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25th July 2014, 10:55 AM

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Mujhe to lagta hai aapne urdu me Phd ki hai...

uff..agar aap meanings na likhay to ek lafz bhi samaj nahi aayega...
yakin maaniye Zainyji... mujhe urdu bilkul bhii likhnii nahi aati

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lagta hai Ghalib saheb aur Allama Iqbal saheb Aadil saheb k khawab mein
Aaty hain aur roz naya lafz de jate hain

Jokes apart.... Boht khoob.. Besh qeemat daad.
arrey!! Hassanbhai,

Ghalib saab ka ek sher pesh karta hoon, jawaab me.n

kaav kaave sakht-jaani haaye tanhaaii na puchh
subh karna shaam ka laanaa hai ju-e-seer ka

.....toh, janaab khwaab kahaa.n se aayenge LOLzzzz....

aapki daad-o-mubaarakbaad se maskoor hoo.n, Hassanbhai

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I have tried writing a marsiya but its only a four liner whereas marsiya is a poem so actually i dnt knw wht it is i just wrote it i would truly appreciate if you point out my mistakes and give me a chance to improve further.

Firaaq-e-aysh-o-ishrat* meiN qatl-e-imaaN hua
Ibn-e-adam khudse kyuN bad-gumaN hua
Sar nezoN se hue juda maidaan-e-qarbala
Ghaaeb har jabeeN se aj kyuN sajda-e-nishaaN hua


*firaaq-e-aysh-o-ishrat= desire of pleasantness of life/luxury
Naaz,
kaii mudde hai.n jiskee wajah se ise marsiya nahi keh sakte per ise rubaaii (quatrain) keh sakti ho ....

aur waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhh
sahi me.n yeh Naaz ne likha hai?

1st verse itself is just toooooooooooooooo goooooooooooood.
The continuity is maintained through out and also the thought...
An excellent piece of work........ :respect:

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wahh wahhh.. boht khoob..... jawab nahi aap ka Aadil bhai..

dil se nikli dherooN daad-o-mubarakbaad qabool kijiye...

DuaooN k saath,,
Hassanbhai,

mamnoon hoo.n aapkii is kadardaani aur hausla afzaaee ke liye

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Thnx a ton dear, actually all credit goes to this thread, what an awesome thread i fell in luv with it, big thnx to zarraji and zainy for the awesome idea of creating ths thread.
Bilkul sahi kahaa, Naaz....
All thanks goes to the mods especially Zarraji & Zainyji not just for giving this opportunity, but also to keep encouraging bachchaas like us

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Adaab hazreen-e-mehfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz,
Pesh-e-khidmat hai 'aik koshish' hamare ab tak ke alfaazoN per:-

fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya!
zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya..

haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka….!
rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya

kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar!
haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya

phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo!
us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya

zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya!
ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya


sung : stone
bar-mala : manifestly
muqadammaa : case
bahot hi khubsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai Hassanbhai... umdaa tehreer huii hai... dilse bahot bahot duaae.n aur dhero.n daad aur mubaarakbaad....

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Waaahhhh !!!! Jitni bhi taareef ki jaaye Aadeil bhai aap ki aur aap ke qalaam ki kam hogi. Aap ne to poora afsaana-e-jabeen ki keh daala. Aur waah kya khoob kaha hai !!! Har baab ilmii noor se chamakta hua !! Har safa roohani sukoon mein dooba !!!

Behad umdah shayari pardhne ka zauq to haasil hula hi, saath hi lafze-jabeen ko mukammal taur par samajhne mein ek bahaut barha qadam liya hai !!!
Dheron daad bahaut si mubaarakbad behad shukriya aur dil se duaein !!
Zarraji,
hum toh aapke hamesha se hi maskuur hai..... bus yu.n hi hausla badhaate rahiye, khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye



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bal shuaaoN ke se parhe jaayeiN
ke jabeeN bhi to aaftaab hai ye


-zarraa

(shuaaoN = rays, aaftaab = sun)
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
ek gehrii soch, jabeen bhii toh aaftaab hai toh kyuN na suaao.n jaise bal padhe jaaye....
waaaaah waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
bahot khub.............. daad hi daad aapko, Zarraji
duao.n ke saath



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Thnx dear....you are correct its more of a rubaaii than marsiya


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maine hi likhi hun zada surprise hone ki zarurat nahin urdu dictionary zinda baad
thik kahaa... maiN bhii wahi karta hooN but at the end it's your thought that counts, lafz kuch bhii aur kahiiN se bhii istemaal karo

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Thnx once again waise thodi tumse bhi inspired hun isliye ab seriously seekhne ki koshish kar rahi hun.
chalo kisii ke liye inspiration to banaa



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Correct i was just trying to be modest




nahin sirf buzurgoN se inspiration liya jata hai abhi to mai bachchi hun
haa... ye bilkul sahi kahaa chalo maiN toh bach gayaa buzurg kehlaane se



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Dedicated to them who work hard day and night, break their backs
to support their families, who do not live for themselves but for their families:-

kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay,
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan!


