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Baat sunne ki yahan fursat kisko h.. - 26th June 2012, 12:20 AM

Kuch arse baad naya kuch likha h pesh kr rha hu. Aisa nahi hai ki ab yahan aata nahi hu par ab kaafi wqt yahan pe aap sab k ehsaason ho padhne mai lagta hai. Khair ab ye choti si koshish ki h to haazir h..

Haarne wala haar kr b dil jeet k le gaya...
Jeetne wala bs tb jette jeette reh gaya...

Isi umeed pe aaj fir khada hu uski chaukht pe...
Mil jayega kal jo wo dete dete reh gaya...

Baat sunne ki kisko yahan fursat thi kaun sunta...
Wo bas apni baat kehta kehta reh gaya..

Wo fakat ek baat hi to thi jo hume yaad rahi...
Aur usi ka nishaan dil se mitte mitte reh gaya....

Bichadte waqt usne bhi to apna dupptta samet rakha tha...
To meri aankhon se bhi aansu nikalte nikalte reh gaya...

Ye teri jaan le kr hi maanega ek din 'Seher'..
Is ishq mai aaj tu fir marte marte reh gaya..
   
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28th June 2012, 07:42 PM

Wah !! Padhke bohot achha laga. Khoob likha hai.

Wo fakat ek baat hi to thi jo hume yaad rahi...
Aur usi ka nishaan dil se mitte mitte reh gaya....

bohot achha hai.....


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28th June 2012, 11:10 PM

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Wah !! Padhke bohot achha laga. Khoob likha hai.

Wo fakat ek baat hi to thi jo hume yaad rahi...
Aur usi ka nishaan dil se mitte mitte reh gaya....

bohot achha hai.....
shukria bhai hausla afzai k liye shukria...
   
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