Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Personal Messages > Introduction Forum

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
sorry
Old
  (#81)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
sorry - 20th June 2015, 10:48 PM

Dear sunita ji,

namaskaar...

main thoda busy ho gaya tha esliye reply nahi de paya.. punah hazir hota jald hi..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#82)
Pulkit_gupta
Humanity
Pulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant future
 
Offline
Posts: 6,227
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 42
20th June 2015, 11:03 PM

Akant bhai, kaise hain aap. Arse ke baad aapko dekh bahut khushi huwi.


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
  Send a message via Yahoo to Pulkit_gupta  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#83)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
21st June 2015, 07:08 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta View Post
Akant bhai, kaise hain aap. Arse ke baad aapko dekh bahut khushi huwi.
Dear Pulkit,
Namaskaar..
Aap kaise ho .? Main achchha hu.. Aur mujhe behad khushi huyi aapko dekhker..main thoda busy hoon net per bahut thodi der ke liye hi aa pa raha hoon. Kaam kuchh aisa hi hai ki reply kayde se de nahi paa raha.. Well aur kaisa chal raha hai.. Aapki post dekhi hai.reply do din baad hi chance hai dene ke liye..

Shubhkaamnao sahit
Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...

Last edited by akant; 21st June 2015 at 07:10 PM..
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#84)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
22nd June 2015, 10:05 AM

Akant ji, main apne sawaal phir se highlight kar rhi hu...taaki aapko asaani rhe jawaab dene meiN


Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
Akant ji......chaliye aapko aapke bachpan meiN le chalte hai

1. apne bachpan ki koi aik aisi shararat jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate.

2. bachpan ki koi aisi galti jis se aapne bahut kuch seekha ho.

3. kya aap aaj bhi apne bachpan ke dosto ke link meiN hai, agar haiN to unke liye chand ehsaas (2-4 lines) shayri ke roop meiN pesh kareN


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
sorry fro late reply
Old
  (#85)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
sorry fro late reply - 23rd June 2015, 02:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
Akant ji......chaliye aapko aapke bachpan meiN le chalte hai

1. apne bachpan ki koi aik aisi shararat jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate.

2. bachpan ki koi aisi galti jis se aapne bahut kuch seekha ho.

3. kya aap aaj bhi apne bachpan ke dosto ke link meiN hai, agar haiN to unke liye chand ehsaas (2-4 lines) shayri ke roop meiN pesh kareN
Dear sunita ji

der se reply ker raha hoon so khed hai...

apne bachpan ki koi aik aisi shararat jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate.

Baat un dino ki hai jab main class 5 vi mein primary mein padhata tha. Main gaav ke primary school mein padhayi kerta tha . class me sabse tej hone ke kaaran mujhe class monitor banay gaya tha. Primary me jisaki math achchhi hoti thi vahi tej mana jaata tha. Primary school me hum boy aur girl dono ek sath padhate thea. main class mein ummra me chhota tha.. kyonki mujhe padhane ka sauk hone ke naate main apane bhaaieyo ke sang jaldi hi school chala gaya tha.. aur teacher ne mera naam likh diya tha.. Ek din hamare class teacher ne kaha tha ki attendance likh lena ki kaun kaun nahi aaya hai kal uski pitaayi hogi.. to main jo log nahi aaye the unke naam likh liye.. naam likhate samay main majaak mein me hi hamari ke sahpathi jiska ki naam KISMAT IYA tha main Kismatiya Budhiya (old lady) apane kaagaj per likh diya ... aur hum us din ghar chale gaye.. dusere din jab main school aaya to Kismatiya school aayi thi.. aur kisi ne use yah bata diya tha ki uska naam maine kismatiya budhiya likha hai.. aur vo mujhe dekhte hi usne Bhojpuri mein ji bhar ker gaali diya.. aur to aur usne mujhe maarne ke liye daudaya per main daud ker bhaag gaya.. hashi khub aayi.. aur aaj bhi vo baat sochker hashi aa jaati hai.. uske baad main kisii ladki ko phir budhiya nahi banaya aur naa hi likha..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#86)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
23rd June 2015, 02:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by akant View Post
Dear sunita ji

der se reply ker raha hoon so khed hai...

apne bachpan ki koi aik aisi shararat jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate.

