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12th August 2015, 12:01 PM

Praveen ji

1. kya aapki arrange marriage hai ya love marriage ?

2. agar arrange hai to...yeh batayeN ki pehli baar kab aur kaise dekha aapne apne life partner ko ?

3. agar love marrigae hai to love kaise shuru hua yeh batayeN hame ?

4. aap apne dil ki baat kis se bejijak share karte hai...Patni se, bacchoN se ya kisi khaas dost se ?


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namaskaar praveen ji.....lijiye ab kuch halke fulke sawaal meri taraf se...


1) What are you scared of...? Any phobia...?

2) What makes you cry...?

3) Are you bluntly honest about everything or you prefer to sweeten the truth...?

4) Do you learn better by reading, seeing or hearing...?

5) What is your favourite poem by you...? ( Link please )

6) What is your favourite style of writing and why...?

7) What is the best feeling in the world...?

8) What makes your smile...?

9) Sunrise or Sunset...? Why...?

10) Love and Duty...? Which one will you sacrifice if necessary...?



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Ab aagey - 12th August 2015, 10:35 PM

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Are poochne aaya tha sawaal aur vo to hadbadi mein reh hi gaya....Mera agla sawaal ye hai ki kabhi aapke saamne ye situation aayi hai ki aap ghazal likhne baithe ho aur bahut sochne ke baad bhi baat ban nahi rahi ho, ghazal mein wah waali baat nahi aa rahi ho, aise mein aap kya karte hai?

Dheere dheere hum aapke saare raaz khulwaane waale hai.
Mast Bhai aur Madhuji

Bada hi achcha sawaal kiya hai aap logoN ne. Aur ek shayar hone ke naate maiN bhi aise manzaroN se do-chaar hota rehta huuN. Iss situation ko 'writer's block' kaha jaata hai. Aise maiN laakh koshish karne par bhi aapki qalam wo nahiiN likh paati jo aap chaahte haiN. Aise meiN jo maiN karta huuN aap bhi wo karne ki koshish kareN, shayad aapko madad mile. Waise sabka apna-apna tareeqa hota hai iss se bahar nikalne ka. Phir bhi maiN apna tareeqa aapko batata huuN.

Iss situation maiN jab maiN ulajh raha hota huuN to maiN uss ghazal ko chhod deta huuN kuchh der ke liye. Koi kitaab padhne ki koshish karta huuN ya net par kisi shayar ko padhne ki koshish karta huuN. Uss taraf se dhayaan hata leta huuN. Uss baare meiN sochta bhi nahiiN. Phir agle din uss adhoori ghazal ko dekhta huuN aur 90% muaamloN meiN maiN usse poora karne meiN kaamyaab ho jaata huuN. Aur kai baar aisa bhi hota hai ke wo Ghazal aage nahiiN badh paati.

Aap log kabhi bhi bhi iss khayal se likhne na baitheN ke likhna hai. Apni fikr yaani sochna jaari rakheN. Jab khayaloN ka bahaav shuru ho jaaye, misre banne lageN, tab likhne baitheN. Aise meiN aap zydatar ek hi baar meiN apni Ghazal poori keh paayeN ge. Bas ye khayal rahe ke uss situation meiN koi Khalal na pade. Ek baar likhne ke baad usse agle din dobara dekheN. Aapko usmeiN sudhar ki bohat gunjaisheN dikahyee deNgi. Aur ho jaayegi ek achchi Ghazal.

jaisa ke maine pehle kaha, likhne aur sochne ka sabka apna tareeqa hota hai, maine mehez aapse apna experinece share kiya hai.

Aur koi sawaal ho to bataiyega.

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Ab aagey - 12th August 2015, 10:54 PM

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Praveen ji ,
Shukriya jo aapne mere sawalon ka jawab baree tafseel se diya , aap ke jawab per ke achcha laga .

Mujhe SDC se jure approx 3 years ho jayenge , isse pehle main kabhi 10/15 saal pehle English meiN poetry kerta tha .. Yahan shuru meiN meiN tau smajh hi nahiN thi ki badishon meiN kaise likhna hai ..

Meri ek uljhan hai ...mujhe abhi behr meiN likhna nahiN aata ,
aur agar jor jabardasti kerta hun tau ander se nikle ehsaas bikher jaate hain.
Is karan kabhi kabhi man pareshan ho jata hai ..

Aap ke hisaab se mujhe kya kerna chahiye ki mere ehsaas bhi berkerar raheiN aur maiN behr ko bhi follow ker paaoN.

Yahan members se poochne per jawab milta hai ki Zidd sahib ka behr wala thread paro aur taktee ki practice karo shabdon ko torna seekho ?? etc
Per ye kerne per bhi mujhe confiedence nahiN aa raha behr seekhne ke liye.

Aap ki guidance aur sujhav ka mujhe intezar rahega..

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Aapki uljhan aisee hai jo har naye shayar se rubaru hoti hai. Isske liye practice kiijiye koshish karte rahiye. Jo aap likheN usse kisi experienced shayar se share kareN. Unke comments leN. Uss se aapko madad milegi.

JahaN tak Zidd sahab ka thread hai to wo theory hai aur unhoN ne taqtee ke karna bhi sikhaya hai. Aisa aapko baar baar karna chahiye. Aur agar aapko lagta hai ke aisa karne se aapke ehsaas barkarar nahiN reh paate to aap ye bhi kar sakte haiN ke bahr ke baare maiN sochey baghair, pehle apne Khayal ya ehsaas qalamband kar leN. Uske baad unheiN bahr maiN laane ki koshish kareN. To koi lafz jod kar ya hata kar aap apne ehsaas ko barkaraar rakhte huve apni Ghazal keh paayeN ge.

Aap ek cheez ye bhi kar sakte haiN ke jo likheN usse gungunayeN. Ya kisi dhun par likheN. Uss dhuuN meiN likhne ki koshish meiN bhi aap apne ehsaas behtar express kar paayeN ge. Aur bahr meiN bhi likheN ge. Bahr meiN likhne ke lye practice jaari rakhiye. Pareshaan milkul na hoN. Ye bhi aapko aa jaayega. Haan par apne ehsaasat ko rokiye mat.

Ummed hai maiN aapki madad kar paya. Agar aur koi baat ho to zaruur kahiyega.

