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Love hoNTo pe kabhi un ke mera naam hi aaye.. - 1st April 2015, 06:22 PM

Ghazal

hoNTo pe kabhi un ke, mira naam hi aaye
aaye to sahii, bar sar-e-ilzaam hi aaye!

HairaaN haiN, lab bastah haiN, dilgeer haiN gunchay
Khushbuu ki zubaanii tira paiGhaam hi aaye!

LamHaat-e-masarrat haiN tasavvur se gurezaaN
yaad aaye haiN jab bhii, Gham-o-aalaam hi aaye

taaroN se sajaa leNge rah-e-shahr-e-tamannaa
maqduur nahiiN SubH, chalo, shaam hi aaye.

yaadoN ke, wafaa’oN ke, ‘AqeedoN ke, GhamoN ke
kaam aaye jo duniya meN to asnaam hi aaye!

kyaa raah badalne kaa gilah ham-safaroN se
jis rah se chale, tere dar-o-baam hi aaye!

thak haar ke baiThe haiN sar-e-kuu-e-tamannaa
kaam aaye to phir jazbah-e-naakaam hi aaye

baaqii nah rahe saakh :Adaa: dasht-e-junuuN ki
dil meN agar andeshah-e-anjaam hi aaye!



~Adaa Ja'afferi


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1st April 2015, 08:13 PM

thak haar ke baiThe haiN sar-e-kuu-e-tamannaa
kaam aaye to phir jazbah-e-naakaam hi aaye


wah sahab wah,,kya qayal hae,,,dad qubul karen wo bhi dil se,,,,
   
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3rd April 2015, 10:12 AM

Bahut khoob sharing....janaab BGM saheb...



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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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3rd April 2015, 11:21 AM

BGM saahab..... albatta ye ghazal maine kaafi waqt pahle sunii thii Amaanat Ali khaaN saahab ki dilkash aawaaz meiN.... par dhun aaj bhi zahan me zindaa hai.......

behad shukriyaa jo aapne ise aaj fir hamaare saamne laae ....... mehrbaani huii hai aapki....

shukriyaa qubool kijiye

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3rd April 2015, 06:43 PM

Ghazal ke aaKhri she'r meN kuChh :Typo: reh gayaa hai
she'r ki asl Suurat yuuN honi chaahiye

"baaqii nah rahe saakh :Adaa: dasht-e-junuuN ki
dil meN agar andeshah-e-anjaam hi aaye"

(wish some body tell me how to :edit: my post on this :site

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Ghazal ke aaKhri she'r meN kuChh :Typo: reh gayaa hai
she'r ki asl Suurat yuuN honi chaahiye

"baaqii nah rahe saakh :Adaa: dasht-e-junuuN ki
dil meN agar andeshah-e-anjaam hi aaye"

(wish some body tell me how to :edit: my post on this :site

~B.G.

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BGM saahab , chand mohlat ke baad members apni post ko edit nahii kar sakte.... jaanta hoon thodaa ajeeeb hai par aisaa hai rule hai filhaal yahaan....

albatta aap PM par ya comment me yahan ke kisii bhi Mod ko ittelah kar sakte hain apne changes ke liye. ham changes kar denge......

agar aap ijaazat den to aapke uupar likhe modification ko apply kar doon....


Please revert ..

Shaad....


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hoNTo pe kabhii un ke mira naam hi aaye - 4th April 2015, 10:06 AM



Jee, janaab-e-"Shaad" saahab,

aap zaruur isay "edit" kar leN, aur maqta' Theek usii taraH likh deN
jo maiN ne apni aaKhri post meN bataayaa hai, baRii navaazish aap ki!

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Jee, janaab-e-"Shaad" saahab,

aap zaruur isay "edit" kar leN, aur maqta' Theek usii taraH likh deN
jo maiN ne apni aaKhri post meN bataayaa hai, baRii navaazish aap ki!

~B.G.

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BGM saahab.... post edited as per request.........................


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hoNTo pe kabhii.. - 5th April 2015, 09:16 AM

Thank you Sameer bhai!
I appreciate this.

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5th April 2015, 11:15 AM

merii khushnaseebii hai jo aap ko aisaa lagtaa hai.....

aate rahiyegaa

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