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Zarraji,
hum toh aapke hamesha se hi maskuur hai..... bus yu.n hi hausla badhaate rahiye, khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye [/QUOTE]


Ji bilkul ... ise main apni khushkismati samajhta hoon ki aap jaise hum khayaalon aur nek dil logon se hum sukhan hone ka mauka mil raha hai mujh ko.

Aur yakeen maaniye Aadeil bhai, aap se hum sab ko BAHAUT kuchh seekhne ko mil raha hai, jis ke liye aap ka jitna bhi shukriya ada kiya jaaye kam hoga.


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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
ek gehrii soch, jabeen bhii toh aaftaab hai toh kyuN na suaao.n jaise bal padhe jaaye....
waaaaah waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
bahot khub.............. daad hi daad aapko, Zarraji
duao.n ke saath
Bahaut bahaut shukriya itne dil se aur itni mohabbat se daad dene ka ... tah e dil sw mashqoor hooN aap ka Aadeil bhai


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Dedicated to them who work hard day and night, break their backs
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kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay,
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan!
Wwwaaahhhh !!! Dil ko chhoo lene waale alfaaz !! Sach mein, aise logon ke saamne jabeen jhuk jaati hai. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !


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Thnx a ton dear, actually all credit goes to this thread, what an awesome thread i fell in luv with it, big thnx to zarraji and zainy for the awesome idea of creating ths thread.
Thank you very much N@zneen ji ... and you have brought in a lot of positive spirit to this thread


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zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kidhar huwa karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti
khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada
kami bhi yaar ki yakta* usey kiya karti

* unique


-zarraa

(SDC meiN pesh kari huwee nazm "mohabbat ke 3 raNg" se)


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Bahot khoob.....jabeen word bahot achche se use hua hai.
Zehrra nawaazi hai, Naaz ................


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Wwwaaahhhh !!! Dil ko chhoo lene waale alfaaz !! Sach mein, aise logon ke saamne jabeen jhuk jaati hai. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !
Zarraa saheb... pasandeedgi k liye mashoor hooN..


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zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kidhar huwa karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti
khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada
kami bhi yaar ki yakta* usey kiya karti

* unique


-zarraa

(SDC meiN pesh kari huwee nazm "mohabbat ke 3 raNg" se)
Wahhhh Zarra saheb...

unique qit'a pesh kiya hai aap ne... ... lajawab.. bemisaal..


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dostoN .... lafz "jabeen" par ghaur karne ka aakhiri din hai ye ... aglee midnight tak hum is lafz par rahenge ... phir nay a lafz


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Wahhhh Zarra saheb...

unique qit'a pesh kiya hai aap ne... ... lajawab.. bemisaal..

bahaut bahaut shukriya Hassan bhai


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wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa* jabeeN wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN* hote mere jaane ke baad

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* siyah = black, taabindaa = shining, ayaaN = manifest


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Bahot khoob zarraji.....apki ghazal mein jab is ashaar ko padhi tabhi ye soch rahi thi ki ye sher ap is thread par post karein....behad khoobsurat sher hai....dheron daad.
ji, mujhe bhi ghazal post karne ke baad hi khayaal aaya ki ye sher yahaan bhi kehna chaahiye bahaut bahaut shukriya itne apnepan se daad dene ka, tah e dil se mashqoor hoon N@zneen ji.


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wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa* jabeeN wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN* hote mere jaane ke baad

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* siyah = black, taabindaa = shining, ayaaN = manifest
wahhhh Zarraa saheb...bemisaal.. Lajawab...


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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wahhhh Zarraa saheb...bemisaal.. Lajawab...
meherbaanee aap ki Hassan sahab


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lafz "jabeen"par members ke qalaam .... - 27th July 2014, 11:05 PM

lafz "jabeen" par members ke khud ke qalaam ....


