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Thumbs up "ZINDAGI KO APNI ALVIDA KEHKE JAUNGA......." a shayri for her..."meri maut ka nazara - 22nd September 2006, 02:26 PM

wada to kiya tha maine pehle kabhi tumse,
ke hamesha main tumhara yuhi sath nibhaunga...........

par aayega ek waqt aisa bhi yaad rakhna,
jab is sath ko chhod ke main duniya se chala jaunga.....

ye jo safar bitaya hai tumhare sang maine ,
is safar ko ek din main adhura chhod k chala jaunga.........

jane ka dil to nahi karenga us waqt mera,
par apni hi maut se khud main kaise lad paunga............

meri ye saanse kar rahi hai aaj yaad tumhe,
ye sanso ko apni yaha tumhare liye hi chhod jaunga.........

duniya se chala jaunga par koi gam nahi mujhe,
hamesha k liye fir tumhare is dil me main bas jaunga.........

wada to kiya tha hamesha muskuraunga main,
us waqt chehre pe apni muskurahat kaise la paunga...........

rulaunga main tumhe bhi un aakhri pal me mere,
jab tumhari bahon me main zindagi ko apni alvida keh jaunga.....





A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...................


ZINDAGI KO APNI ALVIDA KEHKE JAUNGA.......


sorry......par kisine majbur kiya mujhe aisa likhne ko.....
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Re: "ZINDAGI KO APNI ALVIDA KEHKE JAUNGA......." a shayri for her..."meri maut ka naz - 22nd September 2006, 02:28 PM

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wada to kiya tha maine pehle kabhi tumse,
ke hamesha main tumhara yuhi sath nibhaunga...........

par aayega ek waqt aisa bhi yaad rakhna,
jab is shath ko chhod ke main duniya se chala jaunga.....

ye jo safar bitaya hai tumhare sang maine ,
is safar ko ek din main adhura chhod k chala jaunga.........

jane ka dil to nahi karenga us waqt mera,
par apni hi maut se khud main kaise lad paunga............

meri ye saanse kar rahi hai aaj yaad tumhe,
ye sanso ko apni yaha tumhare liye hi chhod jaunga.........

duniya se chala jaunga par koi gam nahi mujhe,
hamesha k liye fir tumhare is dil me main bas jaunga.........

wada to kiya tha hamesha muskuraunga main,
us waqt chehre pe apni muskurahat kaise la paunga...........

rulaunga main tumhe bhi un aakhri pal me mere,
jab tumhari bahon me main zindagi ko apni alwida keh jaunga...





A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...................


ZINDAGI KO APNI ALVIDA KEHKE JAUNGA.........
dear dhaval, shayri acchi hain.

par mujhe pasand nahi aaye, sorry main koi jawaab nahi de paungi.


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Re: "ZINDAGI KO APNI ALVIDA KEHKE JAUNGA......." a shayri for her..."meri maut ka naz - 22nd September 2006, 03:14 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by dhavalrami4you
wada to kiya tha maine pehle kabhi tumse,
ke hamesha main tumhara yuhi sath nibhaunga...........

par aayega ek waqt aisa bhi yaad rakhna,
jab is sath ko chhod ke main duniya se chala jaunga.....

ye jo safar bitaya hai tumhare sang maine ,
is safar ko ek din main adhura chhod k chala jaunga.........

jane ka dil to nahi karenga us waqt mera,
par apni hi maut se khud main kaise lad paunga............

meri ye saanse kar rahi hai aaj yaad tumhe,
ye sanso ko apni yaha tumhare liye hi chhod jaunga.........

duniya se chala jaunga par koi gam nahi mujhe,
hamesha k liye fir tumhare is dil me main bas jaunga.........

wada to kiya tha hamesha muskuraunga main,
us waqt chehre pe apni muskurahat kaise la paunga...........

rulaunga main tumhe bhi un aakhri pal me mere,
jab tumhari bahon me main zindagi ko apni alvida keh jaunga.....





A SHAYRI FOR HER............................................... ...................


