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 ....hahahahahaha...rind-bahana-fund ka account main achha khaasa ezaafa kar diya aap k cobtribution ne....infact main ghalib sahab ki pehli sher ko yaad hi kar raha tha ki aap ka comnent padha...aap ne bhi wahi sher share kiya yahan thanx for the sharing Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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Zarrasaab, kya fikr aur kya dard chhalak rahaa hai iis sher se... aur kya addayegii hai sir, gham ko na naapnekii baat jiis khubsurti se aapne paimaaish-e-baada aur paimaane se co-relate kii hai..... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanibse. Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Zarraasaab, beautiful wordplay. magar ek doubt hai iis sher ko leke.. azaab kise mil rahaa hai? thoRa confusion wahi pe hai iis liye wahi atkaa hooN muaafee chahunga agar koii galti huii ho... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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First of all, I would like to commend your sincerety.. Just wowwwwwwww!!!!! Ek se badkar ek sher pesh kiye haiN..... Quote:
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1st September 2014, 11:34 AM
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1st September 2014, 11:36 AM
meri ek ghazal se...
baadaa ko yagaanoN* meN maanaa jo gayaa yakta* har gham ka wo saathi hai har jashn sajaataa hai (donoN lafzoN ke maanii 'Best' hai, to be read as best among the best) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 11:43 AM
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1st September 2014, 11:52 AM
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Thanks, Ananthji.... duaaoN ke saath, Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 11:54 AM
mat puchh ki parastish kii misaal kya hai mujhe rind
maiN baada-o-jaam ko bhii khuda-saaz* samajhtaa hooN (* God's gift) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 12:24 PM
baadaa-kade ke paas valii kyuN mile mujhe?
shaayad koii firaaq-e-muhabbat kii baat hai? ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 01:20 PM
rind zaraa chal ki aaj baada-kashii ho
kal na ho jhumbish kahiN iin uzv-e-badan* meN (* parts of body) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 02:14 PM
yuN mere gaye itne daur-e-baada-paimaaii*
sab kashiid-e-khooN** ko baada-e-naab*** samajhte haiN (*period of drinking wine; **drawing of blood; ***red wine [bahot baRHiyaa sharaab]) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 02:27 PM
aaghaaz hai baada-khasii ka tujh se ,tujh se anjaam nahi
tu hai badnaam sharab se,sharab tujh se badnaam nahi Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Adeil sahab...ek baad ek nayab moti nikal rahe hain.....bohat khoob....dheron daad qubool farmaiyega Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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1st September 2014, 02:57 PM
baad-e-baada-aashaamii aks-e-naayaab* aate rahe
jitne aaye utne hi shauq-e-naayaab** aate rahe (*rare reflections; **rare desires) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 02:58 PM
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bahot hi khub..... aalaa khayaalaat ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 03:00 PM
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aapka behad shukr guzaar hooN, iis zarraanavaazii ke liye milte rahiye... duaao ke saath, Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 03:54 PM
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waiting for some more from you, shuruaat achchhii kii hai to continue... vaise chaahiye to bottle dene aa jaauuN? ..... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 03:55 PM
pilaa pilaa ki hangaam-e-sahar* talak, saaqii
shamaa ke pahl-e-pahal khatm ho na baada aaj (*morning chaos) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 04:21 PM
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 maybe the effect of weekend ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 05:04 PM
zulmat meN piyuN roz magar aaj huaa yuN
aaftaab meri baada-parastii ka gavaah tha ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st September 2014, 05:57 PM
bismillah! baada-kHvaar karo phir,
yuN kHud ko khuda-parast banaa do ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd September 2014, 12:08 AM
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2nd September 2014, 12:09 AM
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raaz-e-dil chhupa rakhha tha taa-umr,dil-figaarii* k baad
bak diya junuu main kya kuch,baada-kHvaarii k baad *Heart break Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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iis pyaar bhari daad aur hausla afzaaii ke liye aapka mamnoon hooN... duaaGo, Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd September 2014, 09:26 AM
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behad khubsurat khayaalaat aur dil-soz bayaanii se labrez hai ye sher.. aapko dheroN dheroN daad, Ananthji... duaago Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd September 2014, 09:39 AM
baada-kHvaarii se agar maiN aaj laa-haasil huaa
phir muhabbat meN fanaa hoke bhii kya haasil huaa ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd September 2014, 11:12 AM
doston ..... waise to aaj lafz "baada" par charcha ka aakhiri din tha, par kyunki guftagoo abhi bhi garm hai, aur behtareen qalaam aaye ja rahe hain, to hum daur-e-baada 2 din aur bardha dete hain .... yaani 4 Sept raat 9:00 PM India time ya 3:30 PM GST .... tab tak lafz-e-baada ki baada-noshi ka lutf uthaate rahiye ... CHEERS !
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2nd September 2014, 11:25 AM
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Wah.....Bohat khoob.......................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd September 2014, 11:54 AM
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lagtaa hai bahot mashruuf haiN aaj kal aapke kuch naayaab sukhan ke liye hum betaab hai ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd September 2014, 11:56 AM
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milte rahiye ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd September 2014, 11:58 AM
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..ab tumhaare kuch aashaar ka besabri se intezaar hai ...ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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2nd September 2014, 12:09 PM
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WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!kya baat hai Aadeil sahab....bohat khoob ...dheron dheron daad Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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