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Baat Karo - 25th September 2006, 06:29 PM
Kyun na abb dam-e-akhir* takk aane ki Baat Karo (=last breath)
Talkhi-e-ziist* mein Rooh doob jane ki Baat Karo (=bitterness of reality)

Ghum mein Mahaarat hasil hai mujhe
Abb toh sang-o-khar* udane ki Baat Karo (=stones & thorns)

Rabta kya rakhna yaaron Zindagi se
Jism se jaan nikal jane ki Baat Karo

Juu-e-dard* se nikal kar phir Zinda hai (=river of pain)
Dil-e-kasta* pe Khanzar chalane ki Baat Karo (=wounded heart)

Faiyaaz* se jo firte hain wo Dil fareb hain “wafa” (=kind heart)
Yun na kisi ko humnafas banane ki Baat Karo

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25th September 2006, 07:51 PM
Faiyaaz* se jo firte hain wo Dil fareb hain “wafa” (=kind heart)
Yun na kisi ko humnafas banane ki Baat Karo

hello wafa ji,
kaisi hain aap?ek muddat baad aapka kalaam padhne naseeb hua.hamesha ki tarah lajawaab.bahut acha laga padhkar.likhti rahiye.

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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Re: Baat Karo - 26th September 2006, 10:34 AM
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Kyun na abb dam-e-akhir* takk aane ki Baat Karo (=last breath)
Talkhi-e-ziist* mein Rooh doob jane ki Baat Karo (=bitterness of reality)

Ghum mein Mahaarat hasil hai mujhe
Abb toh sang-o-khar* udane ki Baat Karo (=stones & thorns)

Rabta kya rakhna yaaron Zindagi se
Jism se jaan nikal jane ki Baat Karo

Juu-e-dard* se nikal kar phir Zinda hai (=river of pain)
Dil-e-kasta* pe Khanzar chalane ki Baat Karo (=wounded heart)

Faiyaaz* se jo firte hain wo Dil fareb hain “wafa” (=kind heart)
Yun na kisi ko humnafas banane ki Baat Karo
waffa ji aapko phele daffa pad rahi hu, bahut khoob likhti hai.n aap. aapka kalaam dil par cha gaya. daad kabool farmaye.

aapki dost

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26th September 2006, 03:38 PM
adab wafa ji

kaisi hain kafi arse bad apka kalaam padha
mujhe hamsha apke kalam ka intezar rehta

apne bilkul durust likha he ki apko gham main maharat hasil he

Ghum mein Mahaarat hasil hai mujhe
Abb toh sang-o-khar* udane ki Baat Karo (=stones & thorns)

bahut khoooooob apki ghazal gham ka sailab liye hue he jise padh kar haqiqat main andar tak rooh kaNp jati he bahut shandar

keep it up

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Re: Baat Karo - 26th September 2006, 11:21 PM
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Kyun na abb dam-e-akhir* takk aane ki Baat Karo (=last breath)
Talkhi-e-ziist* mein Rooh doob jane ki Baat Karo (=bitterness of reality)

Ghum mein Mahaarat hasil hai mujhe
Abb toh sang-o-khar* udane ki Baat Karo (=stones & thorns)

Rabta kya rakhna yaaron Zindagi se
Jism se jaan nikal jane ki Baat Karo

Juu-e-dard* se nikal kar phir Zinda hai (=river of pain)
Dil-e-kasta* pe Khanzar chalane ki Baat Karo (=wounded heart)

Faiyaaz* se jo firte hain wo Dil fareb hain “wafa” (=kind heart)
Yun na kisi ko humnafas banane ki Baat Karo


waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah

wafaaa aap ne to kamal hi kar diya kyaa khoob likha hai
dil dil chir kar ghar kar diya is kalaam ne tumaare ,

sach mai kyaao khoobsoorat se labzo ko tumne chuna hai sach mai padh kar majaa aa gayaa

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26th September 2006, 11:27 PM
wah wafa ji

aapka ye likha hua bahot hi pasand aaya

ummid hai aap hamesha uhi likhte rahogi

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Re: Baat Karo - 27th September 2006, 08:40 AM
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Kyun na abb dam-e-akhir* takk aane ki Baat Karo (=last breath)
Talkhi-e-ziist* mein Rooh doob jane ki Baat Karo (=bitterness of reality)

Ghum mein Mahaarat hasil hai mujhe
Abb toh sang-o-khar* udane ki Baat Karo (=stones & thorns)

Rabta kya rakhna yaaron Zindagi se
Jism se jaan nikal jane ki Baat Karo

Juu-e-dard* se nikal kar phir Zinda hai (=river of pain)
Dil-e-kasta* pe Khanzar chalane ki Baat Karo (=wounded heart)

Faiyaaz* se jo firte hain wo Dil fareb hain “wafa” (=kind heart)
Yun na kisi ko humnafas banane ki Baat Karo


wafa ji,
aaj aapko maine pahli martaba pada hai !... pata nahi isse pahle aapne apne kalam post nahi kiye ya meri nazar main nahi aaye.. ho sakta hai ki shayad jab se maine ise join kiya hai uske baad ka ye aapka pahla kalam ho............ bakai bahut koob likhti hain aap....... har ek sher main apne aseem dard sanjoya hai..... kashh kar ke aapka urdu ke shawo.n ka istemal karne ka tareeka kafi sanjeeda hai....
aapke is dard bahre kalam per dilip ki dil se dard bhari daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega............

