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sunita ji

apke sayari bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut hi achi lagi ziska m sabado m bayan hi nahi kar sakta

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ravi.
shukriya ravindar jii.......................................


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17th October 2008, 08:36 PM

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toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut

Waaahhhh... bahut hi umda aaghaaz hai.... Doosra sher dil ko chhoo gaya...


muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

Bahut khooob... behad khoobsurat bayaani...


umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

Behad khoobsurat...



kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut

Waahh...Kya baat kahi hai...

Hi Didi,

Kaisi hain aap? ummeed hain acche se hongi...

Aapki yeh ghzal dil ko bahut kareeb se chhoo ke gayi hai... Sach maaniye har sher bhut hi khoobsurat laga... Ravaani bhi khoobsurat hai, expressions bhi kamaal ke hain... dil khush ho gaya yeh ghazal padhkar...

Meri dil se dheron daad kubool kijiyega... bass yun hi likhti rahiye...



dear pulkit...........main theek hoon, tum apni sunao ????

tumne meri es gazal ko apna keemti waqt diya, aur dil se pasand kiya......mujhe dil se kushi hue ki aapko acchi lagi meri yeh koshish....aapki duao.n ke liye dil se shukriya.

kush raho
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17th October 2008, 08:40 PM

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sunita ji apne ye bahut bahut bahut hi achcha likha hai kisi aik sher ko achcha nahi kah sakta sabhi aik se badkar aik hai par ye aik sher to gajab hi hai ki
mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,


bahut hi umda,pls share karte rahe,khush rahe,sukriya
namaskaar baagi jii, shukriya aapne sabhi sher pasand kiye......mujhe b yeh sher bahut pasand hai.....es mein so sachai hai woh bahut dukh dene wali hai.....yoon hi apni keemti rai detey rahiye.

dil se shukriya

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BAHUT VADIYA KYA KHOOB ARJ KIYA HAI


shukriya HAPPY jee...................................


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bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hain di....


zainy



dear zainy..........tumne meri poetry ko apna keemti waqt diya aur pasand kiya meri poetry ko dil se shukriya dear.

hush raho
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toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut
Behad khoob sunita ji...aapki is nazm ne ek arse pehle likhi nazm rubaroo kar di...ek ek sher ek kahaNii keh raha hai yahaN

tere jaane ke baad se yeh ehSaaS hua
khud ke liye bhi huye hum paraaYe bahuT

teri yaaDoN ka kabhi hum the caarvaan
ini yaaDoN mein baskar tu sataaYe bahuT

isi tarah se humhe aapne ehsaason se rubaroo karte rahiYeGaa

-aapka apNaa



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hiiiii sunita ji h r you i m new user to shayri .com and i read your all poem i like
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wah...her ek sher dil ko choo gaya..per jisne emotions ko bhi pighla diya wo ..hain..
mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,


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bahut achha likha hai. likhte rahe. apke naye post ka intjarr.......
raj
shukriya raj jii....................................


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Adaab !!!

kaafi waqt ke bad lauta hoN SDC per . jab yahaN se gya to aisa laga tha jese ab kabhi likh hi nahi paaoN ga lakin app jese shaa'iroN ko peRhene ke baad jese khoon meN wohi josh doRne lagta hai , appki ghazal behad behad behad achi lagi umeed hai app se bahut kuch aur bhi seekhne ko mile ga ,


duaoN meN yaad rakhiye ga

Mujeeb


hmmmmmmmmm..........kaafi waqt baad lout ke phir gayab ho aise himmat detey rahogey to meri kalam bhi chalti rahegi.....kush raho, salamat raho, meri duao.n mein tum phele se hi ho, kahne ki jaroorat nahi hai bhai.

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Hi Di

Bahut khoob ... no words to decribe how well u have written..
dua hai aapki ek khushi puri ho

aur ese likhte raho
aapki
mandeep


dear mandeep........bahut bahut shukriya, yeh batao ki kahaN gayab ho etne dino.n se, koi khabar nahi aapki


pyar ke saath
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hi diii..waah kya baat haiiii aapke kalaam ki..bahut zabardast likha hai ..khaaskar ke pehle do sher behad pasand aaye..likhti rahen di yunhin..khush rahen sada


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Namaskaar dosto

phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.


"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)

Awesomely written Di. Reps +++++++


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Di,

Sat sree akaal,

Wah ji wah..as mausam di said...dukhi aatma..kya likh diya...i m damn sure...jab gazal likhi tab aapki jiju se baat hui hogi..or fir aap phone rakhne ke baad roi...or ye gazal likhi...ale meli pyaali chi panjaabi kudi...aise thhode udaas hote hain.......chalo smile....like this

Pata hai..maine na abhi kidnap movie dekhi..khatam hone ke baad socha sdc pe silent hoke jaau...kisiko pata nahi chalega..lekin aapki gazal padhi to khud ko rok nahi saki online aane se...damn...mujhe login karna hi padaa aapko replay dene ke liye...nevermind...

