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Zinda Laash - 5th October 2005, 07:48 AM

Dekhi hai duniya par ankhon ko teri talash rehti hai,
Aadat ho gayi hai andhere ki phir bhi oojale ke aas rehti hai,
In sanson se to kab ka rishta toot gaya chuka hai,
Jism to ik kabr hai jisme mairi zinda laash rehti hai...!


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5th October 2005, 08:22 AM

Dekhi hai duniya par ankhon ko teri talash rehti hai,
Aadat ho gayi hai andhere ki phir bhi oojale ke aas rehti hai,
In sanson se to kab ka rishta toot gaya chuka hai,
Jism to ik kabr hai jisme mairi zinda laash rehti hai...!



ye laash bhi kutch keh rahi hai
jinda thi tab bhi akeli thi
ankhiyaa tujhko hin dhoondhti thi
laash bhi meri aisi akeli hai
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jaise nahi kooi sakhiyoun main
iss laash ko bhi jaroorat hai
mitti sii iss kaaya ko
kooi toh dafnaa ke aaye
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5th October 2005, 09:35 AM

ye laash bhi kutch keh rahi hai
kutch paheli suljhaa rahi hai

jinda thi tab bhi akeli thi
ankhiyaa tujhko hin dhoondhti thi

laash bhi meri aisi akeli hai
jaise isko khodh ki bimaari hai

aaj padi hoon aise raahon main
jaise nahi kooi sakhiyoun main

iss laash ko bhi jaroorat hai
chaar kaandho ki jarorat hai

mitti sii iss kaaya ko
jivan ki antim raah ko

kooi toh dafnaa ke aaye
mukti tabhi ye paaye


kal bhi akele bhtke khwaabo main
aaj bhi padi hoon akele raaho main

jaise pyaar ke kaabil na the hum _aab nafart ke bhi kaabil nahi hum
   
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Re: Zinda Laash - 5th October 2005, 09:50 AM

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Dekhi hai duniya par ankhon ko teri talash rehti hai,
Aadat ho gayi hai andhere ki phir bhi oojale ke aas rehti hai,
In sanson se to kab ka rishta toot gaya chuka hai,
Jism to ik kabr hai jisme mairi zinda laash rehti hai...!


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hi,
i think me reading u for the first time n wud love to say tht its awesome. u just made be speechless. loved reading ur thoughts.keep flowing ahead too n keep penning down.take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
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Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
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5th October 2005, 09:52 AM

laash bhi meri aisi akeli hai
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5th October 2005, 10:16 AM

aapki aankhe mujhe rulaa jaati hai ...............


dard dil kaa aankhain bata jaati hai ..............


dard aisa hai unmaine ki boot bana jaati hai ..........



shikaayat hai khuda se ye jaata jaati hai ..............


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hey chandsi...! - 5th October 2005, 04:36 PM

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aapki aankhe mujhe rulaa jaati hai ...............


dard dil kaa aankhain bata jaati hai ..............


dard aisa hai unmaine ki boot bana jaati hai ..........



shikaayat hai khuda se ye jaata jaati hai ..............


.................................................. .................................................. .........................................tc
hi chandsi,
thanks 4 ur reply,
but can i know y r u replying so many times,
do u want to say any thing,
or i m not understanding u...!
can u plz help me out from this matter.

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5th October 2005, 05:44 PM

ohhhhhhhhhhh ..............sorry for this .................



actually aapko jab padhi tab aapke shabdoon main kho kar kutch likh gayi .................post karne ke baad jab khud ko padhi tab laga ki maine jo likha usmaine khuch galtiyaana ya kami thi .................or fir iss tarah khud ko sudhaari .............waise jab bhi aapko padhti hoon tab har baar aapka display avtaar mujhe ghehra dard ka anubhav karaata hai ..........kai baar kehna chaahi par keh nahi paai ..................coz wo aapka khud ka lagaaya huaa avtaar hai ............................but ye sach hai aapke avtaar se tapkte dard ko dekhne ke baad reply dena mushkil hota hai ...........



baar baar reply dene waali baat nahi thi ...........acrtually main khud ke likhe poem ko theek kar rahi thi ...............or reply dene ke baad himmat bhi huii ki keh sakoo .........ki aapka avtaar kutch keh jaata hai ..................or iss tarh ...........aapko 4 baar reply de gayi .............
   
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Re: Zinda Laash - 5th October 2005, 05:54 PM

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Dekhi hai duniya par ankhon ko teri talash rehti hai,
Aadat ho gayi hai andhere ki phir bhi oojale ke aas rehti hai,
In sanson se to kab ka rishta toot gaya chuka hai,
Jism to ik kabr hai jisme mairi zinda laash rehti hai...!


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bahut hi ahcha likha hai empty_eyes ji,bahut hi ahche lage aapke shabd mujhe,

janab dard na rakho dil me itna,
ki dard ko bhi tumse pyar ho jaye.
zindagi ko mat kosho itna,
ki jeena hi dushwar ho jaye.

aapki panktiyon ka dard dekh kar bas yahi aaya dimag me,maafi chahunga agar aapko bura lage to.


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Re: Re: Zinda Laash - 5th October 2005, 06:39 PM

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bahut hi ahcha likha hai empty_eyes ji,bahut hi ahche lage aapke shabd mujhe,

janab dard na rakho dil me itna,
ki dard ko bhi tumse pyar ho jaye.
zindagi ko mat kosho itna,
ki jeena hi dushwar ho jaye.

aapki panktiyon ka dard dekh kar bas yahi aaya dimag me,maafi chahunga agar aapko bura lage to.


aapka LUCKY
thanks 4 ur reply but after reading ur reply i can just only say that:

chahate thai jise wo hi dard de gaya,
uski amanat samajh ke dard ko payar kiya karte hai...!
ab jeena kon chahata hai,
hum to in sanson ka lihaz karte hai...!