Baat un dino ki hai jab main class 5 vi mein primary mein padhata tha. Main gaav ke primary school mein padhayi kerta tha . class me sabse tej hone ke kaaran mujhe class monitor banay gaya tha. Primary me jisaki math achchhi hoti thi vahi tej mana jaata tha. Primary school me hum boy aur girl dono ek sath padhate thea. main class mein ummra me chhota tha.. kyonki mujhe padhane ka sauk hone ke naate main apane bhaaieyo ke sang jaldi hi school chala gaya tha.. aur teacher ne mera naam likh diya tha.. Ek din hamare class teacher ne kaha tha ki attendance likh lena ki kaun kaun nahi aaya hai kal uski pitaayi hogi.. to main jo log nahi aaye the unke naam likh liye.. naam likhate samay main majaak mein me hi hamari ke sahpathi jiska ki naam KISMAT IYA tha main Kismatiya Budhiya (old lady) apane kaagaj per likh diya ... aur hum us din ghar chale gaye.. dusere din jab main school aaya to Kismatiya school aayi thi.. aur kisi ne use yah bata diya tha ki uska naam maine kismatiya budhiya likha hai.. aur vo mujhe dekhte hi usne Bhojpuri mein ji bhar ker gaali diya.. aur to aur usne mujhe maarne ke liye daudaya per main daud ker bhaag gaya.. hashi khub aayi.. aur aaj bhi vo baat sochker hashi aa jaati hai.. uske baad main kisii ladki ko phir budhiya nahi banaya aur naa hi likha..

Akant...

hmmmmmmmm...eska matlab aap bhi kam pangebaaj nahi thy bachpan meiN...chaliye baaki ke 2 sawaaloN ke jawaab bhi jaldi dijiye, kyuki mera aik aur sawaal hai aapke liye.


appne school se nikal jab clg meiN gye us waqt ka koi vakya (kissa) hamse share kijiye, jo aaj bhi aapko lagta ho ki abhi kal hi ki to baat hai...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#87)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
25th June 2015, 07:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post

hmmmmmmmm...eska matlab aap bhi kam pangebaaj nahi thy bachpan meiN...chaliye baaki ke 2 sawaaloN ke jawaab bhi jaldi dijiye, kyuki mera aik aur sawaal hai aapke liye.


appne school se nikal jab clg meiN gye us waqt ka koi vakya (kissa) hamse share kijiye, jo aaj bhi aapko lagta ho ki abhi kal hi ki to baat hai...
Dear sunita ji,
Namaskaar

Jald hi likhunga.. Mobile per long text kerne me samay lagta hai.. Esliye bhejunga jald hi..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#88)
Hamdam
Member
Hamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud of
 
Hamdam's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,477
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Delhi .. ovalswitches@gmail.com
Rep Power: 26
25th June 2015, 10:37 PM

Akant ji ,

Ek shayar ko apni shayri ke liye kitna waqt nikalna chahiye .

Ek shayar shayri khud ke liye likhta hai aur phir use zamane ko pesh kerta hai
ya shayar zamane ke liye shayri likhta hai.

Jaise her cheez ka ek mukaam hota hai zindagi meiN , aapki nazar meiN shari ka kya mukaam ho sakta hai .


regds

Sanjay Sehgal



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
Reply With Quote
javab 2sere sawal ka
Old
  (#89)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
javab 2sere sawal ka - 25th June 2015, 11:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
Akant ji......chaliye aapko aapke bachpan meiN le chalte hai

1. apne bachpan ki koi aik aisi shararat jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate.

2. bachpan ki koi aisi galti jis se aapne bahut kuch seekha ho.

3. kya aap aaj bhi apne bachpan ke dosto ke link meiN hai, agar haiN to unke liye chand ehsaas (2-4 lines) shayri ke roop meiN pesh kareN
Dear sunita ji,
namaskaar...
aapke dusre sawal ka javab haajir hai...

2. bachpan ki koi aisi galti jis se aapne bahut kuch seekha ho.

Hamara primary school hamare ghar se karib 3-4 kilometer door tha. Aur hum paidal (walking) kerte hi aaya jaaya kerte the. Ek baar usi class 5 vi padhte huye sham ko chhutti ki ke samay hum ghar jaa rahe the. School se jaate samay hamare gaav ke ladake aur dusere gaav ke aapas me jhagada( quarrel) kerne lage, maine bhi kuchh kaha tha.. thik usi samay udhar se hamare 5vi ke hi class teacher gujar rahe the. Dusare gaav ke bachche ne teacher ko mera naam leker mujhe bataya ki vo mujhe maar raha hai.. jabki maine use maara bhi nahi tha.. lekin teacher aaye aur unhone sarso ke paudhe ukhad ker usi se vahi pitana suru kiya.. ek hi baat kahte rahe teacher ki raah chalate tum ladayi keroge .. tumhe koi nahi dekha raha hai.. aaj ke baad agar dubara suna ki tum adayi kiye to tumhari khaal udher lunga.. uske baar shayd hi maine kabhi kisi se jhagada kiya ho..mera jhagada chhut gaya..ulte jhagade chhudata tha main.. ur main jab 10 vi paas kiya to up board ka pura result tha keval 14.8% ( year 1992) main akela hi pass hua tha log mujhe dekhate hi kahate the ki dekho vahi ladka hai jo pass hua hai es saal 10-12 gaav me akela.. vah moment meri jindagi me kaafi badlaav laya.. aur tab se leker aaj tak main koshish kerta hoon ki achchhe se achhha karun.. jisse mera , ghar parivaar, samaj, rajya aur desh ( country) ka naam ho sake. Yahi vajah hai ki main har vakt prayatnshil rahata hoon.


Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
3seraa javab
Old
  (#90)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
3seraa javab - 25th June 2015, 11:17 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
Akant ji......chaliye aapko aapke bachpan meiN le chalte hai

1. apne bachpan ki koi aik aisi shararat jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate.

2. bachpan ki koi aisi galti jis se aapne bahut kuch seekha ho.

3. kya aap aaj bhi apne bachpan ke dosto ke link meiN hai, agar haiN to unke liye chand ehsaas (2-4 lines) shayri ke roop meiN pesh kareN
Dear sunita ji,

aapke teeser sawal ka javab me thoda samay lag gaya.. ..
3. kya aap aaj bhi apne bachpan ke dosto ke link meiN hai, agar haiN to unke liye chand ehsaas (2-4 lines) shayri ke roop meiN pesh kareN

Main apane teen-chaar dosto ke sampark mein hoon.. vo bahut dino baad touch me aaye. Yaa kahu ki karib 20 saal baad..yah sabhi junior high school ( from class 6-8 )ke friend hai..do to mere ghar aaye ..ek se abhi mulakat Delhi me kerani hai. Hum phone per touch me hain.. school aane jaane ko main karib 8 km paidal jata tha. beech me nadi padati thi use paar kerna padata tha.. unhi palo ki ek yaad..aapke liye chand lino me...

Kabhi paidal chala kerta tha
School aane-jaane ko nadi paar kiya kerta tha
Baithata tha kone naav ke sirhaane
jindagi me tab kabhi udas nahi hua kerta tha

school der se pahunchane kaa
maulvi saahab ke dande kaa
dar to satata tha
topi jo chute jaaye
to prayer me maar khaata tha
vo bhi kya din the
jo aaj yaad aata hai
bahut yaad aata hai



Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
dear
Old
  (#91)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
dear - 25th June 2015, 11:37 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hamdam View Post
Akant ji ,

Ek shayar ko apni shayri ke liye kitna waqt nikalna chahiye .

Ek shayar shayri khud ke liye likhta hai aur phir use zamane ko pesh kerta hai
ya shayar zamane ke liye shayri likhta hai.

Jaise her cheez ka ek mukaam hota hai zindagi meiN , aapki nazar meiN shari ka kya mukaam ho sakta hai .


regds

Sanjay Sehgal
Dear sanjay ji
namaskaar..

Ek shayar ko apni shayri ke liye kitna waqt nikalna chahiye .

shayri ke liye wakt shayr ki jarurato aur man per nirbhar kerta hai.. agar shayr mansik rup se kisi anya kaamo me busy hai to shayri beman ki banati hai.. jab fun ya man aa jata hai tabhi shayri likhi jaati hai..

Ek shayar shayri khud ke liye likhta hai aur phir use zamane ko pesh kerta hai ya shayar zamane ke liye shayri likhta hai.

shaayr yea teeno uper likhi baato ko kerta hai.. lekin jab shayr ki shayri likhane ki shuruat hoti hai to shayr jamaane ke sirf ek vyakti ( uski premika) ke liye likhata hai.. phir vah khud ke liye likhane lagta hai.. ant me vah jamaane ke liye likhata hai.. main kahana chaah raha hoon ki samay ke saath premika aur vah ant me samaaj uski shayri me jud jaate hain..

Jaise her cheez ka ek mukaam hota hai zindagi meiN , aapki nazar meiN shari ka kya mukaam ho sakta hai .

mujhe lagata hai ki shayri ka mukaam nahi hota hai.. hum dusreo se comparision kerke shayri ko uske mukaam ke bare mein sochate hain..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#92)
Dhaval
Shayri.com Moderator
Dhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Dhaval's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
26th June 2015, 10:49 AM

Akant bhaiya

Kaun si aisii baaten yaa cheezen hain yaa aap karte hon to aapke dil ko badaa hi sukooN miltaa hon wo jaannaa chaahungaa main


Jaise merii aadat rahin hai der raat chhat pe chair lagaa ke baiThnaa aur khud ko waqt denaa wo mere dil ko badaa sukooN detaa hai


Aapka

Dhaval


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#93)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
26th June 2015, 03:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by akant View Post
Dear sunita ji,
namaskaar...
aapke dusre sawal ka javab haajir hai...

