passionate the great.........

[passionatelover]

talwar ki dhar hu haar ka uphaar hu
fuhar ki bahar hu vikar ka nakkar hu
nidhar ka adhar hu lachar ka dhikkar hu
vichar ka prakar hu acchar me sadhar hu

tyar me yaag hu bhog me tyag hu
faag me bhairag hu jagta anurag hu
viyog ka sayog hu yog ka niyog hu
durbhagya ka me bhagya hu sajog me suhag hu

aan hu abhiman hu swadesh ka ghunghan hu
swan me avsan me aan ki pehchan hu
aadan hu pradhan hu dyan ka vidhan hu
pran me bhalidan ka shanpurn ghann hu

khrodh ka virodh hu pradhishod ka nirodh hu
stothr ke avirodh ka rodh hu virodh hu
saanth hu aashanth hu sindhu ka prasant hu
kalant prant jeev ka shant jeevannath hu

josh me me hosh hu hosh me me josh hu
sadhosh me nirdhosh hu rosh me akhrosh hu
sesh me nishesh hu sunya ka aysesh hu
khalesh ke parivesh me sesh ka vishesh hu

[adarshgirl]

oh...i never knew tht...waise taarif to khud ki bahut kar li. ab mujhe kuch words samajh mein nahi aaye, to batao na.

1. nidhar
2. tyar me yaag hu bhog me tyag hu
3. faag me bhairag hu jagta anurag hu
4. avsan
5. pradhishod ka nirodh hu
6. kalant prant jeev
7. sesh me nishesh hu sunya ka aysesh hu
8. khalesh ke parivesh me sesh ka vishesh hu

bas itne words mujhe samajh mein nahi aaye. batao inka matlab. aur suno, iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki meri hindi poor hai, bas yeh ki aapne ekdum solid solid words use kiya hai jo bas mere sir ke upar se guzar gaya

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by adarshgirl
oh...i never knew tht...waise taarif to khud ki bahut kar li. ab mujhe kuch words samajh mein nahi aaye, to batao na.

1. nidhar
2. tyar me yaag hu bhog me tyag hu
3. faag me bhairag hu jagta anurag hu
4. avsan
5. pradhishod ka nirodh hu
6. kalant prant jeev
7. sesh me nishesh hu sunya ka aysesh hu
8. khalesh ke parivesh me sesh ka vishesh hu

bas itne words mujhe samajh mein nahi aaye. batao inka matlab. aur suno, iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki meri hindi poor hai, bas yeh ki aapne ekdum solid solid words use kiya hai jo bas mere sir ke upar se guzar gaya

hey

tu mil kabhi ym par..... tab tujhe hindi ki tution deta hu........par fees longa.............haha
aayegi sab samaj aayegi dhere dhere pado sab samaj me aayegi.............
bye and take care
passionate...........

[Mukhra]

omg!!!

thas a lot of hard hindi....it all went over my head!!!

kuch easy likho yaar....every other word of urs was one ive never even heard before....plz post the translation here....whether in english, or easy hindi

thanx

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by Mukhra
omg!!!

thas a lot of hard hindi....it all went over my head!!!

kuch easy likho yaar....every other word of urs was one ive never even heard before....plz post the translation here....whether in english, or easy hindi

thanx

hello mukhra,

okies......i will love to give u english version of it........but that will take time because i need to sit with dictonary.........haha.though the first line means that i am the sharpness of the sword.............plz dont take me otherwise that i am throwing attitude here........ha ha....... just kidding......

though it was written in hinglish.........hindi in english........

i tell u that the summary of this poem is "passionate is great" ..............so if u are intrested in hearing when i am blowing my trumpet ................i will surely do this ...........

plz do keep comming and sharing ur views
bye and take care
passionate...........

