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13th July 2009, 03:00 AM
main toh tere pyar mein deewana ho gaya
dilruba yeh bata kya karu tere siva main toh tere pyar mein deewana ho gaya dasne lagi hain mujhe kyon yeh tanhaaiyan har pal main dekhu bas teri parchhaiyaan, rab di kasam main toh jaana tere pyar mein bhale marr jaaun par sahu na judaaiyaan khana nahi pina nahi tere intezaar mein rog yeh anokha mila mujhe tere pyar mein tadpu main tere bin ghadi ghadi palchhin uljha ke chhoda tune isi rozgaar mein main toh tere pyar mein deewana ho gaya dilruba yeh bata kya karu tere siva main toh tere pyar mein deewana ho gaya Adapted Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe  Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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13th July 2009, 05:42 PM
NaliN jii........
bahut achcha geet likha hai......... Yeh judai kuch lamhon ki hai na..... But bahut taklif deti hai.. But yaar yeh achanak sentiwala mode kyun... Yaar tumhare ahsaas ihq ke liye bahut khubsuraat hai... Uff------- jaisa dhamaka chahiye ... It's my request.. Keep it up.. Be happy .. Take it easy.. God bless you... 
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13th July 2009, 05:53 PM
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apka yeh andaz mujhe sab se accha laga............ ik baat mujhe zara khatki.................JUDAIYAAN word shayad nahin banata...........magar mujhe confirm nahin hai...agar koi expert clear karein to mere ilm aur apke ilm me thoda ijafa ho.............. isbar lekin wakai mazaa aa gaya apki rachna padkar regards |
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13th July 2009, 05:59 PM
Nalin ji.........Bahut khusurat geet likha hai aapne........judaai, tanhai, ruswaai aur mohabbat ki deewangi ke sabhi rango ka bahut ache se samavesh kiya hai aapne.....is geet mai.......acha laga padhkar..........aise hi aate rahiye......jaane ki baat na kariye.............  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th July 2009, 06:27 AM
Doston yahan kuch galatfahmi lag rahi hai, main is tareef ka haqdaar nahi hun, apne shayd post ke end me dhyan se nahi dekha wahan likha hai "Adapted". yeh meri likhi hui nahi hai, yeh toh kisi aur geetkar ka geet hai............ is geet ko kailash kher shab ne apni khubsurat aawaz me gaya hai................acch laga isliye yahan post kar diya....
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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