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nah peene meN kamee hotii, nah saaqi se gilaa hotaa - 20th November 2014, 09:05 AM



Leejiye, "Chakbast" ki ik Ghazal Haazir-e-Khidmat hai,
ummeed hai aap ko pasand aayegi

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Ghazal

agar dard-e-moHabbat se nah insaaN aashnaa hotaa
nah kuChh marne kaa Gham hotaa, nah jeene kaa mazaa hotaa

mai-e -gul-rang luT'ti, yuuN dar-e-maiKhaana vaa hotaa
nah peene meN kamee hotii, nah saaqi se gilaa hotaa

hazaaroN jaan dete haiN butoN ki be-wafaai par
agar in meN se ko'ii baa-wafaa hotaa to kyaa hotaa

agar dam bhar bhi miT jaati Khalish Khaar-e-tamanna ki
dil-e-Hasrat-talab ko apni Hasti se gilaa hotaa

yeh maana, be-hijaabaana nigaaheN qahr kartii haiN
magar Husn-e-Hayaa-parvar kaa aalam duusaraa hotaa


~Brij Narayan Chakbast

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20th November 2014, 12:24 PM

Waaahhhh BGM saahab ... kya kkya aashar se saji hai ye khoobsurat ghazal...

har sher apne aap me ek daastaan hai.... har ssher bahot khoob hai magar mera pasandeeda ye raha

hazaaroN jaan dete haiN butoN ki be-wafaai par
agar in meN se ko'ii baa-wafaa hotaa to kyaa hotaa


aate raheN, likhte rahen share karte rahen

Shukriyaa


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