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8th October 2006, 01:35 AM
Freelance work suna tha, i am doing free typing these days hehehhehe lol...aise hi kuch..
Aankhon se aansu jaise angarey dhokey apne hi diya kartey hai haath chut'ta hai to koyi baat nahi rishton me bhi kya kisi ko ilzaab diya kartey hai? begano se kuch umeed nahi Deewaney daaman bhigo diya kartey hai.. pal bhar ki khushi, umar bhar ka dard ye sard mausam, me bhi seena taan jee liya kartey hai Sochainge jee liye tu hamare hisee ki khushi ishq hai saogaat isey aise kya barbaad kartey hai? kando par bhoj leke jeene se kya fayeda eh humnashi, hum tujhey Azaad aaj kartey hai... Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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8th October 2006, 12:14 PM
priya aapne bahoyt achh alikha hai padhne me abhi achha lagauhi likte rahiye
aapka dost dhaval |
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8th October 2006, 12:48 PM
Bahaut khoob Priya Ji
har baar ki tarah aapko parhna accha raha. "pal bhar ki khushi, umar bhar ka dard / ye sard mausam, me bhi seena taan jee liya kartey hai" vipin 
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8th October 2006, 02:19 PM
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behad shukriya mujhe padhna ka aur pasand karne ka  Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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9th October 2006, 10:13 PM
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buhut acha likha hai priya keep writing |
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