[Mukhra]

hmm...gud ek line ka toh pata chala...now wht abt the rest????

p.s. dont think tht i dont kno ne hindi...i do kno hindi....juss not gud hindi

[aapki_anamika]

passionate ji...

sir chakara gaya. waise hai bahoot khoob..par samajh kuch nahi aaya haha

kya aap samjha denge is poem ka matlab...agar aapko khud samajh aayi ho to...


hv a nice day

take care
shweta

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by Mukhra
hmm...gud ek line ka toh pata chala...now wht abt the rest????

p.s. dont think tht i dont kno ne hindi...i do kno hindi....juss not gud hindi

hello mukra
i am very lazy and cant translate all the kines in one day........................but ceratinly i will give u the full english version one day............. .........and for today the first lines last part.............................i am an gift of a necklace........though the last line has double meaning........it all means that i am the gift to the person how lost..............hope this quote makes it more clear.........

wen u count on ur best friend......u may not count me
wen u count ur close freind u may not count me
wen u really want a friend just count on me.........

and thanks for showing intrest to know my tale of greatness.... haha............it wud be my pleasure to blow my tumpet now hahaha

plz do keep comming
bye and take care
passionate..........

[adarshgirl]

Originally posted by passionatelover
hey

tu mil kabhi ym par..... tab tujhe hindi ki tution deta hu........par fees longa.............haha
aayegi sab samaj aayegi dhere dhere pado sab samaj me aayegi.............
bye and take care
passionate...........

fees?? mujhe to laga tha ki aap free mein tutions doge!! anyways, itna bhav kha rahe ho to nahi chahiye tutions!!

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by adarshgirl
fees?? mujhe to laga tha ki aap free mein tutions doge!! anyways, itna bhav kha rahe ho to nahi chahiye tutions!!

hey veds
tum to bura maan gayi......... aare me to mazak kar raha tha,chal tere jab maan kare tu aapni copy kitabe le kar aa sakti hai......... tere liye no fees.................... par only on sundays haan..........i m only free on sundays..........or yeh adhyapak chaari le kar padata hai..........so better be careful..............its nopany style of teaching u know.........haha just kidding...........

chal bye and take care
passionate..........

and remember there are two greats one alexander the great who conqured country after country and second paasionate the great who conqueres heart after after heart........ hahahaha

[adarshgirl]

Originally posted by passionatelover
[B]hey veds
tum to bura maan gayi......... aare me to mazak kar raha tha,chal tere jab maan kare tu aapni copy kitabe le kar aa sakti hai......... tere liye no fees.................... par only on sundays haan..........i m only free on sundays..........or yeh adhyapak chaari le kar padata hai..........so better be careful..............its nopany style of teaching u know.........haha just kidding...........

chal bye and take care
passionate..........

and remember there are two greats one alexander the great who conqured country after country and second paasionate the great who conqueres heart after after heart........ hahahaha [

hehe april fool!!!!!! mujhe koi tutions nahi chahiye, main to april fool bana rahi thi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well, if its getting too creepy, let me stop it. anyways, apko matlab batane bola to itna lamba lecture diya!! lagta hai aapne bhi yeh poem kisise maari hai cool dude!!

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by aapki_anamika
passionate ji...

sir chakara gaya. waise hai bahoot khoob..par samajh kuch nahi aaya haha

kya aap samjha denge is poem ka matlab...agar aapko khud samajh aayi ho to...


hv a nice day

take care
shweta

hello anamika
maafi chahta hoon aapki ke sir ko chakkr dene ke liye............but its passionate style.........lolz........
tum ko jo line nahi samaj aayi tumhe batao,me tumhe samja dunga...................indian hoon......hindi meri matra bhasha hai.....................thanks for ur words of appreciation,plz do keep comming always.......

bye and take care
passionate........

