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21st April 2003, 09:25 PM
hi friends,
theres somthing coming straight from my heart for u................ gam ka sabab.. mat puch mere gam ka sabab saki tamam umar guzari humne jinke liye wo gair ke ho gaye magar darr hai humko ke ilzam na lag jaaye hum bewafa ho gaye gum is baat ka nahi wo gaur ke huye gum to ye hai wo humare na huye gair wo na jaane kaun hai pher kar pani hamari asaoon par maun hai gar wo mil jaaye mujko ek baar maang lun unhe jaan bhi dekar magar main jee nahi sakta bewafai ka iljam leker .............................vinaydahiya |
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21st April 2003, 11:56 PM
hi vinay ji,
kaise hai aap? aapki shayri bahut bahut bahut pasand aayi, sach me kuch dard hai kahin na kahin chipa hai isme. gum is baat ka nahi wo gaur ke huye gum to ye hai wo humare na huye take good care of urself neil |
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22nd April 2003, 03:13 AM
dil se nikalii hui cheezeN hamesha dard-bhari hoti haiN..
bahot achcha likha hai aapne vinay saahab! ummeed hai ki mehfil meiN isi taraH raunak laate raheN ge! taareef ke saath, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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22nd April 2003, 04:24 AM
gum is baat ka nahi
wo gaur ke huye gum to ye hai wo humare na huye Very nice  tc ws Rani Par woh yeh nahi jaante ki yeh bhi ek adaa hai gam chupaane ki. |
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22nd April 2003, 06:08 PM
hello vinayji,
gar wo mil jaaye mujko ek baar maang lun unhe jaan bhi dekar magar main jee nahi sakta bewafai ka iljam leker ye wala bahot hi atchha tha. it was really touchable. apne halat aur apni soch ko ek sath bayan karne ka aapka andaj wakai tareefe kabil hai aise hi likhte rahiye sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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30th April 2003, 09:27 PM
mat puch mere gam ka sabab saki
tamam umar guzari humne jinke liye wo gair ke ho gaye magar darr hai humko ke ilzam na lag jaaye hum bewafa ho gaye waah Vinay sahab... bohat achcha likha hai aapne... in lafzo ne to hila ker rakh diya... shukriya ise pesh kerne ka.... likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye... |
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