2. bachpan ki koi aisi galti jis se aapne bahut kuch seekha ho.

Hamara primary school hamare ghar se karib 3-4 kilometer door tha. Aur hum paidal (walking) kerte hi aaya jaaya kerte the. Ek baar usi class 5 vi padhte huye sham ko chhutti ki ke samay hum ghar jaa rahe the. School se jaate samay hamare gaav ke ladake aur dusere gaav ke aapas me jhagada( quarrel) kerne lage, maine bhi kuchh kaha tha.. thik usi samay udhar se hamare 5vi ke hi class teacher gujar rahe the. Dusare gaav ke bachche ne teacher ko mera naam leker mujhe bataya ki vo mujhe maar raha hai.. jabki maine use maara bhi nahi tha.. lekin teacher aaye aur unhone sarso ke paudhe ukhad ker usi se vahi pitana suru kiya.. ek hi baat kahte rahe teacher ki raah chalate tum ladayi keroge .. tumhe koi nahi dekha raha hai.. aaj ke baad agar dubara suna ki tum adayi kiye to tumhari khaal udher lunga.. uske baar shayd hi maine kabhi kisi se jhagada kiya ho..mera jhagada chhut gaya..ulte jhagade chhudata tha main.. ur main jab 10 vi paas kiya to up board ka pura result tha keval 14.8% ( year 1992) main akela hi pass hua tha log mujhe dekhate hi kahate the ki dekho vahi ladka hai jo pass hua hai es saal 10-12 gaav me akela.. vah moment meri jindagi me kaafi badlaav laya.. aur tab se leker aaj tak main koshish kerta hoon ki achchhe se achhha karun.. jisse mera , ghar parivaar, samaj, rajya aur desh ( country) ka naam ho sake. Yahi vajah hai ki main har vakt prayatnshil rahata hoon.


Akant...
Quote:
Originally Posted by akant View Post
Dear sunita ji,

aapke teeser sawal ka javab me thoda samay lag gaya.. ..
3. kya aap aaj bhi apne bachpan ke dosto ke link meiN hai, agar haiN to unke liye chand ehsaas (2-4 lines) shayri ke roop meiN pesh kareN

Main apane teen-chaar dosto ke sampark mein hoon.. vo bahut dino baad touch me aaye. Yaa kahu ki karib 20 saal baad..yah sabhi junior high school ( from class 6-8 )ke friend hai..do to mere ghar aaye ..ek se abhi mulakat Delhi me kerani hai. Hum phone per touch me hain.. school aane jaane ko main karib 8 km paidal jata tha. beech me nadi padati thi use paar kerna padata tha.. unhi palo ki ek yaad..aapke liye chand lino me...

Kabhi paidal chala kerta tha
School aane-jaane ko nadi paar kiya kerta tha
Baithata tha kone naav ke sirhaane
jindagi me tab kabhi udas nahi hua kerta tha

school der se pahunchane kaa
maulvi saahab ke dande kaa
dar to satata tha
topi jo chute jaaye
to prayer me maar khaata tha
vo bhi kya din the
jo aaj yaad aata hai
bahut yaad aata hai



Akant...


Akant ji........aapne mere doosre sawaal ka jo jawaab diya hame behad pasand aaya ki bachpan ki aik chotti si galti ne aapko wo sabak sikhaya ki aaj aap bahut acche ohde par kaam kar rhe, apne maa-baap ka naam roshan kar rhe hai, bhagwaan aisi aulaad sabko de

teesre sawaal ke jawaab meiN aapne bataya ki abhi 20 baad dosto ke touch meiN aaye hai, to aik baat kehna chahungi ki yahan apne khaas kaam nahi aate wahan dost kaam aate hai...so accha lga ki aapko aapke dost phir se miley hai.

regards


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#94)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
26th June 2015, 03:53 PM

akant ji apake clg time ki koi khaas baat....jo aapne sabse chupa kar rakhi ho....agar koi aisi khaas baat hai to...plssssssss hamse share kijiye.



