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Doob jaayen to kia tamaasha ho -
10th January 2013, 11:58 AM
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab….!Saaghar Siddiqui Sahab Ki Ghazal Ke Misra "Doob Jaayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho" Par Tahri Ghazal Kehnay Ki Koshish Ki Hai
DOOB JAAYEN TO KIA TAMAASHA HO Gham Sunaayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho Hum Rulaayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho Hum Bhi Un Ki Tarah Unhen Ik Din Aazmaayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho Aaj Hum Bhi Kisi Ki Aankhon Me "Doob Jaayen To Kia Tamasha Ho" Khail Chaahat Ko Jan'nay Walay Dil Lagaayen To Kia Tamasha Ho Un Ke Har Ik Sitam Ke Badlay Hum Muskuraayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho Maah-o-Anjum,Zameen,Sayyaray Sab Toot Jaayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho AHMAD ALI SHAKIL Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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10th January 2013, 12:22 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th January 2013, 01:05 PM
Hum Bhi Un Ki Tarah Unhen Ik Din
Aazmaayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho kamaal ka asar hai is sher me... mubaarakbaad... Shaad... |
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10th January 2013, 03:19 PM
aadaab Ahmad Shakil saheb,
matley ne jo samaaN baaNdhaa voh aage bhi barqaraar hi rahaa, Ghazal padh kar behadd lutf-aNdoz huaa, kya hi kehne! tam'aam ash'aar pasaNd aaye aur pur-asar rahe maqta bhi agar usii mauzoo par hota to ek hisaab se Ghazal musalsal ho jaati  khaaksaar ki daad "Tikaa" lijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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14th January 2013, 01:18 PM
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Aap Ka Tah-e-Dil Se Mashkoor-o-Mamnoon HUn Jo Aap ne Is Kalaam KO Waqt Dia Aur Khaksaar Ki Is Adnaa Si Kaawish Ko Saraaha.... Sada Khush Rahiye Yunhi Sath Banaaye Rakhiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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14th January 2013, 01:42 PM
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Aap Ki Hausla-Afzaayi PAr Tah-e-Dil Se Mashkoor Hun... Sada Khush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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14th January 2013, 01:56 PM
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Sher Pasand KArnay Ka Bahot SHukria.. Khush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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14th January 2013, 02:34 PM
mashalllah ghazal achhi hai rewaayati lab o lehjey ki ghammazz bhi aor aap ke husn e bayaan ki daleel bhi
asaan lab o lehjey ne khaas mota'assir kiya khoob tar rahi aap ki ye ghazal haan ............. SAIYAAREY ke baas SAB lafz izaafi hai us ko hataa dijie dheron daad qabool farmaayen |
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14th January 2013, 03:43 PM
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Aap Ne Is Khaaksaar Ki Bazm Me Haazri Di, Ye Aap ki Inaayat Hai, Aap Ne Muhabbat Se Daad Ataa Ki, Ye Aap Ki Zarrah-Nawaazi hai... Tah-e-Dil Se MAshkoor-o-Mamnoon Hun... Sada KHush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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14th January 2013, 03:49 PM
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KHush Aamdeeed........... Bahot Muddat Baad Aap Ko Yahan Apni Bazm ME Dekha To Be-had KHushi HUi.... Aap Ki Daad Mere Liye Baais-e-Musarrat Hai Aur Apa Ki Raaye Mere Liye Mash'al-e-Raah Hai.... Aap Ki Hausla-Afzaayi Par Tah-e-Dil Se MAshkoor-o-Mamnoon HUn... Ji....... Aap Ne Baja Farmaaya.... SAYYARAY Ke Sath Lafz"Sab" Izaafi Hai, Aur Ye Baat Mujhay FB Par Janab Naveed Malik Sahab Bata Chukay Hain, Magar Yahan Edit Ki option Nahi Mili, Is LIye Tabdeel Na Kar Saka.... Wesay Apnay Paas Main Ye Sher Theak KAr Chuka Hun... Aik Baar Phir Tah-e-Dil Se Mashkoor HUn Aap Ka, Aur Aap Se Multamis Hun Ke Aap Kuch Waqt Nikaal Kar Is KHaksaar Ki Ghazlon Par Nazar Farma Liya Kijye... Sada Khush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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14th January 2013, 05:28 PM
Ahmad Bhai,
Bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal.. Ashaar bohot acche lage... Neeche likhe ashaar dil ke kareeb rahe.... Daad kubool kare... Hum Bhi Un Ki Tarah Unhen Ik Din Aazmaayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho Aaj Hum Bhi Kisi Ki Aankhon Me "Doob Jaayen To Kia Tamasha Ho" Un Ke Har Ik Sitam Ke Badlay Hum Muskuraayen To Kia Tamaasha Ho Duaon ki guzaarish, Abrar.  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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14th January 2013, 06:04 PM
ahmad bhai....bahuat hee sundar ghazal hui hai, saare aashaar dil ko choo gaye....dil se nikli daad kubul karein.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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16th January 2013, 11:17 AM
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Aap ko APni Is Bazm ME KHush Aamdeed Kehta Hun.. Aap ki HAusla-Afzaayi Ka Bahot Bahot Shukria... Khush Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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16th January 2013, 11:19 AM
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Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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