ek begana sa dost
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hi - 27th September 2006, 12:27 PM
Rabta kya rakhna yaaron Zindagi se
Jism se jaan nikal jane ki Baat Karo

Juu-e-dard* se nikal kar phir Zinda hai (=river of pain)
Dil-e-kasta* pe Khanzar chalane ki Baat Karo (=wounded heart)

wafa appko raj ka salaam...wah kaya baat hai kaya khub kaha appne......har ek ashaar apni zubani khud bolta hai.....har share mukamal hai.....meri dil se daad kabool karna upper likhe dono share bhut ache lage......yu hee aati rehna or mehphil ko rangeen banati rehna.......take care......raj.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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29th September 2006, 01:31 AM
Wafa Ji.....

Kya baat kahi hai in lafzon mein......behtareen peshkash hai .....

dilli daad kabool farmeyin........har ek misra apne- aap mein muqqamal hai............

Khush Rahiye............


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aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
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29th September 2006, 06:57 AM
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aapki likhe lafz padhe, bahut badhiya lage.Urdu kamzor hone ke karan accha laga ki aapne lafzon ke bagal main unka matlab bhi samjhaya.

aisi acchi shayri padhne aur samajhne ki koshish mai.......


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Faiyaaz* se jo firte hain wo Dil fareb hain “wafa” (=kind heart)
Yun na kisi ko humnafas banane ki Baat Karo

hello wafa ji,
kaisi hain aap?ek muddat baad aapka kalaam padhne naseeb hua.hamesha ki tarah lajawaab.bahut acha laga padhkar.likhti rahiye.
bahut bahut shurkiya aapka.....mujhe yaad rakhne ka aur mere kalaam par gaur karne ka....tah-e-dil se shukriya ada karti hoon aapka

shukriya!

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adab wafa ji

kaisi hain kafi arse bad apka kalaam padha
mujhe hamsha apke kalam ka intezar rehta

apne bilkul durust likha he ki apko gham main maharat hasil he

Ghum mein Mahaarat hasil hai mujhe
Abb toh sang-o-khar* udane ki Baat Karo (=stones & thorns)

bahut khoooooob apki ghazal gham ka sailab liye hue he jise padh kar haqiqat main andar tak rooh kaNp jati he bahut shandar

keep it up

keep writng
take care
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31st October 2006, 05:11 PM
wafa jii:

Namaste:

aap ke ess kalaam ka maqta mujeh behad behad pasand aaya.. bohat khoob farmaayaa hai aap ne.. dili daad aur mubaarak-baad qubool kejiyegaa.. yuuN hi aati raheN aur liKhati raheN...

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waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah

wafaaa aap ne to kamal hi kar diya kyaa khoob likha hai
dil dil chir kar ghar kar diya is kalaam ne tumaare ,

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wafa ji,
aaj aapko maine pahli martaba pada hai !... pata nahi isse pahle aapne apne kalam post nahi kiye ya meri nazar main nahi aaye.. ho sakta hai ki shayad jab se maine ise join kiya hai uske baad ka ye aapka pahla kalam ho............ bakai bahut koob likhti hain aap....... har ek sher main apne aseem dard sanjoya hai..... kashh kar ke aapka urdu ke shawo.n ka istemal karne ka tareeka kafi sanjeeda hai....
aapke is dard bahre kalam per dilip ki dil se dard bhari daad hazir hai kabool farmaiyega............

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ek baat aur kehna chahungi aapne akhir mein likha "begana sa dost"?....ye mujhe kuch samajh nahin aaya ...bura na manyiega magar mere khayalat kuch aise hain ki ya toh wo dost nahin ya phir wo begana nahin......
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Rabta kya rakhna yaaron Zindagi se
Jism se jaan nikal jane ki Baat Karo

Juu-e-dard* se nikal kar phir Zinda hai (=river of pain)
Dil-e-kasta* pe Khanzar chalane ki Baat Karo (=wounded heart)

wafa appko raj ka salaam...wah kaya baat hai kaya khub kaha appne......har ek ashaar apni zubani khud bolta hai.....har share mukamal hai.....meri dil se daad kabool karna upper likhe dono share bhut ache lage......yu hee aati rehna or mehphil ko rangeen banati rehna.......take care......raj.......
namaskar Raj ji....acha laga aapko yahan dekhkar.....bahut bahut shukriya aapka....mere kalaam takk pahunchne ke liye ..usse pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya....ji koshish rahegi....yahan bhi waqt de sakun...
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Wafa Ji.....

Kya baat kahi hai in lafzon mein......behtareen peshkash hai .....

dilli daad kabool farmeyin........har ek misra apne- aap mein muqqamal hai............

Khush Rahiye............
bahut bahut shukriya Aman ji
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aapki likhe lafz padhe, bahut badhiya lage.Urdu kamzor hone ke karan accha laga ki aapne lafzon ke bagal main unka matlab bhi samjhaya.

aisi acchi shayri padhne aur samajhne ki koshish mai.......


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Namaste:

aap ke ess kalaam ka maqta mujeh behad behad pasand aaya.. bohat khoob farmaayaa hai aap ne.. dili daad aur mubaarak-baad qubool kejiyegaa.. yuuN hi aati raheN aur liKhati raheN...



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