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
thanks
Old
  (#95)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
thanks - 26th June 2015, 05:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dhaval View Post
Akant bhaiya

Kaun si aisii baaten yaa cheezen hain yaa aap karte hon to aapke dil ko badaa hi sukooN miltaa hon wo jaannaa chaahungaa main


Jaise merii aadat rahin hai der raat chhat pe chair lagaa ke baiThnaa aur khud ko waqt denaa wo mere dil ko badaa sukooN detaa hai


Aapka

Dhaval
Dear dhaval,

mujhe logo ki help kerke bahut achchha lagata hai.. mujhe mauka milta hai to logo ko karib se janne ki koshis kerta hoon..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#96)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
27th June 2015, 02:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
akant ji apake clg time ki koi khaas baat....jo aapne sabse chupa kar rakhi ho....agar koi aisi khaas baat hai to...plssssssss hamse share kijiye.



Akant ji...ab to din kam reh gye hai aapse guftagu ke...ab roz aaya kijiye....plssssssss


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
hmm
Old
  (#97)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
hmm - 28th June 2015, 03:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post

Akant ji...ab to din kam reh gye hai aapse guftagu ke...ab roz aaya kijiye....plssssssss
Dear sunita ji,
namaskaar....

koshis kerta hoon ki aa jau.. kai baar main question padh leta hoon.. aur unhe paste ker leta hoon.. phir unka javaab bhejta hoon..

kuchh aise emergency kaam aa jaate hain ki main internet access hi nahi ker pata..

sawal jo mujhase puchhe jaate hain unka javab dene me samay lagta hai..kyonki answer bade hote hain.. main jald baaji me answer manmaafik nahi de pata.. esliye koshish kerta hoon ki dil se answer likh saku..esliye reply late ho jaa rahi hai..


Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#98)
Dhaval
Shayri.com Moderator
Dhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Dhaval's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
28th June 2015, 03:58 PM

Akant bhaiya

desh mein aap aisaa kya badlaav hai jo aap karnaa chaahenge


Aapka

Dhaval


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#99)
Dhaval
Shayri.com Moderator
Dhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Dhaval's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
28th June 2015, 03:59 PM

Akant bhaiya

desh mein aap aisaa kya badlaav hai jo aap karnaa chaahenge


Aapka

Dhaval


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
Reply With Quote
swagat hai
Old
  (#100)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
swagat hai - 28th June 2015, 10:35 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
appne school se nikal jab clg meiN gye us waqt ka koi vakya (kissa) hamse share kijiye, jo aaj bhi aapko lagta ho ki abhi kal hi ki to baat hai...

Dear sunita ji
javab haajir hai aapke liye..

appne school se nikal jab clg meiN gye us waqt ka koi vakya (kissa) hamse share kijiye, jo aaj bhi aapko lagta ho ki abhi kal hi ki to baat hai...

main jab 8vi class ke baad 9vi claas ke liye sahar ke sabse famous college Shibli College Azamagarh (only boys padhate jaha mere father bhi study kiye the..) mein gaya to.. maine apana ghar(villege)ko study ke liye chhoda tha. Shibli me maine 12 vi tak ki study ki uske baad Allahabad University me study kiya. Main jab apana gaav chhodke city mein aaya to.. city ke bachcho ke sath thoda adjust hone me time laga. To main class me sabse pichhe baithata tha.. aur kabhi kabhi chair ki problem hoti thi.. to main khidki per baithata tha.. jab main class mein question ke answer batane laga to .. vahi saath ke bachche mere liye aage ki seat reserve kerke rakhane lage..main phir class me aage ke seat per baithane laga..

class 9 vi me ek baar main college sechutti ke baad apne kamre per vapas aaya. Main aur mere bade bhaai sath rahte the.. mujhe khana banana nahi aata tha. Friday ko shibli 8-12 baje tak chalta tha. Subah bina khana khaaye school chale jaate the vaapas aane ke baad khana naseeb hota tha. Bade bhaiya ka college nahi chhuta tha.. bhookh(hungry) bahut jore ki lagi thi..esliye Main pahali baar khana bana raha tha .. maine kisi tarah sabji (curry) to bana li aur aata saana (fluor) ko roti ke liye ready kiya.. main us samay stove ko jalaya khub teaj aanch per tave ko rakh diya rooti banaane ke liye. Kisi tarah roti circle banne ki koshis kiya ..per roti ghumi nahi aur maine belan se kisi tarah chapta kiya.. aur kachchhi roti ko tave per daal diya.. tava bahut jyadad garam hone ke kaaran roti ekdam se ek taraf chapak gayi.. aur maine use palatine ki koshish haath se ki aur mera haath jal gaya.. mujhe etana gussa aaya ki maine belan se tave per jal rahi roti per etane vaar kiye ki stove bujh gaya aur roti nahi bani..

phir mein bhuke hi stove ki hava nikal ker baaith gaya.. do ghante baad bade bhaiya aaye to unhone roti banayi.. tab jaa ke main khana khaya..mujhe roti khaane ka bahut shauk tha esliye maine roti banana sikhi per..koi roti banana nahi sikhaya mujhe.. maine khud se roti banana sikhi..aur logo ko teen deen me roti banana sikha sakta hoon. Mere bade bhaiya ek saal mere sath the phir main akela hi raha.. Before marriage main 14 saal akele hi khud khana banata khata tha .. aur uska faayda yah hua ki meri wife ko apne papa ke ghar jaan mein koi pareshani nahi hoti.. vo janti hai ki main khud se khana bana ker khaa lunga.. vo kahati bhi hain main unse achchhi rotiya bana leta hoon..


Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...

Last edited by akant; 28th June 2015 at 10:40 PM..
   
Reply With Quote
haajir hoon
Old
  (#101)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
haajir hoon - 28th June 2015, 10:38 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
akant ji apake clg time ki koi khaas baat....jo aapne sabse chupa kar rakhi ho....agar koi aisi khaas baat hai to...plssssssss hamse share kijiye.

akant ji apake clg time ki koi khaas baat....jo aapne sabse chupa kar rakhi ho....agar koi aisi khaas baat hai to...plssssssss hamse share kijiye.
Sunita


Yah baat mere B.Sc final year ki ghatana hai.. aap to jaante hi ho ki up me holi kaafi achchhu tarah se kheli jaati hai.. university me hum 4-5 bachcho ka group tha.. jayadatar time hum ek saath spent kerte the. Holi ke time hamare yaha holi per slogan likhane ka prachalan hai ( bura na maano hli hai). Aur koshis hoti hai ki slogan likhane vale ka naam kisi ko nahi pata chale. To esliye jyadatar log slogan type kerate ya likhaker photocopy jisse ki dhokha ho likhane vale ka naam pahchaanne me. Apne time me hum logo ne slogan likhe original handwriting me with colourful pen se.. hamare batch me ek girls padhati thi usko nishana bana ke likha gaya tha… Dabur ki davaye leti ja jaa tujhako pati bimaar mile..kuhada ki tarah tumphulo phalo sasuraar me etani maar pade.. jispe hum logo ko dar thoda jyada tha...ko likha aur use kaafi uchayi pe paste kerke chale gaye. Dusre din sab boys aur girls ko padhana hota hai.. hum log yah kaam pahali baar ker rahe the..esliye thoda bhaybheet bhi the.. kahi boys aur girl me kisi ko bura na lage..
Dusere din jab hum log chemistry ki class me aaye to sabhi boys aur girls slogan ko padhane lage.. sabse aschary ki baat yah rahi ki jis ladki ke liye hum logo ne dabour ki davaaye ..vala slogan likha tha use bahut pasand aaya.. aur to aur vah use khushi me padhane ke liye dervaaje per chadk ke padhi thi.. sach bahut hi happy moment rahe hain.. aaj bhi smriti patal ghoom jaate hain..sunita ji aapki vajah se yah khulasha ker raha hoon.. vaise main B.Sc. me kam M.Sc. me jayaada mastiya kiya aur khub padha bhii..


Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
thanks
Old
  (#102)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
thanks - 28th June 2015, 10:49 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dhaval View Post
Akant bhaiya

desh mein aap aisaa kya badlaav hai jo aap karnaa chaahenge


Aapka

Dhaval
Dear dhaval,

meri to yahi hardik echchha hai ki jis din hamari bahane- betiya (mahilaye) nirfikar hoker road sadak per chale ..unhe her gali sadak yah mahsus ho ke vo apane ghar me hai.. unko asuraksha ki bhavana se bhi kaafi dur rahe... aur unke chehre per hashi aur muskuraht najar aaye .. yahi badlaav kerna chahunga.. mujhase jo banta hai main apane her chhatra ko aatmnirbhar aur mujhase judi mahilaao ko khush dekhane ki aur mansik rup se mjboot banaane ki koshis kerta hoon..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#103)
Dhaval
Shayri.com Moderator
Dhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Dhaval's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
28th June 2015, 10:57 PM

Akant bhaiya

maine aapki sign ko padhaa haii kai baar.. mehsoos bhi kiyaa haii .AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...... yeh rakhne ki koi wajh ya koi ehsaas..


Aapka

Dhaval


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#104)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
29th June 2015, 07:08 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dhaval View Post
Akant bhaiya

maine aapki sign ko padhaa haii kai baar.. mehsoos bhi kiyaa haii .AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...... yeh rakhne ki koi wajh ya koi ehsaas..