Di its supab...mind blowing gazal...really yaar aapne likha pahale to yakeen hi nahi hua...lekin fir baad me yakeen aa hi gaya...sacch kahu to kuch kuch apni jaisi lagi ye gazal...sacch me insaan kabhi kabhi jisse bahot pyaar karta hai usi se hi door ho jaata hai...well i wish ke aapko jaldi se vo mile jo aapko chaahiye...u know something...main aajkal god ko manne lagi hu..i mean maanti to thhi..god se fight thha..vo finish kar diya..aapke liye pray jo kani thhi isi liye.....shuuuuu!!! kisiko batana nahi...its secrat ok......

abhi bye...

or haa..jaate jaate thhodi si daad lelijiye meri or se...

Grazie

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MATKOooooooooooo....tu mere se pitai karwaygi.....yeh bata phele kyu yakeen nahu hua ki maine hi likha hai....kya main bahut bura likhti hoon
aur rahi baat mausam ki, usne mujhe dukhi aatma kaha to main uski baat ka bura nahi maanti, jaanti hai na kyuN.... aree uska opper wala portion khali hai wo kuch bhi kah sakti hai par tere to opper wala portion khali nahi hai na, yeh to extra hi chalta hai....to phir tune kyun uski baat ka zikar kiya.

ab tujhe shukriya b kahe deti hooon, tumne etna bada review jo diya hai....kachar kachar - pachar pachar, pata nahi kya kuch likha hai tumne....to socha mujhe bhi shukriya kah hi dena chahiye

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sunita di ........... mai badi der se koshish mai hun .. ki daad du . tareef karun .... kuch kahu . par likh raha hun mita raha hun ............. main kaise kahu ye ni samjh pa raha ................
"hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut," ....

baki sab ki tareef kar bhi dun .. lekin ye

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

iske bare mai kya kahu .........

man karta hai ... dil ke sare paiband kured ke rakh dun ....................

" sarhad majhab ke chakle-belan main
koe nahi bas hum ashiq piste hai "

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wowww didi herat hai ke is se pehle aapki ye ghazal dikhi nahi mujhe bohattttt acha likha hai sab ashaar pasand aye didi yunhi likhte rahiye

meri pyari pyari -----

tumhe mere yeh ahsaas pasand aaye, bahut bahut shukriya dear

pyar aur duao.n ke saath
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A really heart touching ghazal by u "sunita jee", congratulation 4 a beautiful peace of work;

keep it up...............................
It is wonderful experience to read ur poetry after such a long time........

i just wanna say
hats off to ur thought of mind, piece of work and off course creativity.

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Namaskaar Manu jiiii.............aapka review padkar bahut accha laga, mujhe woh din bhi yaad hai jab maine shuru shuru mein likhna shuru kiya tha to aapne mujhe msg kiya tha ki abhi aapko bahut mehnat ki jaroorat hai...aap technically bahut peeche haiN, aaj pata nahi main kis mukaam par hoon, par kuch bhi hai aapke es review se mujhe bahut himmat milli hai, ki phele se behtar hoon ab

shukriya.......tah-e-dil se shukriya

kush rahiye aur meri adna si poetry ko waqt detey rahiyega

god bless u


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Bahut Khoob di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1



shukriya dear..............................!


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Behad khoob sunita ji...aapki is nazm ne ek arse pehle likhi nazm rubaroo kar di...ek ek sher ek kahaNii keh raha hai yahaN

tere jaane ke baad se yeh ehSaaS hua
khud ke liye bhi huye hum paraaYe bahuT

teri yaaDoN ka kabhi hum the caarvaan
ini yaaDoN mein baskar tu sataaYe bahuT

isi tarah se humhe aapne ehsaason se rubaroo karte rahiYeGaa

-aapka apNaa


mast bhai....sabse phele to muaffi chahti hoon ki bahut dino baad aapko shukriya kah rahi hoon.....!

aapne jo sher jahan share kiye hain hume behad pasand aaye....bhai ahsaas to ahsaas hi haiN, bas lafzo.n ke heir pher se un ahsaaso.n ki surat zara badal jati hai.....hai na!

thanks alot


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Namaskaar dosto

phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.


"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)

aap bahut achcha likhti hai SUNITA JI. yaha aap ko sab 'didi' bulate hai.kya hum bhi aap ko 'didi' keh sakte hai??