[Mukhra]

talwar ki dhar hu haar ka uphaar hu
fuhar ki bahar hu vikar ka nakkar hu
nidhar ka adhar hu lachar ka dhikkar hu
vichar ka prakar hu acchar me sadhar hu

tyar me yaag hu bhog me tyag hu
faag me bhairag hu jagta anurag hu
viyog ka sayog hu yog ka niyog hu
durbhagya ka me bhagya hu sajog me suhag hu

aan hu abhiman hu swadesh ka ghunghan hu
swan me avsan me aan ki pehchan hu
aadan hu pradhan hu dyan ka vidhan hu
pran me bhalidan ka shanpurn ghann hu

khrodh ka virodh hu pradhishod ka nirodh hu
stothr ke avirodh ka rodh hu virodh hu
saanth hu aashanth hu sindhu ka prasant hu
kalant prant jeev ka shant jeevannath hu

josh me me hosh hu hosh me me josh hu
sadhosh me nirdhosh hu rosh me akhrosh hu
sesh me nishesh hu sunya ka aysesh hu
khalesh ke parivesh me sesh ka vishesh hu

yeh lo....yeh sab samjhaado phir

[mehul jain]

wow very well said bro it was a good choice of words.........keep it up like that

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by mehul jain
wow very well said bro it was a good choice of words.........keep it up like that

hello chotte nawab
thanks for liking it................plz do keep comming and sharing ur views

bye and take care
passionate........

[bindaas_ashi]

thanx
thanx alot for ur support.
well
this is really nice
but truly i m not able to understand wt u hav written
just keep on writing
tc

[maikasH]

i don't think its written by him

the whole poem is in meter, all of it, either a person knows how to write in meter or he doesn't.....i haven't come come across any of his other work where even a single misra in in meter

hence he's avoiding giving meanings of those words.....!!


if its written by him then i expect him to explain the meanings to those words and also "which" meter it is.....!!

if i were u dear passinatelover....i'd be very careful....!!



awaiting.....


regards
maikash

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by bindaas_ashi
thanx
thanx alot for ur support.
well
this is really nice
but truly i m not able to understand wt u hav written
just keep on writing
tc

thanks ashi for ur prsence and word of appreciation .
someday meet on net i will explain u
bye and tc
passionate............

[passionatelover]

Originally posted by maikasH
i don't think its written by him

the whole poem is in meter, all of it, either a person knows how to write in meter or he doesn't.....i haven't come come across any of his other work where even a single misra in in meter

hence he's avoiding giving meanings of those words.....!!


if its written by him then i expect him to explain the meanings to those words and also "which" meter it is.....!!

if i were u dear passinatelover....i'd be very careful....!!



awaiting.....


regards
maikash

wo aaj humare mehfil me aaye hue hai
jo ghehrat bhi aapni lutaye hue hai

sano ye shaukat aapne jhute dosto ke badolat
sare gunaho ki inko hai mohalat
paresan hai duniya inki badolat
aare yeh sharmo haya ko bhi mitaye hue hai...

since ur the moderator of this site ,it dosent allow u to say anything to anybody without proper authentication,u have made site avbsouletly desrated thanks to ur own policies and ur groupism..........anyways nothing to say.............either pove it or take ur words back.................and reagrding menaingsa i dont explantaion to anybody ..........but if ur intrested give me ur yahoo id i will teah explain u each and every line in deatails okies..........

[maikasH]

dear passionatelover

i have no clue where u got influence to use words like "groupism"


anyway, i sincerely think if its ur own poetry then you shouldn't have to hide behind curtains and talk to me in private....take pride any explain publicly.....if i knew for sure that it "isn't" your own poetry then this thread would have been deleted a long time ago.period.

please choose ur words carefully as i did while replying to this post.......!!


its not me who has to prove anything its u who r in question.....leave alone the meanings just give us the arkaans of this meter, that should be enough for me to owe u an apology


awaiting
maikash

[passionatelover]

adarniya maikesh sahab,

akrosh aur avesh ki veg me aakar mene jo unuchit shabdo ka pryog kiya uske liya me chama ka patr hoon, aur isliya pichle dafa jo mene shabdo ka prayog kiya usse aaj me wapas leta hoon."groupism" ke bare jo mene kaha to aur aapke dyan ko kendrit karne ki koshish ki thi,mana ke me usme asafal raha hoon par aab mujhe is vishay par kuch bhi nahi kehna hai.(its none of my business now)

rahi baat es rachna ki, toh in 8 metre ka proyog karna na kabi karta tha aur na karne ki koshish karta hoon,yeh toh aap jaise mahan shayro ki pravarti me hain,yeh martra ki ginti,yeh maapdanad me rehkar kavita likhna humare bus ki baat bhi nahi hai,aur me abodh shadharan naushikya in metero ke prog me aasksham aur ashmarth hoon.mul rup se humari kavita humari kalapna humari veecharo se prabavit rehti hai…