ZINDAGI KO APNI ALVIDA KEHKE JAUNGA.......


sorry......par kisine majbur kiya mujhe aisa likhne ko.....
na ji dhaval ji ye duniya beraham ho sakti hai lekin khuda nainsafi nahi karega............mahobbat karne vale to marke bhi juda nahi hote..........aur aap to apni jindagi se mile bhi nahi hai aur abhi se uska saath chhodne ki baat kar rahe hai..........galat baat hai......

ek gane ko bol yaad aa gaye..........gour farmana iske jazbaat pe

har janam me mera ek hi kaam ho,
mere hontho pe sanam tera naam ho,
zindagi ke saath chhute, saath na chhute tera
marke bhi hum mot ke nahi, tere hai tere sanam........

kuch samajh aya ya nahi..........

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22nd September 2006, 04:37 PM

hi sister

im sorry mujhe pata hai k aapko bura lag raha hoga]

par main kya karu mujhe kisine aisi peshkas likhne par majbur kar diya tha

main bhi aisa soch sakta hu par main aisi soch ko apni peshkas nahii banata par use bhaot saukh hai to mainkya kru

ok im sorry again main yehi chahta hu k aap meri sabhi peshkas padh ke muskuraye

is baar k liye sorry

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na ji dhaval ji ye duniya beraham ho sakti hai lekin khuda nainsafi nahi karega............mahobbat karne vale to marke bhi juda nahi hote..........aur aap to apni jindagi se mile bhi nahi hai aur abhi se uska saath chhodne ki baat kar rahe hai..........galat baat hai......

ek gane ko bol yaad aa gaye..........gour farmana iske jazbaat pe

har janam me mera ek hi kaam ho,
mere hontho pe sanam tera naam ho,
zindagi ke saath chhute, saath na chhute tera
marke bhi hum mot ke nahi, tere hai tere sanam........

kuch samajh aya ya nahi..........

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22nd September 2006, 05:37 PM

har janam me mera ek hi kaam ho,
mere hontho pe sanam tera naam ho,
zindagi ke saath chhute, saath na chhute tera
marke bhi hum mot ke nahi, tere hai tere sanam........

kuch samajh aya ya nahi..........



ji samajh gaya ji

aap samjhaye aur main na samjhu aisa ho sakta hai bhala

ummid hai aapko meri har peshlas uhi pasand aayegi............


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23rd September 2006, 02:20 AM

"duniya se chala jaunga par koi gam nahi mujhe,
hamesha k liye fir tumhare is dil me main bas jaunga........."



aapki mayusi mai bhi ek aasha chupi hui hai.jate jate bhi dilasa daine wali baat ki hai aapne.

these are truly sad lines but written very beautifully.

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hi - 23rd September 2006, 10:26 AM

mere chhotu mere dhavlu yaar teri kalam main yeh dard kahan se aiya tu to yaar kamaal kar gaya bhut acha likha hai ......lakin teri udassi ki wajha main janta hoon....magar tu udaas mat hona teri zindagi tere paas he hai.....tera .....raj....


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23rd September 2006, 11:12 AM

duniya se chala jaunga par koi gam nahi mujhe,
hamesha k liye fir tumhare is dil me main bas jaunga........."



aapki mayusi mai bhi ek aasha chupi hui hai.jate jate bhi dilasa daine wali baat ki hai aapne.

these are truly sad lines but written very beautifully.

best regards
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aarya kasi ho aap??

ha maine ye kisi ke liye banayi thi kyuki us waqt main khus nahi tha ..par ab sab thik hai


aapko pasand aayi meri ye peshkas bhaot hi achha laga mujhe

aap bas uhi aate rahiye aur apna sujhav dete rahiyega

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23rd September 2006, 11:14 AM

mere chhotu mere dhavlu yaar teri kalam main yeh dard kahan se aiya tu to yaar kamaal kar gaya bhut acha likha hai ......lakin teri udassi ki wajha main janta hoon....magar tu udaas mat hona teri zindagi tere paas he hai.....tera .....raj....



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aur us waqt dard aa hi gaya tha dilme to ye peshkas ban gayi bas............

ab thik hai sab zindagi mere pass hi hai

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