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Maa -
23rd September 2009, 08:06 AM
Aankh abhi na khuli thi meri
khoya that maiN ik dhaval andhere meiN Khud se hi maiN puch raha tha Pehchaan apni maiN dhoond raha tha MaiN hooN toh to Phir yeh 'maiN' kya hai Tu hai to bhi phir yeh 'maiN' kya hai Tabhi laga aisa mujhko jaise chooma liya kisi ne mere patal ko EhsaasoN ke abhi shabd kahaN haiN baaton meiN mujhse tu phir bhi hai gum Pehla ehsaas jab shabd bana Toh MAA ka naam mila usko Tab jaakar yeh pata chala ki MaiN toh hooN ik ansh ussi ka Seench rahi hai jo mujhe apne lahoo se Milvaane ko mujhe apne hi vuju se Ab tak tha jo dhaval andhera Meri pehli subh meiN voh tabdeel hua MAA re meri mujhe yeh toh bata Kya rin se tere maiN Kabhi chhut sakuNga Lahoo tera jo daud raha meri ragoN meiN Kya Lahoo ka tere mol Kabhi maiN de paonGa Tu toh hai mamta ki ik murat Bholi si hai teri surat Ehsaan tera yeh hai mujh par Ke chhaoN mili mujhe tere aanchal ki Varna maiN toh ik banjaara tha Daal basera Kabhi iss pag kabhi uss pag par Tune mujhko rok liya hai Har armaaN tera mujh pe tika hai Kya maiN unn armaanooN ka hisaab tujhe kabhi de paoNga......... |
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2nd October 2009, 09:47 PM
vikram ji
kya baat hai baut acha laga rashmi |
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Bahut Shukriya aapka...... |
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Bahut Shukriya aapka...... -
3rd October 2009, 01:09 AM
Rashmi ji,
Aapki hausla afzai ke liye maiN aapka shukrguzaar hooN...... Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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1st November 2009, 10:03 AM
Vikarm jee:
namaste! aapki ye kavviSh Khoob rahiiN.. seedhe dil se nikle huye lafz.. mere dil meiN utar gaye.n! mere dil se DheroN saari daad! yuuNhi liKhate rahiYe! aap bahot achha liKhate hai.n! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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maa........posted by vikramjethi |
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maa........posted by vikramjethi -
1st November 2009, 10:13 AM
vikram ji aapki rachna maa sabko maa ke karib jaane ki nasihat deti hai
bhagwan aapka bhalla karay........ rajinderseep |
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Shukriya aapka!!! |
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Shukriya aapka!!! -
1st November 2009, 07:50 PM
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Bahut bahut Shukriya aapki hausla afzai ka, aap Yuoo'n hi apni rae dete raheN... Aapka dost, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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1st November 2009, 07:58 PM
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Aapki hausla afzai ka bahut bahut Shukriya... Yeh rishta aage bhi banaye rakheN... Aapka dost, Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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30th November 2009, 10:29 PM
Vikram,
bahut khoob dear...ye wo ehsaas hai jise sabne mehsoos kiya hai par aapne in anmol ehsaason ko zubaan di...hum aapke shukra-guzaar hai... wakehi kabeel-e-tarif hai...yuhi likhte rahiyega...   "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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1st December 2009, 10:50 AM
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(๏̯͡๏) (๏̯͡๏) Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai, dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai..... ***************************** Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai.. Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai.. kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai....... hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai.... |
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1st December 2009, 10:52 AM
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aise hi likhte rahiye (๏̯͡๏) (๏̯͡๏) Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai, dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai..... ***************************** Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai.. Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai.. kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai....... hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai.... |
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1st December 2009, 11:53 AM
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Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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1st December 2009, 11:54 AM
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Tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya,,,, Saath banaye rakhiyega.... Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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2nd December 2009, 05:52 PM
Vikram saahab
NazroN ke raaste kisi ke dil mai kaise utra jaata hai .. is post pe jo aayega samajh jayega... aapki likhi har ek line ka sajda karta hai ye khak alfaazi ... isse jyada na aukaat hai ,, na himmat Apna khyaal rakhiyega Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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8th December 2009, 03:30 PM
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Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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8th December 2009, 03:33 PM
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आँख अभी न खुली थी मेरी खोया था मैं इक धवल अँधेरे में खुद से ही मैं पूछ रहा था पहचान मैं अपनी ढूंड रहा था मैं हूँ तो फिर ये माँ क्या है माँ है तो फिर ये मैं क्या है तभी लगा कुछ ऐसा मुझको चूम लिए किसी ने मेरे पटल को एहसासों के अभी शब्द कहाँ है और बोलने वाली वो जुबां कहाँ है फिर भी बात मैं तुझसे कर सकता हूँ अन्दर भी मैं तुझको सुन सकता हूँ पहले एहसास को जब शब्द मिला तो माँ का उसको नाम मिला तब जाकर यह पता चला मैं तो हूँ इक अंश उसी का सींच रही वो मुझे अपने लहू से मिलवाने को मुझे अपने ही वुजू से अब तक था जो धवल अँधेरा मेरी पहली सुबह में तब्दील हुआ माँ रे मेरी मुझे ये तो बता क्या ऋण से तेरे छुट सकता हूँ लहू तेरा जो दौड़ रहा मेरी रगों में क्या लहू का तेरे मैं मोल कभी दे सकता हूँ तू तो है ममता की इक मूरत बड़ी भोली है ये तेरी सूरत एहसान तेरा है मुझ पर चुना तुने मुझे हर दुःख सह कर वर्ना मैं तो इक बंजारा था डाली डाली पग पग भटका करता था तुने मुझको रोक लिया है हर अरमान तेरा मुझ पे टिका है उन सपनों का उन अरमानों का क्या हिसाब तुझे कभी दे पाउँगा जैसे किया तुने वैसे क्या मैं अपने वजूद का हिस्सा कर पाउँगा Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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