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aap bahut achcha likhti hai SUNITA JI. yaha aap ko sab 'didi' bulate hai.kya hum bhi aap ko 'didi' keh sakte hai??
Dear shifa...........sabse phele to yeh baat ki mujhe tumhara naam bahut accha laga "SHIFA" aur rahi baat didi kahne ki to aap shouq se kah sakti hai, bhala es mein poochne ki kya baat hai

meri shayri pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut bahut shukriya dear

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Dear shifa...........sabse phele to yeh baat ki mujhe tumhara naam bahut accha laga "SHIFA" aur rahi baat didi kahne ki to aap shouq se kah sakti hai, bhala es mein poochne ki kya baat hai

meri shayri pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut bahut shukriya dear

pyar ke saath
didi

thank u didi aap ko hamara naam pasand aaya zahe-nasib


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bahut ache sunita ji...kya khub likha hai

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

pad kar bahut achha laga..aur meri ye dua hai ye udassi ke pal kisi ke jindgi mein na aaye..keep on writing
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Namaskaar dosto

phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.



"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)



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bahut bahut shukriya rahul jii..........................


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Namaskaar dosto

phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.


"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)

nice lines....touchy..........!



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bahut khoob sunita ji

bahut khoob.............

..aryan


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Wah sunita ji wah,
kyaa baaat hai,
maine aaj 1st time shayri-e-dard forum padhi, is forum pe mai kuch ehsaas dhoond raha tha,
kuch mil gaye the, par jb aapki ye ghazal padhi to laga k wakai me kyaaaa ehsaaas hain... Sach me shaaandaaar aur dil ko chu lene wale...
Vaise to maine aapki ye ghazal pehle b padhi thi shayad aapke blog pe, par us waqt mera mood is type ki ghazal padhne ka nahi tha...
Par aaj mujhe aapki ye ghazal aaj bahut pasand aayi, dil ko chu gayi....
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wah...her ek sher dil ko choo gaya..per jisne emotions ko bhi pighla diya wo ..hain..
mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,


sawati jii...........muaaf kijiyega, bahut dino baad aapse mukhatib hoon....aapne hume pada aur dil se pasand kiya....aapka tah-e-dil se shukriya.

aapki dost


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hi diii..waah kya baat haiiii aapke kalaam ki..bahut zabardast likha hai ..khaaskar ke pehle do sher behad pasand aaye..likhti rahen di yunhin..khush rahen sada

shukriya Dear...............aap kaisi haiN ???


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Awesomely written Di. Reps +++++++

Shukriya Amit Bhai..............



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bahut ache sunita ji...kya khub likha hai

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

pad kar bahut achha laga..aur meri ye dua hai ye udassi ke pal kisi ke jindgi mein na aaye..keep on writing
shukriya Vinay jiii, aapne hamari shayri ko pada ur saraha.


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nice lines....touchy..........!

Shukriya ALI jii..........yoon saath detey rahiyega.


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bahut khoob sunita ji

bahut khoob.............

..aryan
Shukriya Aryan jiiiiiii...................................!


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Wah sunita ji wah,
kyaa baaat hai,
maine aaj 1st time shayri-e-dard forum padhi, is forum pe mai kuch ehsaas dhoond raha tha,
kuch mil gaye the, par jb aapki ye ghazal padhi to laga k wakai me kyaaaa ehsaaas hain... Sach me shaaandaaar aur dil ko chu lene wale...
Vaise to maine aapki ye ghazal pehle b padhi thi shayad aapke blog pe, par us waqt mera mood is type ki ghazal padhne ka nahi tha...
Par aaj mujhe aapki ye ghazal aaj bahut pasand aayi, dil ko chu gayi....
Thanx 4 sharin, nd thanx 2 aryanvishu, coz agar aaj wo is ghazal ko reply na krte to ye ghazal frnt page pe ni aa paati...

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Buland Raj jii...........aapne etne il se hamare ahsaas pade hume behad accha laga, ki hamare likhey ko bhi aap dost log pasand karte haiN.....bahut bahut shukriya jiii


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phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.


"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

muskil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)
Dii so amazing, dil ko jhinjhor ke rakh dene wale aapke in ahsason ki tarif shyad hi
kisi lafzon me ho paye...........

Har ek sher apne aap me intehayi khubsoorat hai.......

Apni chotisi Gazal me aapne jazbaton ka samander undel diya dil ko chu gaya hamare..

Yunhi likhti rahiye..........

Duaon ke sath daad kabool kijiye......


