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Sad ghazal-meri kya khata thi is khata se pahle - 16th October 2007, 08:06 PM

meri kya khataa thi is khataa se pahle
tune bhi gham diye bewafaa se pahle

mujhe kya pataa ki khushi kya hoti hai
kaun si bahaar thi is khezaan se pahle

maut se dar nahi zindagi se dar hai
maraa kyun nahi main is sazaa se pahle

khuda bhi khush nahi wafaa na de sakaa
maut de saktaa tha is daghaa se pahle

bhatke ja rahi hai bina naakhudaa ke
kashti kyun na doobi naakhudaa se pahle


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AZEE Sahab pehli baar pada hai apko aur apka kalaam acchal laga ek chubhan liye hue kuch shikayte apke kalaam men mehsoos huin dil ke kareeb rahey apke ehsaas unhilikhtey rahiuye


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19th October 2007, 11:44 AM

shukriya,
meri ghazal achhi lagi jaan bahut khushi mili
aapke bhi likhe huwe ghazlaon ko padhoonga


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21st October 2007, 05:08 PM

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khuda bhi khush nahi wafaa na de sakaa
maut de saktaa tha is daghaa se pahle
azeez saahab bohat achchhi lagiii aap kii yeh Ghazal.. daad haazir hai, qubool keejiye.... yuu.n hii likhate rahe.n .... reputation point added ..

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21st October 2007, 05:16 PM

Shokriyaa....mayank jii
meri ghazal pasand aayi sun bahut khushi hui......
aapki daad qabool hai...
likhte rahne ki koshish jaari rakhoonga


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22nd October 2007, 11:29 AM

Azeez ji namaskaar........aapko padna accha laga...aapki gazal kabiley tareef hai....yu hi mahfil mein aatey rahiye.

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26th October 2007, 12:09 PM

Houslah afzai ke liye shukriya sunita ji
aapke bhi likhe achhe lagte hai


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