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Mast Bhai aur Madhuji

Bada hi achcha sawaal kiya hai aap logoN ne. Aur ek shayar hone ke naate maiN bhi aise manzaroN se do-chaar hota rehta huuN. Iss situation ko 'writer's block' kaha jaata hai. Aise maiN laakh koshish karne par bhi aapki qalam wo nahiiN likh paati jo aap chaahte haiN. Aise meiN jo maiN karta huuN aap bhi wo karne ki koshish kareN, shayad aapko madad mile. Waise sabka apna-apna tareeqa hota hai iss se bahar nikalne ka. Phir bhi maiN apna tareeqa aapko batata huuN.

Iss situation maiN jab maiN ulajh raha hota huuN to maiN uss ghazal ko chhod deta huuN kuchh der ke liye. Koi kitaab padhne ki koshish karta huuN ya net par kisi shayar ko padhne ki koshish karta huuN. Uss taraf se dhayaan hata leta huuN. Uss baare meiN sochta bhi nahiiN. Phir agle din uss adhoori ghazal ko dekhta huuN aur 90% muaamloN meiN maiN usse poora karne meiN kaamyaab ho jaata huuN. Aur kai baar aisa bhi hota hai ke wo Ghazal aage nahiiN badh paati.

Aap log kabhi bhi bhi iss khayal se likhne na baitheN ke likhna hai. Apni fikr yaani sochna jaari rakheN. Jab khayaloN ka bahaav shuru ho jaaye, misre banne lageN, tab likhne baitheN. Aise meiN aap zydatar ek hi baar meiN apni Ghazal poori keh paayeN ge. Bas ye khayal rahe ke uss situation meiN koi Khalal na pade. Ek baar likhne ke baad usse agle din dobara dekheN. Aapko usmeiN sudhar ki bohat gunjaisheN dikahyee deNgi. Aur ho jaayegi ek achchi Ghazal.

jaisa ke maine pehle kaha, likhne aur sochne ka sabka apna tareeqa hota hai, maine mehez aapse apna experinece share kiya hai.

Aur koi sawaal ho to bataiyega.

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Bahut bahut shukriya praveen ji....aapke jaise umda shayr ke experience se bahut kuch seekhne milta hai...khushi hai kiaapne apna tareeka apne khyaal hamare sath share kiye....
In par amal karne ki koshish zaroor karoongi main....
Fir hazir hoti hoon...
Apna khyaal rakhein..



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Mast Bhai aur Madhuji

Bada hi achcha sawaal kiya hai aap logoN ne. Aur ek shayar hone ke naate maiN bhi aise manzaroN se do-chaar hota rehta huuN. Iss situation ko 'writer's block' kaha jaata hai. Aise maiN laakh koshish karne par bhi aapki qalam wo nahiiN likh paati jo aap chaahte haiN. Aise meiN jo maiN karta huuN aap bhi wo karne ki koshish kareN, shayad aapko madad mile. Waise sabka apna-apna tareeqa hota hai iss se bahar nikalne ka. Phir bhi maiN apna tareeqa aapko batata huuN.

Iss situation maiN jab maiN ulajh raha hota huuN to maiN uss ghazal ko chhod deta huuN kuchh der ke liye. Koi kitaab padhne ki koshish karta huuN ya net par kisi shayar ko padhne ki koshish karta huuN. Uss taraf se dhayaan hata leta huuN. Uss baare meiN sochta bhi nahiiN. Phir agle din uss adhoori ghazal ko dekhta huuN aur 90% muaamloN meiN maiN usse poora karne meiN kaamyaab ho jaata huuN. Aur kai baar aisa bhi hota hai ke wo Ghazal aage nahiiN badh paati.

Aap log kabhi bhi bhi iss khayal se likhne na baitheN ke likhna hai. Apni fikr yaani sochna jaari rakheN. Jab khayaloN ka bahaav shuru ho jaaye, misre banne lageN, tab likhne baitheN. Aise meiN aap zydatar ek hi baar meiN apni Ghazal poori keh paayeN ge. Bas ye khayal rahe ke uss situation meiN koi Khalal na pade. Ek baar likhne ke baad usse agle din dobara dekheN. Aapko usmeiN sudhar ki bohat gunjaisheN dikahyee deNgi. Aur ho jaayegi ek achchi Ghazal.

jaisa ke maine pehle kaha, likhne aur sochne ka sabka apna tareeqa hota hai, maine mehez aapse apna experinece share kiya hai.

Aur koi sawaal ho to bataiyega.

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Praveen ji - Behad umdaa tarah se aapne jawaab diye hai, main aapke is tareeke ko khud azmaa chuka hoon aur sehmat hoon ki is tarah se help milti hai. Aksar atak jaane par maine kaafi likhi ghazalon ko dusre din tak rehne deta hoon aur yakeenan most of them turn out to be complete the following day or week.

Bahut shukriyaa apna experience share karne ka...



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Ab aagey - 13th August 2015, 10:57 PM

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Praveen ji

1. kya aapki arrange marriage hai ya love marriage ?

2. agar arrange hai to...yeh batayeN ki pehli baar kab aur kaise dekha aapne apne life partner ko ?

3. agar love marrigae hai to love kaise shuru hua yeh batayeN hame ?

4. aap apne dil ki baat kis se bejijak share karte hai...Patni se, bacchoN se ya kisi khaas dost se ?
Aadab Sunita ji

Aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab lekar haazir huuN.

Sunita ji meri arranged marriage hui hai.

Aur main apni jeevan saathi se pehli baar unke hi ghar par mila tha. Wo yahin Delhi ki rehne waali haiN. MaiN apne parents ke saath unke ghar gaya thha pehli baar.

Sunita ji maiN apne dil ki baat sabse zyada apne ek khaas dost aur apni family ke saath share karta huuN. Jab koi uljhan hoti hai to maiN apni baat in logoN ke saamne rakhta huuN. Ek tarah se meri patni aur bachche bhi mere dost ki tarah hi haiN. Waise bhi patni sabse khaas dost hoti hai.

Aur koi sawaal hoN to zaruur bataiye. Tab tak ke liye ijazat

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Bada hi achcha sawaal kiya hai aap logoN ne. Aur ek shayar hone ke naate maiN bhi aise manzaroN se do-chaar hota rehta huuN. Iss situation ko 'writer's block' kaha jaata hai. Aise maiN laakh koshish karne par bhi aapki qalam wo nahiiN likh paati jo aap chaahte haiN. Aise meiN jo maiN karta huuN aap bhi wo karne ki koshish kareN, shayad aapko madad mile. Waise sabka apna-apna tareeqa hota hai iss se bahar nikalne ka. Phir bhi maiN apna tareeqa aapko batata huuN.

