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16th July 2014, 06:43 PM

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Naaz.. this is for you:-

hai yaQeeN k khatam hooN gay ayaam-e-khalwat..
phir hum bhi khoob lootieN gay maza-e-ulfat...


Waaah waaah bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!! Aur "khalwat - ulfat" kya bhi kya lutf paida kiya hain!! Waaahhh !!!!


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lijiye, aur ek

ek adnaa si koshish..


Khalvat-nashii.n* hoo.n haath me.n khaalii hai baadiyaa*
hai intezaar ki aake pilaaye labo.n se wo

khalvat-nashii.n = sitting in isolation/seclusion ; baadiyaa = goblet
Waaahhh !!!! Bahaut khoob !! Jazba-e-ishq ko ek ek rindaanaa rang dekar pesh kiya hai !! Waah !!! Aur "khalvat-nasheen" jumle se bhi ahl-e-mehfil ko waaqif karaaya!! Dheron daad Aadeil bhai !!


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Waaah waaah bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!! Aur "khalwat - ulfat" kya bhi kya lutf paida kiya hain!! Waaahhh !!!!

Mashkoor-o-ManooN hooN Zarra saheb...


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Exclamation 17th July 2014, 02:14 PM

hum aadi-e-khalwat, shamil-e-jalwat nahi hona!!
haiN bohat ba-murrawwat, be-murawwat nahi hona...


khalwat = solitude
jalwat = crowd
ba-murawwat = affable
be-murawwat = disobliging


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17th July 2014, 11:01 PM

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hum aadi-e-khalwat, shamil-e-jalwat nahi hona!!
haiN bohat ba-murrawwat, be-murawwat nahi hona...


khalwat = solitude
jalwat = crowd
ba-murawwat = affable
be-murawwat = disobliging
Waah waah Hassan sahab ! Bahaut khoob !

Khalwat - Jalwat X Bemurawwat - Bamurawwat .....

Kya khoob construct banaaya hai !! Bahaut si daad !!!


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17th July 2014, 11:04 PM

majma ushshaaq ka laga paayeiN
jo bhi khalwat meiN milne jaate haiN

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majma = crowd
ushshaaq = lovers


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majma ushshaaq ka laga paayeiN
jo bhi khalwat meiN milne jaate haiN

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majma = crowd
ushshaaq = lovers

wahhhhhh... boht khoob Zarra saheb.....
boht aala darjay ka shair biyaaN kiya hai,,
teh-e-dil se nikli dherooN daad qabool kijiye...


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lijiye, aur ek

ek adnaa si koshish..


Khalvat-nashii.n* hoo.n haath me.n khaalii hai baadiyaa*
hai intezaar ki aake pilaaye labo.n se wo

khalvat-nashii.n = sitting in isolation/seclusion ; baadiyaa = goblet
boht boht khoob Aadil jiii....

be-had pasand aaya mujhe aap ka yeh shair...

younhi hii humaiN mehzooz karta rahiye ga,,


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Waah waah Hassan sahab ! Bahaut khoob !

Khalwat - Jalwat X Bemurawwat - Bamurawwat .....

Kya khoob construct banaaya hai !! Bahaut si daad !!!
Zarra saheb,,

Na-cheez ko itni pazeraayi bakhshne k liye
be-had shuker guzaar hooN...

apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,


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janay! Rab kis se raazi hai....!!!
woh parda-nasheeN, hum khalwat-nasheeN....


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Hassan too good yaar tumne to khalwat par kitne hi sher likh diye....mujhse to ek hi ban pai mushkilse
koshish karne meiN kia harj hai... try it!


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Khalwat mein doobii hun koh-e-ghum* ko lekar
Chhor gaya tha wo jahan raastey mein.



koh-e-ghum=mountain of sorrows

wahh...... too good... seems like, my motivation works..



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Khalwat mein doobii hun koh-e-ghum* ko lekar
Chhor gaya tha wo jahan raastey mein.



koh-e-ghum=mountain of sorrows

change of mood...

khalwat meiN chupay dard ko woh kia janay!
woh shaks to hur waqt shararat meiN rehta hai....


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Meri sharartoN ko na samajh behisii
Khalwat meiN behte ashq baateiN nahiN kartey
wahh.. subhan Allah.. boht khoob..


kyuN na biyaaN kar dooNh aaj ehwaal-e-shab-o-roZ!
kabhi ulfat, kabhi nafrat, kabhi jalwat, kabhi khalwat...


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Yes it did worked......thank you
pleasures are all mine...........


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wahhhhhh... boht khoob Zarra saheb.....
boht aala darjay ka shair biyaaN kiya hai,,
teh-e-dil se nikli dherooN daad qabool kijiye...
Tah e dil se shukrguzaar hooN Hassan sahab !!!


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Khalwat mein doobii hun koh-e-ghum* ko lekar
Chhor gaya tha wo jahan raastey mein.



koh-e-ghum=mountain of sorrows
Waah !! Ek khoobsurat soz hai sher meiN !! Bahaut khoob N@zneen ji !!


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change of mood...

khalwat meiN chupay dard ko woh kia janay!
woh shaks to hur waqt shararat meiN rehta hai....
Waah !! Bahaut khoob !! Khalwat meiN kya kya chhupa hota hai kaun jaan sakta hai !!


