 02:46 PM
Thanks,Sammer ji,Madhu ji... ....................................
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3rd January 2016, 10:24 PM
aapne jo guftguu ka nayaab sa tareeka dhoodha hai vo dil ko chuu gaya...dil ke zakhm khud apni gehraayi ka sabab dete hai aur aapki yeh rachnaa padhkar yahi jaan padh raha hai....
kai jagah soch behad nakaratmak rahi par aapke ehsaas main samajh saktaa hoooon...umeed hai aapki agli koshish isse behter aur pukhtaa hogi.... likhte rahiYeGaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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4th January 2016, 05:41 PM
wah prashaant jee bahut sundar nayab tareeka hai apne andar ke bhav ko prakat karne ka behtreen......................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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4th January 2016, 06:27 PM
Thanks Mast ji...... ishk Ji (Sorry han aapka nam nahi pata).
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11th January 2016, 06:35 AM
Aapko pehli baar padha...bahaut achha likha hai aapne.
Moral is very true. Smiles, Jiya |
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11th January 2016, 10:37 AM
Thanks ..... Sweet_Rain(Jiya).Aapne waqt diya aur samjha.
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