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Post ...satate nahi ho.... - 22nd March 2015, 11:18 AM
Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[


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Madhu ji namaste...

Kyaaa baat hai....behad khoobsurat ehsaas hain.....aur lagta nahi ki kou alfaz dhoondane ya jodne ki jaroorat padi ho....behad swift.....waaaaah

Yoon hi hamenacchi acchi gazale padne ka mauka milta rahe...

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Re - 24th March 2015, 10:43 AM
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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[
bAHUT HE KHUB BEHTREEN KALAM HUA HAI DHERO DAAD

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26th March 2015, 10:22 AM
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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[

kya baat kyaa baat kyaa baat.........................

waaahh Maddhuu saahibaa....... kyaa kahun aapke is nayaab nageenaa ke baare me..... subah subha dil meraa jhoom uthaa...... behad haseen rawaan dawaan, jazbaaton se saraabor kalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne............
isme khushbu bhi hai muhabbat ki, jalwaa bhi hai adaaon kaa aur dard bhii hai judaai kaa.... kya kya na rang nazar aaye isme......
100/100 kalaam....
tahe dil se daad ppesh hain aapko...... likhtii rahen.... shaad rahen... aabaad rahen

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Madhu ji namaste...

Kyaaa baat hai....behad khoobsurat ehsaas hain.....aur lagta nahi ki kou alfaz dhoondane ya jodne ki jaroorat padi ho....behad swift.....waaaaah

Yoon hi hamenacchi acchi gazale padne ka mauka milta rahe...

Dheero daad is behad khoobsurat peshkash ke liya

Aapka apna
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khushi huyi ki aapko ehsaas pasand aaye bhushan jee..
Koshish zari rahegi aage bhi...
aapke sath ka shukriya..
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khush rahein...


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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[
Madhu ji

yeh kehne mein mujhe zara bhi jhijhak mehsoos nahi ho rahi ki maine aapko ab tak jitna padha hai yeh aapki sabse behatreen rachnaa hai.

Yun to ek shayar ko apna har likha qalaam pasand aata hi hai par iski to baat hi aur hai

ek baar padha aur baar baar padha, sach kahiye to dhun mein piroo kar gungunaaya bhi behad umdaa

alfaaz kam hai tareef ke liye, upar waala aapki kalam ko aur zor de

Yunhi bazm mein shaurat batorte raheIN

Duaaon ke saath.


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Hausla aafzai ka ..Bahut bahut shukriya sabhat jee...
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Originally Posted by Madhu

Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[

Madhu ji behad khoobsurat rachna hai ye aapki
daad hazir hai

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4th April 2015, 10:17 AM
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Namaste

Badi hi khoobsoorti se ehsaason ko pesh kiyaa hai....dil se daad

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[
waaaaaaaaaaah.. Madhu jee waaaah!!!

kisi aik couplet ko choose karna mushkil... kyun ky tamaam kii tamaam
ghazal kamaal hy ....

dillii daad o mubarakbaad!

likhte rahiye .. salamat rahiye ..

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kya baat kyaa baat kyaa baat.........................

waaahh Maddhuu saahibaa....... kyaa kahun aapke is nayaab nageenaa ke baare me..... subah subha dil meraa jhoom uthaa...... behad haseen rawaan dawaan, jazbaaton se saraabor kalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne............
isme khushbu bhi hai muhabbat ki, jalwaa bhi hai adaaon kaa aur dard bhii hai judaai kaa.... kya kya na rang nazar aaye isme......
100/100 kalaam....
tahe dil se daad ppesh hain aapko...... likhtii rahen.... shaad rahen... aabaad rahen

Shaad...
Ahaaan....kya andaaz hai tareef karne ka..khushi huyi ki kalaam is kadar pasand aaya aapko....jawaab padkar mera dil sach me apka karjdaar ho gaya....bahut shukriya......

Duaon ke sath..
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yeh kehne mein mujhe zara bhi jhijhak mehsoos nahi ho rahi ki maine aapko ab tak jitna padha hai yeh aapki sabse behatreen rachnaa hai.