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qit'a arz hai "fusoon-e-alfaaz" ke ab tak ke chhote se safar par ...

kis ki yaadoN ka ye fusoon hai jo
khalwatoN ko sajaaye jaata hai
kal ke daar-o-rasan ki fikr ho kyooN
kal ka bosa hi yaad aata hai

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qit'a arz hai "fusoon-e-alfaaz" ke ab tak ke chhote se safar par ...

kis ki yaadoN ka ye fusoon hai jo
khalwatoN ko sajaaye jaata hai
kal ke daar-o-rasan ki fikr ho kyooN
kal ka bosa hi yaad aata hai

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Zarra saheb aap k qit'a ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay hue :-


fusooN-e-ishQ meiN giraftaar
aaj khalwatooN ki hai yalghaar
intezaam-e-daar-o-rasan se qabal!
ik bosa-e-yaar ke talabgaar…..



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Zarra saheb aap k qit'a ko mad-e-nazar rakhtay hue :-


fusooN-e-ishQ meiN
giraftaar
aaj khalwatooN ki hai yalghaar
intezaam-e-daar-o-rasan se qabal!
ik bosa-e-yaar ke talabgaar…..



Waahhh !! Bahaut khoob !!

Bhai, aap ki shayari kehne ki speed to kamaal ki hai !!! Itne waqt mein to main ek misra bhi naheen keh paata jitne mein aap ne poora qit'a farma diya hai!!! Aap to shayari ke computer jaise haiN :

Ek baar phir se daad !!!


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Aadaab Zaarraa bhaee!! Ayk chota sa tanz o mazah mayn tar paysh e qidmat baye....

Khalwat pasandee jo zaahir ki hamnay
Turbat hamaaree banaanay lagay wo!!



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Aadaab Zaarraa bhaee!! Ayk chota sa tanz o mazah mayn tar paysh e qidmat baye....

Khalwat pasandee jo zaahir ki hamnay
Turbat hamaaree banaanay lagay wo!!

wwwwwaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!! tanz meiN bhi ek gehree fiqr hai Ahmad bhai !!!!!


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wwwwwaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!! tanz meiN bhi ek gehree fiqr hai Ahmad bhai !!!!!
Zahenaseeb!!
bhaee aapki muhabbat wa khuloos haye jo aapko yay shayr e baykaar mayn bhi mafhoom nazar aayaa!! Saahab aap nahee jaantay aapkay is amal e nayk say kitnay talbaa ko nafa pahunch raha haye aur zubaan e urdu ke tahaffuz mayn aap ka hissaa aapkay takhallus say mukammal taur zid mayn haye... inshaAllah history will tell your contribution....some may laugh at my comment here but I simply don't care...coz time never stops.....


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Waahhh !! Bahaut khoob !!

Bhai, aap ki shayari kehne ki speed to kamaal ki hai !!! Itne waqt mein to main ek misra bhi naheen keh paata jitne mein aap ne poora qit'a farma diya hai!!! Aap to shayari ke computer jaise haiN :

Ek baar phir se daad !!!
hahaha....

boht shukriyaaH aik anookhi tareef k liye

Younhi miltay rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,,


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Khalwat pasandee jo zaahir ki hamnay
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bhaee aapki muhabbat wa khuloos haye jo aapko yay shayr e baykaar mayn bhi mafhoom nazar aayaa!! Saahab aap nahee jaantay aapkay is amal e nayk say kitnay talbaa ko nafa pahunch raha haye aur zubaan e urdu ke tahaffuz mayn aap ka hissaa aapkay takhallus say mukammal taur zid mayn haye... inshaAllah history will tell your contribution....some may laugh at my comment here but I simply don't care...coz time never stops.....
Ahmad sahab ... I am speechless at your generosity ... with all humility I thank you profusely for your extremely kind words ... aap ki lagaataar mil rahi hausla afzaayee se mera azm-e-khidmat-e-bazm aur bhi pakka hua hai, aap ko dheron duaein ..


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hahaha....

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Younhi miltay rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,,
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doston ... lafz "khalwat" par discussion aaj midnight (India time) tak rahega ... phir naya lafz


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Oh itni jaldi char din hogaye...yeh waqt itni tezi se kyun bhaag raha hai. ...ufff.....

.sorry zarra sahab is baar apna sher banane ka waqt hi nahi mila

Khair ek pasandida sher share karti huun..pata nahi kiska hai

Kabhi Yaad Aaye to Poochna, Apni Khalwat e Shaam Sey
Kisey Ishq Tha Teri Zaat Sey Kisey Pyar Tha Teray Naam Se

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.sorry zarra sahab is baar apna sher banane ka waqt hi nahi mila

Khair ek pasandida sher share karti huun..pata nahi kiska hai

Kabhi Yaad Aaye to Poochna, Apni Khalwat e Shaam Sey
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hum ne socha tha ki ye hungaama-e-mehfil hai par
kam n ye shorish huwee khalwat meiN bhi aane ke baad

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wahh.... aik achhotay khiyaal k liye dherooN daad...
nawazish Hassan bhai ......


safar ki daastaaN kehte agar manzil koyee paate
chalo kisse suna dete haiN kuchh pairoN ke chhaaloN ke

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20th July 2014, 12:34 AM

Zarra saheb khalwat per aakhiri shair arz hai:-

khalwat-e-jana ka kia zikr karieN ae saheb!
umar to beet gayi hai... jaan bhi chali jaye gi.......


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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