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Jaao Agar us Paar to... - 25th September 2012, 11:01 PM
Jaao Agar us Paar to Ik baat poochnaa,
Kat'Tee hai kyaa Unkii bhi Ro Ro Raat Poochna.

Aaya hai ik Lashkar abhi maidaaN ko jeet kar,
Us Shahr ki bhi ho gayee kya maat Poochnaa.

Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.

Jo Sham'mae Raushan Kabhi thiii Raunake Mehfil,
Ab tak usii se Saj rahi kyaa Raat Poochnaa...



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Wah Wah .... Kya kahoon .... Kaise daad doon tumhare is qalaam ki !! Kitni gehraaee hai is samundar mein, is ka sahi ilm to sirf doobne waale ko hi hoga. Saahil pe khade ho ke dekhne waale sirf andaaza hi laga sakte hain ki waqaee kaafee gehra hai .... Shaad mere dost tum ek arsey baad shamma e roshan ban ke is bazm ko sajaane aaye ho .... tumhara qalaam parh ke kitni khushi huwee ye bayaan naheen kar sakta. Bas tumhein lakhon daad, duaein aur mubarakbaad de raha hoon !! Jeeyo .... Khush raho .... Zarraa
   
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26th September 2012, 12:23 PM
YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
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YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
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Masha allah kafi accha likha hai apne, daad kubul karein.


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27th September 2012, 12:57 PM
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Wah Wah .... Kya kahoon .... Kaise daad doon tumhare is qalaam ki !! Kitni gehraaee hai is samundar mein, is ka sahi ilm to sirf doobne waale ko hi hoga. Saahil pe khade ho ke dekhne waale sirf andaaza hi laga sakte hain ki waqaee kaafee gehra hai .... Shaad mere dost tum ek arsey baad shamma e roshan ban ke is bazm ko sajaane aaye ho .... tumhara qalaam parh ke kitni khushi huwee ye bayaan naheen kar sakta. Bas tumhein lakhon daad, duaein aur mubarakbaad de raha hoon !! Jeeyo .... Khush raho .... Zarraa
Awwal to janaab Zarra bhai ko khaaksar ka aadab.. Shukriyaa beintehaan jo aapne nacheez ko aala maqaaam ataah kiyaaa.. Ama sach kahun to main qaayal hoon aapke is andaz se tareef kar jaane ka.. Wallah jo masarrat haasil hui hai wo bayaani ke baahar ki hai.. Arse. Ke baad kuch likh sakne. Ki himmat ki thi.. Aur is himaaqat ko jo aapka hausla mil gaya hai to na. Poochiye kis darja qaraar mila hai.. Bazm me tashreef laane aur hausla afzaai farmane. Ke. Liye tahe dil se mashkoor hoon.. Tashreef laate rahen aur apna khayal rakhen.. Shukriyaah

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27th September 2012, 01:24 PM
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Jaao Agar us Paar to Ik baat poochnaa,
Kat'Tee hai kyaa Unkii bhi Ro Ro Raat Poochna.

Aaya hai ik Lashkar abhi maidaaN ko jeet kar,
Us Shahr ki bhi ho gayee kya maat Poochnaa.

Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.

Jo Sham'mae Raushan Kabhi thiii Raunake Mehfil,
Ab tak usii se Saj rahi kyaa Raat Poochnaa...



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Jaao Agar us Paar to Ik baat poochnaa,
Kat'Tee hai kyaa Unkii bhi Ro Ro Raat Poochna.

Aaya hai ik Lashkar abhi maidaaN ko jeet kar,
Us Shahr ki bhi ho gayee kya maat Poochnaa.

Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.

Jo Sham'mae Raushan Kabhi thiii Raunake Mehfil,
Ab tak usii se Saj rahi kyaa Raat Poochnaa...



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28th September 2012, 04:54 PM
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Jaao Agar us Paar to Ik baat poochnaa,
Kat'Tee hai kyaa Unkii bhi Ro Ro Raat Poochna.

Aaya hai ik Lashkar abhi maidaaN ko jeet kar,
Us Shahr ki bhi ho gayee kya maat Poochnaa.

Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.

Jo Sham'mae Raushan Kabhi thiii Raunake Mehfil,
Ab tak usii se Saj rahi kyaa Raat Poochnaa...



Shaad...
Ji Nice Creation......................

Jaao Agar us Paar to Ik baat poochnaa,
Kat'Tee hai kyaa Unkii bhi Ro Ro Raat Poochna.


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Masha allah kafi accha likha hai apne, daad kubul karein.
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YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.




Wah, Bahut khoob Shaad Ji. Nice Creation. dil se daad kabool kijiyega.Aise hi Likhte rahiyee.

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Jaao Agar us Paar to Ik baat poochnaa,
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Jee bahot bahot shukriyaaa......................................

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Jaao Agar us Paar to Ik baat poochnaa,
Kat'Tee hai kyaa Unkii bhi Ro Ro Raat Poochna.

Aaya hai ik Lashkar abhi maidaaN ko jeet kar,
Us Shahr ki bhi ho gayee kya maat Poochnaa.

Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.

Jo Sham'mae Raushan Kabhi thiii Raunake Mehfil,
Ab tak usii se Saj rahi kyaa Raat Poochnaa...



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YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.




Wah, Bahut khoob Shaad Ji. Nice Creation. dil se daad kabool kijiyega.Aise hi Likhte rahiyee.

bahot bahot shukriyaa aapki muhabbat aur pazeerai ke liye Kavita jee.... main bhi ummeed karunga ke aapka saath yunhi milta rahegaa... shukriyaa

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Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.


shad ji yun to pura kalam hi lajawab he but ismain kuch muntakhib ashaar ne kamal kar diya bahut umdaaaaaa

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Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.


shad ji yun to pura kalam hi lajawab he but ismain kuch muntakhib ashaar ne kamal kar diya bahut umdaaaaaa

keep writing
take care
allah hafiz

behad mashkoor o mamnoon hoon is adnaa se kaalaam ki pazeeraai farmaane ke liye Rubeena parveen saahibaa... aur beintehaan khuloos aur khushi ke saath keh rahaa hoon ke ek muddat ke baad aaj aapko yahaan dekhnaa acchaa lag raha hai... ummeed hai aage bhi rahnumaai farmaane ke liye aap tashref laati rahengii... shukriyaa....

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Aaya hai ik Lashkar abhi maidaaN ko jeet kar,
Us Shahr ki bhi ho gayee kya maat Poochnaa.

Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.

Mash'hoor is Duniyaa me jo thii mere Naam se,
Kis Shakhs ki ab ho gayee wo Zaat Poochnaa.

Jo Sham'mae Raushan Kabhi thiii Raunake Mehfil,
Ab tak usii se Saj rahi kyaa Raat Poochnaa...



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Bohat khoob shaad sahab...bohat hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne...waise to sabhi ashaar ek se badhker ek hain per 4th aur 5th sher zyada pasand aaye mujhe....daad qubool kijiye....



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bahot bahot shukriyaa Zainy bitiyaa.... tumhe pasand aai ye koshish jaan kar behad khushi hui.. Allah tumhe bhi khush rakhe... aati rahnaa... padhtii rahnaa..

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