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Dii so amazing, dil ko jhinjhor ke rakh dene wale aapke in ahsason ki tarif shyad hi
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Har ek sher apne aap me intehayi khubsoorat hai.......

Apni chotisi Gazal me aapne jazbaton ka samander undel diya dil ko chu gaya hamare..

Yunhi likhti rahiye..........

Duaon ke sath daad kabool kijiye......


Dear Sameer...aapne mere ahsaao.n ko dil se saraha aur mere ahsaaso.n ko samja...mujhe accha laga, vaise main kuch khaas accha to nahi likhti hoon, par jo baat dil mein hoti hai usko khul kar kahne ki koshish jaroor karti hoon, aur agar padne wale ko ahsaas samaj aa jayeN to main samjati hoon ki mera likhna saarthak hua.
dil se shukriya .

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sunita di ........... mai badi der se koshish mai hun .. ki daad du . tareef karun .... kuch kahu . par likh raha hun mita raha hun ............. main kaise kahu ye ni samjh pa raha ................
"hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut," ....

baki sab ki tareef kar bhi dun .. lekin ye

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

iske bare mai kya kahu .........

man karta hai ... dil ke sare paiband kured ke rakh dun ....................

" sarhad majhab ke chakle-belan main
koe nahi bas hum ashiq piste hai "

aur kya kahu
salamat rahe khush rahe


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khush raho
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bahut hi umda...... lafz nahi hai mere pass........dil ki awaaz lagi mujhe......dil tak pahuch gayi.....



abhi bhi shabd dhoond raha hu.....milte hi nahi......nishabd kar diya aapne......surely one of ur best......

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Sunita jee,,,

Sabse pehle maiN aapse bohat bohat muafi maangna chahta huN ...ki aapki itni umda likha hua nazraana aaj tak main nahi padh saka ... aapki kavish ke baare main jitna kahunga kam lagega .. bohat hi bhadiya .... seeedha saaf saccha aur accha ... har sher ek se badh kar ek hai ... meri dheroN duayeN aapke naam ...

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Namaskaar dosto

phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.



"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

mushkil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)
sunita ji,

aapki ye ghazal bahut bahut khaas hai...maiN aapko mubaraqbaad dena chaahta hooN...ehsaas aur alfaaz dono hi khoob, is se zyada kya keh sakta hooN....har sher badhiya....ehsaasoN se labrez...jitni bhi daad di jaye kam hai...

iswar aapko sada khush rakhe...

aapka dost...


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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abhi bhi shabd dhoond raha hu.....milte hi nahi......nishabd kar diya aapne......surely one of ur best......

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Sunita jee,,,

Sabse pehle maiN aapse bohat bohat muafi maangna chahta huN ...ki aapki itni umda likha hua nazraana aaj tak main nahi padh saka ... aapki kavish ke baare main jitna kahunga kam lagega .. bohat hi bhadiya .... seeedha saaf saccha aur accha ... har sher ek se badh kar ek hai ... meri dheroN duayeN aapke naam ...

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aapki ye ghazal bahut bahut khaas hai...maiN aapko mubaraqbaad dena chaahta hooN...ehsaas aur alfaaz dono hi khoob, is se zyada kya keh sakta hooN....har sher badhiya....ehsaasoN se labrez...jitni bhi daad di jaye kam hai...

iswar aapko sada khush rakhe...

aapka dost...

Amit ji, Kunaal ji aur Vikram ji....muaafi chahti hu ki bahut waqt baad aaj es gazal ko dekha to paaya ki aap sabka shukriya tak aada nahi kar paaye maiN, aap sabhi ka dil se shukriya...Kunaal ji aap jaisi hasti es andaaz meiN housla badaye to bahut accha lagta hai.

aaj pad kar yakeen nahi ho rha ki kabhi maiN bhi likha karti thi

aap sab dosto ke saath aur pyar ka bahut bahut shukriya



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phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.



"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

mushkil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)

waahh sunita dee........ aaj aapki is puraani ghazal pe nazar gayee to dil khush ho gayaa... aapse guzaarish ahai ke aage bhi hame padhne ke muqe deti rahen...

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phir se bazm mein hazir hoon apne ahsaas lekar....kuch udhasi ke palo.n mein kagaz par likhe ahsaas aap sabke saath share kar rahi hoon.



"Yaad Aaye Bahut"

“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,

hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,

mushkil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,

jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,

umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,

mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,

kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.

(22.08.2008)



Ek arse baad yahan aana hua aur aapke yeh Ehsaas dil choo gaye!! Yaad hoti hi Aisi hai jab aati hai bada sataati hai.

Loved every word Di! Love u! Missed u a lot! Hope u r doing well.

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