Iss situation maiN jab maiN ulajh raha hota huuN to maiN uss ghazal ko chhod deta huuN kuchh der ke liye. Koi kitaab padhne ki koshish karta huuN ya net par kisi shayar ko padhne ki koshish karta huuN. Uss taraf se dhayaan hata leta huuN. Uss baare meiN sochta bhi nahiiN. Phir agle din uss adhoori ghazal ko dekhta huuN aur 90% muaamloN meiN maiN usse poora karne meiN kaamyaab ho jaata huuN. Aur kai baar aisa bhi hota hai ke wo Ghazal aage nahiiN badh paati.

Aap log kabhi bhi bhi iss khayal se likhne na baitheN ke likhna hai. Apni fikr yaani sochna jaari rakheN. Jab khayaloN ka bahaav shuru ho jaaye, misre banne lageN, tab likhne baitheN. Aise meiN aap zydatar ek hi baar meiN apni Ghazal poori keh paayeN ge. Bas ye khayal rahe ke uss situation meiN koi Khalal na pade. Ek baar likhne ke baad usse agle din dobara dekheN. Aapko usmeiN sudhar ki bohat gunjaisheN dikahyee deNgi. Aur ho jaayegi ek achchi Ghazal.

jaisa ke maine pehle kaha, likhne aur sochne ka sabka apna tareeqa hota hai, maine mehez aapse apna experinece share kiya hai.

Aur koi sawaal ho to bataiyega.

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aadaab Praveen saahab.... ummed karta hoon khairiyat se honge....

aapka jawaa padhaa aur yaqeen maniye behad sukoon haasil ho rahaa hai dil ko...

aapke lafz lafz se aapka experience aapka anubhav aur aapkaa tazrbaaa saaf jhalak rahaa hai..... beshaq ye haal kabhi na kabhi har shayar ka hota hai , mujhe khushi huii ke aapne use itne acche se explain kiyaa aur ussse nipatne ka tareeqa bhi bataya.....

aage abhi aapse aur bhi jaanne seekhen ke mauqe milenge yahi tammana karta hoon..... duaaon ka arzmand....

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Happy Independence Day - 14th August 2015, 05:20 PM

Praveen ji

1. kal Savtantarta Divas hai, to ham chahte hai ki aap Chand Lines Desh ke naam likhe aur ham sabse share kareN


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Ab aagey - 16th August 2015, 04:03 PM

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namaskaar praveen ji.....lijiye ab kuch halke fulke sawaal meri taraf se...


1) What are you scared of...? Any phobia...?

2) What makes you cry...?

3) Are you bluntly honest about everything or you prefer to sweeten the truth...?

4) Do you learn better by reading, seeing or hearing...?

5) What is your favourite poem by you...? ( Link please )

6) What is your favourite style of writing and why...?

7) What is the best feeling in the world...?

8) What makes your smile...?

9) Sunrise or Sunset...? Why...?

10) Love and Duty...? Which one will you sacrifice if necessary...?



hope u will enjoy.......
filhaal ijaazat...

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Madhu ji

Aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab pesh-e-khidmat haiN.

1. Ji nahiN mujhe kisi cheez ka phobia nahiiN.

2. Jab maiN kisi mazloom ko dekhta huuN, ya kisi ke boodhe maaN-baap ko old age home meiN dekhta huuuN, to meri aankheN bahr aati haiN.

3. Ji nahiiN maiN apni baateN aksar bluntly honestly nahiiN kehta huuN. Saamne waale ko chot na pahuuNeche aisa soch kar maiN baat ko zara mithaas ke saath kehne ki koshish karta huuN. "Bas yahi ek jurm hai apna/Hum mohabbat se kaam lete haiN" Sher mera nahinnN hai ye.

4. I learn better both by reading and seeing.

5. Apni likhi zyadatar ghazleN mujhe pasand haiN. Aur jo nahiiN haiN wo maiN saamne hi nahiiN aane deta. Aapse jald hi apni shayri share karuuNga. Collection publish hone ka intezaar hai.

6. Mera likhne ka favourite style saadgi se likhna hai taaki wo sab samajh sakeN. Isske alaava maiN bahr meiN likhna zyada pasand karta huuN. Free verse meiN likhna mujhe bilkul pasand nahiiN. Ya yuN kahiye ke free verse meiN mujhse likha hi nahiiN jaata.

7. The best feeling in the world would be if I am able to bring a smile to someone's face. "Kisi ki muskurahaton pe ho nisaar/kisika dard mil sake to le udhaar/kisike vaaste ho tere dil meiN pyaar... jeena issika naam hai..."

8. When I see an old or rather elderly couple help each other or feel for each other. Hugging or walking hand in hand. It brings smile to my face.

9. Sunrise any day. Because sunrise is a symbol of hope and optimism. It reflects positivity.

10. In my early years when I was working my priority was my work or duty. But now I would like to see love on top.

Aur koi sawaal hoN mdhu ji to zaruur bataiyega.

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1. kal Savtantarta Divas hai, to ham chahte hai ki aap Chand Lines Desh ke naam likhe aur ham sabse share kareN


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Ma'azrat chahta huuN ke aapki ye baat poori nahiiN ho paayi. Kal poore din mujhe ghar ke logoN ne sochne ke liye tanha hi nahiiN chhoda. Jaisa ke aapko maluum hai khaaksaar ki 54vi saalgirah thhi kal. Ummeed karta huuN muaf kareN gi. Aur agar nahiiN kareN to saza tajveez kareN. Sar aankhoN par.

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Aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab pesh-e-khidmat haiN.

1. Ji nahiN mujhe kisi cheez ka phobia nahiiN.

2. Jab maiN kisi mazloom ko dekhta huuN, ya kisi ke boodhe maaN-baap ko old age home meiN dekhta huuuN, to meri aankheN bahr aati haiN.

3. Ji nahiiN maiN apni baateN aksar bluntly honestly nahiiN kehta huuN. Saamne waale ko chot na pahuuNeche aisa soch kar maiN baat ko zara mithaas ke saath kehne ki koshish karta huuN. "Bas yahi ek jurm hai apna/Hum mohabbat se kaam lete haiN" Sher mera nahinnN hai ye.

4. I learn better both by reading and seeing.

5. Apni likhi zyadatar ghazleN mujhe pasand haiN. Aur jo nahiiN haiN wo maiN saamne hi nahiiN aane deta. Aapse jald hi apni shayri share karuuNga. Collection publish hone ka intezaar hai.

