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Vo pyari si Buddhhiyaa....!!
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Vo pyari si Buddhhiyaa....!! - 10th July 2008, 12:05 PM

Kaise anakho me sapne sajaye chali aayi thi
uski chaukhat per ban kr dulhan..
kisi ne jana nahi uske baare me
aur baandh diya us budhiya k gale

na samajh thi jise duniya ki..
na akal thi grehesthi chalane ki..
na jaanta tha vo jimmevaariyo ko..
na jaanta tha koi kaam karne ko..

kya socha budhiya k maa-baap ne
kaisi sukomal pyari si budhiya..
sochti thi pati nahi hamsafar hoga uska..
dheere dheere par gayi parivaar me..

jaan gayi thi do-char din me hi us hamsafar ko..
chhil gaya tha..tan-man, ro raha tha..
swaaha ho gaye saare armaan ek hi raat me..
kaisi chhali gayi vo itna apno k baazar me..

andhero me zindgi budhiya ki doobne lagi..
baccho ka muh dekh kar vo jine lagi..
koi aas sudherne ki na baaki rahi..
diwaro se sir de-de vo rone lagi..

budhiya ne kismat man gam pi liye..
bacche zindgi jine ka maksad ho gaye..
per aakhir kab tak us pati ko vo jhailti..
mit gayi..mar gayi ek din vo
pyari si budhiya..
jo har roz-har pal marti thi..
shant so gayi..
vo pyari si budhiya..



DIL KI TANHAAI KO AASHAAR BANA LETE HAI....
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO KUCHH LIKH LETE HAI....
   
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13th July 2008, 04:58 PM

sunita jee:

aadaab!!

baRe dinoN baad aapko bazm meiN deKhaa.. KhuShii hu'ii.. aur aapki yeh rachna ne dil ko chhu liYaa.. . aik ajeeb saa dard chhupaa haii ees meiN... YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe...! aur bazm kii raunaq afza'ii karte rahiYe..!


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14th July 2008, 03:12 AM

Bahut khoob Di!!!! Dard se tar-btar aapki yeh rachna dil ko cheer gayi!

Khush rahiye!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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14th July 2008, 02:32 PM

mohtarma bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....ahsaas dil ko chu gaye.

aapki dost


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15th July 2008, 01:11 PM

gahre ahsaas,bahut khuub ,likhte rahen...baagi


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