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kaun sa naam doo? - 7th May 2016, 03:55 PM

Kaun sa naam du.

jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..
use jab tum aaye the khilti hui bahar ban ke..
ya use jab tum chdod gaye hume fakat intezaar banke…
ehsaan manu tera ya tujhe ilzaam du…
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..

teri yaado ki raah me chalke dil pe chhale pad gaye hai…
palte hai itni dafa ki ab wo panne v mood gaye hai..
teri muskurahato ka aks dil ka marham hai abhi bhi..
par teri jafa ko kaise mai dilkashi ka salaam du..
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..

goya lafz to mote hai apne dasstan-e- mohabbat ke..
ab rang bharu mai inme shikwo ke ya ibadat ke..
tere hotho ki lali daal ke mai kar du inhe mashoor..
ya teri zulfo ki kalima se mai kar inhe badnaam du..
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..

wo waqt guzar gaya jab mai tujhpe kalme likhta tha…
fir to jab v likhta tha sahme sahme likhta tha…
koi khilli udata tha koi hamdardi dikhata tha…
har saksh mujhpe ek dilchasp kissa banata tha….
Ho tum bhi un kisso me bejod hi shamil..
Fir kaise un afwaho ko mai juthla sare-aam du…
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..
   
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7th May 2016, 04:04 PM

Awy Ji.... Jis tarah aap ne ise pesh kiya hai... meri maaNe to puri ki puri keetab unke naam kar dijiye...

behatarin koshish kr dil o daal kubool karein..

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7th May 2016, 04:10 PM

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Kaun sa naam du.

jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..
use jab tum aaye the khilti hui bahar ban ke..
ya use jab tum chdod gaye hume fakat intezaar banke…
ehsaan manu tera ya tujhe ilzaam du…
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..

teri yaado ki raah me chalke dil pe chhale pad gaye hai…
palte hai itni dafa ki ab wo panne v mood gaye hai..
teri muskurahato ka aks dil ka marham hai abhi bhi..
par teri jafa ko kaise mai dilkashi ka salaam du..
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..

goya lafz to mote hai apne dasstan-e- mohabbat ke..
ab rang bharu mai inme shikwo ke ya ibadat ke..
tere hotho ki lali daal ke mai kar du inhe mashoor..
ya teri zulfo ki kalima se mai kar inhe badnaam du..
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..

wo waqt guzar gaya jab mai tujhpe kalme likhta tha…
fir to jab v likhta tha sahme sahme likhta tha…
koi khilli udata tha koi hamdardi dikhata tha…
har saksh mujhpe ek dilchasp kissa banata tha….
Ho tum bhi un kisso me bejod hi shamil..
Fir kaise un afwaho ko mai juthla sare-aam du…
jindagi k kitaab me kaun se panne ko tera naam du..
waah!!bahut khoob ehsaas..........bahut khoobsoorati se pesh kiye hain...

likhte rahein...



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7th May 2016, 06:23 PM

Purvi ji... Kitaab kya humne to apni kalam tak unke naam kr di hai.... Shukriya..
   
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Madhu ji.. Aapko pasand aaya.. Hume achha laga.. Shukriya
   
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