6. Mera likhne ka favourite style saadgi se likhna hai taaki wo sab samajh sakeN. Isske alaava maiN bahr meiN likhna zyada pasand karta huuN. Free verse meiN likhna mujhe bilkul pasand nahiiN. Ya yuN kahiye ke free verse meiN mujhse likha hi nahiiN jaata.

7. The best feeling in the world would be if I am able to bring a smile to someone's face. "Kisi ki muskurahaton pe ho nisaar/kisika dard mil sake to le udhaar/kisike vaaste ho tere dil meiN pyaar... jeena issika naam hai..."

8. When I see an old or rather elderly couple help each other or feel for each other. Hugging or walking hand in hand. It brings smile to my face.

9. Sunrise any day. Because sunrise is a symbol of hope and optimism. It reflects positivity.

10. In my early years when I was working my priority was my work or duty. But now I would like to see love on top.

Aur koi sawaal hoN mdhu ji to zaruur bataiyega.

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Shukriya praveen ji...bahut achchi tarah se sabhi sawalon ke jawab diye hain aapne...achcha laga aapko jaankar...
Aur sahi kaha aPne koi bhi baat kahte vaqt itna khyal to rakhna hee chahiye ki samne wale ko chot na pahunche.......

Fir hazir hoti rahoongi apko padhne ke liye...
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16th August 2015, 09:44 PM

lijiye fir hazir hoon kuch apne man ki batein lekar jinke jawab apke tajurbe se janna chahti hoon...

Apki nazar me..Vaqt ke sath kisi bhi rishte me badlaw kitna zaroori hai...kya samay aur priorities ki binah par ehsasoN ka badal jana galat hai...

Zindgi ka koi aisa faisla jiske liye aap aaj bhi pachhtawa ya afsos karte haiN..

Koi aisi cheez jiske bare me aapne socha nhi tha aur vo bas takdeer se mil gayi ho.

Kya aap hath ki lakeeroN par bharosha karte haiN..kya apko lagta hai kuch bateiN ham naseeb me likhwa kar aate hain..lakh koshish karein par vo hona hee hota hai...

Filhaal itna hee...
Umeed hai apka nazariya jald hee janne ko milega...

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Love janamdin ki dher sarri subh-kaamnaye...dil se :) - 18th August 2015, 11:34 AM

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Ma'azrat chahta huuN ke aapki ye baat poori nahiiN ho paayi. Kal poore din mujhe ghar ke logoN ne sochne ke liye tanha hi nahiiN chhoda. Jaisa ke aapko maluum hai khaaksaar ki 54vi saalgirah thhi kal. Ummeed karta huuN muaf kareN gi. Aur agar nahiiN kareN to saza tajveez kareN. Sar aankhoN par.

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hmmmm Praveen ji saza tajveez jaroor kareNge ham, aise hi to chordne wale nahi hai ham

sabse pehle to aapko aapke janamdiN ki dher saari shub-kaamnaye...aapke janamdin wale din ham out of city thy, call nahi kar sakte thy...esi liye watsapp aur FB par wish ki bhagwaan aapko lambhi umr aur acchi sehat den...ghar pariwaar meiN sukh-shaanti aur khushaali de

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lijiye fir hazir hoon kuch apne man ki batein lekar jinke jawab apke tajurbe se janna chahti hoon...

Apki nazar me..Vaqt ke sath kisi bhi rishte me badlaw kitna zaroori hai...kya samay aur priorities ki binah par ehsasoN ka badal jana galat hai...

Zindgi ka koi aisa faisla jiske liye aap aaj bhi pachhtawa ya afsos karte haiN..

Koi aisi cheez jiske bare me aapne socha nhi tha aur vo bas takdeer se mil gayi ho.

Kya aap hath ki lakeeroN par bharosha karte haiN..kya apko lagta hai kuch bateiN ham naseeb me likhwa kar aate hain..lakh koshish karein par vo hona hee hota hai...

Filhaal itna hee...
Umeed hai apka nazariya jald hee janne ko milega...

Madhu
Madhu ji

Zindagi ke bade nazuk pehlu se jude haiN aapke ye sawaal. Koshish karunga ke aapko mutmaeen kar paauN.

Waqt ke saath rishte meiN badlaav ho ye bilkul zaruuri nahiN hai. Balke hona hi nahiiN chahiye. Rishte nibhana kisi paudhe ko seenchne jaisa hai. Roz paani deN ge, waqt-waqt par khaad daaleN ge to paudha khila uar hara-bhara rahega. Jab ye band kar deNge to paudha sookh jaayega. Aise hi rishata bhi. Waqt aur priorities ki bana par agar ehsaas badlte haiN to mere tajarbat ke hisaab se rishte meiN bhi badlaav aa jayeNge. Wo bhi pehle jaisa nahiiN rahega.

Ji aise 2-3 faisle haiN jo mujhe aaj bhi pachhtaave ka ehsaas karwaate haiN. Par ek faisala jo shayad meri zindagi badal sakta thha maine nahiiN liya. MaiN apni company meiN naya tha aur apne kaam se apna maqaam bhi bana raha tha. Chunki ad industry bohat badi nahiiN hai to mere kaam ki baateN doosri companies meiN bhi hoti thhiiN. Aisi hi ek company se mujhe bulava aaya. Unki kuchh baateiN(jo zyada badi bhi nahiiN thiiN) mujhe manzoor nahiiN thi aur idhar meri current company ko jab pata chala to mujhe unkoNne rukne ke liye convince kar diya. Aaj wo company meri current company(jo ab maiN chhod chuka huuN) se bohat aage hai aur behtar kaam kar rahi hai. WahaN agar maiN chala jaata to shayad maiN aaj mumbai maiN hota. Khair...

Ji mera job hi mujhe taqdeer se mil gaya. MaiN to yahaN Delhi Civil Services ki coaching classes ke liye aaya tha. Apni padhai ke dauran advertising mein copywriter ke job ke baare meiN padha thha. To socha ke papa se paisa mngwane ke bajaye kahiiN part time job karke pase kamayeN taaki papa ke liye easy ho jaaye. Ek Dost ne aisi job dilwa di aur maiN padhai bhool-bhaal kar advertising meiN lag gaya. Aur yahi mera career ban gaya.

Ji haaN maiN taqdeer meiN vishwaas karta huuN. Isska matlab ye nahiiN ke maiN mehnat karne maiN vishwaas nahiiN karta. Par ye maine dekha hai ke apne zamane ke toppers ek maamooli job kar rahe haiN aur 3rd divisionars unse kahiiN aage. Iss bare maiN sabki apni soch hai. Meri socha ye hai. Aapne wo gaana bhi suna hoga "Whtever will be will be..."