Mah me'n to daagh hai nazro'n se bachaane Ke liye
Mahjabee'n tu bhee lagaa le mujhe kaajal ki tarah

Ufaq


na de umr-e-daraazii kii duaaae.n maah-e-shab baa-waqt
jabiin-e-pur-shikan bhii umr ka ehsaas dilaataa hai

Aadeil


biin-e-khaaksii me.n ek jabiin-e-sang bhii aisa yahaa.n
nazr-e-qafas jaa.n aur safhaa-e-dahr dikhaataa hai

Aadeil


jabiiN ghista rahaa aage saraab-e-rahmat-e-parvar
siyaah-ruu jab huaa to raakh chehre pe lagaataa hai

Aadeil


bhale ibn-us-sabiil hi ibn-e-maryam ko banaataa hai
jabii.n-saaii me.n hi aksar wo khud kulfat le aataa hai

Aadeil

jabiiN dekhe Safiiraan-e-haram ke baa-hayaa jhuke
ye to achchhaa Safiiraan-e-chaman hi sub.h laataa hai

Aadeil


Firaaq-e-aysh-o-ishrat meiN qatl-e-imaaN hua
Ibn-e-adam khudse kyuN bad-gumaN hua
Sar nezoN se hue juda maidaan-e-qarbala
Ghaaeb har jabeen se aj kyuN sajde ka nishaaN hua

N@zneen


fusooN-e-ishQ ne jab deewanaa banaya
zeest ko ik bewafaa ne tamashaa banaya

haal kia biyaaN ho, hum jese be-haal ka
rasan-e-daar khud unhoN ne apnaa banaya

kabhi ho jaati hai niyyat kharab, beech bazaar
haan! bosa-e-rukhsar ne humaiN ruswaa banaya

phir chaaye khalwatoN ke baadal chaar soo
us sung ne jab bar-mala muqadammaa banaya

zindaaN meiN zikr-e-yaar ke siwa kuch na kiya
ussi mah-e-jabeen ke charche, jis ne paglaa banaya

Hassan


bal shuaaoN ke se parhe jaayeiN
ke jabeeN bhi to aaftaab hai ye

Zarraa


kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan

Hassan


zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kidhar huwa karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti
khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada
kami bhi yaar ki yakta usey kiya karti

Zarraa


wo siyah gesoo wo taabindaa jabeeN wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN hote mere jaane ke baad

Zarraa


aap sabhi shora ka shukriya jinhone seeekhne ke sisile ko apne khoobsurat aashaar se aage bardhaaya. is baar Aadeil sahab ne pooree ghazal keh di jis ke har sher meiN lafz "jabeen" ka khoobsurat istemaal huwa hai. Hassan sahab ne fusoon-e-alfaaz ke safar par ghazal kahi jis ke aashaar mein, ab tak yahaan par jitne bhi alfaaz par ghaur kiya gaya hai, un sab ka khoobsurat istemaal kiya gaya hai. aur un sabhi doston ka bhi shukriya jinhone hamaari hausla afzaayee ki aur jinhone is koshish ko apna waqt diya.


duaon ke saath
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naya lafz - 28th July 2014, 12:23 AM

dostoN ... is baar ka lafz hai .... MIZHGAAN .....

ye lafz thorha sa uncommon zaroor hai, par hai bahaut hi haseen .... aur ye behad khoobsurti se shayari mein istemaal huwa hai, jaisa ke hum aage dekheNge.

"mizhgaan" means "eyelashes" ya "palkeiN"

is ke pronounciation par 2 baateiN kehna chaahooNga ....

jaisa ki "n" se khatm hone waale kayee alfaaz meiN hota hai, ise "mizhgaan" keh sakte haiN (ending in "n") ya "mizhgaaN (nasal sound attached to "ghaa")*

"mizhgaan"/"mizhgaaN" meiN "zh" ka pronounciation main alfaaz meiN bayaan naheeN kar pa raha hooN, to is ki ek "audio misaal" pesh kar raha hooN, ek YouTube link ke zariye.

is link meiN Ghulam Ali ki gaaye ghazal hai jo Mirza Ghalib ki hai, jis ka matla hai "sad jalwa ru-ba-ru hai jo mizhgaaN uthaaiye". is meiN aap is lafz ka pronounciation, khaas taur se "zh" ke sound, note kijiye.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hBF2s...e_gdata_player

to ab hum lafz "mizhgaan" par ghaur kareNge, koyee sher, qit'ta, nazm, rubaayee ya aur kuchh jise shayari kaha ja sake, keh kar. behr ki koyee bandish naheeN hai, n hi aashaar par koyee gintee, jitne chaaheiN aashaar kaheiN ......... more the merrier

lafz "mizhgaan" se talluq rakhte huwe jo expressions dekhne ko milte haiN, un meiN se kuchh is tarah se haiN ...