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5th October 2005, 06:49 PM

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ohhhhhhhhhhh ..............sorry for this .................



actually aapko jab padhi tab aapke shabdoon main kho kar kutch likh gayi .................post karne ke baad jab khud ko padhi tab laga ki maine jo likha usmaine khuch galtiyaana ya kami thi .................or fir iss tarah khud ko sudhaari .............waise jab bhi aapko padhti hoon tab har baar aapka display avtaar mujhe ghehra dard ka anubhav karaata hai ..........kai baar kehna chaahi par keh nahi paai ..................coz wo aapka khud ka lagaaya huaa avtaar hai ............................but ye sach hai aapke avtaar se tapkte dard ko dekhne ke baad reply dena mushkil hota hai ...........



baar baar reply dene waali baat nahi thi ...........acrtually main khud ke likhe poem ko theek kar rahi thi ...............or reply dene ke baad himmat bhi huii ki keh sakoo .........ki aapka avtaar kutch keh jaata hai ..................or iss tarh ...........aapko 4 baar reply de gayi .............
its ok chandsi, i really like ur way of replying...!
wht ever u want to say u can say without any hesitation, i will not mind anything, wheather it is related with my crying eye, or about my verses or about anything, i will not mind.

but nobody has seen the deepness of a ocean,
no body has seen the the deepness of heart,
no body has seen the the deepness of my crying eyes,
every body just has seen the overview.

i tell u 1 thing,
Everywhere there is everything for everyone,
but somewhere there is nothing for someone...!


n plz dont shy, say whatever u want to say..!

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Re: Re: Re: Zinda Laash - 5th October 2005, 06:57 PM

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thanks 4 ur reply but after reading ur reply i can just only say that:

chahate thai jise wo hi dard de gaya,
uski amanat samajh ke dard ko payar kiya karte hai...!
ab jeena kon chahata hai,
hum to in sanson ka lihaz karte hai...!

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thank par ek baat humesha yaad rakhiyega,

dard deta hai humesha koi apna,
par uske liye tum apni zindagi ko,
mat ban ne do ek darawna sapna.

live life in its fullest,zindagi jeene ke liye hai,jeevan me log aate hain aur jate hain,unke liye hume khud ko nahi tarpana chahiye.bas yunhi likhte rahiye.


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5th October 2005, 07:10 PM

ho sake toh app iss avtaar ko hata dijye ................pata nahi why inn aankho ko dekh paana mushkil hai .............innko dekhne ke baad aapko padh paana mushkil hai ..........aapke dard ko padhne ke baad .........kutch bhi keh paana mushkil hai ...........


waise aap achcha likhti hain ..................or main toh bas bhaavo ko hin padhti hoon ...........




but ye aapki marji hai .............aapko ye avtaar pasand hai toh plz aap lagaaye rakhiye ..........maine bas apni baat kahi hai ..........bura laga toh sorry ........................
   
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Its is not Possible...! - 5th October 2005, 09:06 PM

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ho sake toh app iss avtaar ko hata dijye ................pata nahi why inn aankho ko dekh paana mushkil hai .............innko dekhne ke baad aapko padh paana mushkil hai ..........aapke dard ko padhne ke baad .........kutch bhi keh paana mushkil hai ...........


waise aap achcha likhti hain ..................or main toh bas bhaavo ko hin padhti hoon ...........




but ye aapki marji hai .............aapko ye avtaar pasand hai toh plz aap lagaaye rakhiye ..........maine bas apni baat kahi hai ..........bura laga toh sorry ........................
i m sorry friend...!
i cant change my avtar. it is not possible. there r some reasons behind that n i can c someone's face in that tear, n dont feel sorry. i dont mind. its ok. that was ur thinking n u said it very honestly. i respect ur feelings. but i m sorry. whenever u saw my avtar just think that u r looking at me, then u will able to reply or read.

"Tears dose'nt refelect pain always"

and i just write what i think. wht my heart thinks. n as u said u only read feelings, then i think u will understand me very fast coz i just write my feelings (which is for someone who is not close to me).

1 thing more BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY...!

n always take care of ur self n ur family...!

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its ok ...........................



mera janamdin 3rd nov(1973) ko hai ...................................jo aane waala hai ..............budhaape ki or badhta huaa ek or year......................



n always take care of ur self n ur family...!==i will and i always do!..............thanks ! bye tc .............
   
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its ok ...........................



mera janamdin 3rd nov(1973) ko hai ...................................jo aane waala hai ..............budhaape ki or badhta huaa ek or year......................



n always take care of ur self n ur family...!==i will and i always do!..............thanks ! bye tc .............

ops i m sorry for that,
i thought ur birthday is on 3rd september. i had done a stupid mistake, i know.
ok then i wish u in advance happy birthday...!
bhdhapa is not a bad thing it is just another face of childhood.
u can say doosara bachpan.


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ops i m sorry for that,
i thought ur birthday is on 3rd september. i had done a stupid mistake, i know.
ok then i wish u in advance happy birthday...!
bhdhapa is not a bad thing it is just another face of childhood.
u can say doosara bachpan.


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[color=red]doosra bachpan...............haan ye bhi sahi hai...............

thanks for ur advance b'day wish!.................bye tc .[/colo]




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Re: Zinda Laash - 10th October 2005, 07:28 PM

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Dekhi hai duniya par ankhon ko teri talash rehti hai,
Aadat ho gayi hai andhere ki phir bhi oojale ke aas rehti hai,
In sanson se to kab ka rishta toot gaya chuka hai,
Jism to ik kabr hai jisme mairi zinda laash rehti hai...!


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Really nice !!!


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