To ye thhe mere jawaab. Aapke agle sawaaloN ka intezaar rahega.


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Zindagi ke bade nazuk pehlu se jude haiN aapke ye sawaal. Koshish karunga ke aapko mutmaeen kar paauN.

Waqt ke saath rishte meiN badlaav ho ye bilkul zaruuri nahiN hai. Balke hona hi nahiiN chahiye. Rishte nibhana kisi paudhe ko seenchne jaisa hai. Roz paani deN ge, waqt-waqt par khaad daaleN ge to paudha khila uar hara-bhara rahega. Jab ye band kar deNge to paudha sookh jaayega. Aise hi rishata bhi. Waqt aur priorities ki bana par agar ehsaas badlte haiN to mere tajarbat ke hisaab se rishte meiN bhi badlaav aa jayeNge. Wo bhi pehle jaisa nahiiN rahega.

Ji aise 2-3 faisle haiN jo mujhe aaj bhi pachhtaave ka ehsaas karwaate haiN. Par ek faisala jo shayad meri zindagi badal sakta thha maine nahiiN liya. MaiN apni company meiN naya tha aur apne kaam se apna maqaam bhi bana raha tha. Chunki ad industry bohat badi nahiiN hai to mere kaam ki baateN doosri companies meiN bhi hoti thhiiN. Aisi hi ek company se mujhe bulava aaya. Unki kuchh baateiN(jo zyada badi bhi nahiiN thiiN) mujhe manzoor nahiiN thi aur idhar meri current company ko jab pata chala to mujhe unkoNne rukne ke liye convince kar diya. Aaj wo company meri current company(jo ab maiN chhod chuka huuN) se bohat aage hai aur behtar kaam kar rahi hai. WahaN agar maiN chala jaata to shayad maiN aaj mumbai maiN hota. Khair...

Ji mera job hi mujhe taqdeer se mil gaya. MaiN to yahaN Delhi Civil Services ki coaching classes ke liye aaya tha. Apni padhai ke dauran advertising mein copywriter ke job ke baare meiN padha thha. To socha ke papa se paisa mngwane ke bajaye kahiiN part time job karke pase kamayeN taaki papa ke liye easy ho jaaye. Ek Dost ne aisi job dilwa di aur maiN padhai bhool-bhaal kar advertising meiN lag gaya. Aur yahi mera career ban gaya.

Ji haaN maiN taqdeer meiN vishwaas karta huuN. Isska matlab ye nahiiN ke maiN mehnat karne maiN vishwaas nahiiN karta. Par ye maine dekha hai ke apne zamane ke toppers ek maamooli job kar rahe haiN aur 3rd divisionars unse kahiiN aage. Iss bare maiN sabki apni soch hai. Meri socha ye hai. Aapne wo gaana bhi suna hoga "Whtever will be will be..."

To ye thhe mere jawaab. Aapke agle sawaaloN ka intezaar rahega.


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Praveen ji namaskaar......

Bahut hee achchi tarah aapne mere sawalo ke jawaab diye hain.. aapki baat bilkul sahi hai...par afsos ki zyadatar log rishte roopi paudhe ko pani dena hee bhool jate hain...aur fir nakamiyon ka ilzaam ek doosre ke sar rakh kar khud ko tassali dete hain.......

Aur bahut shukriya jo apni zindgi ke tazurbe hamare sath baante aapne......
Vaqt nikaal kar mere sawalon k jawab diye uske liye shukriya fir hazir hoti hoon...
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Praveen ji namaskaar

ab jab baat ristoN ki ho rhi hai to kyu na maiN bhi appke tajurbe se kuch pooch loon

1. agar koi bahut apna rishte ke aad meiN hamse dagga kare to us rishte ko kaise nibhaya jaaye ?

ya

2. kya aise rishte ki koi ahmiyat reh jaati hai ki phir usko nibhane ka socha jaaye ?


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ab jab baat ristoN ki ho rhi hai to kyu na maiN bhi appke tajurbe se kuch pooch loon

1. agar koi bahut apna rishte ke aad meiN hamse dagga kare to us rishte ko kaise nibhaya jaaye ?

ya

2. kya aise rishte ki koi ahmiyat reh jaati hai ki phir usko nibhane ka socha jaaye ?
Aadab Sunita ji

Bada sahi sawaal hai aapka. Aur aisi baat aksar kayee rishtoN meiN dekhi jaati hai. DostoN meiN, rishtedaaroN meiN, ladke ladki meiN waghairah waghairah... Iss baaare meiN yahi kahuuNga ki aise rishte ko nibhaya hi nahiiN jaana chahiye. Sach poochiye aise rishte agar chalte bhi haiN to wo zinda laash ki tarah hote haiN, aise rishtoN meiN jaan nahiiN hoti. Iss tarah aise rishte ki koi ehmiyat reh hi nahiiN jaati. Mere Khayal se aise rishte bemaani hote haiN. Jitni jaldi unheiN khatm kiya jaaye wo achcha.

Ummeed hai aapko jawaab mutmaeen karega.

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Bada sahi sawaal hai aapka. Aur aisi baat aksar kayee rishtoN meiN dekhi jaati hai. DostoN meiN, rishtedaaroN meiN, ladke ladki meiN waghairah waghairah... Iss baaare meiN yahi kahuuNga ki aise rishte ko nibhaya hi nahiiN jaana chahiye. Sach poochiye aise rishte agar chalte bhi haiN to wo zinda laash ki tarah hote haiN, aise rishtoN meiN jaan nahiiN hoti. Iss tarah aise rishte ki koi ehmiyat reh hi nahiiN jaati. Mere Khayal se aise rishte bemaani hote haiN. Jitni jaldi unheiN khatm kiya jaaye wo achcha.

Ummeed hai aapko jawaab mutmaeen karega.

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1. dil ki baat maan.ni chahiye ya dimaag ki ?
2. jab kabhi aap khud ko kahin kisi baat par kamzor mehsoos karte hai to kis tarah khud ka housla banate hai phir ?


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Namaskaar praveen ji....

Sdc se aap year 2002 se jude huye hain ye jaankar bahut khushi huyi mujhe.....apne sdc ka har phase dekha hai...

.kya aap sdc ke in 13 salon ko kuch khaas phase me baNtaa hua dekhte hain...

Agar haan to un alag alag daur me kya khasiyat thi aur kya kami payi aapne..

Aaj ke daur me sdc par jo bhi mahaul hai,shayri hai,log hain kya aap unse poori tarah santusht hain....