Aapka

Dhaval
Dear dhaval
Meri sign me jo sentence likhe hain unka ek matalab hai.. Agar aapko apne dil ki dhaDkan sunayi degi to nishchit hi aap jinda hai.. Yah line jab main B.Sc. me padhata tha to mere ko sunne ko mili.. Mujhe kaafi samay laga eska asli meaning janne me.. Jab meaning samajh aayi to mujhe bahut pasand aya..esliye maine ese apana signature qotation bana liya..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Kora kakaz aur syahi bhara kalam
Old
  (#105)
zahinrizvi
Registered User
zahinrizvi will become famous soon enough
 
Offline
Posts: 25
Join Date: Dec 2013
Rep Power: 0
Kora kakaz aur syahi bhara kalam - 29th June 2015, 08:22 PM

Likhne Jo baitha halat-e-Zindagi apni kitabo'n mein....,
Kora kakaz aur syahi bhara kalam tha hatho'n mein....,
Likhta bhi kya safar-e-zindgi uss Kali roshnai se....,
Jo khatm ho gai shuru hotey hi Chand mulaqato'n me..


[COLOR="rgb(0, 255, 255)"]"Hyder"[/COLOR]
  Send a message via Skype™ to zahinrizvi 
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#106)
Madhu 14
Moderator
Madhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud ofMadhu 14 has much to be proud of
 
Madhu 14's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
29th June 2015, 09:26 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by zahinrizvi View Post
Likhne Jo baitha halat-e-Zindagi apni kitabo'n mein....,
Kora kakaz aur syahi bhara kalam tha hatho'n mein....,
Likhta bhi kya safar-e-zindgi uss Kali roshnai se....,
Jo khatm ho gai shuru hotey hi Chand mulaqato'n me..
Zahin ji..ye kalaam shayad galati se yahaan post kar diya hai aapne..



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#107)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
30th June 2015, 09:49 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by akant View Post
akant ji apake clg time ki koi khaas baat....jo aapne sabse chupa kar rakhi ho....agar koi aisi khaas baat hai to...plssssssss hamse share kijiye.
Sunita


Yah baat mere B.Sc final year ki ghatana hai.. aap to jaante hi ho ki up me holi kaafi achchhu tarah se kheli jaati hai.. university me hum 4-5 bachcho ka group tha.. jayadatar time hum ek saath spent kerte the. Holi ke time hamare yaha holi per slogan likhane ka prachalan hai ( bura na maano hli hai). Aur koshis hoti hai ki slogan likhane vale ka naam kisi ko nahi pata chale. To esliye jyadatar log slogan type kerate ya likhaker photocopy jisse ki dhokha ho likhane vale ka naam pahchaanne me. Apne time me hum logo ne slogan likhe original handwriting me with colourful pen se.. hamare batch me ek girls padhati thi usko nishana bana ke likha gaya tha… Dabur ki davaye leti ja jaa tujhako pati bimaar mile..kuhada ki tarah tumphulo phalo sasuraar me etani maar pade.. jispe hum logo ko dar thoda jyada tha...ko likha aur use kaafi uchayi pe paste kerke chale gaye. Dusre din sab boys aur girls ko padhana hota hai.. hum log yah kaam pahali baar ker rahe the..esliye thoda bhaybheet bhi the.. kahi boys aur girl me kisi ko bura na lage..
Dusere din jab hum log chemistry ki class me aaye to sabhi boys aur girls slogan ko padhane lage.. sabse aschary ki baat yah rahi ki jis ladki ke liye hum logo ne dabour ki davaaye ..vala slogan likha tha use bahut pasand aaya.. aur to aur vah use khushi me padhane ke liye dervaaje per chadk ke padhi thi.. sach bahut hi happy moment rahe hain.. aaj bhi smriti patal ghoom jaate hain..sunita ji aapki vajah se yah khulasha ker raha hoon.. vaise main B.Sc. me kam M.Sc. me jayaada mastiya kiya aur khub padha bhii..


Akant...
hmmmmmm aap jaise sanjeeda shayar ko padkar lagta nahi tha ki aap bhi apne waqt meiN khoob mastibaaj rhe hai
Akant ji aaj aapki guftagu ka aakhiri din hai so maiN jaan.na chahti hu ki :


1. aapke dil meiN SDC ki kya jagah hai ?

2. sdc ke saath etne lambe safar meiN aapne kya kya badlaav dekhe (acche bure) ?

3. aap sdc ke nye purane members ko kya paigaam dena chahte hai apni taraf se ?




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#108)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
30th June 2015, 11:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender View Post
hmmmmmm aap jaise sanjeeda shayar ko padkar lagta nahi tha ki aap bhi apne waqt meiN khoob mastibaaj rhe hai
Akant ji aaj aapki guftagu ka aakhiri din hai so maiN jaan.na chahti hu ki :


1. aapke dil meiN SDC ki kya jagah hai ?

