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maiN duur chala jawaNga jadoN....Shiv Kumar Batalvi
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maiN duur chala jawaNga jadoN....Shiv Kumar Batalvi - 17th April 2007, 07:54 AM

maiN duur chala jawaNga jadoN
apne-begaane dhooNdan'ge
ajj mainu deewana kehNde ne
kal eho deewane dhooNdan'ge

mere jaan pichhoN jad lok ohnu
meri barbaadi puchh baithe
ik bhe'd lukaavan de sadqe
oh kee kee bahaane dhooNdan'ge

jad mast hawa ne paa kikli
kise shokh ghata da ghund chukeya
us veley kise di masti nu
ro ro mastaane dhooNdan'ge


Poet : Shiv Kumar Batalvi


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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18th April 2007, 05:24 AM

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

   
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18th April 2007, 07:55 AM

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Speechless!!!
so was i when i first read it yrs ago, it still makes my heart go numb


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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shukria - 24th April 2007, 04:37 PM

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maiN duur chala jawaNga jadoN
apne-begaane dhooNdan'ge
ajj mainu deewana kehNde ne
kal eho deewane dhooNdan'ge

mere jaan pichhoN jad lok ohnu
meri barbaadi puchh baithe
ik bhe'd lukaavan de sadqe
oh kee kee bahaane dhooNdan'ge

jad mast hawa ne paa kikli
kise shokh ghata da ghund chukeya
us veley kise di masti nu
ro ro mastaane dhooNdan'ge


Poet : Shiv Kumar Batalvi
maikash ji tusee ainii wadhiya poetry shiv ji di sade naal share kiti is layii thuada bhut bhut shukria............raj........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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I will go away when friends and
strangers will try finding me.
Today they call me a loony, tomorrow
These loonies will look for me.

After my departure, people will
ask him how I was devastated.
To hide the secrets, he will
invent excuses after excuses.

When the rampant winds will whistle
.................................................. .
At that time the mad will cry and
Look for someone's drunkenness.

Note: Please translate the last stanza for me. Thanks.
   
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kI pu@CdyA h`l PkIr~ d`................


kI pu@CdyA h`l PkIr~ d`
s`f` nidA ivCVy nIr~ d`
s`f` hMJ dI jUny E`ieE` d`
s`f` idl jilE~ dlgIr~ d`
kI pu@CdyA h`l PkIr~ d`.................
ieh j`xidE~ ku@J soK ijhy
rMg~ d` hI n~ qsvIr~ hY
jd h@t gey EsIN ieSky dI
mu@l kr bYTy qsvIr~ d`
kI pu@CdyA h`l PkIr~ d`.............
s`nUM l@K~ d` qn l@B igE`
pr iek d` mn vI n` imilE`
kyh` iliKE` iksy muk@dr sI
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kI pu@CdyA h`l PkIr~ d`.................
qkdIr q~ E`pxI SOkx sI
qdbIr~ s`Qo n` hoeIE~
n` JMg Cu@itE` n` kMn p`ty
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kI pu@CdyA h`l PkIr~ d`
s`f` nidA ivCVy nIr~ d`
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15th December 2007, 10:29 AM

Maikash ji.....namaskaar
ek batalvi ji di gazal hove te doosra pesh karan wala maikash hove.....bas ki kahne....!

sade naal eh gazal saaNji kiti, bahut bahut shukriya....eida hi aaunde reha karo....

kush raho te kushiya.n maande raho


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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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20th February 2008, 05:17 PM

Hello sir
This is really very precious words written by shiv kumar ji which we can share with others... But the real thing is his poetry is still alive becouse of the people like you... who reminds us day by day that there is nothing above these words... So nice of you being in shyari.com.... i have something very real in voice of shiv kumar batalvi ji... Share with you all in my next thread........


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Shiv di poetry bhaveiN arse baad suno jaaN paRho, ik ajeeb jehi halchal paida kar dendi hai. eh ajj vi onee hi naveeN lagdee hai jinni pehlaN kade laggdi si.

Maikash ji, thanks for sharing.
   
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shiv kumar batalvi - 8th April 2008, 02:30 PM

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je tu na ho sakeya saada
assi tere sir chad k maraage................... GURSIM
   
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