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| kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii |
  
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| Har dukh sukh meiN mere saath hai meri beti |
  
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TPT December Poll Thread. -
19th December 2015, 04:31 AM
sabhi hazraat ko madhu ka namaskaar...
bahut shukriya doston aap sab ke sath ka..aapki pyari pyari rachnaon ne tasweer me jaan daal di hai...sabhi doston ko dil se daad aur mubarakbaad..tasweer pe aayi huyi tahreer ko yahaan post karne ja rahi hoon main..aur aap sab se bas yahi guzarish hai ki samay rahte apni manpasand tahreer ko vote zaroor dein..aur apne sathiyon ka hausla badhayein... koi bhi voting ka adhikaar rakhta hai siway un members ke jinke post count 50 se kam hain. please doosron ko padhein aur vote dein...apni enry ko khud vote karne par aapka vote nuetralize kiya ja sakta hai.. voting ki akhiri tareekh 27 decemeber hai..  aap sabhi ko meri shubhkamnayein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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tu meri jaan hai... -
19th December 2015, 04:37 AM
tu meri jaan hai mere hameshaa saath rahtii hai meree har saans terii saans ke hi baad chaltii hai. kabhi thak haar jaataa hoon zamaane ki laDaaii me , to tu hi mujh ko manzil ki jagah har baar dikhtii hai. subah ki shabnami narmi si lagtii hai merii beTee, kisii phoolon ki daali si wo jab bhi mujhpe jhuktii hai. mujhe himmat bhi milti hai hameshaa dekh kar tujh ko, sabhi gham bhool jaataa hoon tu jab ek baar hanstee hai. kabhii mayoos ho jaati hai mere haal pe beTee, mujhe hanstaa jo dekhegii sharaarat khoob kartii hai.... Shaad ji. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii -
19th December 2015, 04:40 AM
kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii tuu ha.nse to saath jaise khil uTHe apnaa chaman tuu kare baate.n vo sunkar muskuraa duu.n man hi man tujhse hii hai har khushii aur tuu hi merii zindagii chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii… chaa.nd se aayii parii laayii vo tohfe saath me.n Tofeeyo.n ke tilmilaate taare uske haath me.n aasmaa.n se leke utrii haath me.n vo phuljhaDii chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii… pa.nkh pe apne biTHaakar le ke jaayegii tujhe chuum kar maathe ko vo lorii sunaayegii tujhe aake so jaa god me.n papa kii nanhii sii parii chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii… tuu bidaa ho jaayegii ek din chalii jaayegii tuu tere papa ko akele chhoD kar jaayegii tuu vo ghaDii bhii kaisii, aa.nkho.n me.n ho aa.nsuu par khushii chulbulii baate.n terii gaaye tuu jaise raaginii kaa.nch kii guDiyaa merii papa kii pyaarii laaDlii Aadeil ji. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th December 2015, 04:42 AM
kitna karte ho pyaar mujhe yeh ab tak keh na paaye ho is jag se alag ho tum papa yeh pyaar kaha se laaye ho meri har muskaan pe tum gale se mujhe lagaate ho soni si gudiya kyun kehkar tum mujh par jaan lutaate ho kya main hoon ek anmol pari? jaadu ke jahan se aayi hoon kya koi kali ya phool hun main tere aangan mein muskaayi hoon mere chhote se haathon ko tum jab jab chaand bataate ho main jaanti hun daddy mere tum kitna mujh ko chaahte ho Mast ji.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Kismat meri thhi us roz rang laayi -
19th December 2015, 04:47 AM
