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"milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya" -
18th September 2006, 09:36 AM
mere sabhi dosto ko namaskar....!
dosto aaj mai ek pyar mai dubhi hue, phele mulakaat ka jikar jaha kar rahi hu, vaise yeh meri imagination hai umeed hai appko pasand aayegi. Jiske aane ki umeedo mai gujarey thy lamhaat, Jab woh paas aakar bethy to bulaya na gaya…. Socha tha milney par karugi bahut si baatey, Jab woh miley to haal-e-dil bhi bataya na gaya.. Socha tha uske izhaar par sataugi, tadpaugi usko, Jab usne haath pakda to mujse chudaya na gaya… Bahut arzoo thi ki us main hi samma jau mai, Par jab woh kareeb aaye to galey lagaya na gaya… Aapne pyar se usko main madhosh kar deti magar, Par jab miley to hontho se ek jam pilaya na gaya.. Uske liye likhi thi “Sunita” ne gazley aur nazmey, Par milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya…. aapki dost  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Re: "milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya" -
18th September 2006, 09:43 AM
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aaj ek lambe samay baad aapki gazal padne ko mili.... har bar ki tarah behad nayab gazal pesh ki hai aapne.... aapka imagination bahut khoob hai.... bakai main aapse bahut khuch seekha hai or aage bhi bahut kuch seekhunga........ aap yu.n hi hamesha behtreen likhti rahe.n ye meri us uper wale se dua hai....... apna khyal rakhna aapka dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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18th September 2006, 10:25 AM
Uske liye likhi thi “Sunita” ne gazley aur nazmey,
Par milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya…. hello sister kais ho aap? subha subha aapki gazal par nazar padi aur aapki gazal to ye wakehi khubsurat hai bahot hi pyare andaz me pesh ki hai aapne sister , sach me bahot hi achhi hai............mujhe pasand aayi aap uhi likhte rahiyega sister aapko padhna achha lagta hai aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost dhaval |
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Re: "milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya" -
18th September 2006, 02:40 PM
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aapne aaj yahan pyaar bhara kalaam lkhke dil khush kar diya. sach me aapko padhna bahot achha lagta hai sirf dhaval ji ko hi nahi mujhe bhi. likhiye likhiye bahot achha likha hai aapne. meri daad kabool kijiye. gratse aapki chhoti bahan pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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hi -
19th September 2006, 12:28 PM
sunita ji appko raj ka dil ki gehriyon se namasar...appki is soach ke liye kaya kahu mujhe lagta hai ki appe mera he haal-e-dil apni kalam ki zubaani likh diya hai....kasam se main bhee jab apne pyar se mila thaa to bilkul aise hee jajbaat or ehsaas mehsoos kiyethay....app ko is khubsurat gazal ke liye of in umda ehsaaso ke liye dil se daad pesh karta hoon........umeed hai ki aise he ehsaaso or jajbato se app is bazm ko mehkati rahog.......raj....
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HIiiiiiii -
19th September 2006, 02:56 PM
Hi Sunitaji
kesi hai aap? behot khub sunita ji behot khub har lafz dil mey chupe pyaar ko beya karta hai aur saath hi saath dil mey chupi dalil bhi pesh karta hai aap ne jo likha wake hi kabile taarif hai is kalaam ke har lafz ki nezakat behot hi umda hai aap khati hai na ke mey aap ke kalaam ki tarif kuch is kader karta hu ke aap ko aap ka likha fir padhna padta hai na? Mager is baar aap jerur padhiye mera ye jewab aap padhne ke baad fir se ek baar apna kalaam padhiyega tho aap ko peta chal jayega ke SOME ONE aap ke har lafz ki tarif ku karta hai kuki aap ka likha har lafz dil ko chu kar tho jata hi hai mager dar is baat ka hai ke kehi ek deen dil hi na lejaye aur ager dil le geya tho shayed hum aap ke likhe kalaam fir kabhi na padh paaye .....mager mey chahta hu ke aap ka her kalaam esha ho jo dil ko chu jaye apni jaan ki fikr nehi muje tho aap ke likhe kalaam na padh paane ka gum hai chalta hu SOME ONE |
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20th September 2006, 05:14 PM
Dear sunita,
Very good explanation in the way of emotions through expressions.. i must congratulate you...some feeling has comes out from your writting that really you have not got this stage in reality even you have also mention the theme in the starting point.. but your writting create a lovely image of our counterpart... its the words which express that after looking your counterpart.. you will become speechless and that feeling you have expresses it in the words.This is absolutly a fantastic moment for each person who really feel love in his life..its my pleasure that i have seen your post.. take care. A human... To understand me... its better to understand yourself... |
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Re: Re: "milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya" -
22nd September 2006, 10:40 AM
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main thik hu, apna bataye...! aur accha lagga tumhara msg padkar ki tumhey meri yeh imagination pasand aaye. aise baat hai to mai baar baar koshish karugi, aisa likhney ki jo tum logo ko acchi lagey. pyari ci dua ke liye shukriya. tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd September 2006, 10:42 AM