Yun to ek shayar ko apna har likha qalaam pasand aata hi hai par iski to baat hi aur hai

ek baar padha aur baar baar padha, sach kahiye to dhun mein piroo kar gungunaaya bhi behad umdaa

alfaaz kam hai tareef ke liye, upar waala aapki kalam ko aur zor de

Yunhi bazm mein shaurat batorte raheIN

Duaaon ke saath.
Bahut shukriya mast ji...ye ghazal mere dil ke bhi bahut kareeb hai.......
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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[

Madhu ji behad khoobsurat rachna hai ye aapki
daad hazir hai

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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[


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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[
bahut khoob...............madhu jee lajwaab rahi yeh peshkash
radhe radhe

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Badi hi khoobsoorti se ehsaason ko pesh kiyaa hai....dil se daad

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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dillii daad o mubarakbaad!

likhte rahiye .. salamat rahiye ..
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Mujhe dil ki baatein batate nahi ho.
Ki pahle ki jaise satate nahi ho.

kaha tha chaloge sadaa mere sang sang.
to kya baat vaada nibhate nahi ho.

Nahi hoti meri koi dhun mukammal.
jo tum hi agar usko gaate nahi ho.

In ankhon me kyon ye samaayi namii hai
Nazar hamse tum ab milate nahi ho.

Na khud ko he mera bataate ki sii se.
main teri hoon ye bhi jatate nahi ho.

ye mana ki tum bhi nahi ho sitamgar..
Madhu kah ke fir kyon bulate nahi ho.[
Humesha ki tarah hi behad khoobsurat ehsaas aur umdaa aashaar. Bahut saadgi se dil ki baat bayaan ki hai aapne. Mujhe bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh bayaani. Meri dil se dheron daad kubool kijiye. Apna khayal rakhiye.

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Kyaa baat hai, kyaa andaaz hai..
Hamesha ki tarah saade ilfaaz, magar dil mein ghar kar jaayeiN, aisa andaaz.
DheroN daad qubool farmaayein.
Sagar sahab....
Aap doston ka sath hee khaas bana deta hai kalaam ko....vrna ye to mamooli c koshish hai bas...bahut shukriya....
Aapki daad ka hamesha intzaar hota hai.....
Aate rahiye.....

Khush eahein..


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Aate rahiyega........


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Misre adhure lagte hai.. jaise doosre sher ka doosra misra ... use yun rakh ke dekhiye ..

To kyun waada apna nibhaate nahi ho..

Aapki jaankari ke liye is behr pe aasaan dhun bata deta hJn aapko.. gaa k dekhiye aur banaiye ..

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wahhhh, bade pyar se shikwa-shiqayat ki hai aapne, hame aapka andaaz pasand aaya

pyar ke saath
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Apna khayaal rakhiyega...

Aati rahiye....


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bahut khoob...............madhu jee lajwaab rahi yeh peshkash
radhe radhe
bahut abhari hoon aapki...

yun hee hausla badhate rahiyega......

takecare
regards...

madhu...


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Humesha ki tarah hi behad khoobsurat ehsaas aur umdaa aashaar. Bahut saadgi se dil ki baat bayaan ki hai aapne. Mujhe bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh bayaani. Meri dil se dheron daad kubool kijiye. Apna khayal rakhiye.
Thank u pulkit ji.....aapki duaon aur sath ki dil se shuraguzar hun...

Aate rahaiyega......

Take care ..


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Misre adhure lagte hai.. jaise doosre sher ka doosra misra ... use yun rakh ke dekhiye ..

To kyun waada apna nibhaate nahi ho..

Aapki jaankari ke liye is behr pe aasaan dhun bata deta hJn aapko.. gaa k dekhiye aur banaiye ..

KitaabeN bohat see padhi hongi tumne
Magar koi chehra bhi bhi tumne padha hai..

Kuch ghalal kaha ho to mazrat

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bhut acha likhaaa h.....
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shukriya salmaan ahmed ji........

aate rahiyega...

takecare
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