Kismat meri thhi us roz rang laayi Nanhi pari ek jab mere angne aayi Pehli baar usko baahon me bharaa jo Nami aankhon ki fir chhup naa paayi Yaad woh pal karke aksar muskuraa deta hoon Pehli baar jab usne Papa aawaaz lagaayi Nanhe nanhe kadmon se 'walker' wo chalaati 'Jeans' meri pakad ke paas thhi chali aayi Maasoomiyat ko uski dekhta reh gaya thha Aaine ke aage jab woh pehli baar ithlaayi Rooth karke mujhse to kabhi mujhko manaakar Roz naye andaaz se har zid usne manvaayi Thhodi si jo nathkhat, thhodi si hai ziddi Pyaari woh meri beti hai papa ke dil me samaayi Pulkit ji.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Har dukh sukh meiN mere saath hai meri beti -
19th December 2015, 04:49 AM
Har dukh sukh meiN mere saath hai meri beti Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti Natkhat see, bholi see, badi pyaari see hai Meri gudia, meri beti, badi dulaari see hai Hai wo maasum see, zidd bhi bahut karti hai Sach kahuN ! hasiN ki barsaat hai meri beti Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti Sharaarat ke siwaay kuch nahi karti hai ChuNhe ke alaawaa kisi se nahi darti hai Ghar meiN uskaa alag hi roub hotaa hai Koi daal daal, to paat paat hai meri beti Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti Ek se badhkar ek khwaahisheN haiN uski Roz hoti nayi nayi pharmaaisheN haiN uski MaiN uske sawaaloN se bach nahi paata huN Jab kabhi bhi karti sawaalaat hai meri beti Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti DuniyaaN meiN usko alag pahchaan dilaani hai betiyaaN bojh nahi, baat sabko samjhani hai saath* kadam se kadam milaakar chalegi wo hamesha maiN uske wo mere sath hai meri beti Ghar meiN khushiyoN ki sougaat hai meri beti Rajeev ji.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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papa mere ache papa , mujhko chod ke jaana na -
19th December 2015, 04:51 AM
papa mere ache papa , mujhko chod ke jaana na kasam tumhe hai* papa mujhse apna haath chudaana na Papa apki pappi se hi din mera ban jata hai sach kehti hun papa, aangan phoolo.n se khil jaata hai Subah savere mujhe aap jab school chodne jaate ho meri khilti hansi dekh tum man hi man muskaate ho kabhi kabhi jab chup kar mujhse mujhko aap daraate ho Nahi Pata hai aapko Papa kitna mujhe satate ho..  jyo jyo shaam sarakti hai, mujhe yaad tumhaari aati hai isiliye to aapki gudiya lipat aapse jaati hai kabhi jo toffee aur chocolate office se tum laate ho papa uss din tum mere ache papa ban jaate ho..  neend mein jab main darr jati hu aur phir rone lagti hu god mein teri sar rakh kar main phir se sone lagti hu.. Papa aaj ye wada karlo chod na mujhko jaaoge chahe duniya kuch bhi kahe,tum mera saath nibhaaoge...... Masti ji.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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thanks for posting the poll thread madhu ji.................
ummeed karta hoon sab jald se jald apni pasandeeda tahreer ko vote denge aur use jitaaenge..... Shaad...... |
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19th December 2015, 12:35 PM
Bahut khoob khayaalat aaye hai is baar ki tasveer hi itni umdaa thi....bahut bahut mubarakbaad Madhu aapko...
Umeed hai aap sab ke votes jald hi aa jaayenge... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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dil se pasand aaye sabhi rachnaye -
19th December 2015, 02:18 PM
bahut bahutttttttt pyare ehsaas pesh kiye hai sabhi ne...beti ka rishta hai hi enta anmol ki eske bare meiN jitna bhi kaho kam hai...bahutttttttttt accha lga sabhi ke ehsaas padkar
aaj meri badi bitiya ka janamdiN bhi hai aur us par yeh rachnaye...lafz nahi hai kuch kehne ko...dil kar rha hai sabhi rachna.o par vote kar doon......Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th December 2015, 04:06 PM
shaad bhai...mast ji..aur di..aap teeno ka bahut shukriya ki aapne yahaan aakar sabhi ja hausla badhaya...
