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ishq hum unse yu bepanah karne lage hain...... - 26th March 2012, 09:10 AM
ishq hum unse yu bepanah karne lage hain

K koi ab khane ko bhi pooche to hum mana karne lage hain

kise yaad rehta hai ye befizool ki bataein ishq mein

ho jab saath wo humare to waqt tham jaaye wahin,ye dua karne lage hain

na raha ab dil-o-dimaag par aakhtiyaar humara

dono is soch mein doobe.n hain k aachanak hum ye kya karne lage hain

Kal tak seekhate the hum k hai ishq buri balah yaaro

liya ishq ne yu badla k hum wahi khatah karne lage hain

Zakhmi tha dil humara gham-e-ulfat k maare

ishq ne juhi hi thama hai dil humara, hum us zakhm ki dawa karne lage hain

Daur-e-mayoosi bhi guzar gayi hai aaj, na koi katra bacha uska, na hi uski yaad hai

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bahoot khoob likha hai. aapki salamati ki duwa ke saat izazat .
   
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28th March 2012, 08:34 PM
Ehsaas bohat khoobsurat hain anant ji,per shayri ke kuch usool hain, aap unhe follow karke likhengay tou aur bhi khoobsurat lagengi aapki writings......:-)



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28th March 2012, 09:54 PM
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Ehsaas bohat khoobsurat hain anant ji,per shayri ke kuch usool hain, aap unhe follow karke likhengay tou aur bhi khoobsurat lagengi aapki writings......:-)
ji...bohat..bohat...shukriya...zainy ji...aap ki iss housla affzaayi k liye....choti muh badi baat kar raha hu...maafi chahunga....aap ne kaha ehsaas bohat khoobsurat hain..
to fhir ye usoolo ki bandish kaisi...main technical aspects nahi jaanta...jo dil mein aaya likh diya...aage se zaroor koshish karunga.....fir se gustakhi maaf karne ki guzaarish




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29th March 2012, 12:09 PM
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ji...bohat..bohat...shukriya...zainy ji...aap ki iss housla affzaayi k liye....choti muh badi baat kar raha hu...maafi chahunga....aap ne kaha ehsaas bohat khoobsurat hain..
to fhir ye usoolo ki bandish kaisi...main technical aspects nahi jaanta...jo dil mein aaya likh diya...aage se zaroor koshish karunga.....fir se gustakhi maaf karne ki guzaarish
Anant ji agar meter na ho,rhyming na ho tou pros aur poetry me kya farq rahega.?



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29th March 2012, 05:49 PM
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Anant ji agar meter na ho,rhyming na ho tou pros aur poetry me kya farq rahega.?
Aadaab Anant bhaee!
Buhat aala takhayyul wa tahreer. Mayn aapkay talent say buhat mutaasir hua hoon ismayn koi shak nai kay aap kay andar ayk aala shayar mawjood haye laykin Jaisay behna nay kaha we do need the rules to attain our full potential! Maslan ayk sangtaraash he daykh saktaa haye kay us moorat ko jo ayk pathar kay andar chipee hah, laykin wahi moorat ko dunya kay saamnay laanay usay kuch kaat chaant kerni perhti haye same here! So both of you are right apni apni jagah!

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Aadaab Anant bhaee!
Buhat aala takhayyul wa tahreer. Mayn aapkay talent say buhat mutaasir hua hoon ismayn koi shak nai kay aap kay andar ayk aala shayar mawjood haye laykin Jaisay behna nay kaha we do need the rules to attain our full potential! Maslan ayk sangtaraash he daykh saktaa haye kay us moorat ko jo ayk pathar kay andar chipee hah, laykin wahi moorat ko dunya kay saamnay laanay usay kuch kaat chaant kerni perhti haye same here! So both of you are right apni apni jagah!

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Thank God the days of stenographer jobs are over otherwise someone would have typed 'Stainographer' when composing the ad for that. Aur haan topi hargiz na utaarayn kyunkee garmaa abhi shuruu hua haye! )
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Aadaab Anant bhaee!
Buhat aala takhayyul wa tahreer. Mayn aapkay talent say buhat mutaasir hua hoon ismayn koi shak nai kay aap kay andar ayk aala shayar mawjood haye laykin Jaisay behna nay kaha we do need the rules to attain our full potential! Maslan ayk sangtaraash he daykh saktaa haye kay us moorat ko jo ayk pathar kay andar chipee hah, laykin wahi moorat ko dunya kay saamnay laanay usay kuch kaat chaant kerni perhti haye same here! So both of you are right apni apni jagah!

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ishq hum unse yu bepanah karne lage hain

K koi ab khane ko bhi pooche to hum mana karne lage hain

kise yaad rehta hai ye befizool ki bataein ishq mein

ho jab saath wo humare to waqt tham jaaye wahin,ye dua karne lage hain

na raha ab dil-o-dimaag par aakhtiyaar humara

dono is soch mein doobe.n hain k aachanak hum ye kya karne lage hain

Kal tak seekhate the hum k hai ishq buri balah yaaro

liya ishq ne yu badla k hum wahi khatah karne lage hain

Zakhmi tha dil humara gham-e-ulfat k maare

ishq ne juhi hi thama hai dil humara, hum us zakhm ki dawa karne lage hain

Daur-e-mayoosi bhi guzar gayi hai aaj, na koi katra bacha uska, na hi uski yaad hai

Naaraz the jis khuda se hum saari zindagi, tujhe paakar, aaj usi ka shukriya ada karne lage hain
nice poetry...thnx for sharing
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nice poetry...thnx for sharing
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