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Ab aagey - 23rd August 2015, 09:32 PM

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1. dil ki baat maan.ni chahiye ya dimaag ki ?
2. jab kabhi aap khud ko kahin kisi baat par kamzor mehsoos karte hai to kis tarah khud ka housla banate hai phir ?
Adaab Sunita ji

Dil aur dimaagh meiN se kis ki suneiN, to maiN yahi kahuuNga ke muamlaa kisska hai. Dil ka muaamla hai to to dil ki baat ko tavajjuh deni chaiye. Aur koi muamla aisa ho jahaN dimaagh ki sunne se faayda hota ho to dimaagh ki sunni chahiye. Misaal ke liye koi rishata hai to usmeiN agar koi masla hai to usmeiN dil ki suneiN to usse aur mazboot banaya ja sakta hai. Dimaagh ki jab sunte haiN to wahaN aksar ego aa jaati hai aur ego nazuk rishtoN ko tabah kar deti hai.

Jab maiN kisi aisi situation maiN khud ko kamzor paata huuN to maiN khud se yahi kehta huuN ke jald hi ye waqt bhi niklega, himmat na haro. Mazboot raho. Jab mere mata-pita jald hi duniya chhod gaye to laga ke ab kiss se dil ki kahuuNga? Kaun raasta dikhayega? Tabhi mujhe ehsaas hua ke ghar meiN sabse bada hone ke naate apne chhotoN ko ab mujhse wohi ummeed hogi jo papa-mummy se hoti thhi. Iss ehsaas ne mujhe taqat di.

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[QUOTE=prasaxena;485400]Adaab Sunita ji

Dil aur dimaagh meiN se kis ki suneiN, to maiN yahi kahuuNga ke muamlaa kisska hai. Dil ka muaamla hai to to dil ki baat ko tavajjuh deni chaiye. Aur koi muamla aisa ho jahaN dimaagh ki sunne se faayda hota ho to dimaagh ki sunni chahiye. Misaal ke liye koi rishata hai to usmeiN agar koi masla hai to usmeiN dil ki suneiN to usse aur mazboot banaya ja sakta hai. Dimaagh ki jab sunte haiN to wahaN aksar ego aa jaati hai aur ego nazuk rishtoN ko tabah kar deti hai.

Jab maiN kisi aisi situation maiN khud ko kamzor paata huuN to maiN khud se yahi kehta huuN ke jald hi ye waqt bhi niklega, himmat na haro. Mazboot raho. Jab mere mata-pita jald hi duniya chhod gaye to laga ke ab kiss se dil ki kahuuNga? Kaun raasta dikhayega? Tabhi mujhe ehsaas hua ke ghar meiN sabse bada hone ke naate apne chhotoN ko ab mujhse wohi ummeed hogi jo papa-mummy se hoti thhi. Iss ehsaas ne mujhe taqat di.

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Dil aur dimaagh meiN se kis ki suneiN, to maiN yahi kahuuNga ke muamlaa kisska hai. Dil ka muaamla hai to to dil ki baat ko tavajjuh deni chaiye. Aur koi muamla aisa ho jahaN dimaagh ki sunne se faayda hota ho to dimaagh ki sunni chahiye. Misaal ke liye koi rishata hai to usmeiN agar koi masla hai to usmeiN dil ki suneiN to usse aur mazboot banaya ja sakta hai. Dimaagh ki jab sunte haiN to wahaN aksar ego aa jaati hai aur ego nazuk rishtoN ko tabah kar deti hai.

Jab maiN kisi aisi situation maiN khud ko kamzor paata huuN to maiN khud se yahi kehta huuN ke jald hi ye waqt bhi niklega, himmat na haro. Mazboot raho. Jab mere mata-pita jald hi duniya chhod gaye to laga ke ab kiss se dil ki kahuuNga? Kaun raasta dikhayega? Tabhi mujhe ehsaas hua ke ghar meiN sabse bada hone ke naate apne chhotoN ko ab mujhse wohi ummeed hogi jo papa-mummy se hoti thhi. Iss ehsaas ne mujhe taqat di.

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Dil aur dimaagh meiN se kis ki suneiN, to maiN yahi kahuuNga ke muamlaa kisska hai. Dil ka muaamla hai to to dil ki baat ko tavajjuh deni chaiye. Aur koi muamla aisa ho jahaN dimaagh ki sunne se faayda hota ho to dimaagh ki sunni chahiye. Misaal ke liye koi rishata hai to usmeiN agar koi masla hai to usmeiN dil ki suneiN to usse aur mazboot banaya ja sakta hai. Dimaagh ki jab sunte haiN to wahaN aksar ego aa jaati hai aur ego nazuk rishtoN ko tabah kar deti hai.

Jab maiN kisi aisi situation maiN khud ko kamzor paata huuN to maiN khud se yahi kehta huuN ke jald hi ye waqt bhi niklega, himmat na haro. Mazboot raho. Jab mere mata-pita jald hi duniya chhod gaye to laga ke ab kiss se dil ki kahuuNga? Kaun raasta dikhayega? Tabhi mujhe ehsaas hua ke ghar meiN sabse bada hone ke naate apne chhotoN ko ab mujhse wohi ummeed hogi jo papa-mummy se hoti thhi. Iss ehsaas ne mujhe taqat di.

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Namaskaar praveen ji....

Sdc se aap year 2002 se jude huye hain ye jaankar bahut khushi huyi mujhe.....apne sdc ka har phase dekha hai...

.kya aap sdc ke in 13 salon ko kuch khaas phase me baNtaa hua dekhte hain...

Agar haan to un alag alag daur me kya khasiyat thi aur kya kami payi aapne..

Aaj ke daur me sdc par jo bhi mahaul hai,shayri hai,log hain kya aap unse poori tarah santusht hain....

Kya aapki nazar me koi aur tareeke koi sujhav jo aap sdc members ko dena chahenge...ya koi khwahish ki agar aisa hota to aur behtar hota....

Agar hai to please hamse share kariye.....hame khushi hogi....

Filhaal ijazat...
aapke jawab k intzaar me.....
Madhu ji

Aapke aur Sanjay bhai ke sawaal kuchh milte julte rahe hain. Par aapne unke ek duusre pehlu se judi baateiN ki haiN. Koshish karuuNga ke apni samajh ke hisaab se aapko mutmaeen karne waale jawaab de sakuN.

SDC par mere in 13 saaloN ko agar maiN phases meiN baantuN to ye thodi nainsaafi hogi. Kyunki 2008 ke baad maiN kaam meiN bohat zyada masroof raha aur SDC par itna regular nahiiN raha. Toh uss waqt ke mahole ka koi andaaza nahiN hai mujhe.