2. sdc ke saath etne lambe safar meiN aapne kya kya badlaav dekhe (acche bure) ?

3. aap sdc ke nye purane members ko kya paigaam dena chahte hai apni taraf se ?


Dear sunita Ji
SDC mere liye ek aisi jagah hai jaha man ke bhav ki sapnili duniya ka sukh prapt hora hair.. Ya kahu ki dil ko sukun milane wali jagah hai..

Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#109)
Hamdam
Member
Hamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud ofHamdam has much to be proud of
 
Hamdam's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,477
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Delhi .. ovalswitches@gmail.com
Rep Power: 26
30th June 2015, 11:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by akant View Post
Dear sanjay ji
namaskaar..

Ek shayar ko apni shayri ke liye kitna waqt nikalna chahiye .

shayri ke liye wakt shayr ki jarurato aur man per nirbhar kerta hai.. agar shayr mansik rup se kisi anya kaamo me busy hai to shayri beman ki banati hai.. jab fun ya man aa jata hai tabhi shayri likhi jaati hai..

Ek shayar shayri khud ke liye likhta hai aur phir use zamane ko pesh kerta hai ya shayar zamane ke liye shayri likhta hai.

shaayr yea teeno uper likhi baato ko kerta hai.. lekin jab shayr ki shayri likhane ki shuruat hoti hai to shayr jamaane ke sirf ek vyakti ( uski premika) ke liye likhata hai.. phir vah khud ke liye likhane lagta hai.. ant me vah jamaane ke liye likhata hai.. main kahana chaah raha hoon ki samay ke saath premika aur vah ant me samaaj uski shayri me jud jaate hain..

Jaise her cheez ka ek mukaam hota hai zindagi meiN , aapki nazar meiN shari ka kya mukaam ho sakta hai .

mujhe lagata hai ki shayri ka mukaam nahi hota hai.. hum dusreo se comparision kerke shayri ko uske mukaam ke bare mein sochate hain..

Akant...
Shukriya akant ji ..jo aapne ne mere sawalon ka jawab diya , per maiN aapse differ karta hun ki shayar pehle apni premika ke liye likhta hai..

mere hisaab se premika ke liye nahin prem ke liye likhta hai , premika ho ya na ho , vo imagination meiN bhi apne prem ke liye likh sakta hai , aisa mera man,na hai ...aap kya kehte haiN



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
Reply With Quote
Shukriya Akant ji
Old
  (#110)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
Thumbs up Shukriya Akant ji - 1st July 2015, 09:14 AM

Akant ji, aapse baat-cheet karke aur aapke bare meiN jaankar hame bahut accha lga, apna saath yu hi SDC ke saath banaye rakhiyega, accha lagta hai aap jaise shayar SDC pariwaar meiN hai

aapne apna keemti waqt es silsily ko diya, uske liye SDC team aapki shukarguzar hai

jo kuch aik sawaal reh gye hai aap unke jawaab fursat se de sakte hai....aapse guftagu ka silsilla aaj khatam ho rha hai so maiN es thread ko Introduction fourm meiN transfer kar rhi hu. taaki nye member se guftagu ka silsilla shuru kiya ja sake.

duaoN ke saath


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
dear
Old
  (#111)
akant
Registered User
akant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to beholdakant is a splendid one to behold
 
akant's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
dear - 7th July 2015, 12:42 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hamdam View Post
Shukriya akant ji ..jo aapne ne mere sawalon ka jawab diya , per maiN aapse differ karta hun ki shayar pehle apni premika ke liye likhta hai..

mere hisaab se premika ke liye nahin prem ke liye likhta hai , premika ho ya na ho , vo imagination meiN bhi apne prem ke liye likh sakta hai , aisa mera man,na hai ...aap kya kehte haiN
Dear

aapki baato se main sahamat hoon... per main apni baat ko kaat nahi raha.. main yah kahan chaah raha hoon ki premika ( imaginary bhi) ho sakti hai.. premika god bhi ho sakti hai.. jab hum kisi cheej me premika ki najar (prem ki bhaavna) se dekhate hain to shayri janm leti hai.. eske shabdik arth me hi chhipa hai.. shayar ka female version shayri...


Akant...


*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#112)
Dhaval
Shayri.com Moderator
Dhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Dhaval's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
7th July 2015, 05:25 PM

Akant bhaiya

Pranaam

aapke baare mein jaan kar bahot hi khushii huii.... main aapka dil se shukriyaah adaa kartaa huun shayri pariwaar ki aur se ees guftagu ko yadgaar banaane ke liye

Aapka

Dhaval


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On

Forum Jump



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com