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Maykhana - 23rd September 2015, 11:33 AM

Dil bhar duniyadaari karke aa phunche hein maykhane mein....
Kasam hai saqi der na karna tu mujhko ab bahkaane mein...

Jaam pe jaam pilaate rahna rukna mat tu ae saqi
Mujhe zara hila dena gar mein so jaaun anjaane mein....


Raah na meri takna tum ae deewaron so jaana
Phir se uski yaad aayi hai der lagegi ghar aane mein...


Mar jaayenge pite pite saari duniya kahti hai
Kaise isko samjhayein aaram bahut hai mar jaane mein...


Gar wo tha khiladi shatranjon ka mein bhi to ek pyada tha
Mera bhi ek kissa hoga uske poore afsaane mein...


Bujh na jaana shama tu jalti rahna dheere dheere
Thoda zyada waqt lagega jaan bahut hai parwaane mein...


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23rd September 2015, 07:19 PM

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10th October 2015, 07:44 PM

Shukriya Sehgal ji.

There is typing error, I am posting correct one as below:

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Dil bhar duniyadaari karke aa phunche hein maykhane mein....
Kasam hai saqi der na karna tu mujhko ab bahkaane mein...

Jaam pe jaam pilaate rahna rukna mat tu ae saqi
Mujhe zara hila dena gar mein so jaaun anjaane mein....


Raah na meri takna tum ae deewaron so jaana
Phir se uski yaad aayi hai der lagegi ghar aane mein...


Mar jaayenge pite pite saari duniya kahti hai
Kaise isko samjhayein aaram bahut hai mar jaane mein...


Gar wo tha khiladi shatranjon ka mein bhi to ek pyada tha
Mera bhi ek kissa hoga uske poore afsaane mein...


Bujh na jaana shama tu jalti rahna dheere dheere
Thoda zyada waqt lagega jaan bahut hai parwaane mein...


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Wah Gyan ji ..kamal ker diya aapne ..ek ek sher apne meiN ek alag
ras bikher raha tha ..

Sharab ..aur maikhnae pe ek bahut achcha kalam pesh kiya aapne . Per
ke man jhoom utha ...likhte rahye ..Reps +++ added

Sanjay Sehgal


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