Phir bhi maiN ye kahuuNga ke Jab maiN SDC se juda tha to uss waqt shayri ka junuuN dikhayee deta tha yahaaN. Bade shayar aate the aur hameiN unse seekhne ko milta thha. Phir achanka maine dekha ke ek daur (around 2007-8 aur shayad aage) ke yahaN Logon ne personal promotions shuru kar diye. Koi medicines bechta tha to koi cosmetics. Aisi posts ko delete karte-karte paagal ho jaata tha maiN. Tab maiN bhi moderator thha. Phir ussi dauraan ye bhi dar lagne laga ke SDC kahiiN dating site na ban jaaye. Khair kissi tarah wo daur bhi nikal gaaya. Uss dauran aisa lagta thha ke yahaN shayri chhod kar sab kuchh hota thaa. Par maiN daad duuNga Gaurav bhai ki jinhone yahaN moderators badhaye. Aur aise moderators aaye jinhoNne shayri ko promote karne ke liye nayee nayee cheezeiN ki. TPT unmeiN se ek initiative hai, par issmeiN logoN ka participation kum hai.

Iss tarah se mujhe lagta hai ke shayri yahaN phir se laut rahi hai. Meri guzarish hai sabhi mods ke ke naye naye initiative laayeN, apne shayar dostoN ko yahaN laayeN. Mujhe yaqeen hai ke wo zamana phir laut aayega. Aur ye isska teesra phase hai.

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Aapke aur Sanjay bhai ke sawaal kuchh milte julte rahe hain. Par aapne unke ek duusre pehlu se judi baateiN ki haiN. Koshish karuuNga ke apni samajh ke hisaab se aapko mutmaeen karne waale jawaab de sakuN.

SDC par mere in 13 saaloN ko agar maiN phases meiN baantuN to ye thodi nainsaafi hogi. Kyunki 2008 ke baad maiN kaam meiN bohat zyada masroof raha aur SDC par itna regular nahiiN raha. Toh uss waqt ke mahole ka koi andaaza nahiN hai mujhe.

Phir bhi maiN ye kahuuNga ke Jab maiN SDC se juda tha to uss waqt shayri ka junuuN dikhayee deta tha yahaaN. Bade shayar aate the aur hameiN unse seekhne ko milta thha. Phir achanka maine dekha ke ek daur (around 2007-8 aur shayad aage) ke yahaN Logon ne personal promotions shuru kar diye. Koi medicines bechta tha to koi cosmetics. Aisi posts ko delete karte-karte paagal ho jaata tha maiN. Tab maiN bhi moderator thha. Phir ussi dauraan ye bhi dar lagne laga ke SDC kahiiN dating site na ban jaaye. Khair kissi tarah wo daur bhi nikal gaaya. Uss dauran aisa lagta thha ke yahaN shayri chhod kar sab kuchh hota thaa. Par maiN daad duuNga Gaurav bhai ki jinhone yahaN moderators badhaye. Aur aise moderators aaye jinhoNne shayri ko promote karne ke liye nayee nayee cheezeiN ki. TPT unmeiN se ek initiative hai, par issmeiN logoN ka participation kum hai.

Iss tarah se mujhe lagta hai ke shayri yahaN phir se laut rahi hai. Meri guzarish hai sabhi mods ke ke naye naye initiative laayeN, apne shayar dostoN ko yahaN laayeN. Mujhe yaqeen hai ke wo zamana phir laut aayega. Aur ye isska teesra phase hai.

Mujhe bohat khushi hai ke yahaN achchi shayri padhne ko milti hai aajkal. Jin logoN ko maiN yahaN padhta huuN to dekhkar lagta hai ki unki soch meiN nayapan hai taazgi hai. Aur mujhe yaqeen hai hum ek behtareen site ban kar ubhreNge.

SDC ke liye kya karna chahiye iss par maiN aur khayalaat aap logoN se share karta rahuuN ga. Insha allah hum hoNge kaamyaab.

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Ummeed hai dheere dheere aur log bhi judenge tpt aur doosri activities mein..
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Mera koi sawaal nahi. .just stopped by to say hello to you praveen ji..

Achcha laga aapka interview padh ker. .

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Praveen ji, aapne bahut khoobsurati se mere dono sawaaloN ka jawaab diya hai

1. jab koi rishta toot kar phir se jud.ta hai to kya us meiN wo pehle sa ehsaas/apnapan phir se aa pata hai kya ? ya yeh kahavat sahi hai ki "toote se phir na judey, joodey to ghaanth pad jaaye"

Aadab Sunita ji

Aap ne suni hogi ek sher ki ye line "dil ke rishte ajeeb rishte haiN, saaNs lene se toot jaate haiN." Aur aap baat kar rahi haiN Toote huve rishte phir se judne ki. Sunita ji rishta jab ek baar toot jaata hai to dobara judne ke baad ussmeiN wo baat nahiiN aa paati. Aur iss baat ko Rahim ne apne dohe meiN bakhoobi aur badi saralta se samjha diya hai. Aap khud dekhiye ki agar aaap dhaage meiN gaanth laga kar usspar ungli phirayenge to wo smooth nahiN rahega. Aapki ungli wahaN jakar atkegi. Issliye zaruuri ye hai ke rishtoN to tootne hi na diya jaaye. Aur isske liye bhi Rahim keh gaye haiN-

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sabse pehle to der se aane ke liye muafi chahungi. darasal ye mahina kuch masroofiyat zyada rahi aur aapse mukhaatib nahi ho paayi.

mujhe bohut khushi ho rahi hai aapko yahan dekh kar abhi pura interview nahi pad paayi jitna pad paayi utna bohut interesting laga aur bohut hi bakhoobi se aap sab sawaalo ke uttar de rahe hain. iske liye bohut bohut mubarak.

mere ek chota sa sawaal...........

aaj kal ke ashleel hote jaa rahe gaano ke baare mein aapke kya vichaar hain? kya aapko lagta hai ki manoranjan ke naam par kuch bhi paros dena theek hai? kya aap ko lagta hai ki isse humaari sanskriti aur humare bacho par dushprabhaav padta hai ?
Aadab Masti ji

Bada sahi sawaal kiya hai aapne. Aur iss se judi baat mujhe bohat pareshan karti hai. Ashleel gaanoN par ek hi vichaar ho sakta hai Masti ji. Wo hai nafrat ya chidh.

