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It’s a new dawn! - 3rd July 2010, 11:24 PM
Joyful is the sight,
The sky is crimson
In the east!

Joyful is the music
Of the transition
Merging with the heartbeat!

Joy is in the air;
It’s a new dawn!
A new day begins!

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15th July 2010, 04:14 AM
awesome wording.

beautiful Mann. keep writing
   
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15th July 2010, 11:19 AM
And I agree with Parul, Mann Ji...!

Very nice creation indeed...!

Keep penning and take care of yourself, ok...?

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22nd July 2010, 07:37 AM
very optimistic mann ji.......short but precise.awesome.
   
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good things come in small packages. thanks for sharing..............................

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awesome wording.

beautiful Mann. keep writing

Thanks to you parul. Keep smiling.

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And I agree with Parul, Mann Ji...!

Very nice creation indeed...!

Keep penning and take care of yourself, ok...?

Duaaon ke saath

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very optimistic mann ji.......short but precise.awesome.
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Joyful is the sight,
The sky is crimson
In the east!

Joyful is the music
Of the transition
Merging with the heartbeat!

Joy is in the air;
It’s a new dawn!
A new day begins!

Mann
Beautiful creation mann saheb.........just loved it......

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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Beautiful creation mann saheb.........just loved it......
Thank you so much vikram ji.

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