“kalpnao me koh jata hoon
duniya se me kaat jata hoon
sahbd shayri ka roop le leti hai
kagaz par likta jata hoon”

es rachan ka anuvadh me angraji me karne ki koshish kar raha hoon,kahi kahi es rachna me un shabo ka bhi pravog hua hai jiska vastavikta se koi mel nahi hai aur yeh mul roop se kavita ko sajane aur susajit kar ne ke liya hai...
aapke adhesh annusar aapke samne me apni post ki huyi rachna ka anuvad english me kar raha hoon..
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talwar ki dhar hu haar ka uphaar hu
i am the sharpness of the sword,i am the conquest of defeat

fuhar ki bahar hu vikar ka nakkar hu
[COLOR=darkblue]i blossom in showers, I gainsay all misgivings

nidhar ka adhar hu lachar ka dhikkar hu
i support the baseless(base of basless),i am ashamed of helplessness


vichar ka prakar hu acchar me sadhar hu
i am a kind of thought improvement in manners

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tyar me yaag hu bhog me tyag hu
i am fire in sacrifice abdicator of luxuries


faag me bhairag hu jagta anurag hu
iam colurelee in colurs,i am the burning desires

viyog ka sayog hu yog ka niyog hu
I am the knots of joints, modification of meditation

durbhagya ka me bhagya hu sajog me suhag hu
i am the blesses among cursed, coincidence among coincidences
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aan hu abhiman hu swadesh ka ghunghan hu
i am dignity ,i am pride i am applause of my nation

swan me avsan me aan ki pehchan hu
i stand my ground after every masquerade

aadan hu pradhan hu dyan ka vidhan hu
i m giver i am taker i am process of all prayers

pran me bhalidan ka shanpurn ghann hu
i eulogies the sacrifice of life
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khrodh ka virodh hu pradhishod ka nirodh hu
i am opposer of ire, avenger of revenge

stothr ke avirodh ka rodh hu virodh hu
i am against all hindrances that shields my mouth

saanth hu aashanth hu sindhu ka prasant hu
i am silent i am sound i am spacious like ocean

kalant prant jeev ka shant jeevannath hu
i am the living biography of soul closing death
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josh me me hosh hu hosh me me josh hu
i am cool in excitement ,i am excited when cool

sadhosh me nirdhosh hu rosh me akhrosh hu
i am vivacious ,i am virtuous i am repellant of rebel

sesh me nishesh hu sunya ka aysesh hu
i am perishable i am eternal i am remants after zero

khalesh ke parivesh me sesh ka vishesh hu
i am th essence of what remains after hour of crisis
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maikeshji mene aapne samratha aanusar puri chesta ki hai iska anuvad angregi me karne ki,par meri matr bhasha hindi isliye meri angrezi thodi kazor hain.
Aab bhi agar maan koi sawal maan me katak raha ho,to begigak ,nisankoch hume bataye ,meri puri koshish rahegi ki aapke maan me utthi shanka ka samul nahst karu…..
Aapke maan me utte sawal ke liye aap mujse mil sakte hai
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yes i am passionate
about love
about hate
about life
about death
yes i am passionate
when i stand by something
when i oppose something
when i am showing attitude
when i am being modest


" life is passion ,if not lived passionately,then lived soulessly"
--------passionatelover------------
P- passionate
A-arrogant
S-stylish
S-sober
I-intelligent
O-obedience
N-naughty
A-aggressive
T-tactful
E-elegant.
“ YES I M PASSIONATE THE GREAT”