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:) - 5th February 2011, 12:18 PM
oh chad mainu pachtaunda hai
oh buk buk neer bhaunda hai
oh waade kar ke mukriya si
hun minta naal manaunda hai
odo gair keh k oh chala geya
hun apna sanu bnaunda hai
jo supne saade choor hoye
oh mud ohna nu jagaunda hai
pehla dukh deke sanu
oh da dil ni bhareya
shayad haje vi tahion sataunda hai
apne bewafayi de kisse nu
oho bedard rehnda sanaunda hai
par main hun ohdi ho ni sakdi
oh aven hi haaq jataunda hai...

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5th February 2011, 06:40 PM
tainu chaddna meri majbori c,
main bewafa kahaun da hakkdar nai.
door reh k v mar sakda tere layi
kol rehna hee ta pyar nai
ik tu hee rabb e waang ve yaara
tere bina mera koi sansaar nai
jehdi nafrat tu mainu kardi a
os nafrat a main hakkdar nai
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7th February 2011, 12:45 AM
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tainu chaddna meri majbori c,
main bewafa kahaun da hakkdar nai.
door reh k v mar sakda tere layi
kol rehna hee ta pyar nai
ik tu hee rabb e waang ve yaara
tere bina mera koi sansaar nai
jehdi nafrat tu mainu kardi a
os nafrat a main hakkdar nai
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very good sachin ji... keep it up...

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thank u so much..... by the way m only sachin not sachin ji
   
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thank u so much..... by the way m only sachin not sachin ji

okk sachin............................................ ................

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10th February 2011, 10:55 AM
thanks for sharing this nice poem, gazzal ji............

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hey... i m not used to this site... kindly tell me that how can i post my writings on this site/... m a registered user
   
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23rd February 2011, 09:32 PM
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hey... i m not used to this site... kindly tell me that how can i post my writings on this site/... m a registered user
go to new thread................

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1st March 2011, 10:01 PM
originally posted by Gazal sharma


oh chad mainu pachtaunda hai
oh buk buk neer bhaunda hai
oh waade kar ke mukriya si
hun minta naal manaunda hai
odo gair keh k oh chala geya
hun apna sanu bnaunda hai
jo supne saade choor hoye
oh mud ohna nu jagaunda hai
pehla dukh deke sanu
oh da dil ni bhareya
shayad haje vi tahion sataunda hai
apne bewafayi de kisse nu
oho bedard rehnda sanaunda hai
par main hun ohdi ho ni sakdi
oh aven hi haaq jataunda hai...

Gazal ji ik bahut hi badia koshish.......daad qbul karna.

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2nd March 2011, 01:23 PM
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originally posted by Gazal sharma


oh chad mainu pachtaunda hai
oh buk buk neer bhaunda hai
oh waade kar ke mukriya si
hun minta naal manaunda hai
odo gair keh k oh chala geya
hun apna sanu bnaunda hai
jo supne saade choor hoye
oh mud ohna nu jagaunda hai
pehla dukh deke sanu
oh da dil ni bhareya
shayad haje vi tahion sataunda hai
apne bewafayi de kisse nu
oho bedard rehnda sanaunda hai
par main hun ohdi ho ni sakdi
oh aven hi haaq jataunda hai...

Gazal ji ik bahut hi badia koshish.......daad qbul karna.

rajinderseep

thnxxx very much ji.................

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9th March 2011, 05:24 PM
very nice............................................!

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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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9th March 2011, 05:26 PM
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tainu chaddna meri majbori c,
main bewafa kahaun da hakkdar nai.
door reh k v mar sakda tere layi
kol rehna hee ta pyar nai
ik tu hee rabb e waang ve yaara
tere bina mera koi sansaar nai
jehdi nafrat tu mainu kardi a
os nafrat a main hakkdar nai
sachin


gud answer............................................ .......!

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gud answer............................................ .......!

thnkyu very much sunita di...................

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mera pyar hee ik tarfaa c, main aiven hee supne saja baitha,
loki saare ishqe nu rog dasde , main jaan bujh k rog laga baitha,
sab agg nu vekh k darde ne, main sooraj nu hath pa baitha,
loki pathraan ton bach k turde ne, main raahgeeran ton thokar kha baitha,
sab zindagi nu labhde firde ne, main maut nu gale laga baitha,
main tere laayak kade c hee nai, phir dil kyu tere naal laa baitha,
hun sachh mainu bardaasht nai , kyu jhooth naal dil samjha baitha,
SACHIN tainu hun bhulle kiven , saanjh roohan takk di pa baitha,
tu jogi labhdi firdi c, oh kandeyaan naal kann padwa baitha. (M)
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11th April 2011, 02:19 PM
Gazal ji kaafi din baad padhiya tuhanu... wadhiya likhia hai... keep it up

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VERY NICE gazal bahut hi vadia likhya
   
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9th May 2011, 12:32 PM
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mera pyar hee ik tarfaa c, main aiven hee supne saja baitha,
loki saare ishqe nu rog dasde , main jaan bujh k rog laga baitha,
sab agg nu vekh k darde ne, main sooraj nu hath pa baitha,
loki pathraan ton bach k turde ne, main raahgeeran ton thokar kha baitha,
sab zindagi nu labhde firde ne, main maut nu gale laga baitha,
main tere laayak kade c hee nai, phir dil kyu tere naal laa baitha,
hun sachh mainu bardaasht nai , kyu jhooth naal dil samjha baitha,
SACHIN tainu hun bhulle kiven , saanjh roohan takk di pa baitha,
tu jogi labhdi firdi c, oh kandeyaan naal kann padwa baitha. (M)


very nice sachin ji..............................

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VERY NICE gazal bahut hi vadia likhya


thnkyu very much tilak n lloveleen ji........................

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4th August 2011, 11:29 PM
nice and simple.............. keep it up...and lolz u just put a smiley instead of writing the name of the poem....it seems like that ur happy by writing this sad poem :P...anyway good work... keep writing......
   
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nice and simple.............. keep it up...and lolz u just put a smiley instead of writing the name of the poem....it seems like that ur happy by writing this sad poem :P...anyway good work... keep writing......
ohh.. galti se dal gyi hogi.. well thnxx 4 likin...................

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