Di sahi kaha aapne..aapke liye aaj ka din kitna khaas hai main samajh sakti hun...mujhe yakeen hai ki aapki khushi me di gayi tasweer aur us par likhi gayi kavitaon ne kuch aur sundar rang shamil kar diye hain.... Ek baar fir aapko beti k janm din ki shubhkamnayein..aur unhe poore sdc pariwar ki taraf se janm din ki dhero badhaiyan..... Takecare.. Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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19th December 2015, 07:40 PM
Bohut khoobsurat ehsaas piroye hain sab ne....
Actually ye baap aur beti ka rishta hota hi itna pyara hai Ki kalam khud b khud machalne lage. Ummeed hai jis tarah entries kaafi saari aayi hain Isi prakaar log yahaan aayenge aur pratiyogiyon Ki housla afjaayi karenge. Ek baar phir sab KO mubarakbaad aur all the best. Sarika |
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20th December 2015, 04:54 PM
hmm ek bhi vote nahi..kya baat hai doston.....lagta hai aap is soch me pad gaye ki kise vote dein.....apne dil ki awaaz suniye aur jo tahreer tasweer ke sabse kareeb lage use vote kijiye.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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22nd December 2015, 01:29 PM
Sabhi ka shukriya aapke sath ke bagair ye silsila kuch bhi nahi.....baki sabhi sathiyon se bhi jald se jald vote ke ummeed karti hun....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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23rd December 2015, 12:50 PM
please vote friends.......................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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25th December 2015, 05:00 PM
akhiri do din hain doston....please vote zaroor dein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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26th December 2015, 06:00 PM
Sabhi rachnaaein bahut hi khoobsoorat lagi
Dhanyawaad doston. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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26th December 2015, 06:38 PM
सभी रचनायें बेहद अच्छे हैं और इनमें से एक को चुनने का काम कठिन है. सभी दोस्तों को मेरी शुभकामनाएं। जय श्रीराम।
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good morning doston....
Ek baar fir aap sab ka dil se shukriya..ki aapne mera sath diya aur TpT ko kamyaab banaya ....bhagam bhaag bhari zindgi me kuch vaqt chura kar tasweer par likha wakai daad aur mubarakbaad ke kabil hai...aur ehsaas bhi itne masoom...sabne bahut dil se likha... Aur vote karne wale sabhi doston ka khaas taur se shukriya kyun ki aapke bagair ye competition kuch bhi nahi.... To chaliye is baar ke winner ka naam announce karte hain...aur vo hain hamari apni..MASTI ji.. Congratulations sarika...ye aapke ehsason aur bayangi ka kamaal hai ki aapne ek baar fir sabka dil jeet liya hai...aise hee aapki kalam se khoobsoorat kalaam padhne ko milte rahein..yahi dua hai... Khush rahiye... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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28th December 2015, 12:15 PM
Sarikaji ko hamaari taraf se bahot bahot badhaai...
vaakai behad khubsurat rachna rahi aapki.... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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29th December 2015, 09:47 AM
areeee waahhh Bhabhi jaan...aap es baar bhi baaji jeet gye
bahut bahut bahut mubarakbaad sabhi dosto ne bahut dil se likha tha...hame sabhi ki rachnaye pasand aaye thi...meri taraf se aap sab ko bhi mubarakbaad .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th December 2015, 05:14 PM
bahut bahut mubaarak ho aapko sarika jee...........................
aapki kavitaa waaqai bahut touchy aur emotional thii.... God bless you.. aati rahen.... mahfil roshan karti rahen,.... Shaad.... |
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30th December 2015, 10:47 PM
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Adiel ji, didi, shaad bhai, Dhaval ji.... Main aap sab se muafi maangti hu der se aane ke liye, darasal main delhi mein hu to time nahi mil paaya internet par jaane ka.... Aap sabko Nav varsh ki bohut saari shubhkaamnaayein.......................... Sarika |
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3rd January 2016, 08:54 PM
Bahut Bahut Mubaarak ho dear.......
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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bohat bohat mubarak ho aapko malka-e-TPT.......
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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