Sach kahuuN to jab maiN aaj ke gaane sunta huuN to mera khoon Khaul uthta hai. FilmoN meiN shayri ka jo meyaar Sahir, Shakeel, Majrooh, Shailendra, Gulzar aur Javed sahab jaise logoN ne banaya thha ussey Honey singh jaise log dekhiye kahaN le jaa rahe haiN.

Abhi kuchh din pehle FB par maine apna ek status daala tha jismeiN honey singh ke ek gaane ki line ka zikr tha jo yuuN thhi "KudiyoN ka laga hai buffet, jo bhi chahe kar lo choose" Females ko kya bana diya hai aajkal ke gaanoN meiN. Aur maze ki baat to ye hai ki log inheiN pasand bhi kar rahe haiN. Badi afsosnaak situation hai ye. Iss se hamari sanskriti aur bachchoN donoN par hi bura asar padega ismeiN koi shaq nahiN.

Sach poochha jaaye to ye Films aur literature waaloN ki zimmedari hai ke wo logoN ka level kya rakhna chhahte haiN. Agar ghatiya cheezeiN nahiN paroseN ge to logoN ko pata hi nahiN chalega ke ghatiya kya hai. Excellence maintain karni padti hai. Buri aur ghatiya cheezoN ki taraf khiiNche chale jaana bada aasan hai.

Issliye ye situation bohat gambheer hai aur maiN iss se khush nahiiN huuN. Ye hi dua kar sakta huuN ke ye badal jaaye.

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Hello - 26th August 2015, 11:05 PM

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Mera koi sawaal nahi. .just stopped by to say hello to you praveen ji..

Achcha laga aapka interview padh ker. .

Sdc ki bohat saari purani yaadein taaza hogayi..
Aadab Zainy Sahiba

Aapko iss thread par dekh kar achcha laga. Shukria jo aap tashreef laayeiN. Aapki zarranawaazi ke liye shukrguzar huuN.

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Praveen saahab.... aapke baare me padhna aur jaan'naa hame bahut acchaa lag rahaa hai.... aur ummeed karte hain ye inerview aapke liye bhi yaadgaar saabit huaa hoogaa...

maine behad shukrguzaar hoon sunita dee kaa jinhone aapko hamare saamne is interview ke zariye laaya aur aapko samajhne ka mauqaa diyaa unke sawaalon ne......

aap sab ki duaen SDC par banii rahe yahi meri aarzoo bhi hai.......

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Praveen ji....aapse guftagu ke 2-3 din reh gye hai, ham chahte hai ki aap jaate jaate SDC ke naam, shayri ke roop meiN chand lines jaroor likheN


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Aadab Masti ji

Bada sahi sawaal kiya hai aapne. Aur iss se judi baat mujhe bohat pareshan karti hai. Ashleel gaanoN par ek hi vichaar ho sakta hai Masti ji. Wo hai nafrat ya chidh.

Sach kahuuN to jab maiN aaj ke gaane sunta huuN to mera khoon Khaul uthta hai. FilmoN meiN shayri ka jo meyaar Sahir, Shakeel, Majrooh, Shailendra, Gulzar aur Javed sahab jaise logoN ne banaya thha ussey Honey singh jaise log dekhiye kahaN le jaa rahe haiN.

Abhi kuchh din pehle FB par maine apna ek status daala tha jismeiN honey singh ke ek gaane ki line ka zikr tha jo yuuN thhi "KudiyoN ka laga hai buffet, jo bhi chahe kar lo choose" Females ko kya bana diya hai aajkal ke gaanoN meiN. Aur maze ki baat to ye hai ki log inheiN pasand bhi kar rahe haiN. Badi afsosnaak situation hai ye. Iss se hamari sanskriti aur bachchoN donoN par hi bura asar padega ismeiN koi shaq nahiN.

Sach poochha jaaye to ye Films aur literature waaloN ki zimmedari hai ke wo logoN ka level kya rakhna chhahte haiN. Agar ghatiya cheezeiN nahiN paroseN ge to logoN ko pata hi nahiN chalega ke ghatiya kya hai. Excellence maintain karni padti hai. Buri aur ghatiya cheezoN ki taraf khiiNche chale jaana bada aasan hai.

Issliye ye situation bohat gambheer hai aur maiN iss se khush nahiiN huuN. Ye hi dua kar sakta huuN ke ye badal jaaye.

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Aadarniiye Praveen Saxena ji Nacheez Harash Mahajan ka purkhaloos salaam qabool keejiyega. Waqt ki kami ke chalte bahut kam aana hota hai...Ek bahut hi behtareen mitra ne sadaa di to aaj aapki mohabbatoN ka chitta dekha mujhe khula mila...padhne ka shouq hai so kaafi kuch padhaa bhi huN....likhne se ziyada padhne ka ziyada shouq rakhta huN...
Bahut hi behtareen adaaygi hui aapki taraf se.......

Meri jaanib se sirf our sirf aap se ek hi sawaal jo zahen meiN aaya hai ......

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Mera computer kharab ho gaya hai. Iss wajah se main aapke bache huve sawalaat nahin le pa raha huN. Haalanki tab hai par uss par type karna mujhe convenient nahin lagta. Koshish karoonga ke kal aapse mulaqaat mumkin ho jaaye.


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Praveen ji. Sabse pehle bohut bohut badhaayi.

Aapne apne interview ko badi hi khubsurti se nibhaya. Aapke jawaabo.n se bohut hi khubsurat insaan ki chavi ubhar kar aati hai. Jiska dil bohut hi saaf hai.

Ishwar aapko apni kripa mein rakhe aur apki sab nek tamamnaaien poori ho.


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shukriya.. praveen ji aapne sabhi sawalon ke jawaab bahut hee achchi tarah diye..aapke bare me jaan kar mujhe bahut khushi huyi... bahut kuch janne ko aur seekhne ko mila aapse....sdc ko aapka sath yoon hee milta rahe....

bahut sari duayein aapke liye...

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Afsos hai ki nacheez ka computer abhi tak theek nahin ho paaya hai. Maine socha ke tab ke zariye aap sabhi hazraat ki Mohabbaton ka shukria ada karuuN. Aap logon se khitaab karke bohat achcha laga. Sunita ji bohat shukria iss khaas mulaqaat ke liye. Umeed karta huN sabhi ko apne jawabon se mutmaeen kar paaya main. Madhu ji, Sarika ji shukria na kahiye, aapne hukm diya aur khaaksaar Haazir hua. Umeed karta hun humari bazm yuNhi roshan rahegi. In chand lines ke saath aapse ijazat chahuunga.

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