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Zara humse nazren milakar to dekho - 22nd September 2014, 10:49 PM
Zara humse nazren milakar to dekho
Takalluf sahii muskurakar to dekho

Takalluf- Formality

Tumhare tabassum hain gulshan hi gulshan
Labon par tabassum ko lakar to dekho

Tabassum- Smile, gulshan- Garden

Mubarak ho tumko hamen bhooljana
Magar yaad humko na aakar to dekho

Kamii meri mehsoos tum ko bhi hogii
Bina mere mehfil sajakar to dekho

Mehsoos - Feel

Eh sach hai ke seena hai patthar tumhara
Magar moum usko banakar to dekho

seena – Chest, Moum - Wax

Eh gesuu nahin hain ghazab ki ghata hain
Inhen khol kar tum udakar to dekho

Gesuu- Long hairs, ghazab- Marvellous

sada saath hum dengey saye ke jaise
humen dost apna banakar to dekho

Khazana muhabbat ka Parwaaz jaise
kabhi tum Kisii pe lutakar to dekho

Khazana- Treasure


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23rd September 2014, 09:26 AM
[QUOTE=mujib66;469357]Zara humse nazren milakar to dekho
Taqalluf sahii muskurakar to dekho

Taqalluf- Formality

Tumhare tabassum hain gulshan hi gulshan
Labon par tabassum ko lakar to dekho

Tabassum- Smile, gulshan- Garden

Mubarak ho tumko hamen bhooljana
Magar yaad humko na aakar to dekho

Kamii meri mehsoos tum ko bhi hogii
Bina mere mehfil sajakar to dekho

Mehsoos - Feel

Eh sach hai ke seena hai patthar tumhara
Magar moum usko banakar to dekho

seena – Chest, Moum - Wax

Eh gesuu nahin hain ghazab ki ghata hain
Inhen khol kar tum udakar to dekho

Gesuu- Long hairs, ghazab- Marvellous

sada saath hum dengey saye ke jaise
humen dost apna banakar to dekho

Khazana muhabbat ka Parwaaz jaise
kabhi tum Kisii pe lutakar to dekho

Khazana- Treasure


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23rd September 2014, 11:15 AM
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Mubarak ho tumko hamen bhooljana
Magar yaad humko na aakar to dekho

Eh sach hai ke seena hai patthar tumhara
Magar moum usko banakar to dekho

sada saath hum dengey saye ke jaise
humen dost apna banakar to dekho



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24th September 2014, 11:59 AM
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Adaab Madhuji

Bohut bohut shukriya aap ka.

Muof karna lafz takalluf hai....taqalluf nahin..
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Bohut bohut shukriya Adeil ji.

Muof karna lafz takalluf hai....taqalluf nahin..
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Mubarak ho tumko hamen bhooljana
Magar yaad humko na aakar to dekho

Kamii meri mehsoos tum ko bhi hogii
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Khoobsoorat Ghazal ke liye dil se daad

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Mujhe behad khushi hui ke aap ne Ghazal ko padha aur isse se luftadoz hue.
Isi tarha dilchaspi ke saath mere kalaam padhte rahiyega......Shayer ke qalam to logon ke liye chalte hain....apne liye thodi na chalte hain.......hai na!!

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Bohut bohut shukriya Sunita ji.

Waise Kafi salon ke baad aap se mukhatib hua hun.
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Bohut bohut shukriya Sunita ji.

Waise Kafi salon ke baad aap se mukhatib hua hun.
Beech men kai saal tak main is bazml men nahin aya tha.

Aaj bhi aap ki Urdu/Hindi adab ki khidmat jaree hai dekh kar achha laga.

Keep it up please.

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Jee han mujhe maloom hai Sunita ji.
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Humare do ashaar pasand karne ki liye bohut bohut shukriya HASSONI ji.

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Jee Namaste,

Bohut bohut shukriya Dhaval ji.
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Bohut bohut shukriya..Harash Mahajan Sb.

Pl try to give a musical touch to it if you can and let me know. I hope that all my Ghazals in "Shayri-e-Ishq or Aap ki Shayri or Ghazal Forum in this SDC can fit to music. Because my poems are in beher or meter or rhythm.

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