mizhgaan ki jumbish means movement of eyelashes jo palakeiN jhapkaane ki taraf ishaara karta hai
mizhgaan uthaana dekhne ki taraf ishaara karta hai
mizhgaan kholna band aankheiN ko kholna ki taraf ishaara karta hai
mizhgaan ka geela hona ya nam hona ya tar rehna rone ki taraf ishaara karta hai

shayari ke saath saath SDC style guftagoo bhi jaaree rakkheNge, seekhne sikhaane ke maqsad se. members se darkhwaast hai ki is lafz par apne khayaalaat aur ilm bhi baaNtte raheiN aur is ki nuances aur is ki usage par roshni daaleiN, jis se hum sab saath saath seekh sakeiN.*

ab is lafz par ustaad shora ke kuchh khoobsurat aashaar ka lutf lete haiN ...

bas ai "meer" mizhgaaN se poNchh aaNsuoN ko
tu kab tak ye moti pirota rahega
-meer taqee meer

kin neeNdoN ab tu soti hai ai chashm-e-girya naak
mizhgaaN to khol shahar ko sailaab le gaya
-meer taqee meer

mizhgaan-e-tar ko yaar ke chehre pe khol "meer"
is aab-khasta sabze ko tuk aaftaab de
-meer taqee meer

sad jalwa ru-ba-ru hai jo mizhgaaN uthaaiye
taaqat kahaaN ke deed ka ehsaaN uthaaiye
-ghalib

dil-o-mizhgaaN ka jo muqadma tha
aaj phir us ki rubakaaree hai
-ghalib

naheeN dil meiN mere wo qatra-e-khooN
jis se mizhgaaN huwee n ho gul-baaz
-ghalib

karte haiN apne zakhm-e-jigar ko rafoo hum aap
kuchh bhi khayaal-e-jumbish-e-mizhgaaN naheeN raha
-momin

is lafz par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 5 *din tak chalaayenge, *yaani Friday,*1st August, 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30*PM GMT.

to ab intezaar kis baat ka ! lafz-e-mizhgaan ke saamne mizhgaan kholiye aur usey apne khoobsurat aashaar mein le aaiye, ki jidhar bhi mizhgaan uthe lafz-e-mizhgaan hi nazar aaye *

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Lafz...mizhgaa.n

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Lafz...mizhgaa.n

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Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte

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Kya gehri fiqr hai aur us ka kis baareekee aur nazaakat se khayaal ka bayaan kiya hai !!


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ye link hai mirza ghalib ki ek azeem ghazal ka jis ke 3 aashaar meiN lafz "mizhgaan" ka hairatanghez istemaal kiya hai unhoneiN

http://www.columbia.edu/itc/mealac/p...ndex_233.html?

is meiN "mizhgaan" par kya khoob jumle Ghalib sahab ne farmaaye haiN ...

daawat-e-mizhgaan = feast for eyelashes (jigar ke tukrhoN ki)

khaama-e-mizhgaan = pen of eyelashes (jis meiN khoon-e-dil bhara huwa hai)

dashna-e-mizhgaan = dagger of eyelashes (jise surme se tez kiya hai)


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mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya

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mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain


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to support their families, who do not live for themselves but for their families:-

kaam meiN ho jate haiN magan
masrofiyat se ho jati hai thakan
qabil-e-tehseen haiN jo nahi laatay,
jabeeN per halki si bhi shikan!
Hassanbhai,
baDi khubsurti se aapne haqiqat ko bayaan kii hai..
behad hi khubsurat tehriir hai dilse dheroN daad


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Zarraji,
hum toh aapke hamesha se hi maskuur hai..... bus yu.n hi hausla badhaate rahiye, khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye

Ji bilkul ... ise main apni khushkismati samajhta hoon ki aap jaise hum khayaalon aur nek dil logon se hum sukhan hone ka mauka mil raha hai mujh ko.