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tumhey to yeh gazal 101% pasand aane hi thi, mujhe pata hai. aur ha tum log mere saath ho to main aur behtar likhney ki koshish karugi. samjay naughty boy...................! tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Re: Re: "milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya" -
23rd September 2006, 09:38 AM
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mujhe pata hai, ki pooja ko yeh kalaam kyu jayada pasand aaya, par main batugi nahi.................:-) aur pooja teri daad mujhe kabool hain, yu appni didi ko padtey rahna. teri didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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23rd September 2006, 09:50 AM
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bahut bahut shukriya, mere es gazal ko pasand karne ke liye, aur agar esko padker aapko apni phele mulkakaat yaad aaye, to yeh meri kushnseebi hai ki maine aapko aapke beetey dino ki yaad dilla di :-) yu mujhe padtey rahna......! aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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bahut khoob |
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bahut khoob -
23rd September 2006, 10:02 AM
bahut khoob kaha sunita jee, dil kee har dharakan ko sahala gayee aap kee shayree bahut khoob
Anil main ek awaz hoon aur tum ek khamoshi jab bhee chhoo loonga tumhe tum ko tootna hoga kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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Re: "milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya" -
24th September 2006, 03:51 AM
Jiske aane ki umeedo mai gujarey thy lamhaat,
Jab woh paas aakar bethy to bulaya na gaya…. Socha tha milney par karugi bahut si baatey, Jab woh miley to haal-e-dil bhi bataya na gaya.. Socha tha uske izhaar par sataugi, tadpaugi usko, Jab usne haath pakda to mujse chudaya na gaya… Bahut arzoo thi ki us main hi samma jau mai, Par jab woh kareeb aaye to galey lagaya na gaya… Aapne pyar se usko main madhosh kar deti magar, Par jab miley to hontho se ek jam pilaya na gaya.. Uske liye likhi thi “Sunita” ne gazley aur nazmey, Par milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya…. Are Vaah Di.... Maar diya Paapad vaale ko Hm...... Ab aaya na kuch maza.... Shukar hai bhagwaan ka.. ki kuch pyar bhara likha... jisme gam maharaaj ji nahi the... lol... Bahut hi khoobsoorat peshkash hai... Behad pasand aayi... Mere liye jo kara Tumne intzaar... Bas chaah ke bhi mujhse aaya na gaya... Saath baandha hai ab Tumhara O di... Chaaho jitna.. ab woh chudaaya na gaya...." hm... Jab pyar hota hai.. aur jab woh saath hote hain to aise hi hota hai.. chaah ke bhi muh nahi khulta... kuch bhi nahi hota... bas vakt tham jata hai.. aur jab woh chale jate hain.. to bas vakt vahin hota hai... aur usi mulaakaat ke woh haseen pal dilo dimaag pe haavi hote hain.... Bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal hai di..... Aise hi pyar bhare nagme likhte raho... Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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24th September 2006, 08:48 PM
Uske liye likhi thi “Sunita” ne gazley aur nazmey,
Par milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya hmmmm kya kehne aapke sunita ji,kya baat kehdi aapne.so true.maza aagaya padhkar.bahut hi acha likha aapne her sher hi khoobsurat laga likhti rahiye yunhin. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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26th September 2006, 10:56 AM
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appki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 11:00 AM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 11:03 AM
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yu hi aatey rahiye.....! aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th September 2006, 11:09 AM
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take care tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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aap meri har post par aati hai.n aur bahut dhayan se padti hai.n mujhe, bahut aacha lagta hai aapka meri post par aana, umeed hai yeh saath hamesha banna raheyga. bahut bahut shukria. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Hi -
26th September 2006, 11:32 PM
Hi Sunitaji
kesi hai aap ? aap ka reply tho mene pedha hi mager mlagta hai aapne mere kahene se apna hi kalam phir se padh haitabhi aap itni taarif kar rehi ho mager sach kehu tho aap ke kalaam ke saath aap ke likhe huwe har lafz ki gaheri itni umda hoti hai ke ager samjne wala samj jaye tho shayed hi koi esha hoga usme ki uski aakho se ask na nikle kabhi kabhi tho esha bhi hota hai ke aap ke kalaam ko padhte padhte khud ko veha dekh kar padhta hu tho ek alg si feeling hoti hai esha lagta hai ke aap ke is kalaam ka pura taluq humse tho nehi kabhi dil karta hai ke shayed mey samj hi nehi paya fir dobara padhta hu tho esha lagta hai ke ha yehi tho hai meri zindgi kuch is terh se gujar rahi hai ..... aur sunaiye kya chal reha hai take care of ur self bye Some one |
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29th September 2006, 02:48 PM
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aap ne muj nacheez ki shayri ko khaas bana diya hai. tahe-dil se shukriya aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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