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bata saaqi kya baat thi tere is pilaane mein - 18th August 2015, 08:56 AM

Doston,

Saaqi lafz ko lekar kuch khayaalat likhne ki koshish ki hai...umeed hai pasand aayenge

bata saaqi kya baat thi tere is pilaane mein
koi haraarat* nahi thi tere siva zamaane mein

*passion

humare behakne ka bhi ilzaam humhi par aaya
qusoor itnaa tha baithe tere aashiyaane mein

qaid hone ka gam humko bhi nahi hota itna
girafta hote agar hum aur kisi bahaane mein

be.Diiyon ki umr par sawaalat koi mat karna
shab beet jaayegi yeh daastan sunaane mein

jaam-e-gul ka jo ho to nashaa itnaa ho
maut aaye to qalak* na yahan se jaane mein

*pain



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18th August 2015, 12:42 PM

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Doston,

Saaqi lafz ko lekar kuch khayaalat likhne ki koshish ki hai...umeed hai pasand aayenge

bata saaqi kya baat thi tere is pilaane mein
koi haraarat* nahi tha tere siva zamaane mein

*passion

humare behakne ka bhi ilzaam humhi par aaya
qusoor itnaa tha baithe tere aashiyaane mein

qaid hone ka gam humko bhi nahi hota itna
girafta hote agar hum aur kisi bahaane mein

be.Diiyon ki umr par sawaalat koi mat karna
shab beet jaayegi yeh daastan sunaane mein

jaam-e-gul ka jo ho to nashaa itnaa ho
maut aaye to qalak* na ho humhe jaane mein

*pain
Mast bhai...aap to har topic par khoob likh lete ho, pyar mohabat, dard...aur Saaki-sharaab ......bahut khoob.

likhte rhiye
mehfil ko mast karte rhiye


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Mast bhai...aap to har topic par khoob likh lete ho, pyar mohabat, dard...aur Saaki-sharaab ......bahut khoob.

likhte rhiye
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Didi bas aapka pyaar hai, yunhi aate rahiYeGaa



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doston,

saaqi lafz ko lekar kuch khayaalat likhne ki koshish ki hai...umeed hai pasand aayenge

bata saaqi kya baat thi tere is pilaane mein
koi haraarat* nahi thi tere siva zamaane mein

*passion

humare behakne ka bhi ilzaam humhi par aaya
qusoor itnaa tha baithe tere aashiyaane mein

qaid hone ka gam humko bhi nahi hota itna
girafta hote agar hum aur kisi bahaane mein

be.diiyon ki umr par sawaalat koi mat karna
shab beet jaayegi yeh daastan sunaane mein

jaam-e-gul ka jo ho to nashaa itnaa ho
maut aaye to qalak* na yahan se jaane mein

*pain
sharaab par bhi khoob likha hai mast bhai..............
Likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


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19th August 2015, 09:47 AM

bahut khoob janaab... kyaa baat hai bahut umdah bayaani huii hai aapki taraf se.......

saaqi ka to jaise khushi ke maare haal behaal hogaa..... aaj ek mast ne use apnii shaayrii kah dii.......

bahut aalaa... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye

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sharaab par bhi khoob likha hai mast bhai..............
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bahut khoob janaab... kyaa baat hai bahut umdah bayaani huii hai aapki taraf se.......

saaqi ka to jaise khushi ke maare haal behaal hogaa..... aaj ek mast ne use apnii shaayrii kah dii.......

bahut aalaa... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye

shaad....
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Doston,

Saaqi lafz ko lekar kuch khayaalat likhne ki koshish ki hai...umeed hai pasand aayenge

bata saaqi kya baat thi tere is pilaane mein
koi haraarat* nahi thi tere siva zamaane mein

*passion

humare behakne ka bhi ilzaam humhi par aaya
qusoor itnaa tha baithe tere aashiyaane mein

qaid hone ka gam humko bhi nahi hota itna
girafta hote agar hum aur kisi bahaane mein

be.Diiyon ki umr par sawaalat koi mat karna
shab beet jaayegi yeh daastan sunaane mein

jaam-e-gul ka jo ho to nashaa itnaa ho
maut aaye to qalak* na yahan se jaane mein

*pain
waah bahut khoob bahut dilkash........
dil se daad pesh hai janaab,,,
yoon hee likhte rahiye..



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waah bahut khoob bahut dilkash........
dil se daad pesh hai janaab,,,
yoon hee likhte rahiye..
Mamnoon-o-mashkoor hoon jo aapne khaaksaar ke lafzon ko daad ke qaabil samjhaa.....aate rahiye aur yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa



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20th August 2015, 02:52 PM

Anuji,

bahot khub khayaalaat pesh kiye haiN.
lutf aur Gam ka bahot khub mila hai... dheroN daad.



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bahot khub khayaalaat pesh kiye haiN.
lutf aur Gam ka bahot khub mila hai... dheroN daad.
Aadeil bhai

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