Aur yakeen maaniye Aadeil bhai, aap se hum sab ko BAHAUT kuchh seekhne ko mil raha hai, jis ke liye aap ka jitna bhi shukriya ada kiya jaaye kam hoga.[/QUOTE]
aapkii zarra navaazi ke liye aapka masquur hooN, Zarrasaab

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zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kidhar huwa karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti
khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada
kami bhi yaar ki yakta* usey kiya karti

* unique


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(SDC meiN pesh kari huwee nazm "mohabbat ke 3 raNg" se)
waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.....
Zarrasaab, kya khub qitah pesh kiya hai................
jaise ek rang-e-tehriir ho... bazm ko aapne sajaa diyaa


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wo siyah* gesoo wo taabindaa* jabeeN wo surkh lab
tere sab jalwe ayaaN* hote mere jaane ke baad

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* siyah = black, taabindaa = shining, ayaaN = manifest
wooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!
Zarrasaab,
aapkii shokhi-e-lafz ka kya kehna, janaab.............
baar baar aapkii tehriiroN ko padhne ka dil karta hai


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Lafz...mizhgaa.n

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Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte

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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
laajawaab.. aalatareen bayaanaat, Ufaqsaab.. kya khubsurat kaarigarii hai.....
lafz-e-mizgaa.n ko aapne bakhubii nibhaayaa hai
dili daad...
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mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya

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mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
waaahh Zarrasaab, waaaahhhhhhhhhhh...

iis sher kii jitnii bhii tariif kii jaaye, kam hongiiii.........
mizgaaN ko aankhoN kaa chilman banaa kar ek nayii soch qaayam kii hai.....
behad hi khubsurat sher hai, jaanib se dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad
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29th July 2014, 11:29 AM

lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....

nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte


*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes



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29th July 2014, 03:34 PM

mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe

*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of



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29th July 2014, 11:38 PM

In mohabbat bhari daad ka tah e dil se ehsaanmand hooN Aadeil bhai



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Hassanbhai,
baDi khubsurti se aapne haqiqat ko bayaan kii hai..
behad hi khubsurat tehriir hai dilse dheroN daad





Ji bilkul ... ise main apni khushkismati samajhta hoon ki aap jaise hum khayaalon aur nek dil logon se hum sukhan hone ka mauka mil raha hai mujh ko.

Aur yakeen maaniye Aadeil bhai, aap se hum sab ko BAHAUT kuchh seekhne ko mil raha hai, jis ke liye aap ka jitna bhi shukriya ada kiya jaaye kam hoga.
aapkii zarra navaazi ke liye aapka masquur hooN, Zarrasaab



waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.....
Zarrasaab, kya khub qitah pesh kiya hai................
jaise ek rang-e-tehriir ho... bazm ko aapne sajaa diyaa




wooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!
Zarrasaab,
aapkii shokhi-e-lafz ka kya kehna, janaab.............
baar baar aapkii tehriiroN ko padhne ka dil karta hai


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29th July 2014, 11:40 PM

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waaahh Zarrasaab, waaaahhhhhhhhhhh...

iis sher kii jitnii bhii tariif kii jaaye, kam hongiiii.........
mizgaaN ko aankhoN kaa chilman banaa kar ek nayii soch qaayam kii hai.....
behad hi khubsurat sher hai, jaanib se dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad
Adil
Bahaut bahaut shukriya aap ka Aadeil bhai aur aap ko meri jaanib se dheron duaein


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lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....

nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte


*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
Waaahhh !!! Kya khoob jalwagari hai alfaaz ki aur kya pursoz khayaal !!


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mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe

*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
Waahh !!! "mizhgaan-e-tar" aur "saraab-zaar nazar" se kya maani taameer kiya hai !! Waqayee ek fusoon-e-alfaaz paida kiya hai aap ne Aadeil bhai !!! Bahaut bahaut bahaut daad !!!!!!


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Waaahhh !!! Kya khoob jalwagari hai alfaaz ki aur kya pursoz khayaal !!
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Waahh !!! "mizhgaan-e-tar" aur "saraab-zaar nazar" se kya maani taameer kiya hai !! Waqayee ek fusoon-e-alfaaz paida kiya hai aap ne Aadeil bhai !!! Bahaut bahaut bahaut daad !!!!!!
aapkii zarra navaazii ke liye mashkuur-o-mamnoon hooN, Zarrasaab..
yuN hi pyar barqaraar rakhiye

duaaoN ke saath,
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teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha

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(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)


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teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha

-zarraa


(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

Zarraasaab, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!
laajawaab, kya sher kahaa hai..... mizhgaaN ke kham, ek yaktaa khayaal....

dheroN dheroN daad meri jaanib se......



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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n


*tifl = child

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Bahot khoob……………..
Thanks a lot, Naaz ...........................



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Adil this is so beautiful am so touched....thank you sooooo much dear
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