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Aap Ki Aankhein - 29th March 2007, 07:16 PM

kuch shayro k kuch ash aar aapki khidmat mein, hajir karta hun, ummid hai aapse ki aapko achchi lagegi.kuch jyaada hi urdu words ka istemaal kiya hai..!!


Raat ham to piye hue the magar, aap ki aankhein bhi sarabi thi,
Phir hamare kharab hone main kahiye kya kharabi thi,



Usko aana hai aur be nakab aayega,
jab tamanna pe meri shabab aayega,
malik-e-maykada reend ho jayega,
maykade mein naya inkilaab aayega.!!


AFTAB
EK UMMID

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29th March 2007, 07:26 PM

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kuch shayro k kuch ash aar aapki khidmat mein, hajir karta hun, ummid hai aapse ki aapko achchi lagegi.kuch jyaada hi urdu words ka istemaal kiya hai..!!


Raat ham to piye hue the magar, aap ki aankhein bhi sarabi thi,
Phir hamare kharab hone main kahiye kya kharabi thi,



Usko aana hai aur be nakab aayega,
jab tamanna pe meri shabab aayega,
malik-e-maykada reend ho jayega,
maykade mein naya inkilaab aayega.!!


AFTAB
EK UMMID

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kya baat hai janab, itne haseen baat, lagta hai jaam laga kar bhai sahab ne jhe ehsaas likha hai


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



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kya baat hai janab, itne haseen baat, lagta hai jaam laga kar bhai sahab ne jhe ehsaas likha hai
THANK YOU MUSAFIR EK PAL.
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kuch shayro k kuch ash aar aapki khidmat mein, hajir karta hun, ummid hai aapse ki aapko achchi lagegi.kuch jyaada hi urdu words ka istemaal kiya hai..!!


Raat ham to piye hue the magar, aap ki aankhein bhi sarabi thi,
Phir hamare kharab hone main kahiye kya kharabi thi,



Usko aana hai aur be nakab aayega,
jab tamanna pe meri shabab aayega,
malik-e-maykada reend ho jayega,
maykade mein naya inkilaab aayega.!!


AFTAB
EK UMMID
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Kya baat hai yaar......

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15th September 2007, 02:43 PM

thank you

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